Beauty and a Dusht Danav MG *** Ch 6, pg 129 ** new thread link pg 1

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This is the first story avi
Which I am going to read by yours
I was just thinking to send u pm to make it ss
Wheb I read half part 1 at kurbaan hua celebration thread
I will comment for part 1 here
After reading it completely

Commented on anniversary thread
lovely start

hi congrats on the OS! Part 1 - splendid update! beautifully written! arrogant angry MSK! he is drooled over! Maan is the centre of attraction at the party bt he gives a damn! he hates women! Mrs. Chopra after him n Maan disgusted! his past has shaped his thoughts! He saw wt happened to his dad! Pammi js wanted his wealth! his dad decided 2 commit suicide than be there 4 his family! Thanks 2 dadi KM was saved! Maan vowed never 2 fall in love! Maan excelled n became successful! KC is on top! Geet has no choice bt to wear the saree! she is nervous! Maan sees Geet in a saree! he is stunned n taunts her style!! Maan meets his new PA! he shouts Adi as he didn't wants a female PA! Adi tries 2 convince Maan! Maan looks at Geet n thinks she is another Pammi! Rahul after Geet! Maan annoyed! he sees her scared n assumes its her ways 2 trap men! Maan seethes at the note Sam sent! he will never b available! Maan dances with geet 2 avoid Sam! intense dance! terrific song! Maan so rude 2 Geet! he taunts her! Geet shocked! Maan n Geet;s inner thoughts well portrayed! she has been hurt by someone! she has had enough! she tells him to shut up! Maan angry she insults him! he mocks her! n then fires her! Geet shocked! update soon

Superb Dhamakedar starting

Wow you started new story.

This story my dear Avi i am totally gonna follow! Many congratulations for a new story !!!

Wow.. Wonderful os!
I simply loved the way you characteristed Maan. The ultimate cynic, who hated women, believing them aall to be manipulative and pretentious! Exactly like our Maan of Ghsp. You nailed in portraying Maan Singh Khurana! And another delightful thing being that most of the story being from Maan's perspective. Rarely I have seen a story bringing out Maan's soliliquoy's in such a well rounded manner!

Loved the Geet with with her endearing never-say-die-attitude.

Although you changed the situation, you beautifully managed to keep the characters, their unresolved and unexplored passion magically intact. The words simply flowed and weaved a beautiful beginming!

Kurbaan hua...somehow the song is meant for Maan and Geet. It sums up their live, their desire, their conflict into music... the song which their souls sang all along!!

Wonderful story... looking forward to more!

Maan fired Geet so basically now it leaves Geet to give him a nice, verbal tirade for his nasty and prejudiced behaviour!
She can vent out her dislike in her colorful language and shock the hell out of our London returned dusht daanav!!