KaYa OS: Am I In Love?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi...this is for prinCeSs_dIVa
Os

Kabir stormed out of the conference room and marched off into his cabin...
And starts murmuring...
K: samajhti kya hai khudko...uss Manav ke saath jaa sakti hai...mere saath nahi...huh! Mujhe bhi koi farak nahi padta...😡
For the next two days...kabir didn't even touch food all he did was work...he had become a little weak but still refused to give in...
Malvika noticed this and got irritated on her new crush...
She came to his cabin and yelled...
M: ye kya hai kabir?...tum khaana kyu nahi kha rahe?...bimaar pad gaye toh...
K: please Malvika mann nahi hai mera...bhook lagegi toh kha lunga...
M: par kabir...
K: ( yelled ) Malvika please meri biwi mat bano...I know how to take care of myself...now please leave!
The whole office was peeping inside by now...
M: ( sobbing) main toh sirf tumhare liye ke rahi thi...fine bhooke maro tum! I care a damn!!!!!
Rich and Trisha saw this...
R: yaar...ye sir toh bade danger mood mein hai yaar...
T: ha...dekha tune kaise Malvika ma'am pe chillaye...KL ki beti ko rulaya...baat re!...bachchke raho inse...
She giggled...
Later Richa called Ananya who had left for the day...
A: ha bol...
R: tujhe pata hai aaj kabir bade danger mood mein hai...unhone do din se kuch khaaya nahi Aur Malvika unhe samjhaane gayi toh uspar bharak gaye...
A: ye kabir sir na...main aati hu...

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Ananya entered kabir's cabin with a Tiffin in her hand...she removed the plates and served food...
She went to his desk closed the laptop and pulled him by his hand and made him sit on the sofa...
She asked him to eat and turned her face away...
The smell was making him Crazy but still he was annoyed and wouldn't eat ...
Ananya noticed this and took a bite...
A: ummm! Yummy! Main kitni achchi cook hu...world class paneer ke parathe banaye hai yaar...Aur ma ka ye chatpata achaar...ufff!!!!

Kabir was controlling himself with great difficulty...
A: kha lijiye sir...Ananya Kashyap ke haayj ke parathe sabko naseeb nahi hote...
He finally smiled, opening his mouth and Ananya fed him...by mistake he nipped at her finger and looked intensely in her eyes...making her shiver with the intensity...
Hypnotized...as if they were they continued feeding each other...
Today certainly a new feeling had developed in both that would commit them to each other forever in the future...
The end😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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An mere muh main paani aa gaya.
Paneer ke paranthe? Too good. And the subtle romance associated!
Par itne se hamara kya hoga...thoda aur chahiye!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay I'm so excited!! You know when i opened the OS i didnt even know you dedicated it to me but seeing my name just got me in shock for a while and then i jumped with joy..like literally!!😆😆😆



Thank you so much for writing this amazing OS in such a short period and that too with such beauty😳



I loved the part how it started because i had not thought of a cause for his anger but you were so sharp to make up the best cause of his anger.. Jealousy! Oh how i love it when Kabir gets jealous!!😳😳



Then Malvika who keeps taking him for lunch and dinners.. i loved the fact that he declined her offer and that too because of Ananya.. I really get annoyed when in the show he smiles at Malvika and goes to eat with her So i loved the fact how he blasted her off😉😉😉 That was great!!


Ananya was home and she cooked for Kabir!! That was a wow factor👏👏 Loved how you added more aspects to my imagination!😊😊 Thank you! It was so sweet of her mom to cook chapati for her would be damaad..haha😉😉😉 although unkowingly.. as yet she doesnt know the future that her daughter is planning to get such a hot jamai raja 😆😆




Lastly i loved it that their emotions were high and they were slowly moving one pace forward in their relationship 👏👏👏



All in all a wonderfully scripted OS which gave me butterflies..




Thank you once again for writing on this plot.



Love
Kajol


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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi riya !
Kabir sharma is on hunger strike, that too for his silly cute, stupid reporter...isnt that too much to handle ?🤪
very cute and lotz of fluff. going grt girl !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice OS Rita



Love and Prayer
Yogini
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely os Riya
Short and sweet
Loved it a lot
paneer ke parathe won bhi ananya me haath ke
Kabir Kaise miss kar sakta hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
This love is good
This love is bad
This love is alive back from the dead!!!

It was awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Itna chota OS😔
But him on a hunger strike and her getting him food. It was so sweet.
And her feeding him was so sweet ❤️
I have to say, Richa and Trisha's were apt. Definitely how I think they would react.

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