IshRa Separation OS 15/06/2015

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Hi Guys,

I know I have to update my IshRa Memories and Abhika love but this spoiler about leap is killing my interest in writing. I wrote this story mainly to get the leap out of my mind so that I can concentrate on writing my stories.

I cannot stand the leap whether it is rumors or they are trying to gauge audience reaction to it or it is true I don't like it so here is my version of leap and hoping against hope something like this will also happen in the show which is going to air as well.

Thanks for all you guys who are constantly spamming #Dontleapyhm #no Sharam or no Ishbu.

IshRa Separation OS

10 Years from now

Raman out of habit called Ishita where are you without opening his eyes from sleep muttering to himself pagal madrasan I told her I have an early morning meeting and she went to break the teeth instead of waking me up.

Ruhi comes into the room and shakes to wake him up. The first thing he sees his angel is grown up to be a beautiful girl with a smile which adorns her face just like her mother with her long tresses of hair .

Then reality comes crashing to him that Ishita left him 10 years back. They are unable to find her still as she has become an invisible woman. He hopes and prays to god every day that she should not be suffering much and hope she is alive.

He ruses the day he left her alone for a meeting knowing very well that she was not in a good state but the investor was snarky commenting that he was not invested in business as he is more concerned about family and did not believe that Subbu did this intentionally instead he believed he bought Subbu with his money

Flashback - Goes back 10 years

They finally came back to the house once the society people believed them that Raman did not sell his niece because Subbu accepted on national television that he was at fault.

It was their usual night routine once they finished up their chores checked on the kids came to the room and was about to sleep when Ishita got a call from the doctor. The doctor said that she needs to come in to see her as soon as possible.

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The next day even though he had a meeting with a pesky investor he did not want to leave her alone to go see the doctor. They both entered the cabin the doctor told them the bad news that she has cancer. It is difficult for her to survive for more than a year. They both got devastated hearing the news. Raman was more shocked because once again destiny is playing a cruel joke on him by snatching his love from him.

Ishita is sitting numb there she is not able to process what the doctor was telling about the available treatment and how they can postpone the inevitable for few more years if she took the treatment properly. Ishita just gets up from the chair and leaves the room in a trance. Raman rushes besides her and shakes her out of trance she just hugs him tighter to herself not wanting to let him go. He gets a call from the investor asking him why is he late for the meeting and remarks is this the way to run a starting business when Raman was about to reply Ishita nods her head and asks him to go the meeting.

Raman reluctantly agrees to go for the meeting not knowing his fate is going to change that day. Raman leaves from there getting a promise from her that she would be taking rest once she reaches home safely. Ishita calms herself down after Raman left from there; goes back to the doctor and asks about the treatment and the procedure and how it will affect the family members.

The doctor says to her that it is a difficult process and it will take a toll on the family members as they would have to see their loved ones decaying day by day.

Ishita coming out of the doctor office decides that she wouldn't put her family members through this torcher of seeing her die day by day so she makes a few calls withdrew all her money comes back home.

She packed all her things tells mummyjii and amma that she has a conference in Chennai she needs to go take their blessings informs Ruhi and Adi about it hugging them tighter to her and telling them to behave and to remember to practice all the values she taught them. Ruhi is asking her not to go but Ishita convinces her that it is for work and she would talk to them daily. When papajii asks whether she informed Raman as she could not lie she says to him that Raman knew about her condition. She hugs each and every one tightly remembering this would be the last day she would be seeing them and left from the house.

Raman came back home after finishing the meeting which took him all day because his investor had lot of question. He rushed to check on her as she did not call him once she reached home and was not picking up phone. When he came home he did not talk to anybody but went straight to their room because he wanted to take her in a hug and comfort her saying no matter what happens he will be there but he only found a letter on his side of the bed which stated that

My Ravan,

Please don't search me I don't want to give you the pain of seeing your love die in front of your eyes every day please be happy and always have a smile on your face. Don't be sad because it will hurt me more if you are sad because wherever I am in the world I will know how you feel. Don't be angry with anyone.

I love you so much Ravan Kumar. Miss you like anything, lots of hug and kisses for you.

Give Ruhi and Adi a bed night kiss and lots of love from me to them every day. You have to love them so much so that they don't remember their Ishima. You have to fill that space for them now as well.

I am sorry to leave like this but I cannot see you sad.

Love

Jhansi ki Rani

Present - Forwarded to 10 years from flashback

Raman recalls the letter vividly till today as that is the last thing that was written by his JRK and that is his first love letter from her as well. Raman comes out of his musing by a phone call when he sees the screen it flashes Adi.

Raman picks up the call and he could tell from the tone of his voice that Adi was excited. When he asked Adi why he was so excited he says to his dad I found Ishima. Raman literally drops on the floor hearing the news. He slowly asks him is this true? Adi says I saw Ishima in the cancer institute where I am doing my residency. Raman says to him find out the details about her and I will be there in a day.

Raman calls Mihir saying he needs to book a ticket to Australia as he needs to fly immediately. He doesn't tell anyone in the family as he doesn't want to give hope to them.

Once in Australia Adi takes him to Ishita house. Raman asks him to wait in the car as he wants to see his JRK alone.

Raman reaches the door and rings the bell. A servant opens the door. She tells him that her mistress is resting and cannot see anyone at this time. He says no problem I will wait after a few hours Ishita comes out of her bedroom.

She has lost all her hair, breast and weight. She looks like she is dead almost a few years back. She is shocked to see Raman at first then a slow smile spreads in her face. Raman looks at her after 10 long years and the only thing that comes to his mind how beautiful she looks when she smiles then he gets up from the sofa and crushes himself to her. Pagal madrasan where did you go how long it took me to find you? You thought you would leave me so that I don't feel sad. It just proved my theory you don't have brains in your head did you for a second think how much sadder I will be without you by my side.

Ishita hugs him back and says with a weak voice holding her ears that sorry I did not want to see the pain in your eyes seeing me wither away into nothingness but kept my fight with cancer just to look at you for one last time so saying she falls unconscious on his hands.

Present Day

Raman wakes up from his nightmare calling Ishita sweating profusely. Ishita immediately gets up and brings Raman out of the trance. He just side hugs and says to her I will not be able to live if something happens to you so please don't go away from me. Ishita comforts him by saying I will not also be able to live without you so I am not going anywhere.

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Ishita asks him what happened he tells her that he is worried about the call they got from her doctor about her blood report. She says to him there should be nothing wrong with it probably a routine of the doctor so don't worry about it.

Raman says to her promise me you want leave me and go if there is something wrong in the report. Ishita says to him promise I won't go but why such conditions. Raman says no make Ruhi promise and I know your samaj sevak attitude you always think about other suffering but never about you so make the promise. She says okay baba Ruhi promise as long as I am alive I will not go anywhere leaving you. He immediately closes her mouth saying don't say as long as your alive say you will be always with me because without you I don't know to live.

I know I also love you so much so I am not going anywhere she hugs him tighter and caress him so that he is relieved of his stress. Raman slowly lets go of his fear by her constant caress. She hugs him tighter while sleeping and he holds her possessively not wanting to let her go away from him.

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The next day they reach the doctor office. Ishita asks Raman to leave for the meeting but he refuses to leave until he finds out what is in the report. The doctor comes and says to them that her Red blood cell count is dangerously low so she is very anemic she needs to take Iron tablets and Vitamin B-complex to boost up her blood count and she needs to change her diet to include lots of Iron rich food in it. The doctor says to her if her blood count doesn't go up in a month due to all her dietary changes and medication they need to think about blood transfusion. IshRa thank the doctor and comes out. Raman straight away goes to the pharmacy and buys all the required medication. While driving back home he buys dates, pomegranate and other fruits and vegetables which are rich in Iron when Ishita says to him this too much to buy at the same time as they would get spoiled he says her don't be miser madrasan I am not buying this for you I am buying it for my jaan he smirks at her and leaves to the counter to pay for all the stuff. When they reach home he drops her off places all the groceries on the table and saunters to the room.

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Once inside the rooms he hugs her tightly and says to her don't forget to take your tablets. I will be mad if you forget this so saying he pecks her on the cheeks leave for work setting a reminder on his phone for her medication time so that he could call and remind her.

Ishita seeing him leave thinks aloud I know you are worried about me and you will forget to take your medicine on time so she sets her phone to remind her for the time to call her Ravan to take his medicine on time.

IshRa live their lives to the full extent battling, enjoying and loving each other for rest of their lives.


Please leave your comment once you finish reading this story. Positive and negative comments both are appreciated.


Thanks,

Maya

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yar I just can't find words to praise u 👏 u are just just ... Errr see I just can't make my mind what to say u made me cry smile and laugh all in one go 😆😳 ur just superb yar and ur writing s are mind blowing 😉
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my emotions while reading ur story,...
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lovely take...
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Wow Maya,
As usual u know how to calm my nerves after hearing some crap spoilers😊😊 CVs should see some of our writers' stories in this forum to know that there are many better writers in our country.


With Regards,
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if it turns out anything but this then i'll just go in denial and this will be the ending for me 😎
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Wonderful.Life is not always a bed of roses.But to think of happy endings is the most positive auto suggestions a human being can make.Even destiny can get pursuaded in the end to think the same way and who knows life will start imitating art .So lets think happy .
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Awsm. Just awsm.
I don't hv more words 2 describe this.
Lovely take of the scene dr.
Plz don't lose interest in writing. Coz it's the only way we get our ishra in our own way.
Tnx 4 pm
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This might be the first os in which i didnt wanted to read further from the part in which raman sees ishita after 10 years.

You really scared me .
Thank god it was an nightmare.

Never wanna see ishra separation even in some os

Very nicely written
Last few lines were my fav
Happy ever after wala feeling lifts my mood ...
Thanks for pm
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Amazing OS you writtened the emotions very well👏👏
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superb. nice written maya. i loved it but i m feel sad for them sepration.

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