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SushSathisha thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Ha ha ha ha:-D:-D:-D:-D
i totally enjoyed this update:-):-D;-):-D:-):-P:-P:-O

ishita already nervous to attend exam...uper sai yeh CHAVANPRASH BOURNVITA KA GHAR AGAYA:-D:-D:-D:-D

PUTTAR TUM DHONO KA PRODUCT DIFFERENT HAI...AUR COMPANY BE..:-D:-D:-DBUT BOTH ARE RELATED TO GROW UP...

GROW UP THE RELATIONSHIP:-):-P:-P:-P


YEH amma tum kya bol rahiho..tumari beti ka secrets sab bathavogi kya?

GOD Be Thagaye hogi ishita ke maha pooja Dekh kar:-P:-P:-P:-P:-P

at last both went to college..raman already talked with principle...:-O:-O:-O

:-O:-O:-Oishita crumpled to the floor:-P:-O:-P
when everything else fails,just faint...yeh plan tho acha hai...MAI BE TRY KARUNGA...

CRACKING LINES:
SHUT UP AND GET INSIDE..GUINEA PIG:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D
BLOODY CHAVANPRASH KA DABBA:-D:-D:-D:-P:-P:-P

thanks for pm sush:-)
but chotu update..and late update..B-)


welcome baby!!!
meri jaan logi kya late update or chotu hone ke liye!!!
chal compensation im updating now a long one.. look at it!!1
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Waise toh you are fighting with me calling me ugly and evil.. Toh evil comments Dena Banta hai.
But I liked the updatetoh will say the truth..
I love it.
Bloody chavanprash ka dabba- omg lol

Ishita's longtiya yaar'- ROTFL

She is a drama queen
I love that milk me coffee add karna... Cho cute


hai rabba alwaar uthaye for ladayi ..
loe u too baby!!!!! wallah haha
ty yaar...
SushSathisha thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Part 14

Aaj, Kal, Parso..

(Flashback continues...)

Before Ishita knew what hit her, Raman effortlessly picked her up in his arms. You cant walk. You poor thing, no problem... ill carry you.' His voice was more than loud.

The girls behind drooled, gushing. Ooh, lucky Ishita. You can carry me too, strong man! Watch your back or we will!' boomed the loud catcalls and whistles.

Ishita cowered, humiliated. I'll kill you Raman! Put me DOWN!' her order sounded more like a plea.

Apologies then!' Raman ordered, thoroughly enjoying her squirming form in his arms.

Ishita measure the distance to the college gate, too damn far. They would pass the staff room and canteen.

Fine! Sorry, now put me down!' through gritted teeth,' she begged.

Say please!'

Please!' she bit out tightly.

Sorry Ishita, you are too heavy. You will have to walk!' Raman said, putting her down. He purposely flexed his arms drawing attention to his buffed upper body. Around the, the puddles of spit, rapidly, increased in numbers and sizes.

All bloody baboons! Missed the train to evolution!' Ishita cursed. Fuming, she strode towards his car and waited. After waving several times to his tittering audience, Raman got in and they drove away from the college.

Ishita immediately vented, I can't believe you are such an egocentric, cocky, arrogant"

Don't forget, I was here to help you and you know I did,' Raman said, his laughing eyes surveying the pretty spitfire. Angry dark eyes, errant strands of hair fluttering against flushed cheeks were captivating. The fact that she is so clueless of her own look makes her even more alluring, Raman thought. He put his eyes back on the road.

Thank you.' A few minutes later, Ishita said, gruffly.

You're welcome.'

It dawned on Ishita what she had almost pulled off. Oh my goddd! Can you believe it? I was actually able to speak in front of a crowd for the first time ever!' her voice held awe.

Well that wasn't really speaking it; it was more like headless chicken dance, if you ask me.' Raman poker faced, offered his opinion.

Ishita was simply too, happy to be offended. Raman seriously, thank you. I could not have done it without you. I owe you big!' mindlessly, she patted his hand on the wheel.

The car had stopped on a red light. Raman grasped her hand and leaned in, his face almost touching hers. Ishita's eyes startled, widened.

Then I guess its time to pay up,' he murmured, his fingers stroked the soft skin on the insides her wrist.

Even though she desperately wanted to, Ishita could not looked away. For a few seconds, they stared at each other. A jarring horn distracted them. Raman straightened putting the car back into drive

Ishita blinked several times turning to stare at the passing vehicles with glazed eyes. What would have happened had we not been interrupted, she wondered, timidly. She touched her wrist, which she had never imagined to be so sensitive to touch.

You could begin by dishing digits?' raman said, clearing his throat.

Digits, whats that?' Ishita asked, still not all quite there.

Digits as in phone numbers of some of girls in your college, I have the names.'

Ishita turned to look at him; Raman was now wearing sunglasses. She saw herself reflected in them. How does he see me? The thought popped in her head to be instantly shooed away.

Sure do tell?' she prompted.

Raman, staring ahead, rattled off several names and descriptions. Ishita's not my type. Remember CNN, ESPN! Lassi in a wine glass! Raman kept reinforcing the thoughts, fighting hard for self-control, which had almost slipped when she had touched him.

Her entire sheltered life, Ishita had never come across anyone like Raman - self-assured, intelligent, good looking and so polygamous. Ishita could not refrain herself, Wow, twenty numbers! Why are you so much into girls?'

I don't think my parents would approve if I was into boys,' Raman bantered.

C'mon, you know what I mean?' Ishita's face held equal exasperation and curiosity.

What's the harm? I don't force or lead anybody on. The other person is very clear about my honorouble intentions or lack of them,' Raman replied.

Virtually everyone has a past, which usually features one or two or maybe five people. But you have had and are with so many. Raman, you could start your own country!'

One or two or max five! Where do you get these numbers from.. BSE?' and don't believe everything you hear and read. Most of it is nonsense.'

really?'

Yes really! Anyway, since when did you care?' Raman countered.

I just don't understand all this numerous or simultaneous affairs and relationships. You probably don't even believe in marriages either?'

Why do you want to know?' Raman teased, grinning boyishly, as he glanced at Ishita.

Because we are still minutes away from home. What, are you ashamed to talk about it?' Ishita provoked.

After keeping quite for several of minutes, Raman finally said, I believe in marriages and feel those should happen only once... and with the person you are very sure of. But I don't believe in love!'

You don't believe in love!' Ishita face held absolute shock.

At her expression, Raman smirked. Yup I don't. however, I strongly and completely believe in lust, sugar coated as attraction, and deep friendship between a man and a woman. So, the day I find someone whom I am deeply attracted to and have a lot in common with, I just might settle down,' Raman replied, articulating some very private thoughts for the first time.

Raman usually kept his reasons and rationale to himself. In his arrogance, he had decided that no one was cool' enough to be let loose in his mind. So far his non-conforming and bohemian ideas, had lead to some nasty and some quite amazing encounters.

Hmmm... well to find out or form a deep friendship, you have to be with a person... one person, for longer than a few months,' Ishita said.

Raman disagreed. Who says? If and when it has to happen it can happen in day, weeks.'

Ishita fired next. You believe in destiny?' as mean cant talk enough about sports and imagined conquests, women inherently trust their lives to animals (zodiac signs), and cards which they cant even read themselves.

Nope, but I believe in opportunity. I think every being gets an opportunity or a choice at every crucial step of their life. To get the right things, you have to do the right things.' Raman was taken back at his own words. Damn! I sound freakishly similar to the old man, he thought. Near this girl, things were just tripping out of his mouth.

Ishita comically, scratching her forehead, asked, Are we still talking about the same thing?'

Raman chuckled; his eyes and dimples crinkling, I don't think so. Can we ever be on the same page?'

Heavy fundas dude!' Ishita mocked.

Raman amicably, mocked her right back. Tell me about it. What about you? You must be a total believer in love. Daniel steel, Linda Goodman and all that!'

I believe in love but the kind which doesn't exist,' replied Ishita, only to become extremely self-conscious. I had opened my mouth to take a pot-shot at Raman, why did I say that instead, she wondered.

Raman gave her a muddled look. What does that mean?'

Nothing... really nothing!'

C'mon, dish ASAP. I told you stuff dint i?'

Shaking her head, Ishita vehemently muttered, No ways!'

Fine, this car is going nowhere!' Raman, abruptly, brought the Mercedes to a complete standstill, bang in the middle of the rushing traffic. Thankfully, they were not rear ended; however, loud horn and voices blared.

Drive Raman! Everyone's glaring at us,' Ishita hollered. In the overwhelming cacophony of horns, he tossed her an imperious challenging look.

Ishita gave in. Fine, aaj, kal... parso!' she, lobbed the three random words, loudly between them.

What?' Raman asked, baffled.

Ill elaborate. Please drive first.'

When they had driven some distance away, Ishita heavily confessed, I believe in unconditional, absolute love. The kind, that lasts you a lifetime, even if the person does not. Today, tomorrow, dayafter! Aaj, kal, parso!' Ishita kept her face aaway from him. The revelation was too personal. Ishita would rather have someone catch her with minimal clothes.

Wow! You are even crazier than you look. Where did you pick that line? From a fortune cookie or the ass of a truck?' Raman exclaimed.

Ishita flashed him a quick wry smile. You wont understand,' she said.

Raman kept glancing back at ishita's grave face. He finally asked, You actually believe in that?'

Afraid so!' Ishita voice held no shimmy or shake of uncertainty.

Have you ever been in that kind of relationship?' Raman inquired, unconsciously tensing.

Nope.'

Raman warned, Be careful Ishita. Don't fall in love with a wrong person or you'll die of a broken heart.'

Ishita agreed, I agree. That's why I have choosen arranged marriage for myself... take away please.'

Silence stretched between them. Either the four-door swanky luxury car suddenly compresed or Ishita and Raman felt an inordinate closeness to each other.

Raman increased the cooling. That's a great idea. Arranged marriage might just work for me, too, with someone of similar tastes, and a background. Its probably simpler than finding that person on your own,' he voiced lightly.

All the best! We're home,' Ishita said, flummoxed the hurt engulfing her at Raman's words, someone with similar tastes and background.'

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Ishita, are you there? Earth to mars, earth to mars! Psst he's gone, come out woman!' Shagun's urgent summons jolted Ishita out of her reverie.

Emerging out of the stall, Ishita launched a full-scale hug on her friend. Thank you Shags! You majorly saved my backside just now.'

No sweat! But what a jerk Raman is; hitting below the belt like that?' Shagun's tone and face, both equally stormy.

Ishita splased some cold water on her sweaty face.

Anyway what were you doing in there, for so long?' Shagun asked, gesturing at the stall. Building a house?'

Nope, just remembering one. The words darted in Ishita's head, yet she flippantly replied, shitting bricks honey, shitting bricks!'

*****************

Precap - I hope Raman isn't playing us?' Shagun voiced a thinking crease between her eyes.

what do you mean?' Ishita questioned.

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janani_divan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_avina



welcome baby!!!
meri jaan logi kya late update or chotu hone ke liye!!!
chal compensation im updating now a long one.. look at it!!1


im waiting,but i want u to active your thread pls if possible..bcoz it is completly different and brilliant concept.i loved it more.u regularly active this thread...readers caught it easily
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Posted: 10 years ago
First thanks for soonish and long update sush:-)

day by day past is revealing little bit...:-)
I loved it...awesome update..

Y raman ask ishita to apologise him?:->:->
Thanks is ok...:-)

U R too HEAVY ,U WILL HAVE TO WALK:-D:-D:-D:-D
puttar aadat daloo future mai kaam ayegi...PRACTISE MAKES MAN PERFECT;-);-)

ALL BLOODY BABOONS!MISSED D TRAIN TO EVOLUTION:-D:-D:-D:->:->:-O:-O
ha ha ha

raman say bye to his tittering audience:-D

CRACKING LINES:
That wants really speaking it,it was more like headless chicken dance..:-D:-D:-D:-Dkya comment marah..;-)

ishita in very good mood to thanks raman..she is blabbering ..I OWE U BIG...katam sab kuch katam U owed to him...
Puttar dont want to miss this opportunity...and madam kudh ready to pay him;-);-);-);-);-)

RAMAN GIVE A GREAT DESCRIPTION ABOUT GIRLS...BETA CHAVANPRASH KA ASAR HAI TUM PAR..;-);-);-)

HE described ishita as a LASSI AND HE IS A WINE GLASS...

WOW UNIQUE JODI..LASSI IN A WINE GLASS;-);-);-)

the way he is describing about girls...RAMAN COULD START HIS OWN COUNTRY...

LOVE AND MARRIAGE:

oho raman believes in marriaga and feel those should happen only ONCE:->%-)%-):-O:-OAND WITH THE PERSON U ARE VERY SURE OF...BUT HE DNT BELIEVE IN LOVE

Y?IS HE HAS ANY BITTER PAST ABOUT LOVE?

oye he believes in LUST ,sugar coated attraction,and deep friendship B/W A MAN & A WOMEN;-);-);-)
AT LEAST HE BELIEVE IN FRIENDSHIP...

Raman believes in opportunity or a choice and he not believe in desity

MADAM THO PURA OPPOSITE HAI...DNT WORRY OPPOSITE POLES ATTRACTS MORE..:-):-P;-);-)

ishita open up her feelings,she believe in unconditional LOVE & ABSOLUTE LOVE:-)

she feels this kind of love doesn't exist...

Wow ishra open up their feelings about LOVE,MARRIAGE,LUST,FRIENDSHIP;-);-);-)

PUTTAR FREE ADVICE DIYA ISHITA KO...

be careful and don't fall in LOVE WITH A WRONG PERSON OR U 'LL DIE OF A BROKEN HEART...

KYA MATLAB HAI BHAI TUMARA..U R THE RIGHT PERSON TO LOVE;-);-);-)

ishita already fixed and choose arragnge marriage..:-P:-P:-P:-P

ishita remembered her past...shagy brought her to reality:-P:-P:->:->

P.S. I LOVE TORTURE KUMAR MORE

thanks for pm dear:-)
Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
SushSathisha thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: janani_divan

im waiting,but i want u to active your thread pls if possible..bcoz it is completly different and brilliant concept.i loved it more.u regularly active this thread...readers caught it easily


i will try dear.. you can take up the job for me 😉 and i reward u with an update 😆
just kidding..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...Loved their conversation...
raman bhalla is attracted...
loved fb parts...
Continue soon...

P.s. no one replied to me in my previous comment😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow so lovely n I love fb too thx for pm too raman is atract to her too he hold her wow
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

Amazing update...Loved their conversation...

raman bhalla is attracted...
loved fb parts...
Continue soon...

P.s. no one replied to me in my previous comment😭


abha dear dont worry..i felt same dats y i pointed out this to sush..she will come back..:-)
we readers also thodasa discuss karega tho ..she feel good and give regular updates:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: janani_divan


abha dear dont worry..i felt same dats y i pointed out this to sush..she will come back..:-)
we readers also thodasa discuss karega tho ..she feel good and give regular updates:-)


story is amazing yar and very different...i mean such a good sense of humour of ishita...typical aaj ki types girl i can see in ishita, she is witty and cool...

i still cant say about Raman...will wait to explore his character...

Loved this story sush...we want regular updates...

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