MG SS : LONGING FOR LOVE. UPDATES ARE ON IF ON THIS THREAD|| JUNE 17 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
eagerly waiting for update dear ...
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Geet has evoked emotions in maan which he could not hold anymore. He felt protective towards her don't know why but he just had to. He also felt guilty for her condition. He is also a attracted to her. Waiting to see what happens.
Good update
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Awesome updates!!!Maan is affected veryvmuch by Geet...he is searching her everywhere..finally he founf her covered by snow...he save her...he is feeling guilty to seeing her in this frozen state...He is taking care of her...its so lovely...He is also dressing her wounds...he is attracting towards her...he can't leave her away from him...Loved it so much...waiting for the next update...
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~LONGING FOR LOVE~





PART 8




It had been only few hours when maan found something burning and he immediately opened his eyes and saw that the girl geet was snuggling close to him.. Her hands were holding him close , his hands were on her waist and they were in the most comfortable position.. Her cheeks brushing his palms and maan felt her body really hot... He touched her forehead and checked her pulse , her pulse was low and fever was high.. He immediately went out of the bed and checked the weather.. .there was snow all over but the calmness was spread across..

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It was two hours that she was admitted in the hospital and maan was there.. For some certain reasons he was not able to leave her alone.. She was diagnosed with pneumonia and doctors were treating her...

Geet was unconscious when she was taken to the hospital but when maan had taken her to the hospital she had little conscious and remember him taking her in her arms like a delicate feather , she could feel herself heavy with the feel of warmers and sweaters that he had put on her and in her state she was lost in the beautiful phase of her life. Unaware of what she was think and the reality in front of her was totally different
There was a vast difference in now ..



Pakdo pakdo... She smiled and called him again.. Her eyes were twinkling with the mischief that was playing in her eyes.. She was the sweetest.. , his baby sweetheart and he loved her a lot.. A lot.. Well he cannot define what is love , but that strong feeling that he was having for baby who was right now playing with their pet toffee and chasing toffee telling him to catch too while she will catch her sweetest toffee..

You will fall down geet.. Ruko.. He shouted , they were in the garden of their farm.. Correct it was his farm.. Singhania's and his sweetheart was There like always wanted to play with him.. All the while.. He ran behind her.. But she was too fast.. She was sixteen and was very energtic and he was having a hard time with her.. She was too innocent ..
She at once tripped and he was there as always immediately held her in his arms.. He pulles her in him and she giggled and wrapped her arms around him.. They were in the garden and she could hear her toffeee barking.. While she was all busy with her love.. .

Arjun...

But arjun was too angry that was unlike him and he was a bit scared too.. What of she would have fallen.. And as a consequence he yelled at her..

you find this funny ha.. then let me tell you this is not funny.. geet pagal ho gai ho.. damn you scared the hell out of me..
never do this again.. never do this again sweetheart.. She could hear his heart pounding very fast as he engulfed her in himself and she giggled feeling his hold.. as she tiptoed and kiss his chin..

I LOVE YOU...

she whispered.. and he caged her in his protective arms..

She was too innocent.. And then she looked at him.. He was in black denims and white t shirt and looking really handsome.. She wanted to stay in his arms but arjun's enemy and Geet's toffee barked..

She immediately left Arjun and kneeled down.. He always liked whenever she wore Indian outfit it enhances her beauty and no doubt she looked damn sexy..

He was there in the garden when he was supposed to leave for the university but
guess what he will again miss it coz his little sweetheart.. Though she always says she loves him but he didn't even said once..

She was his little angel , and was in her high school but she was all ignorant about his studies as he was having university but she was too lost and he didn't mind..

She was his cutest little thing and right now she busy cursing him...

Geet : toffee Arjun didn't gave you the breakfast.. Wait i will scold him.. She took the little pup in her arms and came towards Arjun who was now standing away..

Toffee made a cute face like showing geet that she was right.. Arjun didn't cared but Arjun was not deterred he made a face..

Arjun : keep your toffee away from me..

He took two steps back and her toffee barked..

Bhaw.. Bhaw..

Geet laughed giving Arjun a devil's look..

Geet : don't scare my toffeee.. You forget her breakfast , you forgot your promise.. I am not talking to you.. Geet is angry on Arjun..

She suddenly turned and took long steps moving away from Arjun leaving him to scratch his head.. This was almost repeated daily..

She was the daughter of his father's best friend and himself and geet were childhood buddies and both were born and brought up in London and Arjun was the only heir of the singhania who were well known diamond merchants while geet , who was the daughter of owner of mohindar handa , a well known name of textile industry..

Arjun shouted from behind..

Arjun : geetu darling listen to me..

He was twenty one and she was sixteen when they had the fight over toffee and Arjun hated it..

She didn't talk to him for two days and those days were hell for arjun..



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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic Update

So now Geet is in hospital ill and Maan is still there
in past Geet enjoying with Arjun and Toffee was great

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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet is having high fever.
Maan took her to hospital ND admitted her.
Geet remember her past.
Looks lyk Arjun also loved Geet.
Geet is lyk a small baby.
Geet tells him ilu but Arjun didn't.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Geet is ill n maan took her to d hospital...n she remembers her past...
Eagerly waiting to read next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update... geet is admitted in hospital by maan and diagnosed with pneumonia... geet past is clear, she is in love with arjun... both are childhood friends and arjun care for her... she is innocent and nave... why did he leave her when she loves him... and why geet mistook maan as arjun...

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