FF || Mannmarziyan Season#1 #Mature || Completed on Page 40

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Hi kutties...😊

First of all...

*BIG HUGGIES* 🤗

For the love and support you are showering on me and my stories. Especially this one. And I'm glad that I've got some special readers for this SS.

*LOTS OF LOVE* ❤️

What I used to enjoy while reading your comments was the new and striking names you people gave to the great RKB 😆

The name which I like the most is LUST KUMAR. Still there are a lot of KUMAR's which also I like.

The best part is our LUST KUMAR became CUTE KUMAR and PREM KUMAR when the first thread got completed. 😆🤣

I'm happy 😃 and sad 😔 for the same.


A SECRET

When I started writing this SS I hadn't had a plan. I never thought that readers will like it! I only wanted to portray a FLIRT RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA. All other things came on its way like some BRILLIANT MISTAKES 😆

I must tell you a FUNNY MISTAKE I've done while typing the second chapter of this story [It's not there in the update]. It's about the name Laxmi. I typed Laxmi in the place of Ishita when she introduces herself to RKB because I was so much immersed in talking to my bestie Laxmi while typing. And then the idea stormed up. I edited that part and started it as Mihika's prank. 🤣

Then I got so bored with cheesy romance. So I killed Mihir. I so felt pity for Mihika. So I made Abhi the villain.

At last...

*SIGH*

I'm getting bored of this PREM KUMAR 🤔

WHAT SHOULD I DO?

MAY I BRING BACK LUST KUMAR?😕

NEED YOUR SUGGESTIONS.

COMMENT ON...😳

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Hi Kutties 😃

It was reserved for part 24 but I couldn't help posting this Teaser. 😳

Not proofread
Enjoy reading 😆


TEASER


She walked up to me wearing a knee length off-shoulder blue gown. Her fair thighs exposed to everyone while I reminisced the days when I cherished her. The sexy three days of my life.


Arey yaar...aur kitne ladkiyan...I better give a list to Ishita! Unless, I'm gone!

[How many girls!]


She stood beside me interlacing my hands with hers. My eyes perked up at her audacity.


How dare she touch me! I'm gonna kill her!


However, I faked a cheeky smile adapting to the turn of events. She leaned over my rightside making me feel her flesh. A woman's touch disgusted me for the first time. I wanted to beat her then and there for taking so much freedom. But I was helpless.


I should be enjoying her! But I'm acting like a weirdo...!


What felt like forever, I got a chance to sigh a relief. The girl in my arm broke the side hug and reached my right ear by raising her heels. Softly biting that sensitive part she whispered seductively.


"We must do it tonight...again...!"

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"Hello...I'm tired yaar..."Raman said in a weak voice making Ishita crinkle her eyebrows quizzically.


"Kya hua Raman...Aisa bhi kya kaam dha jo apko itna tired kardiya?" She asked confused.

[What happened...what job made you so tired?]


"Voh...main...kaam...tired matlab...I'm...not tired...Voh main...yuhi kaha dha..." He stammered nervously.

[That...I...job...tired...means...that...I...just said it...]


PS. Thanks for your suggestions on Lust Kumar.
Now try to guess what have I chose 😉

DO LIKE AND COMMENT

BUDDY ME FOR PMs


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Not to mention but under construction with new and dangerous twistc😉
Res for comment 😉
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res...main bhi aayiii...😆😉
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res...main bhi aayiii...😆😉[/QUOTE
Heee my billu rani is very sayani 😆

But gaya di we better get helmets and cat ke save ksrne wala device before update
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Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu


Heee my billu rani is very sayani 😆

But gaya di we better get helmets and cat ke save ksrne wala device before update

i am waiting for lust kumar...😎
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Congratulations for d secnd thread
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congratulations di for new thread
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Originally posted by: --abha--

i am waiting for lust kumar...😎


Waiting for lust kumar but u will get nasty kumar 😉

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