Song drabble #1 Teri Jhuki Nazar *updated*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey frnds...
Since our graveyard oops i mean our forum is dead not like dead body but skeleton 😆 so we...me and aalu (zayalove) decided to write something for u all... and guess what...my 2 dearus are joining us too... our chudails our bawdi queens... tani (harshadcrazyfan) and rida (theinstigator)...welcome chudails... *hugs*
plzzz do read and comment if u like it...
bcuz we both will write each drabble...it's drabble and collab too but we will write each drabble in separate threads to complete mmission #1000...
Will be updating in few min...

Hania...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Go for it hanii
Jaldi post kar de

Im waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Teri jhuki nazar



Zain...

I stretches my arms as i stepped out from airport..
"Aaahhh india..."
I move forward cutting the crowd passing from some families arrived to recieved their loved ones and some of them had...
"Phoolon ki mala..yar seriously..aesa lag raha h plan m in logon ka nikkah hua h" i chuckled.
And there i saw my darling,my love,my...
"DAD..."i shouted from far to receive his attention.
Dad smiled and waved too..

We got into car and drivr starts the car while me and dad engrossed in our conversation our car suddenely screethed..
"Allah khar kary"dad said.
"Kia hua bhai gari koi kia hua"i asked to driver.
"Saab bata ni pehly aesa kabhi ni hua.ap thora wait karen m dekhta hun"he said with politeness.
"Kitni dair lagy gi"i asked aeger to meet my mom.
"Sir 15 sy 20 min" he said.
"What!!!"i shouted.
"I can't wait that much dad mjhy mom s milna h jaldi" i said dramatically.
"To thek h mian ye lo indian currency or bus pakar lo 5 min better than 20 hmmm??" Dad said handing me money.
"Fine...i'll use it as a new adventure" i said smiling and left the car.

As i reached one place looks like something distributing here for free...lifting my head up i read BUS STOP on one pole..
"Ooh so that's the bus stop" i said smiling.
And then i too joined those crowd waiting for bus..
"Kitna crowded h...but zain beta kuch paany k lye kuch khona parta h"i said wiping sweet from my forehead..and brushed my fingers in my hair..when i was lowering my arm it hits someone and...
DHABBB...
I heard a loud noise of falling some pile of clothes and the crowed started glaring at me...i turned and saw...her...

Her face was covered with her brown silky hair with little curls but i can see her wearing a tight white kurti and jeans her red bag's whicj she wearing on side was on her lape ,her rainbow colored stol was covering her neck completely. she was massaging her elbow...
"God aik nazar m itna scan kr lia main n usy"i thought.
Then realisation hit me that i was the reason her bump on the floor instead of her pink pumps...
"Ummm i m sorry...here"i said extanding my hand.
And then she reveal the curtains from heavens window...i mean...ughhh wbat m i doing???...oky...her face.
But her eyes were still down like she don't wanted to see me..she stands completely ignoring me.. like i was a transparent boy here...
She starightened her dress and adjusted her hair...but what i wanted to look at the colour of her eyes.she was lowering her gaze...may be bcuz of shyness bcuz she didn't shouted on me nor said me those ugly words...
I was still scanning her features her long lashes tiny nose a til at het lifted cheeks when i heard a sound like beast started whistling...
"Thank god" i heard her sweet voice before she move towards bus.
I followed her too..
the bus was filled like we r cotton stuffed in pillow and i realised i can't breathe...when i spotted her standing next to me...
"Listen m sorry i didn't knew u..."and my voice disolved in the air as she lifted her gaze to me...she looked at me for a milosecond but my heart stoped at the beauty of her eyes like they were an ocean i want to sink in them...those brow eyes sooo beautiful...
And then she again lowered them i realised that way her lashes looks more longer...

"It's oky" she said.
I smiled but worried too...bcuz i don't know she ignored my mistake or ME...

Edited by butterfly20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Taliya taliya taliyan
Wah wah kiya likha hai tune meri jaan ..
Osum

Han han pata hai ab meri bari

Ok i m out likhne ja rahi hoon

Wait for me darling

Teri aalu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chudails Go for it !! I am reading !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb... mindblowing haniya.. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zayalove

Taliya taliya taliyan

Wah wah kiya likha hai tune meri jaan ..
Osum

Han han pata hai ab meri bari

Ok i m out likhne ja rahi hoon

Wait for me darling

Teri aalu


Mehrbani...nawazish karam aapka...hehe
Love u my aalu.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

chudails Go for it !! I am reading !!


Kab ka update bhi kar dia...
jaldi parh...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariya98

Superb... mindblowing haniya.. 👏


Thanks fariya
.
Nd thanks for comment this means alot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Are wah Hani! Great work dear!


Btw, mind if i join in?


You're great at it, no doubt.
And I'm gonna go check out Alina's now.
Catch ya later.


PM kr deti behan! ;)


-Tani.

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