New FF - Criminal - Important note / Page 84 : 18 April 19

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PROLOGUE

Brutally killed.. dead..


And naked... with "I Just Love Her" scribbled on the forehead.


The junior officer nodded as he scanned the place for proofs but as usual there was none. It was as clean as if there was no crime involved just the nude body who was another victim to the serial killings.


Its counts to 13 Sir. 13 girls killed by now. The junior officer walked as if he was helpless in the case while CBI officer Rajat Sharma did not reply. His body language tensed and his face as hard as stone.


A failure once again...Rajat murmured with helplessness and anger tat was building inside him.


Few hours later...


Maan..


You pleasure me like no one. Her eyes wide her heart stopped beating as he continued thrusting deeper inside her. No women makes me feel this.


I'm your wife. She said with a stammering voice. He had taken her body soul and mind but not heart yet she felt connected to him in a way tat she never did. How can you compare me with others?


My darling you are the trophy tat I won in gambling. Her heart shattered broke into pieces and she knew it was useless to even try grabbing them back as it would never be a full heart. Ranjit Handa put you on stake and Maan Singh Khuranna won and this he pulled himself away and stepped out of the bed staring at her naked body is where you stay when I want and however I want.


I won't. She tried to regain her composure but she could not. I won't be you mistress Maan.. I would never. He laughed at her as he walked stake naked and made glass of wine for him. I will end this charade of marriage.


You are my wife and your only duty is to warm my bed and produce an heir for me. He said with his back towards her gulping down the contents of the glass. A legal heir to Maan Singh Khuranna.


Criminal Maan Singh Khuranna. She hissed back pulling the sheets to cover her. A bloody Crimina..a sick b******. Maan laughed. It wasn't new to him as every girl whom he f***** and used barked like a dog and Geet Handa wasn't much different yet she was different coz she was his wife, a name sake wife to have a legal high breed heir to the Khuranna's.


Your body satisfies me like no other and this is wat you have to do. He smiled as he stepped closer and pulled the sheet she was using to cover herself. Stay on be as long as I want on my bed. She gasped as with no warning he dived into her again thrusting harder and stronger.





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Don't forget tat I will not update or post this story on the forum so please do read the note below.




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The Khuranna's


Savitri Devi Singh Khuranna


A lady who holds her head high in society. She is a rule maker by herself and wants everyone to follow them. Arrogance and attitude I something tat she has inherited and makes sure is passed to her next generations.


Yash Singh Khuranna.

A Man who knows wat he wants and how to get it. Business, Money and Power is all he has on his mind.

Maan Singh Khuranna (27 years)

A force and rule by himself. He rules the world and ever single man fears him in business. He hates his enemies but keeps them closer and plays dirty. The Head of the underworld, but no one has seen the face (The faceless Criminal) and the biggest socialite of the outside world. The Criminal who rules both the worlds.


Raj Singh Khuranna (25 years)


The Youngest Khuranna but the illegitimate son of Yash Singh Khuranna. Sweet and friendly towards everyone. Loves his family and his Brother Maan Singh Khuranna.

The Handa's

Ranjit Handa.


His aim to be closer to Khuranna's and for tat he can put anything on edge. Love isn't a word tat he wants to hear coz for him power and money is all he sees.

Mona Handa.


The mother who knows she has only a daughter but never ever finds good in her.


Geet Handa. (22 years)

The feisty daughter who only wants some love from her parents but in return she gets is all ignorance. She loves to be loved but life is harsh on her yet she lives it to fullest. Raj Singh Khuranna is one of the people whom she believes and trusts. (Not a simple nave or innocent Geet).


Mrs. Reena Handa

Choti Maa to Geet. Though Handa does not have anything to do with them. Her late Husband Mohinder Handa was just as greedy as hi Brother Ranjit but for her Geet is the reason she' alive.

The Singhania's



Rishabh Singhania


His target Maan Singh Khuranna.. the ultimate king and only way to get him is his daughter Sameera.


Arjun Singhania. (28 years)

The biggest competitor to Maan and deadly dangerous. Knows how to play his games but always tastes failure when it comes to Maan Singh Khuranna.


Sameera Singhania (24 years)

The top model who loves to be seen with Maan and hopes to be the queen of the Khuranna's and for tat she's ever ready with her seduction.



More Characters to be added when required.

Edited by sdlife19 - 10 years ago
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As promised I have posted Criminal's Prologue and Character Sketch on Geet Forum so tat readers at least get a idea about the concept coz as decided by me, I will not write anymore for the forum except for Ek Vivah Aisa Bhi until i decide about its shifting.

Criminal will be posted on my Private Blog Maaneet Fantasies as its a 18+ concept. Readers who ask for access should know tat they have to comment on the blog itself and if you wish you can comment on this thread where I will give the links for the updates and the link to the blog is here.



MAANEET FANTASIES

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New story... Omg... Can't wait for prolong..
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congrats on the new story
interesting prologue and cs
who is that serial killer?????
eagerly waiting for its start...
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OMG!!OMG!!! 😃
Yipeee!! U started Criminal 🥳
Congos for new story di 😃
wow...the banner is amazing!!
Who is the criminal 🤔??? 😆
Me soo happy 🥳
Thank you soo much for starting a new story!! 😳 🤗
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😲 😲
Terrific start!! 😲
13 victims and no clue of the CRIMINAL
and here Geet... pity her!!
Maan?!?!
Interesting Prologue di!!



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WOW New Story ...Congrats !!!!!!
And Thank You

Prologue seems very Intriguing and Alluring at the same time
Maan Singh Khurana a criminal but now also married as he won a bet
it seems for him having a wife just means to give him pleasure and give him a legal heir ...very interesting

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new story😊 waiting for more...thank you so much
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ufff I was waiting for post with this title since u ended GUZAARISH.. finally I came across it today.. loved the CS.. all seem to be interesting and all seem to be in danger wave length.. do continue soon.. waiting eagerly..

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