ISHRA FF:Hum Tum 1 Kamre Me Part 14 on PG 52 02/12

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Dhinchank

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello Friends Here Is 1st Part of New Story

HUM TUM EK KAMRE ME BAND HO
" Dorm NUMBER 143 "

PART 1
Character :
Ramanan Bhalla (RB)
Santosh Bhalla (SB)
omprakash Bhalla (OB)
Ishita Iyer (II)
Vishwanathan Iyer (VI)
Madhavi Vishwanathan Iyer (MI)
REST will introduce as per story moves

::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::LONDON :::::::::::::::::::::::::::

In Mall

Santosh bhalla (SB) : are Vishwanathan JI Aap Yaha

Vishwanathan : Are Bhabhi Aap Kaisi hai app or mera Yaar Kaisa hai...???

SB : Msin theek hu Aapka Yaar bhi theek hai aap kaise...???

Vishwanathan : Main theek hu...

SB :London Kab aaye...??

Vishwanathan : Jee main to abhi aayahu lekin Madhavi or Ishita yahi hai. 1 saal se..Madhavi yaha aao...

Madhavi met SB and
SB ask aapki family yaha hai hame pta hi nahi tha...

Vishwanathan : wo bus time hi nhi mila...aur Madhavi ye Ishita kaha hai...

Madhavi : aiyyo wo koi book lene gayi hai...

SB: mera beta Raman wo bhi book lene gaya hai kitna Time ho gaya aaya nahi...

Madhavi : Ha Ishita ko bhi time ho gaya...chaliye wahi chalte hai...

HERE

Raman Ishita in same book store...

Ishita in hudi tshirt and capri full on hip-hop style,earphone plugged chewing gum in mouth walking towards "How to " book section

Raman in black blazer ,red tie walking towards the same book section...

Both at same book self and at same time...

Ishita: yippeee mil gayi her voice loud enough for everyone...

Raman : yes mil gayi...

Both raman and Ishita's hand on same book...

Ishita takes book in her hand

Raman : excuse me earphone aapne lagaye hai iska matlab ye nahi hai ki hum bhi behre hai...

Ishita behave like a deaf bcoz of earphone...excuse me r u talking to me ????

Raman : yaaa i m talking to u...

Ishita plugged out earphone : yaaa say...

Raman point to the book which is in Ishita's hand...

ye book mene phle dekhi thi...

Ishita : tooo

Raman : too matlab ye meri huyi...

Ishita :SRK ko jaante hai aap...

Raman : kya ???

Ishita : Srk shah rukh khan...

Raman : ha SRK ka full form pta hai mujhe...

Ishita : ha use mene phle dekha tha lekin wo to gauri ka ho gya...

Raman : matlab...
Ishita : matlab ye ki jo chiz aapne phle dekhi iska matlab ye nahi ki wo aapki ho gyi...

Raman : what is this nonsense ????wo book pe phle mene hath rakha tha.

Ishita : kabhi train me baithe hai aap...

Raman : ab book ka train se kya lena dena...

Ishita : hai lene dena hai...

Raman : or wo kya hai ??

Ishita : ye book store hai train nhi jaha pahle kapda daal diya to seat apki. ..

Now Raman completlt pissed off... And Ishita walking towards the bill counter...

Raman : excuse me miss hip-hop girl ye so called philosophy apne pass rakhiye...

aap indian hai isliye me itne pyar se baat kar rha hu warna...

Ishita : dekhiye Mr.double battery...pyar se to main baat kar rhi hu warna ab tak...

Raman in very harsh tone...1st warna kya and 2nd double bettry matlab with pissing his teeth...

Ishita : apna size dekhiye samz aaega double bettry ka matlab...

Raman : how dare u call me fat...

Ishita : mene aapko kab mota kaha aap khud hi kah rahe hai btw happy realization...

Raman : u jst shut up main khaate peete ghar se hu punjabi hoon...tumahre jaisa nahi hu kapde phnne ka dhang bhi nahi ki ladkiyo ko kaise kapde phnna chahiye...

Ishita : wo to dikh raha hai ki aap kahate peete ghar se hai...or rhi baat mere kapdo ki to meri body main jaise chahu kapde pahnu aap ko kya shadi karni h kya mujhse...

Raman : are kaisi ladki ho tum...shadi in ur dreams...

Ishita : waise bhi aapke niche dab ke marne se aacha hai ki main sucide kar lu...and she goes to the counter and give her Credit card and take the bill

Raman stood their like dumb..
Raman : wat mere niche dab ke how shamless girl...

Raman walking towards the bill counter but Ishita out of shop accidently she drop bill and Raman follow her shouting her name he took the bill...

Excuse me...miss hip hop girl...

Ishu: Now what...

RB : 1st r u shamless... 2nd i m not that fat actually any girl ready for me that wat u said...but i m one woman man... 3rd gr8 idea mujhe apni nonsense baato me busy rakha or ye book le aayi lekin u cant take this book out of mall...

Ishu : 1st i m not shamless 2nd u said u r not that fat that means u beleive that u r fat... 3rd yes this is my idea which is only executed on fool like u...and wait a min...where is my bills Raman show her bill of book...

U cant exit without this bill also that dress...

Ishu : What the hell...u thief ...

RB : mind ur tounge...tum waha ye bill gira gayi thi ...now say sorry and give that book to me...and after this only i ll give bill of ur dress...

Ishu : Never...

RB : never say never...

Raman...Ishita... Both see their parents came towards them...

Raman tum yaha ho...Santosh said to Raman...

Are Ishita tu bhi yahi hai...Vishwanathan said to Ishita...

Now its Madhavi's turn
she see books in Ishitas hand chalo tujhe book mil gayi...

Santosh : are Raman ye Vishwanathan sharma ji hai tere Papa ke bachpan ke dost...

Raman : namste uncle... Namste beta namste kaise ho... I m fine uncle thank u...

Vishwanathan : Santosh ji ye meri beti Ishita hai...Ishita yad hai tumhe main tumhe mere or OB ke baare me batata tha ye unhi ki wife meri bhabhi Santosh ji hai...

Now our Ishita She banned down touches her feet..say namste aunty...

Santosh surprise to see and said beta tumhe dekh ke lagta hai ki log bahar aakr bhi apne sanskar nahi bhulte...

Raman made faces...

Are tum dono pointing to Raman and Ishita yaha kyu khade ho...

Our Ishita show here her smartness...wo kya hai na aunty jee ye apke bete mere bill mujhe wapas de rhe the galti se gir gaye and Ishita takes bill from Raman hand and say thank u Raman and say hi i m Ishita...

Raman annoyingly shake her hand...

Santosh : Accha achha bahut ho gaya milna milana chalo Vishwanathan ji ghar chaliye inhe bhi surprise dena hai

Santosh dragg Vishwa and Madhavi with her and said chalo ab tum dono bhi chalo...both say ha aaye...

Raman Ishita behind them...
Raman : very smart...

Ishu : thnk u...

Raman : i change my word very evil...

Ishu : same to u...

Raman : so aap dusro ki chize chudane ke alwa kya karti hai...

Ishu : kyo aapko kya shadi karni hai mujhse...

RB : o hellooo main to kya dunia ka koi bhi mard agar uska dimag theek hai naa to wo tumse shadi na kare...so i m not interested Ishita mad faces and keep.quiet...

Raman : o hello main aap se puch rha hu miss hip hop Again quiet

Raman while walking see her that she doesnt reply he think may be she feel bad that i shd say this things to her she is my father's frnd daughter...

Raman agian accha baba sorry mujhe wo sab nhi kahna tha...sorry...

Ishita : its ok kya nam tha aapka ha Raman...its ok... (Raman thins itni jaldi naam bhi bhul gayi Baapre)

Raman : to aap jab se jawab kyo nahi de rahi thi...

Ishita : main soch rahi thi ki mujhe khush hona chahiye ya sochna chahiye ki aap mujhme interested kyo nahi hai...

Raman : kya???? Kya kya kya...

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PART 1

Edited by Dhinchank - 9 years ago

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Balasri

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice start dear... Their names double battery and hip hop girl are really funny... Now will both of them go to d same univ???

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abha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice starting...I liked miss hip hop and double battery...so so sweet...

It was amazing...Family friends and same college 😉 ab mazaa ayega...Loved sweet nok-jhok...It was intresting...

Looking forward for next...Title looks different want to know how this play...

Update soon...

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Dhinchank

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Hafs
Nice

Thnx so much

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

I like how the story is shaping up between Miss Hip Hop and Mr Double battery.. Continue soon!

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mannat

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome start

enjoy reading it

update soon

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Pravalli

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow awesome story

Lovely start

Eagerly waiting for read more

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nidhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

oh god u r back again with such an awesome story
u know what.I luv your works to the core of my heart
its just awesome.
loved it

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Dhinchank

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Posted: 10 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: softyy
oh god u r back again with such an awesome story
u know what.I luv your works to the core of my heart
its just awesome.
loved it

Hi my another story is Ongoing Named : Falling in Love with wise
Thnx so much i m glad u like my stories