Three Shot - Manmarziyaan {Part 3 - page 10} COMPLETED

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

This is absolutely different ..nothing anyone had thought of..!!

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Mirage09

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Nikki...!!! That was so emotional..! Oh gosh !! I m just bowled over by NeSam here !!

U are one wicked gal, u know that ??!! 😛

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Midhula3110

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

U made me cry.. Gud writing gal

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Lovely chapter, but you made me cry!

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iykyk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

That was heart-wrenching! Your words held the power to literally tear me up. I mean it when I say that I cried. Words won't do justice to what I'm feeling right now. So I won't even try to express them. I will say just one thing...

Kudos to you!

Edited by Cinderella3 - 10 years ago

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riaalex

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

such an amazing update👏👏.cant control tears my heart is aching😭😭. please do write more😊

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EkPagliLadki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Loved the end. Very different from the usual ones. Do write more

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TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

OMG!!!Dis is so heartwrenchingly beautiful!😭😭😭Loved it to da core and yet it made me so sad Niki!😭
Dey died..!😭I cant stop crying..Da pain is excruciating..😭
Plz write another 1?Plz?U r a awesome writer!Loved this Three shot to da core!❤️😳

p.s.Sorry 4 late reply,I was on holiday and sm how ur pm got lost in my inbox..Sorry..🤗

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JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

You write well but why such a bleak ending...?

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srividhya68

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

wow
supeb upt
but i am really feeling sad bcoz both of lovable male leads are dead
atleast u could have killed 1 pair completely while keeping the other alive
but its ok
nicely written

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