Manya FF - Love me like You do...

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<<our very own couple is not gettin as much credit as they deserve heres a try from my side I am a newbie and its my first ff I have no idea how to create an ff so I ur assistance and guidance spare me for mistakes>>
Thank You

Love me like You do...
The ff wil mainly focus on manya and also a strong history from banaras the characters wil be same as in the show with slight edition if required ill also try not to loose the essence of characters of our lead pair. Also there will be no chapter format the story wil continue as updated. If u al feel a need to correct me, do so and tel me if i need to improve anything, as I told I am new here and need to be guided for making updates.

The story starts from adventure night scene
Amaya dejected from gajanans words walks aimlessly out of the hospital. How can any1 have so much bitterness how can a person even have a life to live if he has so much hate inside of him such were the thoughts going on inside her head. She had never seen pain in life was god punishing her for somethin she did wrong or was it that god thought that she had enjoyed a happy life till now so lets showers problems over her head... her thoughts were disturbed by some murmuring of a familiar voice behind trees she checked over the direction and found HIM same way as she saw in reception in front of the fan standin with back facing towards her and long hairs ruffling in the wind she remembered wat happend at the wedding and her temper rose she walked towards him and turned him furiously around and asked in a loud tone ,,,Tum mera picha kar rahe ho sharam nahi ati tumhe?? He without wasting a second closed her mouth and pulled her behind the tree she trying continously to remove his hand but he was just too strong her attention was drawn towards a small kid some yrs younger than chiklu standing afraid and terrified He without removing his hand spoke in a low tone ,, humare piche gunde pade hai tum agar apna mu band rakhogi to meherbani hogi and removed his hand amaya took a long breadth she again spoke spontaneosly KYA matlab hai tumhara?? Mantu looking around and susshing her she realised how loud she was and asked again... He replied kuch gunde ise kidnap karne vale the mahadev ki kripa se mushkil se ise bacaha kar laya hu...vo gunde isi taraf aa rahe hai tum chali jao agar tumhe dekh liya unhone to tmhari jaan ko bhi khaatra ho jayega.. mantu pushing her to go... she was just out of tree hiding and mantu saw the goons coming towards them he tried to pull her back but they saw them. Thinkin for a second and mantu saw the hospital and pulled both amaya and child inside the goons followed. Amaya remembring gajanan on the ground floor convinced mantu to go on above floors she headed for the lift and mantu stopped her saying the goons will get to know which floor are we if we take the lift they sprinted towards stairs and reached third floor and were out of breadth they saw a room dark and entered and found their hide out the child was in mantus hands he laid him down and recalled mahadev... he looked towards her she was stil catchin breadth maybe she was not used to such running he found water around and offered her. The child signalled he to wanted to drink amaya holding out glasa towards child dropped by mistake the pure steel made a stingling sound and drew attention of the goons who were just about to climb 4th floor mantu took the glass pulled both of them below a bed in between he lying on the floor with one hand around child and one holding amayas hand tightly and drawing her close amaya so that no part of her be visible from below the small bed amaya getting affected by the closeness so close that she cud smell him. Getting intoxicated she felt safe and relaxed when she went to temple..then it striked her that this fragrance she everday experiences in temple differet flowers for puja incense sticks dhup and all summed up and released this soothing fragrance no doubt he spends so much time with his mahadev.. he dint have any branded colonge or perfumes but this was something beyond that Something pure She was shaken up by mantu calling her name in a whisper amaya kya hua behosh ho gyi kya gunde chale gye utho... amaya be like hhhmmm??, kya ,,?? Haa, ha ek minute ruko she got up but was again pulled down by the pain her hairs were facing by getting stuck in something she again tried but to no success she heard ruke and mantu brought his hand forward and gestured towards his kada and a bundle of hairs wrapped around it... tumhare ye ball hai ki mahadev ki jatayenn!! Tum ldkiyo ke ball itne lambe kyu hote hai amaya got the remark and replied with irritation apne baall dekhe hai tumne.. and FYI ye jataye nahi mere pyare baal hai ok... ek bhi tutna nahi chahiye seeing her irritated he swiftly pulled out smartly all the hairs entagled and got up he again focussd on the child and asked him about his details he looked around from the door and found it safe amaya started walkin tellin ki me dekh k ati hu gunde gaye ki nahi mantu pulled her back and she collided on his chest... he too got surprised that why did he pulled so hard gettin back to senses he told koi akele bahar nhi ja raha amaya retaliated ki kyu tum boss ho mere me is hospital ko tumse better janti hu me dekh k ati hu kuch nhi hoga mujhe but mantu was adamant ki agr koi tarika hai ise safely ghar pohchane ka toa batao hume sabse pehle ise safe jagah pohchana hai... amaya told,, idea n went outside mantu tried to stop her but he was late amaya returned with shubhash explained him situatioj and handed over the child... mantu while walkin down cautiosly asked amaya tum kabhi race me dodi ho??
Ha ,,kyu ??bhot race me part liya tha bachpan me...
Kyuki gundo ko pata hai hum andar hi hai vo humara swagat karne khade honge hume jitna ho sake utna tez bhagna padega..
Amaya trying to deeply understand replied with a Oh! Kay!... they marched out and the goons again sprinted behind both running holding hands and van approaching realising they wud be caught mantu directed towards jungle both trying as fast over irregular rocks and land between large trees amaya flippd over a rock and fell down mantu made her stand and asked kya ho gya ab ... amaya,-dikhaye nhi de raha moch aa gyi hai ..
Amaya hume bhagna hoga gunde piche aa rahe honge...chalo
Tum bhag jao chale jao yaha se
Mantu out of genuine concern innocently hum tumhe yaha chodke kaise ja sakte hai
Vaise hi chale jao jaise reception me apni us gf uma k piche gaye the mantus brows curved in anger like is ladki ko yaha bhi us sab ki padi hai he snapped
Yaha humari jaan khatre me hai aur tum ho ki vo sab bate le kar baithi ho tum ladkiya ek baat ko lekar kyu baith jati ho humesha...
Amaya tried to get up but again flinched with pain and this time she srsly spoke mantu tum jao yaha se.. . Mantu giving an expression to her that this is the last thing he wud do and lifted her up in his arms and started walkin
Mantu kya kar rahe ho niche utaro muje mantu me chal sakti hu srsly niche utaro muje .. mantu not paying any heed walks out of the jungle finds a tabela nearby(( the goons were misdirected by mantu in jungle he threw a stone in opposite direction )) he placed amaya on heap of hay and sat down
Hey mahadev... thodi bohot jo energy bachi thi vo bhi nikal gayi... kitna weight hai tumhara...baapre!!!!.
Toa mene tumko bola ki muje uthao tum khud hi bade smart ban rahe the.. ...ek minute tum muje moti keh rahe ho how dare u !!!!
Maaf kar do meri ma galti ho gyi..ab apna pair dikhao
Tum kya koi doctor ho...ya tumhe lagta hai ki tumhe kheer banani ati hai to tum sab kuch thik kar sakte ho
Sab kuch ka toa pata nahi par tmhare pair k liye kuch toa try kar sakta hu
Koi zarurat nhi hai me thik hu aur vaise bhi vo gunde chale gye
Agar vapas aa gye toa me koi tumko utha kar nhi bhagne vala muje koi apni kamar todne ka shaukh nahi chadha
How Mean
Mantu swiftly lifted her leg up and checkd
Chhodo mera pair leave...
Kuch nhi hoga choti se moch hai abhi ghuma k thik ho jyega
Kya ghumake
Mantu flicked the ankle and it clicked and replied ye ghumake
Ye tumne kya kar diya tod diya mera pair oh god ab me Chalungi kaise
Oh madam chup ho jao and he started making circles with her ankle amaya out of suprise eyes open and jaw dropped
Suddenly a long smile crept her face and she spoke innocently ye toa thik ho gya woww...
And she started standing and walkin around
Kaha ja rahi ho ?
Ghar jana hai muje ab toa pair bhi thik ho gya
Nhi ja sakte vo gunde puri raat is raste k as pas hi honge itni asani se nhi manne vala vo humne unko dekh liya hai isliye
Toa kya karenge puri raat yhi baithe rhenge kya??
Aur koi chara nhi hai
What do u mean aur koi chara nhi hai muje ghar jana hai n me ja rhi hu... mantu thght I need to explain her calmly
He came in her way and stopped her dekho amaya samjne ki koshish karo thodi der yha rukenge toa safe rhenge abhi agr vo raste me mil bhi gye toa bhi unki van se tez nhi bhag sakte hai na... jaise hi sahi time ho hum nikal jyenge
Par mantu mera mobile bhi dead hai ghr pe sab pareshan honge
Mera bhi dead hi hai aur humare ghr bhi chiklu hai na muje bhi uski fikar hai par hum abhi nhi ja sakte thik hai ..
Amaya went back towards the hay and sat pouting ... lookin at mantu angrily...
Mantu asked tum faltu me phas gyi is sab mein... tumhe vaha ped tak ana hi nhi tha humse baat karne agr nhi ayi hoti toa abhi ghar par hoti.. par tum bhi ek pagal insan ho itni raat ko ghr jana chahiye toa tum hospital kya kar rhi thi gyi kyu thi tum vha..
Amaya was already angry at him and this added the fuel she remembered how gajanan was helpless fallen on ground having heart attack gow she took him to the hospital and how at last she heard his disgusting words that he wud die rather than take her help...
Mantu plz zyda over smart banne ki koshish mat karo...and meri personl life me kya karti hu kaha jati hu kyu jati hu vo muje tmhe batane ki zarurat nhi logo ki life me problems bhi hoti hai sabki ki life tmhare jaise simple nhi hoti tumhe kya pata life ki problems challenges k bare mein... tumhari toa hai hi perfect life apni girlfriend k sath tum apni life me khush raho na meri life me kyu interfere kar rahe ho enjoy karo apni perfect life.. !!! She spoke in one breadth.. ..

Precap-- mantu opens up partly about his past ...
<<guys i know story till here is pretty much same as d show but I needed to lay the foundation for story ahead and refresh u all with the adventure night so its drafted here. Have patience and keep reading>>
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Posted: 10 years ago
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go ahead.its nice.hope next chapter ll b something that we havent seen 😳 really nice
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Very nice can u edit the title and say its a manya ff its a little confusing as u might b talking bout the song.. Do continue soon
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..Mantu stared blankly at amayas outburst suddenly the faded images started running in front of his mind screeching brakes strong headlights ...water all around ganga in its fiery form water all around...chor ho tum chor hai tumhara khandan people were screaming in his ears he wanted to scream shut up but suddenly a warmth of comforting hands wrapped around him and a loud crashing deafening sound he closed his eyes before he reveals himself in front of this sily girl.. but still a fat single tear managed to escaped from his eye...
This happend in split second. Amaya saw his eyes pouring into his in that split second but she felt he wasnt seeing her but seeing something else. She dint notice the tear and at his silence she felt she is right who is he to ask about me n my life wat does he knows...
Mantu smiled his sarcastic one sided n felt that memories he kept hidden why her words affected him that all his life flashed in front of him... but he knew he cannot tell anythin to her not the full truth...
Amaya felt more irritated seeing his crooked smile how dare he smile at my this state...
Tumhe hasi aa rahi hai tmhe sab joke lagta hai !!
Sahi kaha tumne bhot perfect life rahi hai meri... bas choti moti taklif ayi thi life me bas jab 13 saal ka tha tab amma babuji guzar gaye... fir bas thodi bhot paiso ki problem hui toa skul chodna pada... but ha special exams di aur pass ho gya chiklu chota tha tab uski tabiyat ka dhyan rakhna tha thoda bada hua uske bad toa koi problem nhi hui... ha uma k bhi ma bap mere ma bap k sath hi guzar gaye the but fir bhi hum dono ek dusre k sath the toa tab bhi koi problem nhi hui... ab hum bade ho gye chiklu bhi skul ja raha hai toa logo ne uma ko humari gf bana diya... but vo bhi usse uma ko zyda koi farak nahi padta toa koi problem nhi hoti... yahi hai meri perfect life...
Tumhare life me toa kitni badi badi problms hongi na ...!!
This al felt like a slap to amayas face and she wonder how did he manage to tell al this without any tear there was not a drop of tear in his eyes she herself was with wet eyes before she cud muster courage to speak anything mantu got up and spoke hume chalna chahiye ab...
Amaya felt she shud keep quite from now
She too got up... and started walkin... both silent ...mantu hit his head in mind what was the need to tell her all this.. aur ab ye chup kyu hai iski chapad chapad karne vali jabaan ko kya hua???...walkin they moved a long way...and on both sides was endless long road... not a sign of a living being...
Out of no where at a triple junction the van stopped right in front them four of them came out with knives in their hand...
Sasura bahut dodaya itni der tak lekin hath lag hi gaye akhir tum
Arey bhai bacha kaha hai one them asked to the main boss
Kaha hai re baccha...?? Batao varna yahi kat dalenge... dono ko...
Arey bhai ye pari jaisi ladki ko aap aise hi mar denge kya us bache k bajaye ise hi bhej dete hai... market me...
That was it...before he cud complete his sentence he got a reverse puch from an iron like hand his jaw broken insite teeth broken and with a jet of blood coming out of his mouth he lay on the ground unconcious
Amaya struck down to horror at what just happend mantu was some1 not recognizable his knuckles cracking and jaws clenched the fire in his eyes... before she cud understand wat cheap statement that goon was going to make about her she saw mantu swingin his right hand and next thing she saw was the goon lying on ground...
All three came at once now mantu managed to knock down every1 in seconds amaya still dazzled.. before she cud make out a swift hand came from behind and held a knife around her neck...
Rukja oo hero... yha dekh..
Mantu looked from where the voice came from... amaya trembling in that dogs grip trying to free herself and the knife on her neck ..
Agar humare admi par aur ek bar hath uthaya to yha mera hath bhi chal jyega...
Mantu tum bhag jao... jao yha se plz... leave... chale jao...
Mantu looked right directly in her eyes...she was in deaths grip god knows wat wud happen to her if he left... still she asked
him to leave.
Maro re isko bada hero ban raha tha maro saale ko...
The goons start hitting first his face his cheekbones bruised... his nose bleeding... a blow on his abdomen and he was on his knees. His body was damaged but his face did not pale it was firm and adamant...one blow and he fell on the ground...
Amaya cud not belive her eyes she had not seen something so brutal in front kof her eyes. Question she asked again again why did he not leave... she dint like bollywood movies and its typical action scenes made fun of them...but she never imGined this there was this man lying on the road who hardly knew her few weeks and she may have several times fought him said ill things to him from the day she met him... why was he taking beating from these men... TO SAVE HER??!..

Before she cud get an answer they started draggin her towards the van she cud not move her eyes away from him... he was tryin to get up...
Bhai iska kya karna hai
Pade rehne de subah tak mar jayega
It struck like a lightning to amayas heart
Plz use hospital pohcha do dekho tum muje le ja rahe ho na but plz use hospital pohcha do...plz.
Her tears were not stopping she was beggin to them... plz muje jane do uske pas...usko hospital le jana padega jane do muje...
They were near the van as they heard ...
JAB itni minnate karke keh rahi hai toa jane do na use...
All turned back... there he was standing tall and straight as if nothin had happened...
Bhai itna maar khane k bad khada kaise ho gaya ye...
The boss speaks up
Kyu re itna mar khaake pet nahi bhara...
Ab itna mar!!!!...
Before the boss cud complt a hard round rock hit him on the middle of his head aimed perfectly by mantu... he screamed in pain and blood started oozzing out before any1 cud comprehend wat just happend all goons ran to boss' aid... and amaya grabbing the opportunity ran towards mantu and looked at his bleeding wounds words felt short for her... as she saw this man bearing all this just for her...
Boss gestured othr goons towards manya
Pakdo un dono aur jaan se mar do...
Amaya found him and herself at a running distance and grabbed his hand and started pulling him to run
But he dint move an inch... his eyes were focussed over the goons
Mantu chalo yaha se kya kar rahe ho khade kyu ho???
He shifted amaya behind him safely and watched the goons coming towards him...
Amaya got angry on him... and thoght itni chot lagi hai fir bhi khada kyu hai... !!
"Chalo mantu"
One goon broght his knife hand in front mantu blocked it by his wrist and turnd around hittin his chest hard... somewhat breaking his ribs... before the second one cud reach him mantu kicked his jaws and he fell down the third one was blocked by the one falling and grabbing this opportunity mantu hit the goons knee goon fell over kneling down and mantu dislocated his shoulder... this all happend in few seconds and the boss was bleeding... beside the van watchin all this he to save himself started running towards the van... mantu pickdd a knife from one of the goons and aimed...at him...
Swooosh the knife went and pierced his thigh... and he fell grabbin his stabbed leg in pain ...mantu looked at amaya with concern and now he started feelin his body pain ... he had bruised cheek.. an injured shoulder and a hurt leg... he gestured amaya to walk towards the van...
Amaya rushed towards him... and started ranting out
Pagal ho tum... jab me keh rhi thi toa bhag jana tha na.. kitni chot ayi hai.. tumhe... agar kuch ho jata toa tumhe...!!!
Aur tumhe kuch ho jata toa.. aur tumhe lagta hai ki me tumhe yha aise akaele chod k bhag jata... ab chillana band karo..chalo yaha se...
Hum kahi nhi ja rahe sabse pehle tumhe hospital le jana hai... pata nahi koi kahi zyda chot ayi ho... hospital ja rahe hai hum bas...
Amaya zid mat karo.. muje zyda chot nhi ayi hai...ghar par uma davai lagayegi thik ho jyega...
Hearing uma's name she felt an itch in her heart..she forgot about uma infact she had forgottn everythin in past few mins..why did she feel hurt on hearing umas name from to nurse him...she thought...
Bringin her Back from her thoughts she heard
Tumhe gadi chalani ati hai?
Hhhmm?!! Hhhm...HA... ati hai kyu?
Chalo
Kaha?
Arey yaar tum itne sawal kyu puchti ho??
Vo van dikh rahi hai na...bas vahi chalani hai...
Par mantu mene kabhi van nahi chalayi...hai..
Car toa chalayi hai na...same hai... vaise muje koi bharosa nhi tumhari driving pe but aur koi chara bhi nahi hai...
Amaya getting irritated kya matlab hai tumhara-???!!
Yahi ki Agar hum chalane ki halat me hote toa hum khud chala lete... city ke pas pohoch jayenge toa koi rickshaw hum dono ko mil jyega...
Do rickshaw kyu??
Ye banaras hai madam log yaha har bat ka matlab nikalte hai...agar hum dono ko is halat me dekhega toa pata nhi kya sochega...yaha jo dikhta hai vahi log samajte hai...
Muje koi farak nahi padta log kya soche...
Tum fir behas karne lagi... ab chalogi...
FINe..!!
Amaya started walkin swiftly...mantu a bit slow and was leaning on one leg... amaya saw him and an imense pain ran thru her heart...seeing him in such state.. she remembered how he lifted her up when she just had a sprain..
She moved towards him...brought his hand over her shoulder...and made him walk towards the van supportin him...mantu stared at her... intently at first wat she was trying to do... will he ever be able to understand this girl he thought...!!!
She made him sit safely over the passengrs seat... herself took the gear and started the van... at first 2 attempts the van stopped... but then she made a succesaful attempt and drove the van towards the city...
Seeing beside her mantu was sitting rested his head on the seat his eyes closed the blood had stopped flowing from his lips but was still fresh.. the wounds on his cheeks were red... he constantly adjusted his shoulder maybe he was in pain...
Before she burst out in tears she watched the road as she drove but still her eyes welled up remembering how they beat him...the images flashed in front of her eyes... again she took a glance... maybe he was sleeping...
He must be so tired she thought then remembered the whole night and how it turned out to be... the dress umas insult her nanas attack saving the child running from goons her sprain mantu carryin her... the way she talked to him rudely over problems of life ... how hard life he had... and still managed to cope up... she was the stupidest person giving him lectures about life problems... and then the thing that haunted her... mantus injuries and her helplessness to do nothing...
She reached the city wondering over those thoghts... and saw some night rickshaws parked by... she tried to wake mantu... softly... she again called his name
Mantu hum aa gye... utho...
Dekho 2...3 auto mil jyegi yaha se... utho mantu...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for this story.. Also can you make an index .. normally all stories have an index so readers can go back and read again..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely yaar. U have gud writing skill. Pls do continue
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Ill surely make one index as the number of pages and updates increase... thanks for the feedback..enjoy reading..😊
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very nicely written 😳 continue plz
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Mantu utho... amayas heart skipped a beat she tapped lightly on his cheeks to wake him... she looked around in the van thrre was a small water bottle on the back seat... she removed her seat belt and sprinkled some water on his face still no response now she was in tears she pleaded mantu
And sprinkled water mantu plz utho...
There he shook his face a bit in agony... and shifted a bit...in his seat...amaya breadth a sigh of relief... on seeing him awake...
Before he cud open his eyes she wiped her tears..
Kaha hai hum ??pohoch gaye kya??
Hhmm!! Ha ... pohoch gye... vo dekho kuch auto khadi hai vaha pe...
Thik hai chalo.. he was opening his seat belt and a sharp pain ran across his shoulder...he hissed a whisper in pain... amaya noticed and quickly made him sit and told him to relax she opend the seat belt and as he was trying to get up she held him back firmly...in a commanding way to remain seated... she got out of van and reached his side and opened the door held him and made him come out.. slowly..
Amaya hum theek hai,,is sab ki zarurat nahi hai...
Tum apna mu band rakho aur chup chap chalo... this time she wasnt telling it to argue with him or for picking up a fight...she just made it clear by her tone...
Mantu and her walked over to the autos and amaya saw one of them awake
Bhaiya aap... inko kisi pas k hospital me le jayenge...
Arey hum ghar jayenge... chiklu akela hai.. aur hum theek hai thodi davai laga denge toa thik ho jyenge...
Amaya just stared at him angrily...
Kya hua bhaiiya kono panga ho gaya ka... koi kand kar diye ka ...ki itna maar kha k aye ho... kisi gunde vunde se pala pad gaya kya..??
Dekhiye ye vaqt chit chat karne ka nahi hai inki halat bhot kharab hai inko plz hospital le jayiye...
Par amaya...
Par var kuch nahi mantu bhot ho gaya.. agar me tmhari jaisi situation me hoti toa kya tum muje aise hi ghar chale jane ko kehte... ek pehle hi tumne un gundo se meri vjah se... she was about to open up how troubled and hurt she was seeing him in this condition... but controlld
Anyways agar tum hospital nahi jaoge toa me bhi dusre auto se ghar nahi jaungi...
Thik hai.. bhaiya vo dusre auto vale ko jagao aur inko bas wali gali chhodne ko kaho..
Both leave in different directions in their autos... mantu in pain confusion sadness
Amaya worrying about him...will he reach hospital safely..will he get his treatment done properly...and tears were not stopping...she herself wiped tears firmly and surprised that why is she crying so much... she never cried so much anytime before on anything... then why are her tears not stopping...
She reached home both jazz and rachi ran towards her ..uma stood up...
Amu are u ok??
Kaha thi tum
We were so worried
Mantu kaha hai...btao jaldi dekho me janti hu vo tmhare sath hi hai bta do kaha hai vo. . ???!!!
Jazz snapped uma tum chup raho.. dekh nahi rahi amu akeli ayi hai... koi nahi hai uske sath...ab tum ghar jao apne...
Amaya spoke up...
Vo me rasta bhul gayu thi and rickshaw kharab ho gyi thi...isliye late hua... me bhot thak gyi hu plz subah baat karenge muje sona hai... uma mantu mere sath nahi tha...tum ghar jaakar dekho shayad aa gaya ho...
Uma rushed out of the house...
Amu started walkin towards her room jazz was about to ask her something but rachi stopped her..
Amaya changed and got in bed under the blanket... while bringin her hand for covering the blanket she found a spot of blood on her palm...
It was his blood... she rememberd how frighten she was when he was not opening his eyes in van .. how she tapped his cheeks...to wake him up...
And drifted to sleep thinkin about him...
Next morning... she checkd her phone... no msg or call from him...
Vo ghar toa pohoch gaya hoga na thik se..
She called him... but no one pickd up... she calld again but no response...
Amaya got ready headed out... midway she thought wat wud she tell him... why did she came so early in the morning...
Bhaiiya rickshaw roko...
Kya hua Madam.. adress galat hai kya?
Nhi nhi ... aap rickshaw ghuma lo..
Madam final batao jana kaha hai...??
Mantu ko msg kar deti hu... ki jaise uthe muje inform kare...
Bas wali gali k pas jo mandir hai vaha chalo...
She reached the temple...
And started talkin with her bhagwanji...bas ek bar bata do mantu thik hai... kisi tarah usse contact kara do... ki vo ghar pohoch gaya...plZz
She sat near the steps of the temple beside the waters.. there were diyas floating... people reciting bhajans and mantras... birds chirping it was early in the morning so... temple was a bit less crowded... people wud just rush out in next few mins ,, probably after 8...that was the time she used to come everyday... today was diffrnt...it was still 7:25...people were greeting each other...by mahadev.. she smiled remeberin how he included god in any type of sentence he spoke...in their meetings... she wondered why did she fight a lot with him... there was no reason to fight stil they argued like small children ... she cud never imagine some1 wud do anything like what he did yestrday for a stranger... like her... was she really a stranger... they shook hands on being friends... but just a few days had gone by... it was like a few moments ago she was in paris taking a drive in her convertible...how life changdd drastically... her attention was grabbd by a small child playing.. around the steps... her mother was scoldin him and trying to stop him to go near waters.. ...mantu ne apni jaan ki parva nahi ki us bache ko bachane k liye ... muje bachane k liye... koi itna selfless kaise ho sakta hai... jab se banaras me ayi hu tab se help ki hai usne meri...
Agar vo nahi hota toa dad ki tervi ki puja fail ho jati... usne mom ki tabiyat kharab hui tab support kiya... aur kal kal toa mantu kya kar diya tumne... mantu tum aise kyu ho!!!...
Her self talk was interrupted by... frequent ringin of her phone...
Amu tum kaha ho... pata hai me yaha kitni pareshan hu...ek tao kal tum late ayi.. yaha hum kitni tension me the aur kal tumne thik ze batay bhi nhi kya hua tha... aur abhi itni subah nikal gayi... vo bhi bina bataye...
Sorry rachi di... me abhi ati hu...
Amaya replied silently...
Rachu thought ye amu ko kya ho gaya...!!
...
After takin the rickshaw...mantu headed towrdz the hospital but suddenly he remembrd he dosent have much money to undergo a treatment and get checked up he would come tommorrw...
Bhaiya auto ghuma lo...
Kya hua bhaya aspatal nahi jana ka??
Ha bhaiya auto ghuma lo...
Vo chori ko acha nahi lagega jab use pata chalego ki tu bina ilaj karai... auto mod liyo...
ap auto chaliye Bhaiya ,,, aur aap ko kya farak padta hai...
Mare ko farak pade na pade us chori ne ghano farak pade hai... uski aankho me dikhe hai taaare liye fikar... aur chinta...bhot pareshan thi vo tari tabiyat ko lekar koi...khaas lage hai tu uska...
Bhaiya humari niji zindagi ke bare me aapse raii lene ki zarurat nahi hai.. aap auto chaliye na ek toa pehle hi halat kharab hai upar se aap !!!
Bhaiyo mane jo dikhe hai vo me bolu hu..baki aap ki marji...
Mantu reached home and went in to boil water to take a bath... he watched the water runnin from tap makin as low sound as possible so that chiklu wont wake up... he started driftin towards his thoughts...years back...___________________________________________________________________________
...kya naam bataya tune... SLAPPP..
Aap log muje mar kyu rahe ho...
PUNCH...
Chup reh... chor saale.. ... and they kicked him...beat him... on any part of body that was possible... till he cud not even stand up...only breadth was left to keep him alive...after some time...gaining some conciousness...he dragged himself towards the bank... and jumnped... waters of ganga as if healing his wounds... filling in the blood that has drained out... his tears were merged in the waters or probably dried... coming out he lay on the bank steps... leaning on the wall... no one to bother a look at him...
He got a snap out of his thoughts as hot water touched His feet and the it was overflowing... he closed the tap... poured hot water on his body over his clothes and felt same experience as he used to feel while allowing the waters of ganga to heal him...
After a while he changed and uma...sprinted in...
Kaha the tum... ha?? Pata hai hum kitne pareshan the... tumharae chakkar me hum...us amaya k ghar gaye pohoch gaye the!!!!
Tum amaya k ghar gayi thi par kyu.???
Kya zarurat thi shaadi me jo kiya vo kaafi nahi tha kya???
Thats when she noticed his injuries...on lips and cheeks... a little faded due to bath...
Ye kya hai??
Kuch nahi hai...mantu faced the other side...
Uma turned him towards her...and asked with concern ye chote kaise laagi... kisi se jhagda hua kya??
Kuch nahi vo bas raste me kuch gundo se ladai ho gayi..
Kya ??kya zarurat thi tumko un gundo se panga leni ki??kya shaukh chadha hai hero banne ka??she draged him towrds bed and brought the first aid kit while scolding him??
Vo ek bacche ko gundo se bacha rahe the...usme ye sab hua??
Toa kya tumne hatho me chudiyan pehan rakhi hai...kya ?? Tum nahi mar sakte the unko... aisi kya naubat aa gyi ki tumko itni mar khani padi...
Uma vo... he stopped as the scene flashed before him... amayas terrified face..in his grip and the knife over her neck...she was so trembling and vulnerable...helpless...and he rememberd how she asked him to leave so that he cud save himself... how brave she was.!!!... itni buri situation me aa ke... jab jaan khatre me ho... koi kaise itni himmat dikha sakta hai..use pata bhi nahi tha ki uske sath kya hota fir bhi usne muje apni jan bachane ko kaha...how cud she even think that he wud leave... how !!! Itne saalo bad usko itna gussa aya tha.. the anger he felt to rip that goons body apart...the fear he felt of losing her...even a scratch on her wud hav killed him... he had lost every1 near and dear to him... it felt that he cannot loose her.. but she was just a girl whom he met few days back...why did he felt all these...
Kaha khk gaye...
Hath pau k sath dimag me bhi chot ayi hai kya??batate kyu nhi tum nahi maar sakte the unko...
Nahi!!!...
Kya !!kyu??!!
Hhmm!!?arey uma tum malam lagao na muje sona hai bohot thakan hai aur dard bhi ho raha hai...
Aur tu unke ghar gayi thi??kyu gayi thi??
Vo muje laga ki tum us amaya k sath ho ..hum hi pagal hai ki aisa soch liya...tum uske sath kaise ho sakte the!!!..
Toa tum vapas kyu aa gayi??
Vo amaya aayi ghar pe...vo akeli thi toa.. hume laga tum shayad yaha ho aur hum tmhara vaha intezaar kar rahe ho...aur dekho tum yahi the!!!
Dhanyavad mahadev amaya thik thak ghar pohoch gayi!! He prayed...
Lo ho gaya ab so jao . Aur khabardar jo subah jaldi uth gaye toa.. hum chiklu ko tayar kar lenge tumhe sirf aram karna hai ..
He went towards his room and laid down.. and went back to his thoughts...mahadev ka lakh lakh shukar hai ki vo thik hai.. !!
Par muje uski itni fikar kyu ho rahi hai...
So jaa mantu.. ye sab samajna tere bas ki baat nahi hai...
Next morning he woke up.. pain was still there but he still adjustin and adapting to the pain got up.. and moved towards bathroom.. uma shouted and stopped him ..
Tum uth kyu gaye. ..Jao vapas so jao.. hum badme nashta late hai.. pehle badi amma ko deke aate hai...
Mantu went towards his room and plugged in his charger..
Amaya k itne miss calls!!...aur msg?
A- "Jaise hi ghar pohocho muje inform karna"
...
B-"Me ghar par hu.. kal raat ko pohoch gaya tha but fir late ho gaya tha aur so gaya isliye call nahi kiya tha "
.. he heard uma coming... and quickly deletd chat history and...slept.
..._______________________________________________________________________________Amaya reached..home and rachi and jazz started to target her with questions...
Amaya in her own thoughts cud not answer them properly...
Amu muje lagta hai tumhari tabiyat thik nahi hai...
arey tumko toa bukhar hai... tum chalo aaram karo aur jab tak thik nahi ho jati.. tab tak...bahar nahi niklogi...okay...!!
Rachi di me thik hu...
No amu me kuch nahi sunnevali mamma bhi yaha nahi hai... tum bas aram karogi..
They dragged her towards the room tucked her in.. jazz snatched her mobile..
Jazz kya kar rahi ho... phone do mera...
Tmko aram karna hai na toa phone ki kya zarurat hai... tumhe phone nahi milega..
But jazz
No means no..
Okay kamse kam chargin pe toa laga do...
As they moved out... amaya ran towards the phone to check it... but he hadnt called or texted...
Her face fell and... again she got tensdd...agar vo gunde uske samne vapis aa gaye ho toa.. vo hospital gaya tha kuch serious toa nahi hua hai na...!! Ohh god ..
Uske bare me sochte hi tears kyu aa jate hai... muje...pehle toa kabhi aisa nahi hua..
And the phone beeped .. she quickly checkd...
M-" Me ghar par hu.. kal raat ko pohoch gaya tha but fir late ho gaya tha aur so gaya isliye call nahi kiya tha "
...her face lit up... and she started smiling... still the tears were intact... ab kyu ansu aa rahe hai ab toa uska msg bhi aa gaya aur me smile bhi kar rahi hu...!!
And she started pondering over what should she reply...
Edited by joe10 - 10 years ago
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Well written. Love to read more. Do continue

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