Kabhi alvida na kehna-MP&N Part 2 posted

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#1
Part 1 Milind is returning home after a business
tour.H is friend Krish is in his car.
M:2day is a special day in my life.Our wedding
annive rsary
K:so sweet.how did u meet prachi bhabhi?
M:3 yrs back

Flashb ack:M is drving the car.P came from the
wrong direction.Luckly M managed 2 brake.M becomes
angry & cums out of the car:cant u c?
P is embarrassed.ppl cum. P lies:this fellow began
2 hit me.luckily I escaped. M:wht?she's lying
P whispers:evry1 wil stand with a girl.its better
2 giv compensation.otherwise u'l b insulted b4
others
M is stunned.M gives her Rs 500 2.P has a naughty
smile on her face.M is irritated.

K laughs:very nice starting.but how did the luv
prospe r?
M tells.Once he gets a moneyorder.Tht time itself
he gets a call.
"do u remember the naughty girl u met on the
road?"
M :ya.u r …?
"yes.i 'm tht girl.i'm the person who sent u the
moneyo rder.i felt sorry 4 u.so I struggled hard 2
find ur address& I returned ur money& I'm sorry"
M smiles:its alright she:thx.u r milind.right?
M :yes.u r? she:I'm prachi

M 2 P:we met each other again.den we fel in luv.we
marrie d.she broke her tie with her family 4 me.my
parent s who r at US dunno tht I'm married.dey hav
found a girl called ayesha 4 me.sumtimes I keep her
photo with me 2 make prachi jealous.she bcums so
angry tht she fites with me.she's possessive.but I
luv it.i did'nt tel her the 2day I'm reaching
there. she wont expect me there.but I'l go there
with surprise gifts.she'l surprised.she said she'l
also giv a surprise.but it won't beat my surprise
K smiles:all the best
M drops him 2 his house. M drives the car.1 lorry
was abt 2 hit his car.but he escaped.M reaches his
house. he goes near the door gladly.He hears a
laught er.he luks inside.he was shocked.Bcoz there
P was hugging another man & laughing.M's gifts fal
down.I ts raining.P goes out of the gate with tht
man.he gets inside the car:bye sweety
P :bye. P watches everything with a shock


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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
Wow! Great start!
But like candyfloss said, you should add in the title MP FF or else many people might not read the ff.. 😳
But great start! I really like the start..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
😛 i'v changed d title
Edited by jasminerahul - 18 years ago
karol thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#4
heydi its nyc bt where is neev yaar..........
is this fic is only of mp.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
#5
Neev is the man who hugs Prachi, I suppose... Poor Milind😆

Jasminerahul, just a suggestion, you might want to edit the arrangements/alignment, and also the way you write the dialogues, because they are not easy on the eyes (my eyes, at least)

That said, this seems interesting as a starter 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#6
part 2
mIlind's eyes r ful of tears.he enters their
bedroom.Prachi is inside the bathroom.she's
humming & singing.he luks at the bed.bed sheet was
not properly put.
M feels irritated:u cud'nt bear
ayesha's photo kept in our bedroom.u said this
bedroom is only 4 us.then how cud u b on this bed
with sum other man?u tore my heart completely.u
wounded my heart.i'l never 4giv u
P cums out of the bathroom.her lips were shivering
2 utter his name.she had a slight smile on her
face.
M's eyes r red:how cud u do this 2 me?
P wanted 2 tel sumthing.but she cud'nt.she tuk the
bedsheet & threw it on her face.he holded it
tightly.P was trying 2 escape.but she cant breath
inside the cloth & she falls down dead.
M was
shocked.he cries & sits near her:Prachi!oh my
god,wht did I do?i killed my prachi.how cud I do
this?
M weeps like crazy& goes near the door
weeping.sumbody calls him:milind?
M turns back.he's shocked. She:wen did u cum?wht a
plesant surprise!
She hugs him.M cant believe his eyes.bcoz tht lady
was prachi.M is scared.He moves away from her
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#7
😊 yes,i started this story 4 GK in kusum forum.but no one bothered 2 read it & d forum was dead.so i'm putting it 4 MP
Edited by jasminerahul - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#8
no di again i'm here..........
very gud starting plzzzz post the next part...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#9
Just letting you know that there is already another fanfic with the same name. Its confusing.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#10
Part 3

Milin shivers.Prachi:wht happened milin?
M turns back & luks at the dead body&gets
nervous.P luks.she was shocked & goes near it:Oh
kangana,my sister
M was shocked. P:wht happened milin?
M cries like crazy& tells the truth.P is shocked &
she slaps him:if u c a shadow here,u suspect me?
M weeps:I made a mistake
P weeps:did'nt I tel u tht I'l giv a surprise.my
sis kangana was the surprise.but u thot…u killed
her baby along with her.she was pregnant
M is shocked.P:I've told u tht her husband neev
is an orphan brought by his uncle & aunty.they r
not interested in kangana.bcoz they want their
daughter 2 marry him.so they played dangerous
games& thus kangana had a miscarriage.neev& she
settled in dubAI.she became pregnant again.neev
trusts only us,so he left her here & went back.but
u broke his trust
M :I never expected kangana here& I'vent seen neev
b4.so..
M fals on P's feet&cries:I'm sorry,plz 4giv me
P :u shud seek neev's pardon.cum,now itself we'l
go 2 the airport 2 c him

After keeping kangana on the bed,M & P get a
taxi.tht driver was the person who dropped N.he
thinks:this lady was with the other sir too.now
with this man.so she's tht sort of a lady
He has a naughty smile.P feels weird.They reach
the airport.but N's flight had already left.dey
feel disappointed& go bak.P goes 2 the room&
screams loudly.M goes there:wht happened prachi?
P :kangana's body is missing
M is shocked

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