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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Shagnika
@visrom yup thats true...😉😆 I had an advantage soo....😉 thanx a lot... and thats the reason y i was even more xcited...

well, these days i get sneak peek's from other stories as well... i feel meri kismat khul gayi hai😆

I wouldn't want too many sneak peeks. I would like to read the whole story in one go.

Just wanted to give a small promo....so I showed one scene to Shagnika.

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rozeishere

@rozeishere

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

great story ... lovely pace and good suspence ... wonderful... please write some more .... i loved it . thanks

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: rozeishere
great story ... lovely pace and good suspence ... wonderful... please write some more .... i loved it . thanks

Thanks...I'll try when I get some time and inspiration. 😃

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tejashree

@teju_g

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

you have written one of the best story on cid-forums hats off 😃👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

you have a good imagination👏

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

@visrom give us a nice Daya-Abhi case where they are on the field investigating kahin door from all this crowd and lab (like the aeroplan case). Sachin ko Freddie ke saath bhej dena. Fireworks to sunte nahin, tum hi sunlo yaar.

Edited by prabha. - 15 years ago