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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Nice concept...loved chap1...update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Good start
Update soon first chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Amazing start :)
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Good start.update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
nice concept. great start. but chapter 1 is too short. CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
VEry nyc concept
Would love to read it
UPdt soon n PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Chapter 2

In London


A girl was peacefully sleeping on her bed when she felt someone poking her. She opened her eyes to see the person it was her little brother who was her world. He was her step brother but as their parents died he was her responsibility. Her dad married a lady who was 10 years younger to him and she had a 5 years old son. But she loved him a lot. He was mute from birth but she never saw this as his weakness.

He always gave her strength to go through difficult situations.

(The girl was none other than our princess Taani)

Her thoughts were broken by a soft sound.

V: Mmm

T: Aayush baby neend achi aayi?

Aayush nodded in response.

T: chalo ab tum ready ho jao mai tumhare liye tumhari favourite noodles banati hu.

Aayush's face lights up hearing the word noodles.

As Aayush goes to the get freshened up Taani heads to the kitchen to prepare maggi for the two of them.

While she was cooking she hears a beep from her phone. She seeing the name of the person who messaged her. She opens the message. It read "Hi".

She replies back.

T: Hey Rey! Wassup?

(Yes guys you guessed it right Taarey are online friends)

R: nothing just submitted my project. You say? How's Aayush doing?

T: Aayush's good. And about me, I am just searching for a job. Ab Aayush bada ho raha hai uske expenses bhi badh rahe hai.

R: Tans tum meri baat kyu nahi maan rahi Tum apne Mumbai kyu nahi shift ho jaati? Yahaan mai bhi tumhe help kar sakta hu.

T: but Rey mai waha rahungi kaha? Dad ki death se pehle humare Mumbai ka ghar bech diya tha.

When Taani doesn't receive a reply for long she becomes sad. But after sometime her cell beeps again.

R: sorry Rohan ne mera phone le liya tha. And tum mere ghar reh sakti ho till you don't find a a job and a house.

T: par mai tumhare ghar kese?

R: to kya hua wese bhi mere ghar pe sirf mai aur Rohan hote hai. Dad aur stepmom mostly travel karte rehte hai for business ke wajah se.

T: ok I'll think about it chalo I'll talk to you later. Aayush ko breakfast serve karna hai.

R: ok mai ghar pohochke tumhe skype karta hu.

T: ok TTYL.

They end their convo and Taani turn to see Aayush with his hands on his hips with an angry pout.

T: kya hua Aayush? Gussa kyu ho?

He points towards his phone and indicates her that she didn't let him talk to Rey. He always spoke to Rey on skype and sometimes via messages. He and Rey had come very close to each other.

(Now don't ask how meri story me kuch bhi ho sakta hai)


At night

Rey calls Taani on skype. When they see each other. They feel butterflies in their stomach. They want to voice out their feelings to each other but are not able to.

They talk on some time on skype and bid goodbye to each other.


With Taani

I love you Rey. And aaj muje uski aankhon me muje pyaar dikha. Hey bhagwan please jo mai soch rahi hu waisa hi ho. And don't worry Rey mai tumhare birthday pe tumhare saath houngi.


In Mumbai


With Rey

I love you Taani. I wish tum mere saath mere birthday par hoti. Kaash mai tumhe bata pata ki mai tumse kitna pyaar karta hu.

Thinking about each other they drift off to sleep.

Precap: Maybe Taarey meet.

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Plzz do like and comment


Edited by TR_MN_KR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
amazing update
aayush and rey close *hmmm good good*
Taani and rey kab close honge?
update soon
pm me
Edited by pd786 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nice update. Ohh missing maggi nowadays
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Superb update
Loved it

Keep smiling

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