MANYA RARA ---------and Uma

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I would find it more romantic if Mantu would act according to his character.
Came home . Stareted to dream about Amaya. Then dropped some ( 2-3 drops enough) tears. Then decided that he has to see Amaya.
Chiklu asking him to solve some maths-------Mantu, "Not now ...later." And left without answering. Uma stops him on the road with a card in her hand-------"Dekh Mantu...humari shaadi ka..."
"Later Uma! later!"
She asks Chiklu-------"Keya baat hai Chiklu...bol!"
Chiklu"How will I know? Hamesha bolte hai ---you don't study Chiklu. Today I asked him to help in maths and he said later!" 😲
Mantu left for Amaya's house. Uma followed him-------"Mantu ! Soon to zara! Tu Amya ka ghaaar kiyun ja raha hai."'
After asking him again and again Mantu replies----"Kiyun ki mujhe Amaya se payar hai. Saccha payar .Now let me go."
Uma shocked. Standing on the road.😲
While Mantu left for Amaya's house. Knocks on the door. But no one replies. As they are at GN's house.
"But I have to see Amaya." One day Amaya showed him her room. Mantu remembers that. Climbs up on the pipe( no rain---------that's risky).
Amaya brushing her hair ...just arrived from GN's house. Went to her balcony, and there is Mantu, hanging from the wall.
"Mantu ! Itne raat! What are you doing here? How...? I mean someone could see you..."
Mantu...nervous and suddenly realized-----------It was stupid.
"Keya hua Mantu jawab do? Do you want to tell me something?" Impatient to hear those words.
Mantu------"Hum..."
"Hum keya Mantu? Jaldi batao...nehi to hum..." she stops. Remembers her promise.
"Hum...I just want to ask ...will I take that new job or you want me to stay in my previous one." Mantu tells it in a hurry.
"Keya ?" Amaya shocked. Mantu feels embarrassed...scolds himself ( in his mind)---------keye tu yeh puch ne aya tha? Idiot.
Amaya-------"Keya tum yeh pooch ne aya tha?" Upset.
GN comes out----------"Who is there? Who is on the wall?"
Amya ..."Mantu bhago!"...

Uma on the street. Saw and heard all. Started to cry and run to home. (No need to suicide)---------"To woh churel Amya! Snatched my Mantu! Nehi yeh kabhi nehi ho sakta...I will not let this happen."

Next morning. Rama coming out of shop and his Dad asks something to deliver to GN's house. Rama reaches there and finds Mantu in front of Amaya's house,in a sitting position on the street ...all dreamy ..
"Mantu ...keya hua tujhe?"
"Payar! "
"Kiss se? " Kahin mera RAchita to nehi...he gets scared. "Dekh Mantu . Yeh acchey baat nehi. Tu jante hai na , main Rachita jee se kitna payar karti hoon."
Mantu------"Nehi yaar! Rachitajee nehi. Main to uski ...( suddenly remembers) tujhe Rachita jee se payar hai! Congrats bro." Hugs him. Rama still confused..."To tujhe Rachita jee se nehi hua to kiss se hua? (starts to remember...is there any other girls in that house except Rachita...suddenly remembers)-----------tujhe Amaya se payar hai...woh!" He starts to laugh like mad. Such a relief. Not Rachita jee.😆😆

Uma at home ----------tearing the cards and her hair. 😆

Rama tells his story to Mantu. Then advices him-------"Never tell -------I love you to Amaya. Or else you'd have to suffer like me."

Mantu feels scared. How would he survive without seeing her, not talking to her.

At morning Amaya arrives in office, sad that there will be no Mantu. But as soon as she looks in front of her-------there's Mantu. Smiling.

"Mantu--------you are back!" Amaya feels so happy that she hugs him. He feels good. She feels embarrassed. "Sorry."

"If you are so happy to see me in office. Why didn't you stop me Amaya?" Mantu tells it in a dreamy voice.

Amaya---"Keya! Tumne kuch bola?"

Mantu"nehi to. Kiyun tum ne kuch suna keya?

Amaya"nehi to.

Mantu"How about a tea?

Amaya---why not!

At canteen. Amaya asks-------Mantu why did you came last night.

Mantu drops the tea on his lap. Amaya starts to cry------ Mantu I am so sorry .

Seeing her tears Mantu mumbles------If you love me so much Amaya-----tumne mujhe kiyun nehi ruka?

Amaya-----Tumne kuch bola keya?

Mantu------nehi to. Tumne kuch suna keya?

Amaya-------nehi.

Mantu decides that ------by the end of today he will make her say "yes!"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so nice wat happened next...

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