veebharth confession...change it

Originally posted by: rosabelle

i don't think i would change it... it was beautiful!!

but if i was being overly critical, or super fussy, then i guess i would want parth to beat the goons, and then vibha looking after him and him telling her that he cares for her a lot and doesn't know why he can't stay away from her... and that he absolutely hates it when she doesn't talk to him... he can't explain what he feels for her... she realizes that he really likes him and she sees the fireflies so she knows she is in love with him... but she doesn't want to admit it, but she can't see him in pain...

so she tells him that she feels something too... and perhaps it is the same thing he is feeling... she says it is hard for her to push him away but she has to do it, but today she doesn't care, she won't leave his side, she will look after him, she will talk to him as much as he wants her to, she will not care about anything or anyone else... today she will just be there for him!

and then confession could probably come at a later point in the story...

Originally posted by: Angevil786

I loved the confession scene.

I dont know if i would really like to change something...

Er...yeah one thing i would have add the sequence when both go back to school and Parth taking Vibha's support to walk and medical room scene where she does his bandage and he kept staring at her...that's all i would liked to add

Originally posted by: ankusanu

I would really want dat ..
We shld have got a real veebharth
Tight wala hug...n a forehead kiss frm parth
To veebha ☺️
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