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Posted: 10 years ago

I'm coming... I'm coming
I'm here
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THANKS FOR ALL THE LIKES AND WONDERFUL COMMENTS

I enjoyed reading all your comments. Thanks😃

Do let me know if you want me to make any kind of changes... I'd be happy to try and incorporate them😊
Edited by libros - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 3

Geet had been feeling bad about her prank since it was the first time her father had scolded her. She was her papa's angel, his princess and nobody dared to say anything to her as he was always there to protect her. Even though everyone had forgiven them and taken the prank as a joke, she was feeling really low and sad that's why she decided to go and apologize to her father once again. Her world couldn't be alright until her father had forgiven her truly and all the anger had vanished.

Everybody was still getting up or dressing for the day when Geet went out to talk to her father. Just as she was about to go and interrupt their parents tea time she heard them discuss the morning event and her ingrained naughtiness compelled her to eavesdrop before going to apologize so she could form her apology to have its fullest effect.

But no sooner had she heard the conversation that her remorse had turned to fuming anger. She thought that she had been thinking I am scum... I'm lower than scum... I'm the scum they scrape off scum because I disappointed papa... But he was playing me all along... me... his angel... his princess. She couldn't wait nor could she play along she was too upset, she just marched in front of her papa with her arms at her waist and she scowled at him.

Mohinder saw one glance of his Princi's face and understood that she knew how he had fun at her expense. He only started praying to god that everything goes back to normal like right now because he couldn't see her upset, sad or angry... for him all was okay with his world only when his two angels his Princi and doll were happy and smiling especially his Princi was his favorite. He hadn't loved Kabir, his firstborn, as much as he had Geet she was the apple of his eye and that was reason for many a fights between the siblings.

Geet poked one finger on her father's chest but before she could vent out her feelings in words, she burst into tears. Seeing her eyes welled up with tears for the second time that morning, Mohinder was shattered and his eyes became numb. He pulled his princess in his arms to soothe her.

Rano rolled her eyes at both father and daughter... the two were just impossible... a little while ago both were at their naughtiest behavior and now both were crying their eyes out. She just sat back in her chair enjoying the scene in front along with her tea.

Mohinder "I'm sorry Princi... you know na I never wanted to hurt you after all you're my baby... and I love you so much even more than your siblings... I only wanted to have fun along with you..."

Just hearing that her father loved her more was enough for her baby heart to be soothed and reduce her cries down to hiccups "But you should have warned me na... I would have also acted along... you know I felt like scum that I disappointed you..."

"Princi I would've told you but then you would have told Adu and she definitely wouldn't have been able to keep a straight face when I scolded the two of you..."

"But... still you never scold me and we always play pranks together na... but this time you cheated and played me..." Geet complained babyishly to her precious papa.

"Princi that's the beauty of it..."

"What beauty... you see scolding me as beautiful..."

"No baby but see since I've scolded you and that dumb brother of yours has believed it he won't plan any payback since in his eyes you've both already been rebuked..."

"But you scolded me actually so it's true no smokescreen for them..."

"It would've been as I was coming to tell you all about it and also take you both out this week to make up for my scolding and I also had a surprise tucked away for you... Princi please forgive me... you know your papa can't be happy if you're angry or upset with him... my whole day will be ruined unless you forgive me" Mohinder said while making a sad puppy face to earn his princess's forgiveness and bring back her smile.

"Mohinder... you're gonna try and buy your way out of this messy prank situation... that was so not expected of you... what about your reputation..." Rano tried to act shocked, when actually she was only adding more masala for her entertainment. Mohinder felt as if he had been caught stealing but he glared at his wife, as if warning her not to mess it up.

While both her parents were busy glaring at each other, Geet was contemplating what to do of the bribe she was getting. Going out with her papa and little sister she could do without to keep on playing this charade of being angry, since she had already given up on her anger but was acting angry to get something or some wish of her fulfilled. But her precious papa had a surprise tucked away and those were usually ones which were frowned upon by her mother and were more fun than getting some silly wish of hers being fulfilled. Well the decision was already made, with no questions about it, the surprise was the deal clincher, and the lure of it was too strong for her to hold on to the fake anger.

"I love you so much papa... how can I be angry with you for long after all you're my precious papa..." Geet said breaking her parents glaring session "...and you know if you want to sweeten the forgiveness a little there is always that surprise you have tucked away..." Geet added to her declaration of love to ensure that forgiveness now doesn't mean that the surprise is rescinded.

Mohinder grinned inwardly at his daughter's mischievous addition to her apology acceptance and said with a tad bit of drama "Of course... the surprise is ready and waiting for the correct time to reveal itself to you... what say we wait for your bhai and bhabhi to leave for their honeymoon before it is revealed...?"

"I guess waiting for a day has no harm in it..." saying this she kissed his cheek and ran away to her room saying "I'm off to sleep been up since 5 in the morning"

Rano rolled her eyes on seeing the o so predictable way the scenario had panned out but before she could object to Geet's going back to sleep, she was forestalled by her husband "let her go back to sleep... all of us have been sleep deprived for this past week... though I'm happy everything went fine and without any hitch" effectively changing the subject.

Later that day around noon, Rano was supervising the re-arrangement of all the stuff in the house back to their original places and Mohinder looking thru some paperwork when Kabir and Anjali walk in, all dressed and ready to go out.

"Maa...Papa, we're going to Anjali's parents house to say bye before we leave in the evening and most probably will have lunch there only" Kabir informed his parents.

"Okay beta, and yes is your luggage packed... do you need any help... I or the girls could do it... or I could instruct Radha (maid servant) to do it..." Rano asked them in typical motherly concern.

"No worries Maa we're all packed, we did it post breakfast only" Anjali replied with a smile on her face.

"Haan as it is help of your girls to pack my luggage... no never... who knows what they'd pack for us... bricks and banana leaves..." Kabir joked with a horror stricken expression

"Chup badmash... you are no less, okay" Rano chided her son though with a huge smile on her face

"What did I say wrong... you tell me dad... they'd do such things to me na... remember when she filled my cologne bottle with that hit spray liquid and my mouth-wash with that house cleaning thing what is it called colin or something..." Kabir reminded them, while his newly wedded wife was staring at him with eyes as round as saucers and then started giggling at him trying to imagine his condition.

"Don't laugh... you also beware Anjali God knows what Princi will do to you... by the way Papa what bribe you gave to your darling..."

"What bribe... what you are saying... I... I... I would do no such thing..."

"O come on Papa... you scolded her that's a first in this house... what did you do to get back in her good books... precious papa..." Kabir winked whiling laughing and Mohinder had no retort to give so he simply reminded his lovely son that he was running late "Aren't you late for something... Go have lunch with your in-laws and stop bugging me... out... out you go..."

"Yeah yeah Dad... we're going... Bye" saying this he made his way out dragging Anjali along while laughing like a maniac all the way to his car.


Next : Part 4


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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 updating! this indeed made my day! loving this FF so much! ur updates r wow! it doesn't seem like u a r first time writer! can I have another update nw?? 😉 rocking fab update! superbly written! 👏 ⭐️ Geet overheard! she was so upset wen her dad shouted her 4 da first time! she went to say sorry! bt what she heard mad r angry! she confronts him! he knows he is in trouble! Princi n her papa share a lovely bond! he loves her more than his other children! Geet in tears! Mohinder consoles her! Rano watches he father daughter duo! she enjoys the drama n adds to it! Mohinder explains! Geet feels cheated! he pacifies her! he will his tow girls out n has a surprise! he wants her forgiveness! he has 2 shout her so Kabir will think there will b no prank! Rano taunts him! Geet decides 2 forgive him n wants to knw abt the surprise! he agrees! Geet is such drama queen! her dad knows! she goes 2 sleep! Kabir n Anjali gng 2 her parents place! her informs his dad! Kabir also at the receiving end of the pranks! Anjali laughs! Kabir ask hw he bribed Geet 2 forgive him! Mohinder stunned! he denies! bt Kabir knows his dad! update soon! waiting 4 Maaneet 2 meet! 😊 thanks 4 da pm! btw pls try n give direct link 2 update in pm! Thanks
Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

btw pls try n give direct link 2 update in pm!


the part 3 is a link... does that not work...??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: libros



the part 3 is a link... does that not work...??



My sincere apologies! it does wrk! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan



My sincere apologies! it does wrk! 😳


No problem... you probably got confused due to my color changing habit😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
When is the maaneet meeting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic Update

Geet really was upset about her prank but when she realized she was rather angry at her dad

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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
Geet is her dad's princess so sweet is their relation

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