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Part - 86

Geet leaves to Amristar with teji...

Teji is proud of his little sister and so is the whole family...

Teji wants Geet to get married for this is the right time and he even has someone in mind...one of his collegues he recently met and he has also spoken about Geet to him...

He is also very much interested and Teji has come for that matter only...

He has to get his pagal family to accept that Geet is not yet married and he has to convince them for this second marriage, for them it's like a second marriage only...

Geet's family is happy that Geet is here but they miss Maan, they wanted Maan to came along...

But Teji gets angry when someone asks Geet anything about her sasuraal, for him they never existed and she is still a little girl...wake up Teji, your sister has grown up...

Nandhini and Lucky keep asking about jiju and Geet tells stories about Maan to them...

They keep asking Geet when wouldl Maan come...

Geet's papaji also wants Geet to ask Maan to visit them...they also want to see him...

Geet speaks to Maan daily and she doesn't want him to know how desperate she is to see him...

Maan keeps asking about Teji's reactions and Geet says that he is still the same possesibe brother that Maan has met last time...

Maan has to do something about it...

Maan goes to meet Geet along with dadi...

Geet is surprised to see dadi and Maan as Maan kept it a secret...

Geet knew that Maan would come to take her but she doesn't know how he will convince Teji...

Mamaji comes running with the good news...

Mamaji: Maan Khurana aa rahe hai, Geet, Geet

Geet hears it from the kitchen and is so happy and excited...

She runs towards the entrance and teji is surprised to see her so anxious...

Teji: Geet, kya hua? Kahan bhaagthi ho?

Geet: woh aagaye, woh aagaye

Geet stutters...

Teji: kaun?

Geet: woh dadima aur Maan sir

Teji is relieved that Geet addressed him Maan sir...nothing to worry...

Teji goes to receive them...

Dadi is here for the first time...

Papaji and rajji come out too..."aayiye Dadiji, aaayiye"

They are so happy that Dadi has come to their home...

Geet goes and hugs dadi and gets her blessings...

Lucky and nandhini too get her blessings...

Meanwhile Maneet start their usual eye talks...

Teji notices Geet glancing Maan every sec and Maan to doing the same...

Dadi has got a lots of gifts for everyone specially Geet...shagun?

Rajji prepares a scrumptious lunch and Geet helps her, Maan couldn't get naughty this time with Teji around...Teji takes Maan out for a walk...

Maan keeps praising Geet's efforts as a student and also how she has managed to do well beating even her peers from delhi...he says Geet is very intelligent and she has also worked for KC for a while...

So that's why she called him Maan sir...

Maan tells him how their relationship has evolved in these 3 years and he how Geet has become a part of their family...he says that even Dadi is so attached to Geet...

Teji could see the bigger picture, he knows that something has happened between the two...

He controls his anger for he has seen the happiness that gleamed in Geet's eyes and the truth and sincererity in Maan's eyes...

After lunch dadi takes leave as she has planned to visit vaishno devi shrine...

Maan is staying back and he is here to take Geet to Delhi for her graduation day...

Teji is all confused...

Everyone treats Maan like a jammai raja ...

Driver comes with Maan's baggage and Lucky takes it to Teji's rrom, Maneet's room now...

Teji: oye Lucky, tu kya kar rahe ho?

Lucky: veerji jijaji ka samaan unka room pe rakh letha hoon, jijaji yahi teherthe

Lucky tells as if Maan frequently visited them...

Teji: teek hai

In the evening Maan tells Teji that he needs to talk about Geet...

They go to the terrace...

Maan: waise tum dekh sakthe ho, yahan sab mujhe tummare bahen ki pathi hi manthe

Teji gets angry...: toh?

Maan: par woh sirf unka soch hai, tummari behen abhi bhi sirf tummari behen hai, aur kuch nahi

Teji: ye behther hai

Maan: ek baat toh hai, chahe koi uss shadhi ko mane ya na mane, meinne kabhi uss Shadhi ko nahi mana, ye toh tum bhi jaanthe ho

Teji: phir kya problem hai?

Maan: par najaane iss theen saal mein Geet kaise meri duniya ban gayi, aur ab mein Geet ke bina ek zindagi ko soch bhi nahi saktha, ab Geet meri zaroorat bangayi hai, ab Geet se bina mera jeena namunkeen hai

Teji: ye kya mazak hai?

Maan: ye mazak nahi hai, yahi sachayi hai, aur mein kab se ye baat ko tumme bathana chahtha tha, par pehle mujhe Geet ki mann ki baat ko jaanna tha, aur ab sirf mein hi nahi tum bhi Geet ki mann ki baat ko achche se jaan chuke hai, haina?

Teji: par Geet ek bachi hai

Maan: bachi thi, abhi nahi

Teji: ye kaise ho saktha?

Maan: as you know my future is with Geet, I'm marrying Geet, this time for real, and I think you don't have any problem

Teji gets a call from the collegue...

Teji: bolo daman

Daman: mein kal aaraha hoon

Teji: koi zaroorat nahi

Daman: tummare behen se milna haina?

Teji: meinne kaha koi zaroorat nahi

Daman: kyun? Kya hua? Koi problem?

Teji: nahi sare probems katam ho gaye hai, aur meri Geet apne zindagi kudh chun gayi hai

Daman: aur tum?

Teji: Geet ki kushi hi meri kusgi hai

Maan is relieved ...

Teji smiles atlast...

Teji: toh shadhi ki tayaari karoon kya? Geet toh yahan rehna hi nahi chathi hai...

Maan: tumme fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, meinne sare tayyari kardhi, shadhi agle shukrawaar ko hai aur mein Geet ko kal hi lekhe jaatha hoon, agar tumme koi itraaz nahi ho toh

Teji: ab mujhe kya itraaz ho sakthi jab Geet ko hi koi itraaz nahi hai toh?

Maan: tum log char din pehle hi aajao, meinne sab se kehdhiya ki mein shadhi ki wachan ek bar phir lena chahtha, aur ye shadhi duniya ke liye nahi humare liye hai, duniya ke liye toh hum pathi pathni hi hai par mein Geet ko sache dil se apnana chatha, mein Geet ko yakheen dilana chahtha hoon ki ab hum ek ho gaye hai, sare duniya ke samne mein ye kehna chatha hoon ki Geet ab meir hai, Maan ki Geet

Teji: mein toh kush hoon ki tumne apna vada imandaari se nibaya hai aur mujhe viswaas hai ki aaise hi tum mere behen ke diye har vada nibaoge

Maan: ab Geet tummari behen nahi rahi, woh Maan ki ho gayi hai, ab tumme Geet ki fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi padegi, kyunki mein hoona

As they are talking Lucky comes to call Teji...

Lucky: veerji mamaji aap ko bhula rahe hai'

Teji: tu jaa mein baat kar raha hoon

Lucky: veerji samjo bhai, jijaji ko bhi neendh aayegi

Teji: chalo Maan ji, gud night

Maan takes the ladder and Teji tries to help...

Lucky stops him...rehne do veerji aap kyun takleef lethe ho, Geet haina

Lucky: Geeet Geeet jijaji bula rahe hai

Geet comes running...

She follows Maan quietly feeling shy and a little scared about Teji...

Teji smiles ...toh ye toh bahut aage badh gaye hai

Geet struggles and she skips a step when Maan holds her...

Teji too came forward but stopped seeing Maan...

Maan: sambalke Geet, tummare veerji se kehna ki agle bar seedhiyon banana ki, warna mein tumme yahan aane nahi de saktha

Teji smiles and nods his head...: ji jijaji, jaise aap chahthe

Lucky: gud night jijaji

Maan: gud night Lucky

Maan takes Geet with him and Teji is also happy...


Part87

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic Update

When I read that Teji had already spoken to his friend about getting Geet married I thought what now but Maan again proved his worth .
Teji saw both Maan and Geet's eyes and knew that Geet would only be happy with Maan and after his talk with Maan he too had to agree that this time Maan and Geet will get married because their sould want it and not the society putting pressure

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
tej having another rishta fr his sis
but he knows he have to convince
his family as they consider geet married
after maan daadi came tej observing his
sis and maan nearly and than maan talked
about their shaadi and tej fr his sis sake
accepted maan and he now very well knows
no one can keep hid sis happy as maan and
lucky called geet to go with maan and help with
ladder geet slips one step but maan their to handle
her and told hr to say his bro to make stairs otherwise
she will not sending geet here
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update. . maan convince teji .. maaneet marriage again. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 the fab update! Well written! Geet leaves wid Tejji! She tells Nandini n lucky abt Maan! Teji sees wt is happening! Maan tells him he is remarrying Geet! Teji tells Daman nt 2 come! Geet has chosen her life! her happiness is his! Maan happy! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very cute
Geet missing maan
Teji has chosen a ladka for geet
Dadi n maan to geets house
Maan confronts teji
Ware wah...he chose a groom for geet
But when maan says about geets love tej says she is kid...
Hmm teji finally accepted
N maan has planned for their marriage tooo
Nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely superb update..te way geet left left to amristar and both my maaneet missing each other was lovely..te way tej seeing some changes in his baby sister and seeing a alliance was lovely..te way my maan with his dadi cuming to amri to get his geet and open his heart was lovely. te way my maan talking with tej eventhough tej was angry but seeing my maan ki unconditional love for his geet his heart melt and agreed for was lovely touchy..te way geet was abt to fall but my maan hold and tej was happy for my maaneet was lovely..i love te update
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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part 32 - lovely part. glad that maan convinced teji about how both love each other and how he fulfilled his promise. even teji could see how much geet loves maan. achcha hua jo tejine daman ko aane se mana kar diya. they were marring again in front the world but marrying first time with all rituals with full acceptance.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 87

Maan is waiting eagerly to see what Geet does this time...

Now that teji has also given the green signal there is no way Geet can resist him...

Naughty Maan gets into action...

Geet is very happy that their marriage has been accepted by her veerji too and her family wants to see them happy in their marriage...

Maan has won evryone's eheart and including her's...

Geet thinks about the moment she first met Maan...

She was trying to jump off the window not knowing the consequences. How stupid she was...

Maan came as a savior at the right time, thanks to her babaji...

And Maan thought that she was trying to end her life...

How funny? Pehli nazar mein hi Maan pagal ho gaya?

Geet couldn't remember what made her agree for the marriahe with a stranger whom she met just a couple of minutes back...

Forget Geet, what happened to MSK then, how did he agree to marry a stupid girl whom he just saved from death?

It all looked like a dream and all that Geet remembred is that she is in safe hands, and her life is saved from that rascal...

Here she is in a totally different world, her world has turned around the moment Maan entered her life...

All her fears and insecurities vanished into thin air and from the moment she took Maan's hands Maan has never left his hold...Maan was always there for her and is still with her now ready to tighten the grip never to leave her...

Though they didn't take those vows seriously, Maneet have lived these three years like a couple standing with each other and sharing their joys and sorrows, they has not been a moment when they felt that they are alone for they liked it or not they had been tied by some divine bond, that they didn't want to break...

Over the years they have managed to turn their unfortunate tie up under pressure into a fond lasting relationship...

Both of them took it as a challenge to defeat their ill fate and together they have suceeded in reclaimimg their lives back...

But this Maan is yet to say "ILU"...haina?

Geet considers that as the ultimate way of confession and she is only waiting for that before she could totally surrender herself to Maan...

For her that's the only way to convince her that Maan is also ready for a total surrender...duniya mein log din mein 100 bar ILU kehthe rehthe par ye Maan toh ek bar kehne ke liye itna kyun soch raha hai?

Par MSK ek bar kehtha toh dubara kehne ki zaroorat hi nahi padtha, Maan ki ek baat hazaroon promises ke barabar hai, ye toh Geet bhi jaanthi hai...

Maan keeps staring Geet...

Geet: aap aaise hi raat bar gurthe rahoge?

Maan: kyun? Tum kya chahathi ho? mein kya karoon?

Maan gets closer...

Geet: woh aap ko kuch nahi karna haia, bas kehna hai

Maan: kya Geet?

Geet: wahi jo mein sunna chahthi aur aap kehna chahthe

Maan: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Geet gets angry...: kuch nahi hai? toh sojao, gud night

Maan: par Geet, iss bar kaun andar kaun bahar?

Maan reminds her of the last time that she made Maan sleep outside...

Geet: mein toh andar so rahi hoon, aap ko mere saath ek hi kamre mein rehne se dar lagtha toh aap bahar jaa sakthe

Geet takes the pillow and bed- sheet and hands it over to Maan...

Maan: mujhe koi dar nahi hai Geet, par lagtha hai ki kissi ko toh mere saath hone se dar lagtha

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Geet replaces them on the bed...

Geet goes and sits in one corner of the bed and Maan comes and sits beside her...

Geet is all shy and she is avoiding looking into his thirsty eyes...

Maan makes her face him...

Maan: kya hua Geet? tum itna chup kaise?

Geet is still speechless...

Maan looks into her eyes with a lot of expectations...

He gently brushes her hair aside and drowns in her beauty...

Maan: aaj toh meri Mishty chandhini ki chand ke tarah chamak rahi hai

Geet blushes...

Maan: itna mat sharmaoo Geet, phir toh mein apne aap ko shadhi tak bhi nahi rokh patha

Geet is surprised...shadhi?

Maan: haan Geet, kya mujhse shadhi karoge? Dubara?

Geet goes and hugs him...

Maan: bathao Geet, kya mujhse shadhi karogi?

Geet: ye kaise sawaal hai? Geet toh pehle hi Maan ki ban chuki hai, Maan ki Geet, aur mein bhi yahi chahathi ki hummare mann ki baat ko hum iss duniya ko bathade takki hum khulkke pyaar kar sake, haina?

Maan: kyun Geet? ab kya hum chup chup ke pyaar karthe?

Geet: aap toh MSK ho, jo chaho jaise chaho karthe ho, besharam hokke sab ke samne flirt karthe ho, par mein toh ek 18 saal ki masoom ladhki hoon, mere liye toh ye bahut mushkil hotha hai

Maan: toh shadhi ke baat tummari bhi besharam ho jaogi?

Geet: aap ke saath rehthi toh kya patha mein bhi aap ke jaise besharam ho jaoongi

Maan: achcha?

Maan pulls her into a hug...

Geet also hugs him back...

Maan kisses her forehead...gud night Geet

They go to bed holding their hands together...

And they slept peacefully with colorful dreams of their second marriage...

Next day they leave for Delhi and since dadi is not there Maan continues to be naughty making it more and more hard for Geet to keep him in check...

It's her graduation day and Maan himself goes to wake her up...

Geet is still asleep when she heard Maan's voice instead of her usual alarm...: Geet, utjao, jaldhi

Geet opens her eyes and finds Maan on her bed...

Geet: aap yahi sogaye?

Maan: kya? Geet tumne kal raat mujhe ek chor ki tarah yahan se bhagaya tha aur abhi poochthi ho ki mein yahi so gaya tha?

Geet: phir aap yahan kaise?

Maan: Geet, aaj tummari graduation haina? Chalo mein tumme college lekhe jaatha hoon

Geet looks at the time and it's only 4 am, it's Maan's wake up time but not Geet's...

Geet: itne subhe subhe utke mein kya karoongi?

Geet lies back and covers herself fully...

Maan pulls her duvet back...: Geet, jaldhi tayaar hojao, warna late ho jaogi

Geet: Maan sir, mujhe sone do na...function toh 10 bajhe hai

Maan: Geet, aaj tummare liye kitna important din hai, aaj kaise tum so sakthi?

Actually Maan is more excited than Geet, he can't wait to see his Mishty receiving her degree...

Maan knows how much did Geet struggle initially to cope up with her classes, the medium of study being alien to her, English...but now she has mastered that alien language very well and she has also learnt a lot from Maan...

Geet had to sacrifice her sleep atleast for Maan...

Maan gets ready fast and waits for Geet, Geet is still in OH...

Maan goes to call her and he is growing impatient...

How long would this girl take? A life time?

Geet is almost ready and she looks charming and splendid in her Green salwar...

Maan couldn't complain for his angel he can wait for a lifetime...

Maan: you look pretty Geet, so we are ready to rock...

Geet: oh ho, wait a minute

Geet looks at Maan, he is coming to her college, it's her place just like KC is for MSK,and Maan is going to be Geet's guest for today and she wants him to look good to match her...

Maan looks hawt in his office attire as usual, but Geet thinks that he looks more formal for the day and he should try out one of his black shirts with the blue jeans which is Geet's favourite...

Maan wonders what's bothering Geet as she is looking at him and giving that weird look...

Maan: Geet, come on, let's go

Geet: wait a minute, she takes him to the mirror

Maan: what?

Geet: haan pls, look at you

Maan: am I getting smarter and smarter?

Geet: of course Maan sir

Geet stresses on the word "Sir"

Maan: Geet, what's wrong? MSK is looking cool today, haina?

Geet: cool? Yeah cool like a cucumber

Maan: what?

Geet: sir, do you have a important meeting today?

Maan: Geet, you know I've an appointment with my GF today

Geet: par sir, I don't think you can go with her like this

Maan: what do you mean? What's your problem now, come on Geet, every girl would love to be my GF

Geet: but sir, you look more like her boss than her BF

Maan takes another look...: is that so?

Geet: come on sir, I'll chose the perfect suit for you

Geet holds Maans hand and takes him with her...

She selects her favourite black shirt and tight jeans...

Maan changes and is surprised that he looks really cool now...

Spending all his time at KC has made him boring and he needs a wardrobe change over...haina?

Geet: now you can come with me

Maan must appreciate Geet's choice, haina?

So when it comes to your BF all the girls are the same, including Geet...

Maan makes BF for them...Geet enjoys the delicious poha that Maan made, one of his dadaji's authentic recipe...

Part88

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
maaneet ki second marriage ;)
Maan ismore excited than geet :D
loved it! !

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