STORY - Stolen Car - by VISROM

okkay so finally!!!! i am sure its gonna rock... will read it and let u know!!!😃

yeah finally visrom has come up wta gud story!! will let u know hw i liked it! and i knw i will! lol

Originally posted by: drilabh

yeah finally visrom has come up wta gud story!! will let u know hw i liked it! and i knw i will! lol

Arey yaar....tum log bhi....why are you saying 'good' before reading it?????

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👏👏⭐️ AWESOME JOB visrom...after sooo many days, i cud actually imagine a very nice story in front of my eyes!! Increased all our morale even more...⭐️

superb! a very different plot, beautifully handled by the team.
when i read that sachin shot the 3 people, i got so angry bcoz shooting has always been abhijeet's job. he is the best shooter in the team. but when i read the next dialogue i was like 'thank god abhijeet didnt shoot. his nishaana can never go wrong :)'

Gr8 story visrom refreshing,fast paced and interesting,hume jo cheeeze dekhna tha CID woh dekhne ko mila,NO Forensic so no ABhi-Taarika flirting 👏 ,not much importance given to Kaajal-Sachin and loved it more when Abhi scolded Sachin 👏 freddy was given importance 👏

So all together good work 👍🏼 👍🏼

positives:-
a very well written story
well plotted
action packed
no forensic- no abhi-tarika
freddy got importance
awesome job

and just wondering Why Mr Mallik sent the same (C) guy as a taxi driver.... does not he know that the same guy been to bureau when freddy same him....and c.i.d is waiting for them in pune..so obviously they will get him...just confused please anyone clear this to me...

Originally posted by: bhinder.kamboj

positives:-
a very well written story
well plotted
action packed
no forensic- no abhi-tarika
freddy got importance
awesome job

and just wondering Why Mr Mallik sent the same (C) guy as a taxi driver.... does not he know that the same guy been to bureau when freddy same him....and c.i.d is waiting for them in pune..so obviously they will get him...just confused please anyone clear this to me...

This guy has been employed to do all 'odd' jobs....that's all. I didnt want our team to have 3 people to catch. The story would have been much longer. And yeah...Mallik doesn't know that Freddie has seen him.