KaYa TS: Let the Night be our Sanctuary Pt. 1-2 Pg.1 20/6

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Posted: 10 years ago

KaYa ka midnight passion 😳
😆

Avantika you are fabulous writer!
I am just more and more impressed each time I see your work.

This TS especially is very well written, I have seen many stories on IF and I have to say, you are one of those special writers who have the wonderful ability to write a scene like this very beautifully and decently without it coming off vulgar (believe me, not many can achieve that 😆)
This was very well written and stayed quite true to their characters (Ananya is feisty which I like) ❤️

I really loved it and hope you'll write more! 🤗

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rajanigandha26

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Posted: 10 years ago

Lovved it. Waiting for part 2. Kaya sharesuch a wonderful chemistry that they can set screen on fire. Eish to see dome real romance in the show. They are showing only romanch but unfortunately no romance.

This possessive Mr. Sharma wouuld be treat to watch.

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Avantika

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26
Lovved it. Waiting for part 2. Kaya sharesuch a wonderful chemistry that they can set screen on fire. Eish to see dome real romance in the show. They are showing only romanch but unfortunately no romance.
This possessive Mr. Sharma wouuld be treat to watch.

Thank you!

To be honest, I wouldn't have it sny other way..the most historical stories in Tellywood have all been slow burns.. 😉

Falling in love and acceptance must happen gradually..

Besides, what's romance without romanch! 😉

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Rashnayak

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hot!!! you write sooo well 👏

Jealousy is indeed what started them and I hope it brings out the same passion like in the story! Because there is nothing sexier than a jealous Kabir Sharma 😳😆

Can't wait for part 2.

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InkAndFable

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Posted: 10 years ago

The first part was of 100,C..
Sooo hot yar...
I am waiting for next part.
It ends when my excitement was at peak.
It was like when you are watching some blockbuster and the signal somehow went off.
U may be aware of the feeling...
Don't let us wait like we do to watch next repeat of reporters...That's on Saturday..
Update soonnn
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Send me buddy request.
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Purnima

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Posted: 10 years ago

lolz reading title "sanctuary" I thought it was about you are taking Kabir Ananya in some wild life sanctuary 😆😆😆😆 "jungle mein mangal"🤣...

On a serious note, wonderful piece (i'm hoping it wud be more than just two or three four shots) 😊😊

😆😆 too much attitude & fiesty miss kashyap is 😛😆😆😆.cant blame editor saab to turn angry young man bcoz of jealousy 😆😆😆😆 & dragging out stupid reporter straight to his home 😳 😛😆 & having his ways with her 😛😆

Hope these two dont burn down Mr.Kabir's house with their sizzling hotness 😆😆

Hope next part is soon...
dont get inspired by Mr.Grey "Laters Baby"😆 😆