2nd OS of Arshi Erotic Series~ CRIMINAL LOVE - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
ooofff!!!!
I was reading with bated breath!
You know, I'm a 22 years old bachchi. Aur aap bachchi ki jaan lena chati hai kya. hehehe.
When Khushi met Arnav for the first time, I mean when he rescued her from the goons, the connection actually was made. And both became insane to get each other. So no inhibition could bridle them and their passion spiraled to the zenith.
Or moreover when she found that he is not a gangster, but a successful businessman, she couldn't resit to come to him.
The love making was hot!!!!!!!!!šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
omg this is soo cool...
both the parts r amazing
khushi is bold here...
gangster ASR nailed it
do write more...
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
awesome os and very hot too.
loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
WOW THIS IS AMAZING

ASR SAVED KHUSHI FROM FEW EVIL GUYS
HE IS SO HOT
SO DARK
SUCH A SECRET BUT I AM SURE KHUSHI WILL DISCOVER EVERY PART OF HIM

HE CAME BACK FROM EUROPE AFTER HIS REVENGE
HIS SISTER KILLED HERSELF

AND NOW KHUSHI SAW WHO HE IS ON TV
SHE ALSO REMEMBERED THAT SHE FORGOT TO THANK HIM SO SHE WAIT FOR HER AMMA TO GO TO SLEEP TO GO TO HER NEW NEIGHBOUR NAMED ASR TO THANK HIM.

PART 2

BUT WAIT BEFORE I GO TO PART TWO
HE IS VIRGIN? THE WAY HE SAID IT, I WAS LAUGHING OUT LOUD AND MY HUBBY LOOKED TO ME ASKING WHAT'S SO FUNNY???

OK PART 2

WELL I CAN'T SAY NOTHING ELSE THAN SIMPLY HOT. I TOLD YOU VERY OFTEN YOU ARE VERY TALENTED WHEN IT COMES TO COMEDY AND EROTIC. YOUR S*X SCENES ARE ONE OF THE BEST I EVER READ HERE ON IF AND I AM NOT SAYING THIS JUST SO. I MEAN IT REALLY AND I AM ABSOLUTELY HONEST.

THE WAY YOU WRITE THEM IS VERY PROFESSIONAL. JUST KEEP IT IN YOUR MIND WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR NEXT STORY.

WHAT WILL ACTUALLY HAPPEN WITH THEM?
WILL THERE BE ANY CONTINUATION?

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
very beautiful 😳😳😳 os.
loved it.
hot and shamless to.
asr was bisnessman.
arshi did it in scond meet.
arnav sis killed by some velgars affair.
tf pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Passionate and romantic one...ā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļø
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
i am not able to pin u
but want read the ff

wat to do????????????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
how can it be possible that one person is a criminal in one continent and the same is a sinfully handsome business tycoon in another countryšŸ˜›!

too hot yaar...the neighbourhood girl fell to a criminal?😃

update much more yaar!šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

hot😳

read all series In a go
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
i cant read ur writing
cant access it

plz do something

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