MG SS : DESTINY RULES pt 5 pg 47 / PM LIST + TEASER PG 52 JUN 2

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

very emotional update first time maan voiced out his feelings he doesnt want her to leave him first time he touched her kissed her last part was scary who is arjun why he wants to take geet nice part thnx 4 update

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Meri Duao mein Main tuje Dhudhane aaya hoon

Meri aahon me ek pyas leke aaya hoon

Kabul kar oh mere Malik meri duaoko

tere dar pe ek aash leke aaya hoon...!

daya kar oh malik tere bande par

il ilahi tujse kuch mang ne aaya hoon...!

daya ki bhikh dal de meri zolmein oh khuda..!

badi umeed leke tere pass aaya hoon

ye sar jo kabhi kisise jooka nahin tha

tere dar pe jukane aaya hoon...

garoor itna tha aapne aap pe ki

kutch samj ta tha apne aap ko

rahem kar oh khuda,mein apana

wo garoor todne aaya hoon...

muje jo chahe saja dede mere iswar,

aaj uski zindgi ki bheekh mangne aaya hoon

nirash mat karna oh rahemo dill khuda

Main aaj teri sharan mein aaya hoon

unki zingi ki bheekh mang ne aaya hoon,aaya hoon...!

aye khuda meri duao ko kabool kar kabool kar...

nice update.

Edited by idunno - 10 years ago

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

Emotional Update

Maan taking care of geet and geet is confused, maan first time confessed his feelings to geet and geet felt relieved and vowed never to leave him

Who is this Arjun and how geet belongs to him when she is maan,s wife????

Eagerly waiting for next update

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ppriyanka83

@ppriyanka83

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#324

congrats 4 new story..
nice storyLyn..
Maan at LST reciprocate Geet's lov..bt Y they said Geet belongs 2 Arjun??
vry curious to knw..
update soon..

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

nice ud

how geet knows about

someone going to shot hin

maan now caring fr geet

and don't want her to leave him

she is his wife and y arjun

claiming to take her away

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#326

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Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago