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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 20

Khrish? Geet was upset seeing him misbehave infront of the students...

This shouldn't have happened, and what's the matter with Khrish?

Khrish is not a bully and he is not a bad guy...

Or maybe Geet was wrong, this is the real Khrish!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh no, Khrish, what happening? Babaji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Geet couldn't belived what she was witnessing...

All her beliefs about Khrish were wrong...

She's yet to know this Khrish, but why she always wished to believe that Khrish is the most righteous man on earth, the man who can never err, never make a mistake...

But that can't be true for no man is perfect and everybody has his own weakness...haina?

Geet was stunned for her super hero was just another jealous attitudewala ordinary guy...

As Khrish was from some other college and that winner belonged to that same college many students came to the support of that guy...

And Khrish too was accompanied by a few friends and they were all furious too...

It seemed as if they were controlling their anger...

One of the guys started bashing Khrish...

"who are you man? Coward, jealous looser, himmat hai toh competition mein harathe"

Then khrish was flooded with abuses...

"ye hummare college ka nahi hai?"

"he's not even a student, koi gangster hoga"

"just a barbaric, uncivilized moron, throw him out now, who let him inside our campus"

Then the boys accompanying Khrish start arguing...

" who is uncivilized, only that b****** whom you call champion"

There was a war of words...

Khrish tries to calm his friends...mostly ladies...that too beautiful ladies...

Geet is a little jealous..."why is so many girls following hi? Does this happen always?"

"ye toh ladhkiyon ka leader hai"

Everyone teases...and they mock Khrish...

But he was least bothered...he didn't feel ashamed to be leading the ladies...

Respects women...Geet liked that...

"teek se dekho ye bhi toh woh nahi hai kya?"

All make fun of Khrish and laugh...

"ye mardhon ka khel hai, tummare liye nahi, tum galat jagah pea aye ho, inko lekhe dusre hall mein jaana, wahi tummare Fashion show chal raha hai"

That winner boasts "mard hai toh samne aao, kyun ladhkiyon ke peeche chupthe ho?"

There's this Manisha, you know him/her gazing that winner and drooling...

That guy looks at Manisha and winks..."hare Manisha, chalo dekhthe hai ki ye mard hai ya nahi"

Manisha sharmatha...that guy asks him to strip Khrish...

But turns to Khrish but after looking at his fierceful eyes he steps back...

That guy himself tears off Khrish's shirt...and to the young ladies delight he uncovers a massive six pack chisel body behind that black t-shirt...

No one cared to wink and all all eyes were on his body, including Geet's...

"just flaunting your bare torso doesn't make you a man" Khrish roars as he pounces like a lion on that champion and gets hold of him...

That man looks like a little mouse infront of a huge lion...

He tries to escape but Khrish hold him tight and pulls him forward...

"dekho apne champion ko, achche se dekho, young ladies, aap bhi dekho"

But when there is Khrish no one bothers to look at that loser...haina?

"you just made him your champion, but does anyone know his real face, the ugly face?"

There was completely silence...

"this rascal blackmailed his GF with a personnel video recording"

Khrish became furious and he started punching him non stop...

All the girls cheered Khrish..."aur maro aur maro"

And here was Geet equally involved " usske nak thodo Khrish"

Khrish just knocked him out...

No one came to his rescue and he was reduced to a mere pile of flesh...they didn't see him as a living person after knowing about him...they looked down upon him as if he was some garbage...

Now the girls turned their attention to Khrish...

They started drooling over him...they wanted to crown him the new champion...

One of the girls picked up the trophy and ran to Khrish...

"here's our new champion, a huge round of applause for him girls"

Khrish ignored her completely,turned and started walking away...

What an attitude? He may be a gentleman, but this attitude was not so good...Geet didn't like that...

He had gone to pick up his shirt...

He then turned to the ladies...

"when will you stop this?"

They were all surprised...

"you just a hailed him as champion a minute ago and now you cheer me?"

Even Geet was stunned by his reaction...

He just shrugged off his shoulders put on his shirt back...

He then looked at the cheering crowd and continued...

"girls, why are you so much obsessed with these guys? Instead of wasting your time and energy drooling, start thinking about yourself"

His words started making sense to them, maybe he was right...They all listened to him with utmost attention...

"stop complaining that guys don't give you respect, first you learn to respect yourself then expect the same from the guys, and for god's sake don't blindly follow anyone in the name of love and cheat yourself, stop being a fool and start thinking with your head, then no one can cheat you, they can only do so if you let them cheat you, why give the chance and later blame the guys? So learn to be smart and beauty without brains is of no use, it's simply waste"

All the girls listening to him wowed to improve their intellect after hearing him...

Geet too thought it's important to make the right choices and she knows that her choice is not that bad...yes, her Khrish is very girls dream man, he has got the looks, attitude and also the brains...so there is no need for Geet to worry about her brain as Khrish said, her Khrish has got all the brains they needed...

She ignored his advice and started drooling right away...

That's when Geet got to know about Khrish more...

That was enough for her to start loving him...

Initially she liked Khrish but after getting to know him more and more she fell in love with him...

From that day she started stalking Khrish...

She began to collect more information about him...

She learnt from her spying that Khrish used to spend a lot of his time hanging out with his friends at Manisha's cafeteria...actually Manisha ran a coffee shop nearby as it's an area surrounded by many institutes including Geet's college...

Geet started visiting the coffe shop to meet her Khrish...

She deliberately avoided Annie for she thought she has to do this alone, pyaar mein friends ka koi jagah nahi hothi haina? and Geet had become more and more possessive after she saw all the girls drooling that day...why take a risk for her Khrish is drooling material, haina?

She patiently waited for Khrish every evening for the next few days but she didn't get to see him...

He was out of town and later she got the news that he had gone to Mumbai for holidays...

Then she somehow got his number from Manisha...

She became friends with Manisha and used him as a source to know more about her Prince...

Geet discovered that Manisha too had a crush on her Khrish and he called him Prince...

Geet then got used to that name too and she also called him Prince infront of Manisha...

Thus she calls her Khrish Prince when she is really in a romantic mood...

Geet made friends with Manisha so that she can become friends with Khrish too, though Khrish new her as Angel he doesn't know more about her and has forgotten about her after that...

She had to renew their friendship b'coz she wanted their friendship to last forever, she didn't know at that point that she'll fall in love with Khrish...

Slowly and steadily Khrish grew bigger and bigger inside her mind and she became obsessed with Khrish soon...she started talking about Khrish with Annie too but still wasn't ready to introduce him to Annie, first she had to get aquainted with him na?

For a couple of days she started blabbering about Khrish all day long and seeing her craziness Annie warned her but Geet's madness increased every minute...

She began to miss him terribly and she tried to find a way to contact him for he had gone home for a month and she couldn't live without him that long...

She was literally talking khrish, walking Khrish, eating Khrish and breathing Khrish in those days...

Annie was afraid she might end up in the mental asylum before her Khrish cama back...she suggested that Geet took a break from this and maybe she stopped thinking about Khrish...

Annie tried to distract her taking her out of Delhi to a friends home at Chandigarh...

But to her surprise nothing stopped Geet from thinking about her Khrish and Geet returned the next day itself...even thruout their journey Geet only talked about Khrish and nothing else...

Annie decided that it's too late to convince Geet and she had been bitten by the love bug and only Khrish could help her...

After a couple of weeks Geet found a way to contact him finally...

In the two week absence, she got his number from Manisha and started texting him as Angel...first Khrish didn't recognize her but after a small intro he remembered her...

She started sending "gud morning, gud day, gud noon, gud evening till gud night"

At times he responded and she was so excited everytime she got a msg from him...

She was little skeptical about opening up so soon and wanted to win his trust and friendship before making further progress in their relationship...


Part21

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
geet become obsess of her krish

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update! well written! Geet falling 4 Krish! she makes frinds with Manisha 2 get to knw more abt him! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
geet start loving him and spy him
annie get to know but she is just mad about
him and he didn't know about her
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet tho poori pagal hochuki hai krish ki pyaar mein
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 20 - geet fall in love more & more with krish and to more about him he befriended manish-a too...she took no from him and started sending messages to krish daily.
he became her obsession
you mentioned maan instead of krish in the boys' fighting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update

So this Geet think that Maan's name is Krish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 20 - geet fall in love more & more with krish and to more about him he befriended manish-a too...she took no from him and started sending messages to krish daily.

he became her obsession
you mentioned maan instead of krish in the boys' fighting.

Thanks for pointing my mistake...
Actually Maan Maan likhne ki aadat ho gayi hai...
Aage bhi aaisa ho saktha...

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Posted: 10 years ago

hiii guys...

and I had mistakenly wrote Maan instead of Khrish and now I've changed it...

thanks to madhuri...

kya karein, Maan likhne ka aadat jo ban chka hai, hum hai aadat se majhboor...

link to Lakshmi and Priya's Hum Tum Anni thread...

pls take part in it...

HumTum

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 21

At Sam's place...

Geet is lost in her past while Sam is looking for Geet's present, her Khrish...

Next day they get the address of the guests and try to visit a few young men in that list...

Now Geet is confident that she would soon find her Khrish...

There are a few business men and there is one Rahul, Maan's business associate...

Sam has a hunch that it would be Rahul, Maan has told that he is a flirt and Maan avoids calling him to KC...

Sam takes Geet to Rahul Builders first...

Thay are kept waiting for more than an hour and Sam had to use Maan's name to get some response...

After all the waiting they are informed that their MD has just left for London for some meeting...

He will only come after a week...

Geet is worried that her Khrish is still playing hide and seek with her...

Sam is also curious to find out whether Geet is telling the truth or it's her imagination...

She thinks Maan would be able to contact him and also Maan may have his pictures too...

Sam takes Geet home...Geet is completely dejected and doesn't even realize what's happening and where she is...

Her mind is fully occupied with the thoughts of her Khrish...

She had just met him but why he always disappears...

That's the biggest problem for Geet, her Khrish saves her everytime but he also leaves her after that...she doubts whether he loves her...

She is now angry with her Khrish...he has become a Dhust Danav nowadays and is avoiding her...

Geet tries to find out why? But even before she can ask him anything he always vanishes...

Sam repeatedly asks Geet did she really met Khrish...

Geet keeps saying that her Khrish was there at the function but he disappeared as always...

Geet is broken and she has been crying all day...

Though Sam's phsycology says that Khrish might be Geet's imaginery lover, as a friend Sam wants to believe Geet, she wants this Khrish to be real, just for Geet's sake and this friendship being more powerful makes Sam too strongly believe that Khrish really exists...

She is determined to find the truth and help Geet get out of this pain as soon as possible...

She can't see Geet in this condition anymore...

As someone who is constanly yearning for love, for Maan has never openly showed his love, that is Ishqwala love, Sam can understand the pain that Geet is going thru...

Sam wants to meet Maan immediately and trace this Rahul before he escapes...

Sam asks Geet to take rest as she has to go meet Maan...

Sam goes to KC...

But Maan is attending a busy meeting and he can't be disturbed in the middle...

Adi : sorry m'am, I can't help you

Sam is disappointed...

Pinky comes to meet Sam after Adi told her that she is here...

Sam asks Pinky to go meet Geet for she is so much worried and upset...

She would need to meet her friend now...

Sam asks Adi to drop pinky home...

Adi takes Pinky to Khanna house...

Geet bahut udaas hai...

Pinky ko bhi bahut bhura lagtha...

Geet: Pinky? Tu yahan?

Pinky: Geet, tujhe kya ho gaya hai?

Geet breaks down seeing Pinky...

Geet goes and hugs her, she needs her friend now...

Geet is slowly losing the hope of finding her Khrish...

Geet sobs and Pinky consoles her...

Pinky: Geeet, kya hua?

Geet: Pinky, woh mein har gayi

Pinky: nahi Geet

Geet: haan, Khrish mujhse pyaar nahi karthe

She becomes very emotional...she is also tired...

She struggles to control herself...

Sam too comes back as she couldn't meet Maan...

Sam: Geeet

Sam is worried as her doctor, this may affect her mental health...

Sam holds Geet and takes her to the bed room...

She makes her sit comfortably and gives her water to drink...

Pinky gets some juice...

With her friends help Geet regains her confidence and is hopeful that MK will somehow find her Khrish...

Geet is a little relieved now...

Geet: Sam, tum unhe milkke aagayi? Itni jaldhi?

Sam: nahi, MK thoda busy hai

Geet: bahut bada business man jo hai

Geet tries to overcome her fears that she had lost her Khrish...

Sam takes this chance to keep her distracted from her worries...

Sam tells Geet about MK and her friendship...

MK and Sam know each other from their childhood and they studied at the same boarding school at Simla...MK is a few months elder but they did their schooling together...

MK is very practical and always thinks with his head and is less emotional but Sam is a normal girl, little bit sensitive and very serious about her relationships...she cherises their friendship more than anything and as she grew older she realized that MK is much more than a friend for her...when they parted during their college days Sam missed MK very much and that's when she discovered her love for him and she immediately confessed her feelings to MK...

MK initially didn't take her seriously but Dadi took it seriously and supported Sam...

MK couldn't deny the fact that he loves Sam, but he can't confirm that it's Ishqwala love...

It's a fact that Sam is the only girl in his life and his only girl friend...

MK has very few friends and no one is so dear and near to him like Sam...

MK kept her waiting for a long time and it's b'coz of her father's pressure MK finally agreed for the marriage...

Sam is very happy and is very confident that MK too loves her as much as she loves him but he is very poor in expressing his feelings...everything will be fine after marriage...

Geet tells Sam that MK is so lucky to have got Sam in his life and he will soon realize it ...

Geet says that Sam is equally lucky for she has been with MK since her childhood and MK is always been there for her even before she knew that she loved him...but Geet is not lucky and she has been waiting to see her Khrish for a long time...

She is upset that her Khrish doesn't even know that Geet is here in Mumbai waiting for him...Geet has not even told him about her staying with Sam and how she has been looking for him all these days...how stupid? She just lost her senses seeing her Khrish and she had gone speechless after seeing him after a long time...

She just wants to inform him that she is here,but where am I? she then gets angry with herself for not even knowing where she is staying, she must have got the informations from Sam know, then she could inform her Khrish, then her Khrish would come flying to take his Geet with him...

Sam feels sad for her, she is still a kid, and doesn't know anything about that cheat...

Sam has a bad feeling that Khrish is trying to cheat poor Geet, he has left the party for fear of being caught...

Geet believes that Khrish is a super hero, but this Khrish might be a zero too, just luring innocent girls with his charm and hanging with them until he finds a new girl...

Geet might be one of his victims, she has to know the truth behind her Khrish so that she'll realize how stupid she is to be fooled like that easily...

But for that Sam has to get to the bottom of this story, know what's Khrish's secret is...

They will have to trace this Khrish from the guest list...

Sometimes Sam doubts if this Khrish is real or is he Geet's dream prince, only residing in her dreams...

And then she ignores those thoughts that she is confused as she is a pshychology student always dealing with problematic lunatics...

But Geet is sane and she has a steady mind...she is just obsessed with her love and has lost him...

Poor Geet, she may have been betrayed...Sam hopes that this Khrish is not a cheat as Sam suspects...

After a while Pinky leaves and Sam had to go to the hospital and she is not ready to send Geet alone to KC...Maan is already angry with Geet and he might hurt her...

Sam doesn't want Geet to get into more trouble...

She has to speak with Maan about this Rahul first...and they are not even sure if this Rahul is Khrish...

Sam promises Geet to find her Khrish as soon as possilble and asks Geet to stay positive...

Sam then asks Maan about Rahul and tells him about her hunch that this Rahul might be Khrish...

Maan and Rahul have done their MBA together in Delhi and there is a possiblility that Rahul might have met Geet then...

Maan says that Sam is crazy and he knows very well about Rahul and he never takes any girl seriously...

Sam too agrees with the fact that Rahul has a weakness for women and that's why Geet might have been one of his love interests...poor girl might have believed his words and she is madly in love with him...

Maan says that Sam is imagining too much and he is not going to be part of this madness...

He says that it's high time Sam stops worrying about Geet and start thinking about their marriage...

Sam is surprised that Maan is talking about the wedding for the first time and is happy...

But Maan just wants to get rid of this trouble somehow...

Maan sternly refuses to interfere in this matter and advices that Sam too doesn't involve in this too much...she's just another patient who is mentally ill...

Sam decides that it's no use seeking Maan's help in Geet's matter and she will handle it on her own...

She gets more informations about Rahul from Adi and gets to know that he is coming back that Sunday and he is throwing a party for his friends that evening to celebrate his success in business...he had gone on a business trip and his company has grabbed a big deal...

Even Maan has been invited for that party and the invitation is with Adi only...

Sam gets the invitation from Adi and decides to use it...

Part22

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago

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