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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you 😊
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Hi Kutties... 😊


I'm confused...

I want a romantic song for a couple dance in the next part. (Party scene)

And I'm confused of choosing one.

If you don't mind please PM me the song you feels so romantic.

Before 11 o'clock if possible. 😊

Help me please...pretty-pretty please 😳

Then I'll update the next part before 12:30 👍🏼



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Posted: 10 years ago
If it was passionate then you can try AA zara from murder 2 or tum hi ho ashiqui 2 Jeena jeena from badlapur Tu jo hai from Mr.X
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _KP.ISHRA_

If it was passionate then you can try AA zara from murder 2 or tum hi ho ashiqui 2 Jeena jeena from badlapur Tu jo hai from Mr.X


You're making me more confused 😆
There is a lot of romantic songs in Hindi... 😲
Thanks for your suggestions 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
There r so many romantic songs in hindi dut it depends on which type of romance u want 😉 considering our lust Kumar I would have said Katra Katra but for ishu s nature nah 🤢
So may be sun sathiya from abcd2 for ishu. But Raman ke character ki badnami ho jaegi na 😆
So kya kare kya kare how about khamoshiya u can make it romantic or may be sawan aya from creature it will suit them perfectly 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

There r so many romantic songs in hindi dut it depends on which type of romance u want😉considering our lust Kumar I would have said Katra Katra but for ishu s nature nah🤢

So may be sun sathiya from abcd2 for ishu. But Raman ke character ki badnami ho jaegi na😆
So kya kare kya kare how about khamoshiya u can make it romantic or may be sawan aya from creature it will suit them perfectly😉


So I think I should not make them dance
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mera part six read karna rehta hai :(.

About the song... Ummm... Hum tum is romantic.
Or the most romantic baarish from yaariaan
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Mera part six read karna rehta hai :(.

About the song... Ummm... Hum tum is romantic.
Or the most romantic baarish from yaariaan


😊 thanks for the suggestion
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww. Loved IshRa scene. It was too hot. I could feel it. ☺️ lol Raman is a besharam. 🤣 Mihku in this SS is fun. 😉
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Hi Kutties... 😊

Here goes the next part

BOLD writing 🤬

Ignore typos and errors

Not proofread

Enjoy reading 😃


Chapter-7

SHE IS MINE



"Haan...Abhi...She is Laxmi...maine kahan dha na tujhse..."

(I told you right...)


Raman's words shook the hell out of Abhi as he looked at Ishita while Mihika came from behind Raman. His eyes shifted to a shocked Mihika. She gestured him not to reveal anything infuriating him all the more. He saw Raman checking out Ishita which made his blood boil. He can't let even the shadow of Raman to touch Ishita. He will go to any extend to protect her. It's true that he is his friend. But that doesn't change the truth that he is a JERK. He must be eying Ishita. He can't let that happen.


"SHE IS MINE"


He murmured while observing the upshots.


FLASHBACK

A DAY BEFORE

ISHITA AND RAMAN'S ENCOUNTER



Ishita: Deciding to play along, "It's ok Mr Bhalla...I won't say to anyone in the family...trust me"


Raman: Looking at her shocked, "If...YOU DON'T HAVE ANY PROBLEM...I'm game..."


Ishita: "And yes...I'd like to come along...with Mani. (Looking sternly at Raman) I think I should date someone to stop some JERKS."


Raman smiled cheekily gritting his teeth while Mihika expressed her happiness for her sister by hugging. After Mihika left the place Raman came close to Ishita intimidating her.


Raman: In a dangerous voice, "What was all that? YOU SHOULD BE coming WITH ME..."


Ishita: In the same vigour, "But I don't want to come with you...I don't like you...I'm not your type...I mean...You're not supposed to expect me to have fling with you."


Raman: "Then why in the hell did you...RESPOND?"


Ishita: Loudly, "I DON'T KNOW..."


Raman clutched her arms tightly and pushed her on the bed. She struggled to get out of his hold while he pressed his body more into hers imprisoning her. Coming close to her lips and brushing it with his he hissed, "BUT I KNOW." With that, he took her lips in a violent kiss. She hitted on the back of his shoulder as his hands snaked around her waist sqeezing her to his aroused body. If it was before he asked her out to have s*x with him, she would have responded. All through the kiss, she tried different ways to stop him, hurt him and get out of his iron-hold.


Plunging his tongue in and out of her mouth avidly whilst digging his nail in the flesh of her waist and back, he continued to drink her. Finally letting her slip out of his hands he looked at the mess he made out of her. He leaned again to take her lips but she pursed it up. He pinched her waist causing her to open her mouth to let out a cry. Then he bitted hard on her lower lip and whispered in a menacing voice, "DON'T DARE PLAY ME...YOU GOT IT..."


Ishita: Miserably, "You can't force yourself on me Mr Bhalla..."


He looked at her tear striken face without any feelings.


Raman: Angrily, "I'm clear to you. You cannot reject Raman Bhalla. YOU'RE MINE AND MINE ONLY."


Ishita: In a throbbing voice, "Till when?"


Raman: Casually, "I DON'T KNOW"


Ishita: Firmly, "BUT I KNOW..."


Raman looked at her quizzically while she continued.


Ishita: Spitting fire from her eyes, "You'll throw me the next moment your manhood gets satisfied."


Raman: Smirking evilly, "So you know me well...!"


Ishita: "But you don't know me."


Raman: "After all you're just a woman"


Ishita: "And the ony woman whom you cannot bed with."


Raman: Naughtily, "Still I can do it. I'M ON TOP"


Ishita: "Maybe you can force...I won't give away to you with all my heart."


Raman: Mocking, "What's the difference!"


Ishita: "You won't ever understand...because you NEVER MADE LOVE...now get off from me."


Raman: "No...we will make a deal..."


Ishita: Sarcastically, "Huh...so this is your business?"


He pulled her hair for mocking at him making her hiss in pain.


Raman: "No one talks to me like that..."


Ishita: "But I do...I'm not scared of you"


Raman: "You should be."


And he rammed her lips again in a searing kiss. Leaving her lips bleed by his assault he left her to contemplate on everything. She felt she doesn't have a choice.


ISHITA'S POV


I was dead the moment he asked me out to have s*x. I never thought that someone should be this unconcerned. How shameless might be him to talk like that. I felt like I'm a dirt. I felt to peel off my skin whenever I remembered him touching me. I decided to take a shower to cool myself down and to rub off the stain of his touch.


After undressing, I stood under the pouring shower. My body was aching. Why? I tried to reason my body pain. The fall, it was one reason and the other being him lying on top of me and pressing me hard with his body.


As the water droplets coursed from my head to my face, then to my swollen lips, I flinched in pain. The cold water travelled to my entire body and showed the places where his teeth and nails lesioned my skin. I felt my neck sore. So I came in front of the mirror to check it. I found my jawline to neckline reddened. I remembered him doing all that to me.


"He made me dirty...! How could I let this happen...!"


I cried out loud sitting on a corner inside the bathroom. Hugging my legs to my chest I hidden my face in my legs. Mihika knocked on the door hearing my screams. I told her that I cried because I was about to fall. Her concern made me more sad.


"Raman Kumar Bhalla can never touch me again...IN THAT WAY"


I sternly fisted my hands and stood up with a new hope.

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NEXT NIGHT

PARTY VENUE



Mihika came with Raman to the venue while his eyes where on the doorway to see HER coming with her so called MANI. His distraction was a chance for Mihika to stride away to her friends. He walked to the bar counter awaiting her entry.


Mihika was all set to play a prank on him, but her akka's entry was the last thing she expected. She had asked Ishita not to come there as her plans won't work in Mani's presence. Her akka was like a vampire in that evening as she shrugged of her plea. Finally she agreed to postpone her entry with Mani. However, this Flirt Bhalla came half an hour late spoiling her plans. She signed her partners in crime not to proceed their plans as they are at lost now.


Raman's eyes widened in shock to see Abhi walking in with Laxmi. She was clad in a red net saree with black boarder and a black full sleeve backless blouse.His shocked face adorned a sheepish smile as she mumbled, "Madrasan is really trying to play me!" He laughed at the sight as he thought it was her setup. As far as he knows Abhi, he is sure that he doesn't have such a name. "Now it's my turn"


He approached them while they slowed down in the ballroom hearing an annoucement. All the couples were called for dance and Ishita chirped in first interlacing her hand in Mani's. Mani smiled at Raman while Ishita smirked at him.


RAMAN'S POV


I was biting nails to see her and the one whom she chose to date other than me. I really doesn't like the company of Mihika.


Is she really a girl...?


After what felt like forever, she came in, wearing a red net saree. The black combination of boarder and blouse was a stark contraction of her fair complexion. She was breath taking. I felt her more pretty and sexy today. Taking in her silhouette, I glanced slowly at the tall man next to her. My eyes widened in shock to see Abhi with her. She should have brought someone else to retort me.


"Madrasan is really trying to play me!"


I didn't know how I controlled my laughter.I decided to play along. I wanted to know how far she will go to show me that she doesn't care about me. I wondered why in the world does I want her to care about me! Keeping my question bank aside I focused on the two most important persons of my life. Don't ask me when she got into the list. I DON'T KNOW!


"Now it's my turn"


I thought to tease her for her rubbish plan. When I neared them, there came an anouncement for a couple dance. As I had expected, she pulled Abhi with her.The worst thing she did was entangling her hand with him. I know Abhi loves Ishita, but he is a man.


"Agar yeh aise tempt karoge toh voh kuch...Nah...Abhi is a gentleman."

(If she will tempt like this, he may...no...)


To lift my frustration, the firecracker forwarded her hand for a dance. It was for the first time I'm touching a girl with this much dislike. The reason being the one whom I want in my arms is in someone else's arms.


In the dim light I saw her standing close to Abhi. As the music started, everyone began to sway in the song, but them. I felt so happy. I focused on them at the same time skillfully managed Mihika. But then, I found Abhi's hands entangling with hers while she closed her eyes.


"Why did she close her eyes? Is he affecting her?"


"Teri saanson ki saans mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon
Tere khwabon ki aanch mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon"



They stepped in sync to the music while he looked at her intensely making her nervous. I couldn't help but wonder why Abhi is behaving like that. There is nothing called LOVE. If he really loved Ishita, he wouldn't have acted like this to Laxmi. I was reddening each passing second to see them close. While the pataka was swaying to the rhythm in my arms. I forgot to enjoy touching woman.


"Because she is the one whom I need to touch so badly"


"Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon"



When Abhi again laced his hands with hers after swirling her around, I got distracted from my steps and earned a kick from Firecracker's high-heel. I winced a little. However, I didn't have the time to check on me but them.


"Bin tere mera kya hai
Jisko sunu jisko kahun
Bin tere mujh mein kya hai
Jisko jiyun jis mein rahun
Tujh mein hi duniya meri hai
Tere ik pal mein sadiyan meri
Bin tere main sehra saa hoon
Bin tere main qatra bhi nahi"



He brought one of her hands to his shoulder where she pressed hesitantly. I squeezed Mihika's arm in the fit of the moment making her hiss in pain. I mouthed a sorry and faked a concerned smile at her.


"Tu mere chehre pe hai
raahat saa jo thehra huaa
Main bhi tere haathon mein
kismat sa hoon, bikhra hua
Tu meri rooh saa hai
Tujhko chhu ke main zinda lagun
Jab bhi main mujhko dekhun
Mujh mein bhi main tujh sa lagun"



When I darted my attention from Mihika to them, I found his hands slowly moving around her waist.


"How dare he do that...? SHE IS MINE!"


I gritted my teeth in rage. I could hear my heart beating faster because of some unknown fear. Is that for her? Am I scared of losing her? Millions of questions loaded in my mind which were impossible for me to answer.


"Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon"



All my control drained away the moment I saw him closing the distance with her by snaking his hands around her waist. Her hands were around his shoulder while her face was pale with nervousness. I guessed her discomfort. He began to draw patterns on her bare back after moving aside her hair, while she tightened her grip on his collar. He rested his head on her shoulder whilst swaying in the music and softly brushed his lips there. I was swirling Mihika around whilst I saw him kissing the back of her neck.


That was it. He was going overboard. Isn't that a drama? Then why is he over acting? Why can't he store all these foreplay for his Ishita? All these interrogations passed by in my mind in a tick.


"How dare he touch her...kiss her...? She doesn't need to prove that she can do anything by doing such things. She is brave, courageous and whatever she says and mainly, SHE'S MINE. Why can't she just understand...!"


I never felt this possessive for any woman. How many of my ex's were danced sensuously with other men in front of me. I didn't mine. Because I never OWNed them. But this crazy woman is changing me. I feels bad when she is with some other man. I can't bear the thought of her being touched by some other man. BECAUSE SHE IS MINE.


The next moment I found Mihika lying on the floor crying in pain while Laxmi and some other girls were with her to help. I looked on stunned not understanding what happened. Abhi came and began to scold me for making Mihika fall down. He stressed on the part that it was intentional and I was angry at something.


"Yes, I ws angry. And now, he is testing my patience as well."


I fisted my palms to control myself from beating him black and blue for touching MY GIRL.


At last, not wanting to create a scene, I walked out without heeding to his voice. And he followed me with Laxmi while Mihika went to washroom.

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OUTSIDE THE PARTY VENUE


"Raman stop there..."


He halted on his track and froze there without turning back. Abhi started his interrogation.


Abhi: "Kya hogaya tumhe? Why are you acting so weird?"

(What happened to you?)


Raman looked at him furiously making Abhi take a step back. Ishita looked on confused.


Raman: "Tumhare vajha se...It's all because of you..."

(Because of you)


Abhi: "But what...have I done...?"


Raman: On top of his voice, "You did a big mistake by touching Raman Kumar Bhalla's girl Mr Abhimanyu Raghav."


Ishita's face beamed with happiness and fell the next moment realising the temporariness. She wanted him herself for a lifetime. She couldn't think of losing him after having him. So she choose not to have him.


Abhi: Not understanding his puzzled talk, "Your girl...? Common yaar I didn't get you. Who is your girl?"


Raman stridden to where Ishita was standing whilst Abhi looked on blankly. Standing next to her, he pulled her closer to him by clasping his hand around her shoulder.


Raman: "This is my girl. Laxmi Iyer. SHE IS MINE. Don't ever forger it Abhi... If you dare..., I'll forget that you're my friend."


Abhi: After a moment of shock regains his voice, "LAXMI...?"


Raman: Calming down, "Haan...Abhi...She is Laxmi...maine kahan dha na tujhse..."

(I told you right...)




TO BE CONTINUED...



PRECAP


"I'll do anything to have you."


So that's it Kutties...

How's it?

Sorry for disappointing you by the couple dance 😕

The song credit goes to KP.ISHRA 😊

Thank you all for your suggestions.

I'll make IshRa dance some other day...PROMISE 😉

Do LIKE and COMMENT

BUDDY ME FOR PMs


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