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Hello Maaneetians..

First off all A BIG BIG BIG waala Thanks to all of you for making Kurbaan Hua Anniversary Thread a Super Duper Hit Thread.. We both are so overwhelmed seeing the response.. and we are so inspired that we have decided to celebrate the anniversaries of all the songs.. Hope you all will support us in our this effort too like before.. This is our small contribution to keep Our Beloved Geet Forum Active..

So here we go again with our craziness..😆😆


Today is the anniversary of another hot and goose bump producing song on maaneet...

Baahar se koi andar na aa sake

Andar se koi baahar na jaa sake

Socho kabhi aisa ho to kya ho - 2

Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chaabi kho jaaye

Remember this song?

Whenever we used to hear that song we even hesitated in humming it as it had some embarrassing lyrics.. we could not humm it in front of anyone..

But again Maaneet magic left it's effect in some special way on us that we forgot all the embarrassment and we started to humm it without any fear😳😳😳

Sooo

Come on Maaneetians... come and join your hands together and celebrate the anniversary of

Hum Tum Ek Kamre me Band Hon..

And like before all are welcome to post their One Shots, Edits and Vm on Hum Tum scene in this thread...

PS:- Friends... All the song sequences were shown with very small gap.. So it's not possible for us to celebrate upcoming songs anniversaries on it's exact date.. In that way we will not be able to enjoy the current Anniversary Thread so we have decided to celebrate the anniversaries at alternate weeks..so that we can enjoy the hard work of the participants on the current thread.. Hope you all can understand that.

We are very thankful to the participants who have sent their entries for this Thread.. we know that they have their other works too.. Even then they came forward to support us.. Thank U guys.. Love you a lot

Lakshmi and Priya

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Aa Dekhen zara, Kisme kutna hai dam...by Rashmi (Rashmi...) Pg 1
Aa pyaar karen chori chori ... by -lakshmi- (Lakshmi) Pg 1
Celestial Harmony ... by Rakhi (Krishna_Sourav) Pg 2
Dil chaahtha hain ... by Sangeetha (ghsp2fan) Pg 2
Hum Tum ... by Simran (Preethy_Maaneet) Pg 3
Hum__mm - Tum__mm... by Priyanka (priya_21) Pg 3
Mujhse Dosti Karoge...Indu (-indu-) Pg 3
KambakhtIshq ...Valli (valli30) Pg 4
90's Romance ... by Sweta (crazy_sweta) Pg 4
Milan ki Ghadi ... by Mouli (kkmouli) Pg 4
Who was he?...by Mona (MonaSWrites) Pg 56



Valli (valli30) Pg 1
Anu - Mk creations (maaneetmishtikh) Pg 1, 3, 4, 10,30
Sona (shonamsk) Pg 1
Anju (AnjuMaanManiac) Pg 1, 3, 8,9
Rakhi (Krishna_Sourav) Pg 2, 7, 15
Priya (priya111111) Pg 2
Roch (-Roch) Pg 2
Simran (Preethy_Maaneet) Pg 3
Hira (KINGKHANFAN) Pg 3
Aamna (abba12) Pg 3
Lakshmi (-lakshmi-) Pg 4
Sweta (crazy_sweta) Pg 4, 7
Jiya (JIYAMG) Pg 4, 20






by Priya (priya111111) Pg 2
by Valli (valli30)
Pg 2
by Priyanka (priya_21) Pg 2
Anu - Mk creations (maaneetmishtikh) Pg 9

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OS by Rashmi (Rashmi...)


AA DEKHEN ZARA... KISME KITNA HAI DUM


MAAN SINGH KHURANA

MD of Khurana Constructions did not like girls .. he had bad experiences with girls.. For him girl means only greedy for money and status..till you are satisfying their hunger or greed for money they are with you..The day you are not they search someone who is richer than you.. It was not that he was not able to full fill their greed or desires but he had such bad experience at very young age,, he was in college that time... He was not a part of KC.He was only a son of one Business Tycoon of the city. He used to get a fix amount of pocket money at that time ..No matter he was the son of a big business tycoon . He was taught to live within limits.. in his last year of college he met with a girl named Sameera .She came as his junior..She was very beautiful and Maan was the most handsome lad of the college.. Sameera was the daughter of another business tycoon of the city and was most pampered as she was the only daughter and was the heir of her father's Empire..She was a girl who could get anything and anyone whom she liked.. She saw Maan and liked him. She started to talk to him casually.. Maan too did not refuse her friendship.. and they became friends.. Sam was over ambitious and was fond of roaming with friends and enjoy the life without any worry..

She was drug addict too but she hid this from everyone.. her all pocket money was spent on drugs. Her parents came to know about this addiction and they stopped to give her unlimited money..They started to give her a little amount only so that she is not able to buy the drugs any more and now she was dependent on her friends for other expenses.. She knew about Maan being the heir of Khurana Family so her focus was on him.. Those days Maan was a very simple boy .. sweet smiling and caring for his friends..he had a firm belief in his relations be it family or be it friends.. the word deceiving was not in his dictionary..

Sameera started to take the advantage of Maan's simplicity.. She every second day started to tell a fake story about her parents that they don't love her They only show to world that she was their heir of the heritage but in real she was the only medium of their luxury.. She also told him that she was not their real daughter.. she was adopted by them as they were the most trusted employees of their real parents and her real parents died in an accident.. They were the one who showed their fake love towards her in their presence and her parents and they made a bill in which her father appointed them as her guardian if something happened to them..and thus after their death they were her guardian and now were using her for their luxury,..They did not even give her sufficient money.. Maan believed what she said and he started to spend a part of his Pocket money on her.. but as days passed her expenditures were increasing and Maan did not know how to manage with his pocket money..

He once asked his parents to increase his Pocket money His father asked why he needed that so he honestly told him the truth..His father knew about Sam's parents .. He was shocked to hear that about Sam.. He told Maan that she was lying ,, Her present parents are her actual parents they are very disturbed by her habits.. her father had shared his problems with maan's father so he knew everything about her.. Maan was shocked to hear that .. next day he did not show any interest in Sam.. Sam tried to talk to him but he did not talk.. neither he said anything to her about her lie.. he was not the man who believed in insulting anyone.. Sam understood that Maan was not talking to her but she needed someone to take her responsibility.. She came to know another rich boy of the college -Karan...

Karan was a handsome boy too but he could not stand near Maan .. he was always left behind when he was compared with Maan.. He was jealous with Maan too for getting the friend like Sameera who was s##y and beautiful..

She started to be friend with him..Karan took the advantage of the situation became friend of her. One day Maan was in some restaurant with his one friend...he heard some voice from his back..It was Sameera..He heard her talking to karan..The same story which she told him about her parents but he was hell shocked when he heard her talking about him.

She was saying-I m very hurt karan..When I told my story to Maan he took advantage of me.. he took physical advantage too.. I was so help less when I said no to him,. He blackmailed me saying that he would tell everything to my parents and then they would throw me out of my own house I would get no place for shelter..and and I did what he asked me too.. I m really feeling myself useless..

And this revelation by Sam about himself left maan shocked to no extant. His fingers turned and made a fist,, His friend too heard everything and he knew Maan was not like that so he too became angry on listening that.. Maan got up from her seat and went to the table where Sam was sitting with karan with her head on his shoulder.. karan was patting her head to console,..He wanted to show her that he was his best friend from then onward..

Sam looks at Maan and her colors flew away from her face she stood swiftly but Maan was so much angry that he slapped her there only Karan tried to interfere but Maan showed him his finger and he atonce stepped back as Maan was not alone and he could not face them alone.. He knew that maan was more powerful than him..

Maan-You Wi####-.. The girls like you do not deserve any one to be friends with you.. You are just a shit who uses the rich boys for your own benefit. All the girls are like you.. Bloo## shi#. I don't even want to make my hands dirty by slapping you as i will have to touch you for that

He left with his friend,,and that day Maan made a rule that he wpould never come in the trap of beautiful girl..They are fake and take advantage of man by showing their innocence faces..

After finishing his studies he took charge of KC as MD ,, he wanted to not keep female employees at his office but his father did not agree with him.. He forced him to not to be biased with females,he could not say no to his father ..But he was now a strict boss .. He was not soft towards the female employees. He was always full of attitude when it came to female employees...he always tried to keep them away from him..

and one such day Geet joined the office as the architect..

But it was Maan's irony that he could not keep her away from her as he was the head of the project on which Geet too was working so they had to interact with each other..

GEET HANDA

Geet was from a small town named Hoshiyaar pur..In her town girls were not allowed to do higher studies but Geet fought with her family to go to higher studies.. Family denied but she went on hunger strike .. and she was firm too in her decision..Finally her family put it's weapons down and sent her for higher studies..She completed her architecture from Punjaab University..and she got the campus placement.. she got the job in Khurana Constructions Delhi.. It was a dream of many to work in KC.. and Geet was so happy..But her family was little hesitant to send her..as they had heard that bosses in big cities take the advantage of female employees.. Even Geet too had heard so many talks like this but she was not a girl who was scared of such things,,She was a punjabi girl who was well capable to handle such people.. she tried to convince her family but her family asked her to find a job in punjab only.. But Geet had a weapon for which she was sure that it would hit the bull shot.. Her hunger strike again forced family to send her to Delhi.. Her father had a friend in Delhi and he put a condition in front of Geet that she would live only there as PG.. Geet thought it better to accept his condition.. so she was here in Delhi to do her dream job.. luckily her father's friend;s daughter Pinki too was a working girl and co incidentally she too was working in KC as Receptionist.. Soon both girls clicked with each other and they were best friend now.. Geet was bold punjabi girl.. she never took any taunt or comment from any road side romeo.. she was always ready with her juties to beat them.. Soon every romeo of that lane and road knew about Geet and pinki's father too was so relaxed seeing the girls getting rid of those romeos.

Geet's joining formalities were done.. She had never met her boss who was going to head the project on which she was going to work.. He was MD of the company too..She had heard about him from Pinki.. Pinki was always on her praising sessions for the Boss and called him DD (DHAK DHAK).. She told her that he was the most handsome and dashing man of the city and Geet thought in her mind-Oh No.. that means he is a Casanova who tries to impress girls with his personality.. Geet be care ful..you are going to work under him..so he may think of you as his prey.. babaji bachchhi ki rakhsha karna uss DD (Dusht Danav) se..

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But they had to meet one day.. The day Geet met her Boss Maan Singh Khurana She was little scared .. She prayed to her babai to prove her wrong about whatever she thought about her boss in her heart.. but where was babaji going to listen to her? . Her boss had the ample amount of attitude and rudeness.. The way he saw her did not give her a good feeling. Though she found him quite handsome and she was impressed with his professional attitude but the way he talked to her, she did not like.. and thought in her mind-samajhte kya hai apne aap ko.. Hrithik Roshan? .. Huhh... akdu kahin ka.. aise baat karta hai koi apne staff se? and then she thought -kahin aisa to nahin ki mere upar impression maarne ke liye aise rudely baat kar rahe hain.. taki main ye samjhoon ki ye ladkiyon me interested nahin hain aur main in par bharosa karne lagun aur ek din mauka dekh kar mujhe apna shikaar bana le.. babajiii kripa banaaye rakhna mere upar apni.. bachana is Dust Danav se..

Soon Geet realize that he was a very rude boss.. he did not like if she gave him her ideas.. that made him more angry.. he often rejected her designs if she included anything from her own mind.. No matter it was in the favor of company and project..and she was not a girl who was there to bear his attitude..So she started to argue with him.. and this made Maan more irritated..

Once a client liked the designs made by Geet ,, He was very happy with her ideas..and Maan was surprised at that,.. and that changed his opinion about Geet and he gave a look finely to her designs those were actually good .. and after that day he stopped to reject her design but his attitude was not changed towards her as she was a girl..

But Geet was made of some different clay.. she did not learn to sit quite.. Though she did not talk to him directly .. but she did not sit quietly in meetings.. she used to talk to other employees in whispers and sometime they responded to her by giving a laugh to her..

At first maan was hell irritated with her.. he was always in a roaring mood whenever she created any disturbance in meeting and every time Geet made a face whenever he was not looking at her.. But as time passed she became famous between his clients for her unique ideas.and Maan stopped to yell at her.. Her antics had started to melt the iron man Maan singh khurana..and some times he too smiled inwardly whenever she was up to something.. but never showed it to any one..He did not want to spoil his image in his employees' eyes.. his POV about girl did not change yet but he could not keep that hatred for Geet now..he pretended to be busy jn work but his ears were on her taloks and he was now not able to stop himself from smiling on her stupid acts and had started to talk to her in a good manner..

And one day something happened ..

Maan was sitting in his office..whole staff had gone back to home after office hrs.. One big client called him and he received his call-Mr,. Khurana I m leaving for USA tomorrow for a month.. My brother has met with an accident.. I will not be able for full month so I wanted our meeting to be scheduled early.. In fact I want it tomorrow morning .. Be ready with the designs..

Maan was shocked-What? But Mr. Mehra designs are not ready .. as we will be having the meeting next week..Howe can it be possible..

Mr. Mehra-I know Mr. Khuran..But I m helpless please do something or our project will be late and that will be a major loss to both of us.. you have full night.. it's just a matter of one night..

And he hang the call..

Maan was in a fix.. he would need Geet as she was working on those designs it was not possible for him to do that alone..

But his male mind started to ask the question-But How can I call her..It's night..may be she is sincere but I m not comfortable.. waise bhi use dekh kar ab mera dil aur dimag mera kahna maanne se inkaar kar dete hain.. I try my best to not look at her but I can't stop myself..what if I do something with her which spoils my image in front of her.. and what if she too takes the advantage of that situation like Sam did years ago.After all she is a girl too.. It's night and it will not be good to be with a girl..

But his all the logic were in vein when the emergency was standing on the door.. at last he called her..

Geet picked up the land line of Pinki's house at it was the no which was mentioned in her CV.. Thankfully she only picked up the phone-Hello..

Maan-Geet..

Geet was shocked to hear her name-kaun hai aur tumhen mera naam kaise pata? Kya chhate ho itni raat ko?..dekho aisi waisi ladki mat samajhna mujhe..

Maan-Geeettt.. Maan here..

Geet was shocked-Maan Sir??,..I I m sorry sir.. I though some road romeo was on the phone..

Maan-What? Shut up

And Geet zipped her mouth-Sorry sir

Maan-Geet I need you at office..It's urgent..

And Geet's eyes got wider-Jiii ? Iss waqt?K,,kya kam hai sir..office hrs are over.

Maan-I need you in some work..It's urgent aur ye apna question answer round office aa kar khelna ,, I don't have time.. I m in hurry..jaldi karo.. and he put the phone..

Geet ears could not believe,.,Finally the day had come about which she had heard,.. Her boss was calling her at office that too at this time of night.. Geet aaj teri izzat daav par lagne walii hai.. Maan sir apne boss wale avatar ma aa gaye aaj wo pakka tujhe blackmail karke tere saath kuchh karne wale hai..kahin nashe me to nahin hai wo.babaji sharaab pee kar to insaan waise bhi insaan nahin rahta Jaanwar ban jata hai. nahin nahin I wont go.. I will resign.. then she thought -Kya hoga resign karne se? New job search karegi. new boss bhi to aise hi hoga na..kab tak darti rahegi...Geet paani me utarna hai to magarmachchhon se to saamna karna hi padega.. Be brave.. dikha de tu aaj uss Maan singh Khurana ko ki tu kya cheeje hai..

She went into the kitchen.. Took a knife and some chili powder and kept that in some paper and tied it .she put those things in her bag. A pepper spray was already in her bag.. she checked that by pushing it's cap..It was working.. she was now satisfied.. Pinky saw him and asked-Geet kya kar rahi hai?

Geet-Pinky tujhe pata hai Maan sir ne mujhe office me bulaya hai itni raat ko?

Pinki-To?

Geet-arrey Pinki tu nahin jaanti .. maine bahut suna hai ki boss female employees ka galat fayda uthaate hain unko black mail karte hai.. aaj mera no aa gaya

Pikni -Kya bakwaas karr ahi hai Geet? DD aise nahin hain..

Geet-Haan haan mujhe pata hai..Tere liye tere DD aise nahin hai.. Tujhe kabhi raat me buklaya hai unhone? Nahin na? tu to din me jaati hai.. to din me kya kar lenge wo.. mujhe to raat me bulaya hai ..par main bhi itni darponk nahin hoon..eint ka jawaab patthar se dena aata hai mujhe..Tu chinta mat kar .. aaj maza chakha kar aaungi main Uss Maan singh khurana ko''

Saying this she left from there to go to the office..

She reached the office and found all the office in dark.. only one side of the office was shining with light..

She went there ..It was Maan's cabin.. he was waiting for her.. She knocked at the door.

Maan saw her and said-Geet come to the design room.. we will work there..

Saying this he moved towards design room...and Geet's face was full of horror. She thought -Design room? Wahaan to koi nahin aata aur wahaan phone me signals bhi nahin aate.. kya karungi main agar kisi ki zaroorat padi to?

Maan felt that Geet was not following him..he stopped and asked -Kya hua? Why did you stop?

Geet-Sssir Is it possible that we work here only.?.

Maan-Geet we can't do here .. our work requires a little big space.. chhoti si jagah me hum dono ek saath nahin aa paayenge na..

And Geet's mouth was big open..What he was talking ? what did he mean by hum dono ek chhoti si jagah me nahin aa paayenge

Maan -Aise kya dekh rahi ho? Jaldi karo time bahut kam hai.. agar yahin khade rahna hai to ghar jaao aur permanently wahin baitho..

Now Geet was sure that he was up to something..But she put a brave face and followed him to the design room.

Maan entered the room and started to take his waist coat out as it was body fitted and he was not comfortable in that while bending on the table


Geet saw him opening the jacket and said-Ssir.. d..dekhiye main aisi waisi ladki nahin hoon..Aap jo soch rahe hain waisa main kuchh nahin karne wali..

Maan's hand stopped-what? What rubbish.. what did you think? Why I have called you here.?.and he got the meaning of her words- tum ye sochti ho mere bare me.?. tumhen kya lagta hai kit um itni khoobsoorat ho ki tumhen dekh kar main khud ko kabu nahin kar pa raha..

And Geet tought-pakde gaye to bahana bana rahe hain and she got angry-I don't think that about myself sir.. but I have some self respect.. ab raat ko aapne mujhe yahaan bulaya to aur kya sochungi main.. aur haanagar aap itne sachhe hain to thoda door hi rahiye mujhse aur Kaam bataaiye ki kyun bulaya hai.. She was little relieved that she wa shaving all the safety instruments with her so in case of emergency she could use them..so she behaved like a bold girl..

Maan angrly looked at her and said-Mujhe bhi koi shauk nahin hai tumhaare paas aane ka .. something was urgent issiliye bulaya..Mr. Mehra want his designs ready by morning as he is goinmg abroad for one month..

Geet-Okk and saying this she started to work on the designs..But it was not a good day for both of them.. how much they were trying get rid from each other but the situation did not allow them to do so.they worked for two hrs without talking to each other. suddenly wind storm started and the door of the room closed with a bang..

Maan looked at it and said-Bas yahi hona baki tha..

Geet-K..Kya hua sir?

Maan-This lock is not working now it's closed and will not be opened from inside..
Geet-Kya ?

And she thought in her mind-kaise natak kar rahe hain ..ye sab jaan boojh kar kiya inhone sab planning hai inki.. and one more incident happened.. the light went off.. they were in dark now..

Maan-Not again.. aaj kiska face dekha tha subah ?

Geet-Sirr apna hi dekha hoga aapna ab aur koi to rah hi nahin sakta na aapke room me aapke saath.. she said as if she was mocking him..

Maan was hell irritated now-Geeettt can't you sit quietly?

Geet-quitely baithne se light thode hi aa jaayegi..Generator on karne ko boliye na..

Maan-Kisko bolun.. Yahaan se kaun sunega? aur generator kharaab hai

Geet in her heart -khadoos... sab plan karke rakha hai ki koi aa na paaye yahaan..generator bhi kharaab karwa diya.. but main bhi Geet hoon Geet handa ,, you can not be successful in trapping me Maan sungh Khurana.. just touch me and you will find a sherni in front of you thinking this she patted her bag to feel everything there..

Geet said-I will try to call any one and she went near window and shouted loudly..Ram singh.. Bahadur.Sher Singh..

Maan -Tumhen naam pata hain sabke..

Geet-Guards ke naam aise hi hote hai koi na koi to hoga in me se ek naam ka

And Maan was looking at her with open mouth and thought -Kya ladki hai.. bhagwaan ne bas ek hi namoona banaya aur dye tod di .. waise bhi ek hi bahut hai dimag khraab karne ke liye.do chaar aur hoti to pata nahin duniya ka kya hota

But instead of getting any answer they heard some one playing the FM radio and the song started which forced them to look at each other with big eyes..

Baahar se koi andar na aa sake

Andar se koi baahar na jaa sake

Socho kabhi aisa ho to kya ho - 2

Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chaabi kho jaaye

Geet got scared and took few steps back-Babaji aaj to main gayi kya planning ki hai Maan sir ne aur dekho mausam bhi saath de raha hai inka.. kaisa gaana bajaane ko bola guards ko

Baahar se koi andar na aa sake

Andar se koi baahar na jaa sake

Socho kabhi aisa ho to kya ho - 2

Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chaabi kho jaaye

Maan too was looking at Geet with horrified eyes-Oh God ye aaj kya ho raha hai kuchh bhi theek nahin jar aha mere saath..ek to ye ladki mere saath ahi upar se ye light bhi chali gayi aur ab bas iss gaane ki hi kami thi..

Maan took a candle out and fixed it at the table.

Geet-Oh God... candle bhi hai..perfect planning.. she came forward and said-main jalaati hoon sir.. and she lit the candle but in that effort she touched the flame and felt a burning sensation . She jerked her hand and Maan saw that and held her hand and put that press that finger in his hand..

Both eyes met and they heard next set of lines

Tere nainon ki bhoolbhulaiya mein bobby kho jaaye

Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chaabi kho jaaye

She hurriedly snatched her hand from his and Geet chanted Babaji's name in her heart- bas aaj bacha lena babaji.. aaj ke baad aap se jhagda nahin akrungi Pakka promise..

Aage ho ghanghor andhera

Baba mujhe darr lagta hai

Geet started to pace in the room feeling scared and in this effort she bumped in maan..but she hurriedly moved backward but felt a tug on her dupatta..

she looked there and found Maan holding her dupatta on the table.. geet looked at him with big eyes and maan seeing her like that removed his hand from the table which was co incidentally was on her dupatta too..

Peechhe koi daaku lootera

Hm, kyoon darra rahe ho

Geet in her heart -sach me aaj mujhe lagta hai main kisi lutere ke saath hoon..

Aage ho ghanghor andhera

Peechhe koi daaku lootera

Upar bhi jaana ho mushkil

Neeche bhi aana ho mushkil

Socho kabhi aisa ho to kya ho - 2

Hum tum kahin ko jaa rahe ho, aur rasta bhool jaaye

O ho

Maan was now hell irritated with everything.. there were so many things which wer making him irritate and angry.. Most irritating was Geet.. and then darkness.and locked room..He parayed in his heart-bas ye raat nikal jaaye aur designs ban jaayen .. I swear ki main kabhi kisi ladki ko raat me kaam karne ke liye nahin bulaaunga..

Hum tum kahin ko jaa rahe ho, aur rasta bhool jaaye

Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chaabi kho jaaye

Teri baiyaan ke jhoole mein saiyaan bobby jhool jaaye

Thinking this he moved towards the window and shut that with a thud and the song was not very clear now..Maan was relieved now.He sat on the chair as there was no use of walking here and there as it will create some mess between them only..

Geet saw him sitting on the chair and after few moment he closed his eyes... Geet looked at him care fully.. but he was not moving his eyes.. Geet took a breath of relief and sat on the sofa .. But tried to not to sleep-Geet sona nahin kya pata tu so jaaye aur ye DD jag jaaye sote hue to tu kuchh anhin kar paayegi an to bas babaji ka naam le aur jaagti rah..she was looking at Maan who was sleeping on the chair but tiredness took over her and she too slept on the sofa..

Maan's eyes opened with the light.. He looked here and there.. and found geet on the sofa she was shivering due to the low temp of AC.. Maan increased the tempreture and thought to wake her up but he changed his decision as he had to togch her to wake her for work but he did not want to hear one more accusation on him from a girl.. But he covered her with her waist coat and got busy in work.. only final touches were left so he did that..

Geet's eyes opened sometime later and he found that she had slept even after lot of effort to stay awake,.. she saw herself covered with Maan's waist coat and she looked for him.. She found him busy in work.. a guilt spread in her heart for thinking that bad bout him.. He was not that bad..A smile full of guilt came on her lips..

She came near him and coughed a little.. Maan looked at her and said-I hope you have found yourself all safe..

Geet-Wo i.. I m sorry sir.. actually I was scared as I have read in news papers about the bosses.. so I thought the same about you too.. I m really sorry.. You are not like them..

Maan smiled at this.. he too found Geet a girl with a simple heart.. who was hell worried for her own respect as he had called her at night but how easily se asked for a sorry from him,.. He thought that he was wrong about girls.. every girl is not sameera.. there are many girls who have self respect and have a good heart too..

Both looked at each other with a true smile.. Their heart were free of some myths today.. Everyone in the world is not same.. Everyone is not bad.. there many people who are good and selfless..

And Geet initiated for something-Maan Sir! Can we be friends?

Maan looked at her for a moment .. Geet waited for him but seeing him unmoved she took har hand back but she felt Maan's hand in her.. she looked at her hand and found him holding her hand-Yes Geet we are friends now..

and now both were smiling looking at each otther with their hands in each other's..The dark night brought a bright light in their hearts for ever


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Aa Pyaar Karen Chori Chori


It was a beautiful Sunday morning... All will be enjoying the holiday lazily in their houses or would be making plans of outing with friends and family except Handas and Khuranas...

Handas and Khuranas are family friends very close to each other... Though the friendship started from their root village Hoshiyarpur... But their friendship was not affected in fact it grown when both the families came to Delhi for establishing their own business...They had built two identical houses in a compound and have been living there since years just to be near to each other... younger generation of Khuranas family consisted of Maan and Vicky where as Handas too had Geet and Yash...

Now coming back to our Sunday morning, all in both the families where now in Khuranas house except maan and geet... and discussion was none other than maan and geets marriage! The elders of both the family wished to change their friendship to relation ... They where dreaming of maan and geets marriage ever since geet was born! But the problem was none other than maan and geet them selves!

Though they both used to be best friends in childhood... the family witnessed a drift in both as they grow up... All took it to be natural as boys tend to be close with mostly boys sharing their common hobbies and sports and same with gals... But later they saw an another change in both... both used to unnecessary fight with each other... their fighting was such a common scene that their families used to get surprised if they are not fighting!

Maan was doing considerably well joining his dads business and geet too had joined her dream job as a teacher in a school... Now as both where settled in their careers, as a next step both families wanted their marriage to happen... But seeing their fights both families where nervous to bring this topic in front of both... Elders though had dreamt this marriage from years they hadn't disclosed their intentions to any others even to their own children... They wished normal childhood for them and left their future on destiny...

Vicky and Yash where shocked hearing the proposal of maaneets marriage from the elders... when the news got digested both burst out to a fix of laughter angering elders more... Both completely rejected the idea saying both will never agree ... "ek ghanta ek room mein akele nahi bait sakthe dono shanthi se... and u r thinking of their marriage!" Though this should have discouraged elders more but it did not happen in the case of dadiji...Maans dadi.. the moment was like an idea can change ur life for dadi...A devilish grin on her face brought different emotions to others... Suprised thinking inko kya hogaya hain, fear thinking kuch gadbad hain, and later on it was like ur brain was shouting "bhaag beta bhaaga, nahi tho tu gaya"... but who can win from our dadiji!!

A plan was formed by dadi... Elders were thinking "kya maa aap bhi... kab badi hongi"... and youngers where thinking "ghar mein bhookamp aane waala hain"... But dadi assured all and told that she was sure this plan will work.. " Dekhna,Ladthe hue andar jaayenge aur dosti karke baahar aayenge!" The plan was simple ... To lock both maan and geet in a room!!! Due to their non stop fights, both didnt spent even a whole ten minutes with each other... But dadi wanted to give a chance to both by locking them in a room and give them an opportunity to build friendship, the first step! "Dosti ho gayi tho pyaar bhi ho jaayega... phir shaadi... phir mein badi dadi banoongi"... their was no stop now in her dreams...

As per her plan younger ones Vicky and Yash where given the responsibility to lock both maaneet in a room... Plan was laid down... Evening both families elders planned to go out for a temple visit... Both Vicky and Yash would make both geet and maan come to a room and they will lock it... But both refused to stay in house alone after they had locked! They feared what Maan will do with his dagger eyes! So they told the elders they too will go out of house and come back when elders will return... All agreed for the same ...

Evening came and all started playing their role with perfection! Maans parents and dadi planned to go to temple ... they shared this with handas and geets parents too said they would like to join them... All this discussion happened in front of maan and geet who where sitting in two corners of the house ... Maan was immersed in his lappy and geet in her mobile games... geet was away whole day with her friends and had just returned...So her mom suggested her to take rest as next day was Monday, and she had to go to work early! Geet agreed and said she will go to bed early... " Lazy bum... sone ka tho bahanaa chahiye ise" Maan commented which started an another fight there... "Tumhein kya... mein jitni marzi sovoo... tumse tho better hi hoo... Tum tho ullu jaise ho... raat ko bhi aankh badi badi karke ghoomthe rehna ghar par" replied geet

Elders where again watching the scene swaying their heads from one corner to the other corner like watching a match...


(Just like this😆)

and Vicky and yash where enjoying with popcorn forgetting the film which where watching a while before!

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(Like this🤣)

After a while it was dadi who shouted "chup... bilkul chup..." ... maan narrowed his eyes hearing his dialogue from some one else... Dadi too narrowed her eyes more showing who is the boss there...


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"Geet , bacha tum jaake aaraam kar lena... kuch logo ka aaraam kya hotha hain patha bhi nahi hain... so they don't know its value"... dadi continued ghooring her grandson which made geet giggle and relax ... she always enjoyed when maans class was being taken by the elders, though it happened very rare... perfectionist kahinka... shrugged geet..


Maan do u want to come with us to temple? Dadi asked... others where shocked hearing this except geet... they where thinking what happened to dadi... plan khud banaaya aur khud chaupat kar rahi hain! But dadi was as cool as ice... maan replied no dadi, i have a presentation to complete... dadi said ok as u wish... and she winked to others showing she knows what she is doing!

So as per plan all elders went to temple asking the younger ones to take care of themselves... and silently wishing Vicky and yash all the best for the next step!


After the elders left geet too decided to leave to her house ... but yash and Vicky managed to make her stay little longer... the trio decided to play cards where as maan went to his room not before giving his tippani on how childish they are especially geet ... making her fume and shout on him... but yash and Vicky held her hands and made her sit back and the trio continued playing...


After a while Vicky excused himself to drink water ... leaving geet and yash alone... but after a god ten minutes too when Vicky didn't rerurn yash asked geet to go and search for him... geet searched in all rooms but vicky was no where seen... the only room left was maans now... thinking may be he went there she went to the room which was empty... now she started searching both maan and Vicky in the room... hearing a click of door she saw maan coming from balcony with his phone... Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho asked maan ... i was searching for Vicky... but before she ended both heard another click of door... confused they went to check the door to find it locked from outside...

Vicky and yashs sounds could be heard from outside... and both maan and geet shouted to open the door... but as planned Vicky and yash refused and told them they both are going out... all are fed up of their silly fights ... so sit and resolve ur problems... and started singing the song...


Baahar Se Koi Andar Na Aa Sake
Andar Se Koi Baahar Na Jaa Sake
Socho Kabhi Aisa Ho To Kya Ho...
Hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein Band Ho, Aur Chaabi Kho Jaaye...

Tere Nainon Ki Bhoolbhulaiya Mein Maan Kho Jaaye
Hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein Band Ho, Aur Chaabi Kho Jaaye

Yash and Vicky descended the stairs but they could hearing shouting sounds of both maaneet... but both ran out and called dadi and gave her message of the victory of their plan till now...


Ye sab aapke wajah se hua hain...Geet started

Meine kya kiya...

If u played with us Vicky would not have been able to lock us na...

Oh cmon geet ... wo stupid game mein nahi kheltha...

Haan dekho isiliye hum ab yahaan hain... ab baahar kaise jaayege... patha nahi kab aayenge dono..

But tumhein bahar jaane ki jaldi kyu hain... saying this maan hugged geet from back...

Maan yeh aap kya kar rahe ho... saying this she made herself more comfortable in his arms...

Pyaar kar rahoo meri jaan ko... saying this he kissed her neck...

Maaan... moaned geet...

Hugging her more to himself maans hands wandered on geets tummy making her jelly...kissing on her neck when he found it not enough, he turned her and took her lips and kissed her passionately... geet was taken a back with the sudden kiss... but soon she started responding equally ... after all this is not the first time she is facing his passion...

Maan left her seeing breath less... caressing her cheeks he started kissing her cheeks...

Maan chodona...

Nahi chodoonga...

These cheeks are for me to eat... and he kissed them hard...

These eyes shows me how much u love me... and he kissed both her eyes...

This forhead will soon have a bindi on my name... and he kissed her forhead...

This maang will be adored with sindoor i put... and he kissed her maang...

This neck will have mangalsoothra which i tie... and he gave her series of kisses on her neck...

Geet was feeling so weak in front of his passion... it was as if she will collapse if maan had not held her tightly... she hugged maan not able to stand still... and maan hugged her more tight...

He took her to the couch and made her sit on his lap... she cuddled to him more... geet started playing with his shirt buttons... and said

Ye kab tak chalega maan... mein aur chupaana nahi chaahthi... kisi ko patha chala tho unko aur bura lagega na...

Haan jaan ... i too think its high time... i will talk to dad...lekin tum hi bolo mein kya kartha... am in love with u from years... patha bhi nahi chala kab pyaar ki shuruvaad hui... i just remember loving u more and more... when i had to join college leaving u alone in school as u where still on 12th... at that time i realised this... i realised i cant stay away from u... wo ek saal kaise beetha mein hi jaantha hoo... and when u joined my college it was like meri jaan mein jaan aayi... but that feeling too was not for long... the way boys where watching u made my blood boil...And that rahul, my own friend he had this audacity to propose u that too in front of me...

Maan came out of his reverie hearing geets giggle...when he shown his big eyes, geet tried to hide her laughter and said...

And kya dhulaai ki thi aapne us rahul ki... mujhe aapse aur pyaar ho gaya tha ... mere hero... saying this she kissed his cheek...

Mein bhi tho aapke bina tadpi hoo... school aapke bina bilkul acha nahi lag raha tha... and my friends used to say how u will be happy in college with new titlis...

Titli?

Haan mini micro sab pehni hui aage peeche jo ghoomthi hain wo...

Maan laughed hearing this and kissed geet and said... mere liye tho tum hi ho geet tab bhi, aaj bhi aur hameshaa...

Lekin wo rahul aaj bhi dekhtha hoona tho use ek punch dene ka mann kartha hain..

But am happy he proposed me

Maan was shocked hearing this ... he looked carefully on geets face which was just showing love...

Agar usne propose nahi kiya hotha tho aap patha nahi kab apni dil ki baath bolthe...

A shy smile came on maans face hearing this...


Yaad hain kaise use peetne ke baad mera haath pakadke khaseet ke le gaye the ...and there u hugged me... that hug was so different from what we had shared before... with that hug i knew that u love me and i love u too... nahi tho aapki baahon mein jannat jaisa sukoon na miltha...


Both smiled reminiscing their lovely moment... a turning point of their lives...It was followed by their confession and beginning of their love story or to be truly said... chup chupke pyaar ...

Maan ... chup chupke jab aap balcony se mere kamre mein aathe the na ... haayeee it was so romantic... bilkul sachi waala romeo ki tarah ... haina


Acha tumhein bahut romantic lagtha tha... but mein darr darrke aa raha tha... kisi ne dekhliya ki unki laadli ke room ke balcony chadkar mein aaya patha nahi mera kya haal hotha...

Aap bhi na... aiwei MAAN SINGH KHURANA kisise nahi dartha bolthe rahthe ho... lekin dekho khud kitna darrthe ho...

Aisa nahi hain jaan... he held her more close and she cuddled on his lap more...

Tum tho sabki laadli ho... all are so possessive for u in ur and my family... patha nahi kaise react karthe agar unko ye baat maloom padtha ki we love each other that too five years back... we both were so young at that time... may be all think it as infactuation and ask future to decide ... aur tumhein mujhse door kar dethe ... how could i live without u jaan...

Maans hold was forming tighter saying this... and geet could understand how scared he was just with the thought of losing her... she kissed him and said i will always be with u maan...

As a gal that too pampered one... it came out naturally in her to depend on maan ... when they confessed their love.. she was ecstatic thinking maan too loved her... that nothing else came to her mind... but maan had to think about their families too... maan was just in the second year of engineering where as geet in first year... they where too young and their families though very close to each other, he didn't knew that whether they would accept this relation... so taking the safer side he thought to reveal about their love only when he joins KC and starts working... He made geet understand her pov and she too agreed... she was more happy thinking that they will have filmy romance... chup chupke waala... he used to laugh at her when this to she told him ...

Their love had just increased with days... and so was the understanding between the both... they enjoyed many moments together which they will cherish life long... whether it is maan climbing her balcony to steal some moments with her... or their dates... family thought that geet was with friends but she used to go along with maan to some secret place to spend time together... So was today morning...

Today morning too Geet had been out of house telling all that she is going for a girls day out with her friends... and maan had told he was going to club... Both met outside house and they enjoyed a long drive, lunch together and also some kisses...

Thinking about their sweet past moments and dreaming of a lovely future they both drifted to sleep... in the same position... geet on maans lap... cuddled to him... where as maans shirt was now open, thanks to geets habit of playing with his buttons, and his black vest was visible... Both slept like that without knowing what toofaan is coming up!

As planned elders along with yash and Vicky reached house... all were nervous and where giving angry glares to dadi chori chori... where as dadi was excited as if she has written an exam and its result is going to be declared... All reached before maans room ... all where holding their breath and waiting for some storm... but they were shocked to see just silence when they reached outside the room... they had expected all kind of sounds... shouting , breaking of things but not silence... Dadis confidence boosted up and she asked Vicky to open the door...

What was they felt that time... surprise ? shock? Unbelievable? All where thinking whats happening... jo wo dekh rahe hain, soch rahe hain, wo sach hain ya kuch aur... dadi was standing with her mouth wide open... no one had thought they would witness such scene... geet on maans lap cuddled and both where hugging and sleeping! Maan on vest... uff whats happening..


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Coming out of the shock state, Dadi went beside them and called maan touching his arm... but maan babu was still in his dream jaan world... sone do na jaan... hamesha tho sapno mein aakar sone nahi dethi ho... aaj ithne ache se soya hoon aur tum disturb kar rahi ho... and he cuddled her more... all where shocked hearing maan... dadi was getting some idea of all the things ... so she decided to do the same with geet... she called geet by touching her arm... but geet too said... maan sone do na... aapki baahon mein kithni achi se neend aayi hain... kitna kam mauka miltha hain ... aaj mila hain tho sone dona acha se...

The picture was clear to all now... they all knew now that they were cheated... and both their children where romancing right under their nose... dadi shouted maan... geet...

That shout was enough for the love birds to come back to reality... both where scared seeing their position... both straightened up and maan buttoned his shirt... he knew he have to face many questions now... where as geet was so anxious and shy...

Dadi cleared her throat to make all attentive towards her...

Ye kya ho raha hain ... she asked both maan and geet..

Maan knew there was nothing to hide now... So he started... but before that he was cut by dadi

Kithne time se chal raha hain yeh?

Dadi sounded so serious that geet s anxiety was growing up ... and so was maans...

5 saal...

All gasped at this...

Ithne saalon se hamaare peet peeche tum dono romance kar rahe the?

When dadi got no answer she shouted

Am asking u both

Yes ... replied both maan and geet...

Both where thinking what will their family say now... will they agree for their marriage? Will they be angry for hiding their love? All questions where revolving maan and geet making both anxious ... maan knew geet too will be facing same fear , may be more and he didn't wanted his lady love to face any thing alone... he clasped her hand and tightend his hold... making her know that am there for u, every time, anytime... geet passed a smile to maan which gave him the strength...


This whole scene was witnessed by all in room...

He went near dadi and took her hands in his and told .. i know dadi, we should not have hid this from u all... but mein kya kartha..mein darr gaya tha... we were so young when we realised we love wach other ... i didn't knew whether u all will accept this relation... tho meine socha khud kaabil banoonga and will tell u all that i want geet to be mine...

Dadi was still silent making all fear...

Maan again tried... dadi sorry i shouldn't have hid this from u..

Haan nahi chupaaana chahiye tha...Hearing this maan and geet where more fearing...

Is ghar mein ithna pyaar ithna vishwaas kiya hain sabhi bachon par... aur tumne humse ithni badi baat chupaayi... mere dono bache hum sab ke naak ke neeche ishq ladaa rahe the aur hamein patha bhi nahi chalne diya...

Hearing this maan and geet where feeling guilty ... tears started rolling geets cheeks...

Maan said... aisa nahi hain dadi... we know u all love us both ... mein nahi chaahtha ki aap soche ki we misued ur love... aisa bilkul nahi hain dadi... we love all of u a lot... kabhi dukh nahi dena chaahtha... meine aur geet ne aaj decide bhi kiya tha ki hum aapko jald hi bataayenge apne bare mein... sach dadi...

Ab bolke kya hoga? U cant bring back past days na

Kya matlab dadi?

meine saari masti miss kar di.. tum dono chori chori pyaar ladaa rahe the...hum sab ko bewkoof banaakar... atleast mujhe tho bolthe tum... Mein bhi help karthi na tumhaara chori chori pyaar karne mein...

Hearing this all where shocked... even maan and geet...

Maans dad came near and asked what are you telling maa?

Aur nahi tho kya... ithna acha golden chance tha... filmo jaisa pyaar dekhne ko miltha apne ghar mein... haayee... and i missed it... and she made a baby cry face...

Maan was like kahaan fas gaya mein and geet was all blushy blushy...

Maans dad came near him and was looking at him with wide eyes...

Oyye handa kya karna hain iske saath...He asked geets dad

Kya karna hain Khurana... punishment tho banthi hain ... glathi ki hain tho sazaa bhi tho milni chahiye na...

Life time punishment dedo dono ko... saying this both smiled

Maan and geet looked at their respective dads thinking what are they saying...

Aise kya dekh rahe ho... Bada MSK bantha hain... ithna sa nahi samajhtha... ki tum dono ki shaadi karaane ki baat ho rahi hain...

Later on loud cheers hootings where clouded in the room for some time ... All where hugging each other and maaneet and where showing how happy they are...

Maan and geet still guilty on hiding their love from their elders again went to them and asked sorry... Maans dad told.. tu tho nikamma hain ... par geet ... tut ho meri doll haina... tum tho mujhe bolthi... geet started crying hearing this and hugged him and repeatedly said sorry... seeing her cry all eyes where ghooring now on maans dad... as he made their laadli cry... and maans dad was like meine kuch nahi kiya...he patted geets head and in a soft voice which always cools his doll said... aise rothe nahi bachha... wais ek baat bata tujhe is mein dikha kya jo tum use pyaar karne lagi...

Wahi tho mein bhi bolthi hoon inko bade papa ki kithne lucky hain wo... haina...

All laughed seeing their doll back to normal... but maan was like mein hi miltha hoo sabko... and was grumpy...

lekin meine ab tak maaf nahi kiya ... told dadi

The atmosphere which was of celebration again went on a pause mode... Maan and geet again looked down and where again ready with their sorry puraan that dadi interrupted

Maafi ek shart par

All heads turned to dadi wanting to know what bomb she is going to put..

Mujhe jaldi se pardadi banado...

And all where shocked hearing this... geet was sharam se pani pani ...

All started laughing at maan and geet... where as dadi was like am serious... but all had a hearty laugh...

Vicky and yash came forward hugging maaneet.. But maan pulled vickys ear and asked y he had to lock them in the room... All had forgotten the root cause... Now all started thinking waht will maan do especially dadi...

Meine kuch nahi kia bhai... wo dadi ne bola mujhe ,..

Now it was maan and geets turn to be shocked..,

Kyu maan asked

Wo sab log aap dono ki shaadi karaana chaahthe the na... isliye

maan aur geet ke chehre dekhne laayak the...

Maan turned to elders in his MSK mode as if asking whats happening...

But all where MSK s elders after all... they shrugged and said ... they had planned thir marriage at time geet was born itself... Maan and geet where like oh teri...humne aise hi chupaaya sab... they thought...

All laughed at their plight...

Celebration mood continued ... Talks on marriage, venue,jewellery , guest list... all wanted a perfect wedding ... among these talks maan took geets hand and slowly pulled her out of room to celebrated their joy privately...


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subhanallah from yeh jaawani hai diwaani



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