A New Sajan One-Shot (gng to be deleted soon)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys just a small OS. Am not back till after december. But i miss writing on mjht... I wrote this on my phone and posting this!!




He was sad.

The woman he loved was now someone else's wife and a mom-to-be.

He remembered all the times he had spent with her. He had loved her. But she did not really love him.

Especially after the mistake he made, costing several people's lives.

He tried to amend but she refused to even look at him. For all the years he had tried to give her, this was his reward.

With a broken heart he saw her getting married. He looked at her longingly. She looked like an angel in her bridal wear. He wanted to take her in his arms but he knew the chance was gone.
He did have chances to make her his wife but everything went wrong. He wished he was in the groom's place.
He tried to look out for her. Making sure she was safe even after marriage.

She and her family faced problems and he tried to help. But everyone refused to have even friendship with him.

With a heavy heart he decided to leave the country for her. He visited her and gunjan refused to meet him. Her husband met him and politely wished him good luck. He told gunjan's husband that he had loved gunjan, still loves her and will comtinue forever. But for her happiness he decided to let go at last.

Memories rushed to him as he turned to the door.

Gazing back and around, niel oberoi at last left.
Gunjan came out of her room and hugged her husband Samrat, relieved that niel was finally gone out of her and samrat's life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How disheartening. So many views but only one like and no comments... First time for anything i write... so it is really time to stop sharing my writings on mjht even after my december comeback.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhani.cipamisa

How disheartening. So many views but only one like and no comments... First time for anything i write... so it is really time to stop sharing my writings on mjht even after my december comeback.

Awww..don't say it... readers must be busy..
U'll have to share ur stories in Dec..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I was horrified that Gunjan married anyone else..
I was heart broken to see Samrat in such a situation but ..
Thank God..
It was Neil😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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short , sweet, and really effective, nice work suhani (sorry if thats not ur real name) name😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: juhi_sajan

short , sweet, and really effective, nice work suhani (sorry if thats not ur real name) name😊



Suhani is my id here so no prob 😃 yes not my real name!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Anymore feedback? Am surprised... Mjht forums wasnt so inactive even last year!! I used to get more than just 4 likes or 3 comments!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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These days You are writing OS in Note forms. OH God this one was so confusing.. i thought it was Samrat's POV.. but at the end scene was totally changed😃
but y you are not writing any OS with Dialogues and all . y only in this format
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: gunurlove

<font color="#993333">These days You are writing OS in Note forms. OH God this one was so confusing.. i thought it was Samrat's POV.. but at the end scene was totally changed😃</font>

<font color="#993333">but y you are not writing any OS with Dialogues and all . y only in this format</font>



Because am too busy to focus on serious stuff and dialogues... Wl b bk in dec 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome ! Your scared me till the last lines .. i was thinking it was Samrat..

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