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Chapter 55:
Part A:

Soon the afternoon session got over and they retire in the room with a promise of meeting for dinner. It was 9pm and the sleepyheads thought of waking up and getting fresh for the dinner. After getting fresh they met at the dinner place and they had a yummy Italian cuisine and thought of heading back to room as they were tired and they felt like being alone with their loved ones.

Mukti was walking on the beach as the resort was on the beachside she didn't had to go long distance to find a solace as she wanted some time for herself. Soon she was accompanied by Karan and this time she dint mind him walking besides her or maybe she just thought it won't matter to her but deep down she wanted someone to just listen to her. Karan, "Hey beautiful, hope you don't mind me walking besides you?" Mukti felt vulnerable by his present but she didn't wanted to show it to him so she decided to be ruthless, "I don't own this beach neither I have got any booking for it tonight nor you belong to me anything that I got right to tell you No so you can definitely walk on beach until and unless you don't bother me I won't mind". Karan, "so now I am sure you are normal thank god I like your roughness at least that tells me you are absolutely okay". Mukti, "don't flaunt your smartness samjha". Karan, "Mukti I don't know what is wrong in your life but I know one thing that life do not wait for anyone I guess you should move on coz you are not only hurting yourself but also your beloved friends cause they know you are only pretending to be happy but you actually are not happy". Mukti, "Karan you hardly know about my life and about us so I would suggest you to stay out of it". Saying this she was leaving from there when Karan pulled her and she banged with his chest, "enlighten me then, Miss Mukti Vardhan".

Mukti just couldn't control her anymore and she hugged him. For some strange reason she found solace in his arms and Karan who was already captivated by her completely felt complete on the action and he engulfed her in a bear hug. She broke the hug when she came out of trance and Karan assured her that it's okay to break down. Karan held her hand and she dint oppose this time. They walk on the shore and Mukti pour her heart out telling him about Harshad and Abhimanyu. Karan who never thought of such a thing was in shock but he knew he has to bring back Mukti. That Mukti which Manik always used to talk about and say she was like his sister but in the depth of his heart he just wanted to bring that charismatic smile back which went missing from her face.

Karan, "Mukti, kya tumne kabhi bhi socha hai ke jab tumhe koi chod ke chala jata hai wo kahi na kahi se hume dekh raha hota hai toh Abhimanyu bhi tumhe dekh raha hoga and he would feel hurt if he sees that you are crying because of him and I know that would be the least thing you would want. Mukti life is so short to regret so stop thinking that you were not able to judge Harshad you were not able to tell Abhimanyu you loved him earlier coz life has always set the perfect time for a person to enter our life and stay in our life whatever time life decides so you have to move on just like everybody does. Mukti you know why I am like this a big time flirt even Manik doesn't know this or maybe he has the slightest hint but I have never discussed it with anyone but I will tell you".

Mukti: but why Karan mujhe q?
Karan: may be just because I feel like sharing it just with you I wanted someone whom I can pour my heart out and that someone is you.

"Muskaan- a girl who changed my life and took away my belief from love. We were together for 8 years but all that 8 years she only cheated me. Sometimes I really think did she ever love me? But I never receive a reply. She said I was never perfect for her so she thought of sleeping with my best friend but I was ready to forgive her but she moved on. Then I realized my mistake was I loved her unconditionally and irrevocably and then she made me pay for so much of love. What is a nightmare? Seeing ghost in your house or seeing a dream in which you are falling from a cliff. If someone asks me what is your biggest nightmare then I would say the ugliest and scariest nightmare is to see your love sleeping peacefully naked in your best friend's arm. How could she do that to me? I asked her and then I got the lamest reply by her that she thought it was love but in reality it wasn't. I laugh to that reply till date coz she took 8 years to realize it was not love and it took me a day to realize I am mad for her and it took almost a year to get her out of my head but I fooled myself by saying that I was over her cause in real I wasn't. Then I started flirting, dating and even one-night stands yes, I did that I won't hide. Everything was going smoothly then one day Manik called me to India asking me to attend his friend's wedding his partner in crime. I thought it would be great I could divert my mind and I would stay in India if I feel good here but then I got you. I never thought I could ever fall in love again but you proved me wrong. I fell for you as soon as I saw you but I had to face the wrath of Manik, because I definitely didn't had the good boy image. He warned me to stay away from you he said you are hurt, it increased my curiosity to know you more. Your eyes wanted to say a lot and I was ready to hear all of it. But, I waited for you to open up and then you allowed me to come with you guys and I felt you will let your heart out and you did". Karan knelt in front of him holding her hand and continued "Mukti I m in love with you the day I saw you I just want to utter my feelings but I don't want your reply. I am blessed that you knocked the door of my heart and made me believe in love again now I can wait for your reply life-time, I LOVE YOU".

With this he got up kissed her forehead and left the place leaving a baffled Mukti behind.

Alya: Dhruv is love enough for everything?
Dhruv: Alya what do you think?
Alya snuggling close to his chest: as long as love is you than it is everything.
Dhruv: aww I love you.
Alya: I love you too. Dhruv I am tensed.
Dhruv: for?
Alya: Dhruv you know nyonika aunty I don't know how will Manik and Nandini deal her.
Dhruv kisses her forehead: jab tak STAR family unke sath hai no one can touch them.

But was Dhruv really saying his heart out?

Cabir was seating in the pool area of their room dipping his legs in water Navya sat next to him and seeing a worried Cabir held his hand and rested her head over his shoulder.

Navya: tum thik ho na?
Cabir: ab thik hun. He said tracing his fingers over hers...
Navya made him sleep on her lap and started stroking his hairs.
Navya: so pehle kya hua tha?
Cabir was not concentrating on her question in fact his question shocked Navya "Navya don't you think our baby is growing too rapidly like I feel you have gained weight and see even your stomach has increased by half inch" he said caressing her stomach.
A shocked Navya blushed at his question
Navya: Cabir like ssly half inch? And I will gain weight each week it's normal.
Cabir: hmmm. Champ can you hear me?
Cabir said keeping his ears close to her tummy
Navya: Cabir what's wrong?
Cabir: shayad doll hai, doll can you hear me?
Navya knew there is something so wrong and so she decided she will ask him but tomorrow. She stroked his hairs until he was fast asleep and they both slept their covered in a duvet hugging each other.

Manik and Nandini in their bedroom..
Manik was adoring her girl when she was busy in watching the fishes above her head.
Nandini: Manik thank you for the room it's so pretty underwater wow..!!
She hugged him.
Manik: Nandini let us go in the pool
Nandini: Manik it's 12:30
Manik: so?
Nandini: okay you go I will change.
Manik went to the pool pulling in a red swim short. He knew Nandini is not open she will not wear swimsuit and he dint ask her for. But Nandini murthy had other plans.

Nandini talking to herself: get ready Mr. Malhotra for a shocking surprise. She wore a red sexy swimsuit and came near the pool. Manik was resting on the wall of the pool and his back was facing her. She without making noise went near the pool.

Nandini: Manik..
Manik was about to turn when she said: no dnt turn close your eyes.
Manik: Nandini close
Nandini: shh jaldi.
Accepting his defeat he closed his eyes. Nandini came near him n faced him coming in front and whispered " don't open until I say". He was enjoying it she took his hand and placed it on her waist which was bare at the sides due to the pattern of swimsuit. It provoked him.. She snaked her arms in his neck and asked him to open the eyes..
Manik was hell shocked... Her body was shining he felt like eating her up so to suppress his intensity he rammed his lips with her kissing insanely biting her lower lip n she reciprocated with equal passion. Breaking the kiss they had some intimate moments in the pool amd then manik got her out of the pool amd they made LOVE under the water. Their love making was witnessed by the millions of fishes passing above them.

Precap:
Maldives continues..

Note: bear with me... Not well!!

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ok the update was too good..
karan and mukti talk was outstanding , the way he told his back-story to how he became a cassanova and then proposing her saying I love you..😳
Also the hug between them was unexpected but really awesome.😃
then dhrulya was nice..😊
cavya was too cute😆
manan romance was hot hot man😛
after that I just wanna say don't get them apart na please make them fight nyo together coz it is clear from the talks of dhruv n alia that she is gonna create problems!
they can tackle her together please😉
rest it is your story so your choice.
but loved this part too good!
and I am again 1st..
Edited by Starsfireflies - 10 years ago
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You did great dear :)
Gws :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi nice update finally mukti got Karan
What is bothering cabir
Waiting for more of Manan romance very nice update as usual
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First of all nice update.
Then little liking parts. ..

Mukti karan talk I liked.

Dhruvaliya cute. And I think there was a hint of upcoming . Hain na ?? Niyo wala part.

Cavya as usual most adorable. Cabir u rocks.

And now the star couple of yr star family. ...

My our Manan. ...

Do I need anything to say. ... I don't think so. As words are less in front of them.

The passion the pool the red. ... hayeee. ...

Just wanted to hummm. ... yehh lal ishk. ...


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awww😳 ds part was really emotional😭😭😭 specially mukran part😭😭 bth r broken man equally bth can complete eachother 😭😭 on d other dhuralya was cute n adorable😳😳 thinking abt manan😳😳 n cavya😆 cabiraa is hell funny man but hes hiding sumthng😆😆🥱🥱 last bt not d least manan😉😉 uff pool romance was hotie😳😳😉😉 plzz update nxt chp soon😃 untill dn tc love ya😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow that was awesome
Love the convo between mukti n karan
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Loved it
Nicely written
Cont soon

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