ArShi FF- Second Chance Updated-21/7 Pg 24 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely story!! Glad I stumbled upon this .. Please do pm me too :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing story.. very nicely written. 👏
So many misunderstandings that need to be cleared up. But now that Arnav has mentioned marriage, seems like Khushi does not want to re-marry him.

But for how long will she keep turning him down, or will she let Rena live with Arnav?

Rena seems so matured... I especially liked it when she expressed concern when Khushi hurt herself.
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Posted: 10 years ago

thank you



thank you


Originally posted by: brishti84

I love that Khushi is saying no to his idea of remarriage right away. They weren't happy and now there is a child who will suffer if they can't make it work.

I hope Arnav realizes that they need to work out their differences first before taking such a big step. Wonder what he has planned. I do like that he's so concerned about his daughter right away. It's very sweet. And her present for him was so cute, especially the + sign.


Thank you. Khushi is pragmatic about her marriage with Arnav. But she is a romantic too.Lets see what happens.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pdrover

Arnav got some wooing to do
Thanks for pm


Thank you.Arnav is not really good at wooing. 😆



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nanor

simply brilliant
loved it--


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Reader-

Nice update.

Glad Rena and Arnav bonded and Khushi is letting Rena spend time with Arnav. Arnav wants to marry Khushi, is it only for Rena? I really hope he finds out about past and closes all the loops before respectfully and wholeheartedly marrying Khushi. She deserves it :)


Thank you forreading. Arnav wants to marry her for Rena but himself too.It has been lonely. Though he may not realise it but he does need her.


Originally posted by: Serene77

Lovely story!! Glad I stumbled upon this .. Please do pm me too :)


Thank you. I will pm.



Its a bit delayed. One of my favorite authors book got released recently and I am reading that. I will update by Wednesday. Sorry for the delay.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jessjazz

Amazing story.. very nicely written. 👏

So many misunderstandings that need to be cleared up. But now that Arnav has mentioned marriage, seems like Khushi does not want to re-marry him.

But for how long will she keep turning him down, or will she let Rena live with Arnav?

Rena seems so matured... I especially liked it when she expressed concern when Khushi hurt herself.


Thank you
Rena's only stability is Khushi. Arnav is ruthless but he would not seperate Rena- Khushi hopefully.😊


Originally posted by: swtsam

awesome. ..loved it...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

You have no choice

Next day Khushi woke up with stiff neck. Then she dropped the pan while preparing uttapam for breakfast. Finally while getting dressed hurt her foot. The day could not have had a better start, she thought while hobbling fast searching for an auto.

She had just settled down for the day, when Arnav came bursting in. Khushi was bemused and just kept looking at him wondering what he was doing at her office. Then she remembered the bunglow. She asked him to sit down and said, "I will call Raj, give me a minute. And sit down, stop looming over me."

Arnav just raised his supercilious eyebrow and said, "Khushi, pack up we are leaving."

Khushi looked at him aghast. He was gathering her things. He had taken out the two romance novels she always has, extra pair of clothes, her favourite red heels which had given Raj palpitations, and several coats from the coat rack with Anvi's help.

"What are you doing? I am not going anywhere with you."

Arnav ignored her and explained to Anvi, "If anyone asks tell them Khushi left with her would be husband."

"I did not." "I mean I will not."

"Where she will burn and rot in hell forever as his wife." Arnav continued as if Khushi had not spoken. Then he dragged Khushi and stuffed her into the waiting car.

Satisfied with day's job well done, he asked, "Haven't you figured it out yet?"

"What?" Khushi asked perplexed.

"Your weakness," Arnav replied. "Confuse you and you will follow like an obedient tortoise."

Khushi just looked at him confused.

Arnav took her to his hotel room, told her to take a sit, gave her a glass of water and ordered her to drink.

When she was looking as if she is among living again he said, "We need to talk."

Khushi just sat there mute wondering what she was doing there and how soon can she leave. Will it count as half day? Will her pay be docked because of it?

Arnav just looked at her dazed face and pinched her hard on her arm.

"Aww...ouch" Khushi shrieked. "What was that for?"

"To bring you amongst living. Don't worry Rena will kiss it better." "Now where were we?"

Khushi just gave him a furious look.

After five minutes of ominous silence, Arnav said, "Khushi don't make do this."

"Do what?" Khushi asked.

"Will you marry me Khushi?"

"We have already talked about this. I will not marry you ever again."

"Not even for our daughter? She needs both of us."

"She can have both of us, just not together."

Arnav was silent after that declaration. When he spoke he said, "Khushi you have forced me to do this."

"What?"

"Did you know that your mausi's home is financed by a bank?"

"yes"

"Did you know that the loans can be transferred from one financial entity to another?"

"No"

"Did you know my family owns a small bank?"

"No"

"Then you absolutely cannot know that I bought your aunt's loan."

"No"

"And I can evict her, if I am so inclined."

"No"

"Your aunt will be homeless. I heard she is agoraphobic. I wonder what will happen if she is evicted. "

"No"

"Yes Khushi I can do that."

"No"

"Or I can forfeit it too. It all depends on you."

"No"

"Yes, it does. Will you marry me?"

"No"

"Khushi think about it. You don't have any other option."

"You bas***d. I will never forgive you."

"It's a good thing that I am not looking for forgiveness then."


Hello peeps,

First of all I apologize for the delayed update. I was travelling and when I came back after a month I was out of groove. It took me sometime to get back in it. I also learned to make notes so as not to loose the story arc. But all that aside I kept you people waiting so I am really sorry for that.

Also as I mentioned in the update about the loan takeover,the research on that is sketchy at best. Banks can take over loans but only if they have defaulted and that too in bulk. So kindly ignore my flight of imagination.

Anvha

Edited by anvha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you for updating. Was waiting on it for awhile. S Arnav is just forcing Khushi after all that happened between them.

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