ArHi OS: One Last Time - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
You know what is great?

That you conceptualized this one shot in November 2011.

The love and the desperation in the first half was described perfectly as depicted in the show then, potent but silent.

But the love and desperation described beautifully in the second half was done without any hint or inspiration from the show at that point in time. Not only you had them married but their love for each other was vocalised instead of silent.

And amidst all this you added his overwhelming need for her in his life for all the love he missed in the past because of the people he lost. You also added her complete comprehension of his psyche, her in depth understanding of his heart, pain pleasure and all.

Again all in November 2011 when even the CVs hadn't remotely touched the development of Arnav and Khushi's characters thus. They did it later, much later.

Isey kehte hai dur ki soch! 👍🏼

Brilliant!
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

You know what is great?

That you conceptualized this one shot in November 2011.

The love and the desperation in the first half was described perfectly as depicted in the show then, potent but silent.

But the love and desperation described beautifully in the second half was done without any hint or inspiration from the show at that point in time. Not only you had them married but their love for each other was vocalised instead of silent.

And amidst all this you added his overwhelming need for her in his life for all the love he missed in the past because of the people he lost. You also added her complete comprehension of his psyche, her in depth understanding of his heart, pain pleasure and all.

Again all in November 2011 when even the CVs hadn't remotely touched the development of Arnav and Khushi's characters thus. They did it later, much later.

Isey kehte hai dur ki soch! 👍🏼

Brilliant!


I rarely visit the forum but when i stumble across comments like these, i remember the time when i used to live and breathe ipkknd..
Thank u sooo much for the amazing comment... it means a lot coming from a brilliant writer like u😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
sweet and beautiful... loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏 👍🏼 loved reading it once again. Awesome stuff. U have captured their emotions so beautifully.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow such a beautiful os and I never came across it in these years? Wow I was missing out on a lot I guess anyways I loved it as it was beautifully written and the characters emotions were realistic which is what I always look for when I'm reading a story
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful is the word... it is a lovely story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
The way you described Arnav and Khushi's emotion was so beautiful. One glance is always enough for them to understand each other's feelings. The rain, the pain of separation, once again in front of Buaji's house... Everything seems the same like it was years ago except the fact that they're married now and this time Arnav openly admitted his love for Khushi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such awesome...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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