Dil to Pagal Hai pg 18 finished..sorry

hiya guys!! 😊i thought i would start a new ff and well just to let u guys kno i am not very good at hindi am only learning cause well i live in Aus and am gujju so i don't really need the hindi but i am gonna try my best and hope you all like it...

CHARACTERS

Mahi- She is smart,beautiful, caring and from a rich family. her dad got a big business called Malhotra Industrie. she is the baby of the famil, the youngest, everyone loves her and she loves everyone back. she is shy yet very confident, traditional yet still modern as well

Shubhankar ( Mahi's Dad )- He is strong, caring,loving, and open minded. He is the owner of Malhotra industries and is the head of the house. he is loved by everyone, especially his 2 daughters and his son.

Sapna (Mahi's mum)- She is beautiful, caring, loving and strong minded. she loves her family to pieces and would do anyhting for them, her only wish is to get her youngest daughter Mahi married

Raji ( mahi's older sister)- She is caring, smart, loving and always thinking of others. she just got married to her high school love Veer and lives in Dubai( she will be told in the story somtimes).

Armaan (Mahi's Elder Brother)- He is very handsome, loving and cheeky, nothing comes before his 2 sisters. He just got married and lives in Delhi where their Dad has opened a new company. He has a young a Beautiful Wife ( Dhara)

Shabd- A young business man, just graduated and works at his dad company. Handsome, caring, funny ( everything you need in a guy). He is a big flirt and always has girls around him, even though he is a flirt he still hasn't met the girls of his dreams.

Raj (Shabd older brother)- Smart, handsome, caring. has a wife and a 3 year old daughter Khushi. he works in his father's company.

Priya (Shabds Bhabhi, Raj's wife)- Caring, Loyal, smart, loving beautiful and strong. She would do anything for her family. She is like Shabds older sister who he tells everything to, even the most littlest of things.

Khushi- The baby of the sareen family, cute, adorable, cheeky,funny and 3 years old. she is beautiful just like her mum and cheek like her chachu ( Shabd), she is smart like her father and sometimes acts as though she is bigger than her age.

Krishna ( Shabds Mum)- loving caring and very loyal, she would do anything for her family and will always be there when people need her the most.

Jai (Shabds Dad)- owner of Sandrika Properties (name just made up ), he is very loyal and never forgets or breaks a promise.

Okay!! so here are the characters, tell me if you like it or not i iwll put the first part up tmw Australia time so wenever afta school...hope you guys like it

P.S--- Promo:

Pyaar kya hain?

Pyaar...Pyaar to zindagi hoti hain... aur main jaanti ho ke koi na koi meri liye bana hain, usne... bana hain hum sabko jori(pair) mei.

Likin' it😛

Update Soon👏😳

hey guys!! only a couple of comments if u don't like it say so i wont mind lol....if u guys like it will get it up in an hour or soo

okay gys i kno it hasn't been a couple of hours but i thought that if i don't post the first part then how r all of u gonna like it and etc so here i go.....

7:00 am
S: Mahi beta!!utho..saa baj gaye hain!!..tumhein office nai jana?
(Mahi runs down the stairs)
M: ma mein kabhi late ho sakti hoon?
( takes ashirwad)
S: jeeti raho...aur chal naashta kar aur office ke tayarria kar
M:hmm...ma papa kaha hain dekh nahi deta?/
S: woh aaj subha ki walk mein gya hain!!
M: papa aur walk ( laughs)
S: mujhe bhi ajeeb laga..par tumhi to humari saabse choti beti ho aur last shaadhi karneki to woh sochta honga ke main toh budha ban gaya aur log kya kahega??
M:(laughs)mum..aap sochti hain ke dad pura block ka walk last honga??......(acts like her dad)...main aapse yeh kehti hoon ke woh yeh kehega....arre sapna mera paag bahut dukhta hain..paani lehayo(bring..lol)....
SH: ehh mahi never underestimate your father...walks in
M:(ohOh)
M: um...dad can i ever underestimate you??..
SH: badmaash...
While having Breaky
SH: oh spana aaj bhul na mat hume JAI ke gradndaughter ki concert main jana hain..
S: Jai??...jai aur krishna paar hum to use kabhi saal se nahin dekha...abb kaise
SH; maine to usne aaj subha walk paar dekha..aur usne to hum sab log ko ivite kar di
S; yeh to bahut accha baat hain hum saab kitne puurana dost hain aur maine to krishna ko bahut miss karti hoon
M-- was in her room getting stuff ready to go to her first day of work--she is a intern at a hosptal...

While this is happeing this is happening in the Sareen House...
S; arre bhabhi jao na, sone do plz
P: nahin Shabd, tumhe office jana hain…chalo uth
S; uhh
Goes and gets bucket of water from the bathroom
Poor's water on him
S: ahh!!, bhabhi appne yeh kya kiya??
P; chal uth
S; app itne mean kaise hogaya?
P laughs
S; now app hasreho ( laughing)…main appse baat nain karoonga
P; shabd tum bache jaise act karare ho
While talking khushi comes in
K: chahchu aap abhi sore ho??
P; dekhiye app ki neice bhi appko uthne ke liye kehti hain!!
S: ok!! I am awake saab khush
Breakfast time
K: chachu app meri concert mein ana parega!!
S: par mujhe kuch kaam hain aaj raat
R: kya kaam? Ladkiyo ke saath dinner main
S; ummmm….
KR: bachu u can't lie to us…
S; paar ma…
J; tumhe aana parega, kyunki aaj meri bahut achi dost Shubhankar aur uski family bhi arehe ( coming)
KR; shubhankar?/ maine to use bahut saal pehle dekhiya…who Mumbai kab aya??
J; who to yaha 10 saal se hain aur mujhe bhi nahin pata… maine use aaj subha walk pe dekha aur maine Khushi beta ki concert main invite kar di
KR: yeh to bahut acchi baat hain main to Sapna ko bahut miss karti hoon
S: dad yeh Shubhankar uncle kaun hain?
J: who meri bahut purana dost hain…hum sab ek saath business shuri kit hi who apna industry ka business aur mein appni properties ke business
P; par daddyji aap ne kiya tha ke who to only 10 sal se Mumbai me hain
KR: haan who to shimla mein retha tha par usne Mumbai mein uski company ko khula aur phir yaha settle hogaya
R: after coming out of the kitchen he got a phone call
R: aap log inta khush kyoun hain??....mama shabd ne koi ladki ko shaddhi ke liye yes to nahi kiya na??
S; you wish bhai!!!
J; nahin app ko pata hain who shubhankar mera poorana dost, maine use subha dekha aur maine use or appni family ko Khushi ki concert mein invite kar diya
R; saach mein!! Main armaan se kitne saal se baat nahin kiya aur raji se bhi
KR: toh aaj raat ke liye wait karna parega… hum saab use 10 saal se nahin dekha to thoda ghanta wait karna ke liye, koi taakleef nahin hogi..

Everyone is excited to meet the family….Raj and the rest of family have only met mum dad, Raji and Armaan they don't remember Mahi and the other side don't kno Shabd either,,

i wrote the bit of shabds house at school...lol ( bad girl) not really hade done my work so guys hope u like it it's my first ff and i hope it's good plzplzplz comment

its really gud!!!!!! 👏 but plz could u put mre english in it............

Originally posted by: baby blush 8

its really gud!!!!!! 👏 but plz could u put mre english in it............

yea i really really good

i cant understand much hindi though

WOW! AMZAING! im really looking 4ward 2 it... i dont mind hindi that much, tho im not very good @ it... im VERRY excited 2 be seeing more of this =D

good job 👏 👏 👏
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hey guys i would be more than happy to put more english in it lol....it's beta for me cause i am not soo good at well u kno hindi ummm....i have to do home work how bout i put next art on later 2nite or 2mw morning...glad u guys liked it...lol......ttyl...mwa

omg ur ff is so good that i didnt want to stop reading it... i no that it is only one part so far but i cant wait for the next parts 👏 😆 😃