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Posted: 10 years ago
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This story starts from maan's memory loss


Ajj dus din ho gaye haye maan coma me haye. Zindegi bhi kabhi kabhi kayese more par aakar khari ho jati hain, jaha dur due tak sab kuch andhera hone lagta hain.😭

Kash mere zindegi me se yeh andhera jaldhi khatam ho jaye. Baabajii, app appke ashirwad sada appke iss bachhi ko dena aur mere maan aur mere parivar ki Sara raksha karna.





Ofho, maye toh mera intro dena bhul gai. Mai hu Geet Khurana. Aur yeh Thai meri zindegi ki kahani.



Character -

Maan Singh Khurana (29)_MD of k.c . Rude , arrogant , buisness man. Loves his Daadi, wife , sister to the core. Hates his brother and sis in law to the core.Currently coma in city hospital.



Geet Maan Singh Khurana (24) -51% share holder of k.c . Loves maan , Hates dev and naintara . Loves daadimaa.


Savetri Khurana/Daadimaa (78)- Maan's daadimaa.loves all her grand children .Treat Geet as her own poti.


Dev khurana (26)_one an only love his wife. Can do any thing for her. Currently bankrupt in Canada.

Naintara Khurana(25) only loves money ,married dev for khurana fame and power and nothing else .Tretes dev as her slave at Canada.

Adi- maan's right hand and only friend,in love with pinky.

Pinky- Geet's first friend since k.g .In love with adi but does not express it.Very food and can do any thing for food.


Sasha,Tasha,Romeo,Manisha,Pandeyji-same as serial.



Chapter 1 - page 1
Chapter 2 - page
Chapter 3 - page














Chapter 1 -




City Hospital - Delhi






In a private room , maan laying in a bed and his head , arms are have stitches. Doctors are examing his condition.




Out side ,a very tensed Geet, Daadimaa, Annie and Adi are praying for maan's safety.Doctors came from maan's room .




Geet. - Doctor, maan .. mera maan kaisa hai ?


Doctor - ???????


Daadimaa - App chip kyu hai ? Kuch toh boliye ki maan bete abhi kaise hai?



Annie - Doctor , bhai thik toh ho jayenge na ?


Adi - Abb maan ka condition kaisa hai?





Doctor - Relax , Mrs. Khurana. Mr.khurana ke condition pahele she kaafi improve ho rahe chain.




Geet - Toh maan ko sense kab ayega.


Daadi. Adi. Annie --- Ha, doc boliye plz.Humlogoko aur intezar mat karaiye.


Doctor- Abhi much bhi bolna possible nahi chain.


Geet - Abhi toh app bowl rage the ki maan think hai.


Doctor - Mera keheneka MATLAB tha Mr.khurana abb khatrese bahar Thai per unko Josh kab tak aayega ,ya hosh aaneme kitna time lagega yeh Arab kehena bohot mushkil hai.Plz hope for the best .Excuseme,Doctors chale jate hain.



Daadi - Geet ,app dial chota na kare .Maan bohot jald thik ho jayenge.


Geet - per kab tak daadimaa? Mujhe toh aur intezar nahi ho rahe hain.



Adi - Tum baabajii per viswas karo .


Annie- Thank God , ki bhai ki condition pahelese bohot aacha hain.

Daadi - Applog abhi office jaiye hum ghar jate hain.


Geet,Annie,Adi- OK .daadimaa.


Geet - App appna khayal rakhna daadimaa.Medicines time per Lena maat bhulna.

Daadi - ha.













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congo 4 ur first story on maaneet
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Hi welcome to our forum. Congrats for ur new story. Will be wanting.
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congrats on ur FF! update soon n do pm! so will u knw u updated! Thanks
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awesome intro n lovely cs! update soon! n do pm! Thanks
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Update soon.. Will surely read it..
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emotional update! well written! Maan in a hospital! Dadi, Geet n Annie worried! doc says difficult to tell bt he is dng better! update soon
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