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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys am posting this on account of my birth day.feel free to criticise...

bhabo is in deep thoughts.she calls bhabasa.
bhabo: suraj ka bhabasa, i wanna tel u something.today in temple i saw suraj going behind lalima...
(bhabasa interrupts her)
bbsa: santosh probably he went behind her assuming that she was sandy
bb: i was about to say that.so i got an idea.i think she can fill the voidness in suraj's life. 😡 😡
bbsa: santosh, are u mad?? how did u think of that? suraj doesnt know the truth na.pls dont butcher his life.and think of ved.
bb: so, are u going to leave him like this?? i have decided well.i am going to make lalima my bahu.nobody can stop me.u ppl have no concern for suraj.
( suraj overhears this.he comes inside)
suraj: bhabo, whats this?? y shud i marry her? i have my sandhya ji na.she went for an important duty so she would come after few months.y r u doing this for me? i...i wont agree.
bb: suraj think of ved.he needs motherly love na.and u too need a good partner.
suraj: but bhabo...
bb: chora she wont come back.gun is her husband.bullets are her kids.station is her home and duty is her god.she has nobody else.i dont need any reply.decide well.
(she leaves.suraj goes to gg room with a heavy heart)
suraj(himself): what happened to bhabo? she s so weird. y she s asking me to marry lalima? did sandy leave me??
(sandy appears before him)
sandy: surajji.i have come.
suraj: sandhya ji! i know u would come.sandy i wanna know something.what happened between u and bhabo? where were u? i missed u a lot.
sandy: i missed u too.i just went for duty.surajji duty is a part of my life.not my entire life.my life is my son, bhabo, bhabasa and you.
suraj: i was scared sandhya.today bhabo asked me to remarry.
sandy: dont worry. i wont let that happen.u shud not give my place to anybody else.how could i leave u? please dont forget me.am always with u na??
suraj: i know it sandy.i wont forget u.and how could diya forget baati??
he hugs her.she slowly disappears.
suraj(himself): thank u sandy.i can do anything for u.

next morning...
bhabo does the puja.suraj comes there.
bb: chora, did u decide??
suraj: yes bhabo.bhabo, god always gives and forgives.man gets and forgets.in the same way he has given sandhya.i got her.but if i forget her, god will not forgive me.
bb: but chora, she had forgotten the EV.she always chooses duty first.u know that u have taken care of ved alone.is she a wife? is she a bahu? is she a mother?
suraj: stop it bhabo!what happened to u? u r the same bhabo who allowed her to become an ips officer.u r the same bhabo who supported her when i kicked her out.but u r blaming her.bhabo, destiny made kavitha run away.destiny made us marry.
bb: its the same destiny which is going to make u marry lalima.
suraj: bhabo listen to me.no one can separate us.if u separate diya and baati, you wont get light.i challenge u.do what u can.but i wont marry lalima.i wont change even if i die.dont try to stop me.otherwise i will leave this house with ved.u asked me na," is she a mother?" if u r a mother, please leave me. sandhya will come.she s always MY SANDHYA JI!!!
( he leaves with a stern face)


-------- TOMATO THROWING SESSION------
posted it in a hurry.sorry for errors .
Edited by gajalakshsandy - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice os..
loved strong reply by suraj...
so rp knows sandy is on mission & wil return soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

nice os..
loved strong reply by suraj...
so rp knows sandy is on mission & wil return soon..


thank u...
honestly i want bold suraj...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice OS Gaja
Many more happy returns of the day 🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Many Many Happy Returns of the Day!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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didnt know its your birthday gaja
many many happy returns
will read the OS and then comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice os gaja
Many many happy returns of the day
bbs gun dialogue 🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pasurYa

Nice OS Gaja

Many more happy returns of the day🥳


thank u akka...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: thala

didnt know its your birthday gaja

many many happy returns
will read the OS and then comment


thank u thala...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SurYalover

nice os gaja

Many many happy returns of the day
bbs gun dialogue🤣🤣


thank u 5... 😃

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