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Posted: 10 years ago
Abha must be your day time may be i lucky when I wake up in the morning I might get to read but look like she might give speeding for her new one. I love the new one too.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Abha must be your day time may be i lucky when I wake up in the morning I might get to read but look like she might give speeding for her new one. I love the new one too.😃


I love MFF...And she is happy with response their...so when she is interested back to back update...
Hope we get all 5 stories update this time around...

Gayu plzzz update sweety...I am waiting for all...JTJB, KHCCS, KNK, MANMARZIYAN, MFF...its been due since ages...u first make us addicted and then left us waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--


I love MFF...And she is happy with response their...so when she is interested back to back update...
Hope we get all 5 stories update this time around...

Gayu plzzz update sweety...I am waiting for all...JTJB, KHCCS, KNK, MANMARZIYAN, MFF...its been due since ages...u first make us addicted and then left us waiting...

Really she is genius I don't know how she plot all of that and she remember all the story never mess up. I am myself sometime confuse have to go back and check what she write last part of the story.😆 And she know how to made us hook to her story. I think if we spam her post she might have to end up the. Third three too.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Really she is genius I don't know how she plot all of that and she remember all the story never mess up. I am myself sometime confuse have to go back and check what she write last part of the story.😆And she know how to made us hook to her story. I think if we spam her post she might have to end up the. Third three too.😉


Jum she loves our spamming...I know her atleast tjis

About story its special talent to write such a wonderful story...keeping in mind all twist are amazing and surprising too and doesn't look weired but interesting...

Okay I am done praising...wth author is doing?
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Posted: 10 years ago
U know how to cool down one's anger
But wait
I wasn't even angry on u lol
Ok... Toh I love teaser as I love u
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

U know how to cool down one's anger
But wait
I wasn't even angry on u lol
Ok... Toh I love teaser as I love u


And I gotta know that you know how to butter someone 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

@Sush new DP is lovely.

thank u 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Kutties...😊
Here goes the next part
Special dedication to my kitty 😳
Not proofread
Enjoy reading 🤗


Chapter-25

KUCH AUR BAAT



"Mujhse kuch chupana chahta hai nah Raman?" Ishita asked him sternly.

[You want to hide something?]


"Voh...haan...I don't think that I've any other option." He said helplessly.


"No Raman...you do have an option. Open up to me..." She said assiringly.


"Do you believe me Ishita...?" He asked fearing the obvious reply.


"No Raman...I don't believe you completely. But I will be able to...if you'll be that sincere." She tried to reason.


"I can underdstand..." He said convincing himself.


"Won't you say?" She pouted.


"Ishita...it's...about a girl whom I dated two months ago." He started embarressingly.


Ishita felt a pang on her stomach but composed herself and asked him to continue.


"Voh...yahan...papake paas...bacha...mera bolke...I don't know whether to tell you or not..." He said miserably.

[She here...with papa..baby...mine...]


"She is there saying that she is pregnant!!!!" Ishita exclaimed in shock and disconnected the call hearing Raman's silence.


AFTER AN HOUR

ISHITA AND RAMAN MESSAGING



"Raman...😔"

"Don't make such a sad face Ishita...plz...😔"

"You're also making so...😔"

"I'm really sad...😔"

"Me too...😔 and angry😡"

"What'll I do now? 😕"

"Divorce me and marry her 😭"

"Aaarrrghh Ishita...😡"

"What else? 😔"

"You know I love you...❤️"

"Hmm...☺️"

"And I can't leave the baby also..."

"Ermmm...🤔"

"Help me solve this problem...🤢"

"I've an idea 😃 Call me 😎"


RAMAN AND ISHITA PHONE CONVERSATION


*MUTE*


"Yeh tikh hoga?" Raman crinkled his eyebrows for which Ishita hummed confidently.

[It'll be fine?]


"Tujhe koyi problem nahin hai kya?" He asked again.

[You don't have any problem?]


"Uffo Raman...ap voh karo joh maine kahan. If I don't like it...I wouldn't have given this idea nah?" Ishita asked irritated.

[You do what I said]


It was the nth time he was asking the same. She felt tired of handling this Timid Bhalla. So she tried to put on a seductress mask to convince her man in her own way.


"You know what Raman...I miss you so much" She said in a tempting voice making him divert his concentration from Sarika to his wife.


"Jab ap aajayenge...tab keliye apko ek surprise hai Raman. A surprise which you can't even imagine." She said huskily while looking at the mirror and smacking her reflection for promising a lie.

[You've a surprise when you'll community back]


"Kya main kal aajaaun?" Raman asked her huskily making her blush.

[May I come tomorrow?]


"Kuch bhi...Aaj nahin. Jab sab tikh hoga..."

[Not today. When everything will be fine]


"I'm so happy today...Because I got you" He said while laying down on the bed.


"Hmmm" She hummed blushing harder.


"I need you now meri madrasan...mujhe kitna kuch karna hai tere saath...haye rabba..."He patted his heart to calm himself down.

[I want to do a lot with you]


"Kya karna hai...?" She asked naughtily.

[What you want to do?]


"Mujhe...🤬"Raman explained shamlessly making Ishita all red and silent.


"Kya...? Kuch toh bolo...Kaisa laga...?" Raman's voice thickened.

[What? Say something...how was that?]


"Raman...ap bas bhi karo...Meri gaal naach rahe hai...!" She said rubbing her cheeks.

[Raman stop it. My cheeks are dancing]


"Acha...! Agar tum mere paas hoti toh..." His words trailed off.

[If you'd have been here...]


"Mujhe neend aarahe hai..."She tried to excuse.

[I'm sleepy]


"Kumbakaran...ab subah bhi sona shuru kiya!" He expressed shock.

[Kumbakaran started to sleep day as well!]


"Raman...bas karo apka..." Her words swallowed.

[Raman stop your...]


"Mera...? Mera kya?" He naughtily smiled biting his lower lip.

[My? My what?]


"Raman...apko kya chahiye?" Ishita asked shivering.

[What you want?]


"You don't know?" He asked naughtily.


"Raman...ap bhi nah...! Yeh main kaise besharam insaan se shaadi kiya!" She exclaimed to divert from the topic.

[I married such a shameless person!]


"Yaar...aise kahan hota hai? Shaadike doosre din apni patni ko chodke gadbad mein bhasnewala pati...! I pity myself...ufff!" Raman sighed.

[Where it happens? Caught up in a huge fuss on the second day of marriage!]


"Chodiye nah Raman...aur ap rest kijiye..." Ishita patted him by her words.

[Leave it and take rest]


"Oye madrasan...tum nah...don't try to divert me. I'm not done with you yet. I can't even look at a girl because of you. Aise kya jaadu hai tere paas?"Raman wondered.

[What magic is with you?]


"Jaadu...meri kamar..." Ishita giggled.

[My waist]


"Haan...so toh hai...Your waist...! haan... I miss you..." He replied dreamily.

[Right...]


"Main toda zyada moti dikhraha hai kya Raman? Mummiji ne bola ki toda weight lose karo..." Ishita pouted.

[Am I looking a bit fatty? Mummiji asked me to lose some weight]


"Kyun...? I'll manage it." He almost screamed.

[Why?]


"Kya manage karenge?" She asked confused.

[What will you manage?]


"Voh...mujhe aisa hi acha lagta hai..." He smiled softly hugging the pillow as if hugging her.

[I like you this way]


"Ap...main apse bhi moti lagti hun Raman. Main weight lose karke hi rahungi." She said stubbornly.

[I look so fat. I'll lose some weight for sure]


"Pagal aurat sirf apneki sochte hai." He said angrily.

[Mad woman only thinks about herself]


"Why are you so gussa? It's my body I'll do whatever I like" She blurted out unknowingly hurting his ego.

[Angry?]


"Oh really? So you own yourself. And I got nothing to do with you right? Thanks for letting me know. Now I'm done with you." He said furiously.


"Raman...ap subject change mat karo...yeh sab kya ho raha hai?" Ishita got worried.

[Don't change the topic. What's happening?]


"Main koyi subject change nahin kar raha hun. Tum kuch nahin samjogi. Khud pagal hoke mujhe bhi pagal banaya." Raman muttered under his breath.

[I'm not changing subject. You won't understand. You're born mad and making me also one]


"Raman ap kya bol rahe ho? Maine kuch nahin suna..." Ishita said loudly.

[What are you saying? I didn't hear you]


"Aaargh...Don't make my ears bleed. Maine kuch nahin kahan. Ab phone rakhdo." For which Ishita tried to say something but Raman disconnected angrily.

[I didn't say anything. Now keep the phone]


"Yeh kaisa admi hai? Meri kya galti dhi?" She wondered.

[What kind of a man? What's my mistake?]


RAMAN'S POV


I was deep in thought lying in the bed when I heard the knock on the door. My mind was a question bank. A lot of things were there to be answered. How come Sarika found out about my father. Why the hell is she here instead of going to mummiji? Is she really pregnant? If yes, is that my baby? I wanted answers.


Scratching my head, I walked towards the door. Before I could sense that the door is opened a force pushed it making me take few steps backwards. When I composed myself to start a round of scolding for such a horrid mannerism I saw Sarika locking the door behind her.


I never felt so much pissed off by a woman when she enters my bedroom to serve herself to me. Her touches made me voice a "yuck". She looked at me leaving my shirt stick on to my body.


Raman Kumar Bhalla is unable to bear the touch of a hot and sexy woman! That's a news to myself!


I never pleaded to a woman asking to stop touching me. And it is the first time I am doing so. She was all over me and my mind was aplogizing to Ishita. But why? What is the connection with it to Ishita? I still don't know! However, I know one thing that I can't let anyone other than Ishita touch me.


I mumbled to her that I'm married. She should know it. In no time everyone will know it. But I never thought that she will talk in such a boorish way. She uttered which I can't even imagine. Ishita and dying...! Oh My God this bitch is going overboard.


I forgot about her condition that she is pregnant. I controlled myself till now owing to the same. But not anymore. I did really mean to kill her stragling in my hands. I wanted her to shut her bad mouth forever. But my life pulled me back; Ishita. My grip on her loosened while I looked at the direction were my mobile is kept. I let that witch slip of my hand and walked towards the bedside table.


I was happy and tensed at the same time when I saw her name blinking on the screen. I wanted to cry out. I needed her so much then. I needed to relax in her arms after telling everything. I wanted her to support me. I needed her to console and love me no matter what. But then...I don't deserve it.


I know I'm so bad. Same time...I'm too selfish to let her choose the best.


Taking her call I stammered a lot making her doubt on me. Finally my biwi made me spit out the truth. I felt home and releaved when I said my heart out to Ishita. For the first time I realised that she is my everything. However I didn't expect her to disconnect the call and make me stand on fire for an hour.


When I saw her message popping up I was on cloud nine. It was nothing but my name. Still I can feel her lingering voice calling me pouting her lips like a goldfish. She understanding my dilemma was the first and last thing I wanted.
She adviced me what to do...how to tackle the problem...how to behave with papa...etc. It was my sulky mood that made her change the topic. I know my madrasan very much. And she herself jumped into the pit.


But our talk got diverted to another matter. I'm cursing that time and mummiji. Why she want my wife to lose weight when I'm more than okey with it? I couldn't understand. And my wife is such a fool who also showed blind eye towards my feelings.


More than that she declared that she will do whatever she want to her body. What does she mean? I just couldn't understand. But still I got furious. Furious thinking that she doesn't consider me. I felt so annoyed!


I never felt these kind of feeling towards a woman! My madrasan is awesome!

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MORNING AT BHALLA'S


Raman came down to the living room all dressed up to go somewhere. The breakfast was a silent affair. Finishing it off he prepared to leave but stopped hearing Mr Bhalla asking him what is he up to. He turned to him expressionless and said firmly.
"I'll be back in two days. I believe she won't deliver in such a short time. I want to bring my wife here. She is scared of travelling in flight alone. So I better bring her myself. Is that a problem with you?"


"You're married Raman?" Mrs Bhalla asked shocked but Mr Bhalla gripped on her hand to stop asking anything further.


"Come back soon." Mr Bhalla asked smiling softly while Raman left the place stealing a glance at his father without his knowledge.

TO BE CONTINUED...

PRECAP

Hugging her from behind he pulled her up and swirled her in the air while she laughed out feeling happy and scard at the same time.

"Raman put me down...I'm scared...Ayyoo Amma...!" Ishita cried.


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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Abha whenever I see the kitty I miss Nichuss she love cat like you.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Madam Ishita feeling ok when the husband tell her about Sarika she is impossible that not angry with him like he scare.😆and she even suggest some plan for him👍🏼👍🏼 I think Raman will be the first man that I know that he didn't want the wife to,loose weight.😆😉 Raman dad now know Raman was married and why he want him to marry Sarika.😡 Something is fishy like Ramam guess so will wait for next update. He is going to take Ishu to his dad House.What will happen?thanks GAYA for update this story.😃

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