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Posted: 10 years ago
Updates until Part 5

Fabulous Updates

So Geet is in love with Arjun and was looking for him for two years so why does she think Maan is Arjun what had happened to her that made her forget the face of her love .
Geet's parents too just left her and did'nt bother to find her if her mother says she is mad than surely its a mother's duty to make sure that her child is safe .
Maan is thinking that his rivals has send Geet to do something so he needs to be more careful now .
Maan throws Geet out of his cottage and first when he looks to see if he can spot he is somewhat disappointed but tells himself its good she left

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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! wonderful story dear...loved the start...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Seems interesting. Will read today.
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 4
wonderful update
Geet seems so sweet and cute
she was following Maan

wondering is Geet confusing Maan with someone else may be look alike or they know each other in childhood and Geet remembers but Maan forgot or remember with some other name

Maan have doubt for Geet and its justified too

let see what happens next
Edited by kuhu18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww Maan throw Geet out of cottage in cols and she dont have ant warm cloths ...
can feel Geets pain ... she was talking to God
so she loved Arjun and searching him from 2 years
Maan missing her is it ?? ... was disappointed not seeing her there

waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
~LONGING FOR LOVE~

PART 6





It was two in the morning and he was still feeling peace.. He couldn't sleep.. His thoughts were drawn towards the little bundle of mischief that he was having ..she was a mischief maan couldn't help but to agree.. She was beautiful and somewhere created a deep impact in the mind of MAAN SINGH KHURANA . her eyes were captivating and the twinkle that he every time felt seeing her baby hazels were something he couldn't ignore..
The way she innocently confessed how much she loved him.. He was amused and chuckled as he found her soft voice soothing.. She was talking animatedly saying how she found him.. She was no baby but he couldn't help to compare her with a baby..
Maan smiled a bit but then his smile wiped off his face.. How she cried.. How innocently she was asking what was her fault and he threw her out.. guilt seeped through maan and he was disgusted on himself.. he left his all work..MAAN SINGH KHURANA was used to his work and now the girl was ruling his thoughts in less than twelve hours.. he had a exerience that he cannot forget and she was the one who was a memorable asset in all..
maan went towrads the window and saw heavy snow storm.. there was very less visibility and the ath and the trees were coevered with the snow.. maan was looking at the garden where he had seen her sitting after he told her to leave but she was stubborn to leave at first she cried a lot sitting there looking at the entrance still with a tiny hoe that he will come , he had seen her pouting , crying and doing something looking at the sky.. his thoughts were on her when he realised that it was almost three and he had to search her..no matter how rude and unemotionala nd hard he can be but still he cant leave her alone at night specially , what if she's been in any kind of trouble,,,
the thought itself hurt him a lot , someone getting hurt because of him was just not acceptable for MSK..
maan : wo koi bhi ho...mujhe farak nahi padna chahiye , jo bhi ho jaisi bhi hai..MAAN SINGH KHURANA can handle everything par mein itna niche nahi girl sakta jisse use kuch ho jaye..
if she had to be any threat than too MSK wont leave her...
though one side his heart was saying again and again that if she had been sent by any of the rivals then she wouldnt have followed him in his car and the way she was crying again and again he was having a second thought about her..
maan punched the wodden table and the nail pricked his hand letting the blood to flow but he was least bothered , the innocent eyes were playing again and again in his eyes , her tears , she had moved the hard maan singh khurana and what else she will do he was unaware..
seeing the storm getting bad he immediately left to search her..maan was in his jeep and had searched all the near by places.. he had almost left the hope to find her and his brain was screaming that she had left..she was one of the deceit
maan was tormented between his heart and brain..his heart was not letting him to believe , he was stiill trying to find her..
maan's heart : jungle..ho sakta hai wahan gayi ho..
his brain screamed
MB : she isn't a mad jo jungle jaegi marne.. dhokha dene aayi thi bas..
maan was already in a bad mood and stopped at once and then took his way towards the jungle..
Maan looked at the heavy snow storm and he looked nearby in a hope that she would be there would have been here.. he had left his jeep at a distance as it was getting difficult to continue his search with the snow storm.. he was looking at all the places when something caught His eyes and legs went towards the red peice of cloth that he recognised.. Her red skirt.. He immediately kneeled down and looked at the face and his face lost its colors seeing her all drenched and the way blood had frozen on her forehead , her body was all cold and lips were turning blue.. maan felt his heart lurched and looked at her at once , it was the way to the jungle and he felt that he was right , the girl was indeed a trouble or maybe in a trouble..without any doubts he scooped her in his arms.. he was now fearing for her life ..
maan immediately placed her on the passenger seat and drove towrads the cottage...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan saved Geet at d right time.
Geet presence has a great impact on maan.
Maan is unknowingly falling in love with Geet.
Maan thinks Geet as a baby
Edited by kamnagupta7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally maan found her but nt in good condition hope he realises how innocent his geet is n is nt her to cheat him but herself cheated by her love arjun n thinks maan to be her arjun
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan is very much affected by geet
his heart n brain are in fight
maan found geet covered by snow
he save her
hope geet will be fine

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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan is in love with his baby geet ;)
Thank god maan saved her :)
Nice update

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