TaaRey FF: You Cannot Fall In Love | Ep 7 on Pg 2 | *STOPPED*

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Hey Guys, I am Mary. I am back with a new story. It is based off a Korean drama. The story is practically going be to be the same because it is too perfect to change though the location is going to be India rather than South Korea. I promise you will love it. And a friendly request, please don't judge this story before completely reading episode 1.Also first I started writing this as AR but now now converting it into a TR FF. Please press like and comment.

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Reyansh Singhania works at the Parliament House of India for the National Communication Network Team. He graduated from M.I.T. in the U.S. and possesses elite skills as an I.T. engineer. At the Parliament House, Reyansh Singhania meets Taani Shekawat, who works as a bodyguard there. The two people fall for each other even though Reyansh Singhania was warned not to fall in love. An elaborate plan for revenge is his ultimate mission ...
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Reyansh Singhania/Poochai(his name when he lived in Thailand): He has second identity that nobody else knows about. His ultimate goal is to avenge his father's killers. Using the identity of a Indian-American teenager, who is later revealed to have died several years before, he assumes a double life by graduating from MIT with a doctorate degree and lands a job at Indian Prime Minister's palace. The job would lead to him to cross paths with presidential bodyguard Taani Shekawat, with whom he falls in love.

Taani Shekawat: She was forced to take care of herself at an early age after her mother was killed in a drunk driving accident and her father became comatose. Her exceptional skills in martial arts eventually earns her an assignment with the Presidential Security Service. During her time as a bodyguard, she falls in love with Reyansh Singhania and eventually discovers his real identity.

Rahul Garewal: An intelligent prosecutor, he possesses a strong sense of justice, even against the corrupt politicians of Garewal. He is a son of one of the members of the "Council of Five." He is a constant rival of City Hunter by working towards the same goals under legal cover, and tries to figure out his identity at the same time.

Muskaan Chadda: Veterinarian by trade, she is Rahul's ex-wife and a good friend to the other characters. Helps City Hunter.

Raj Malik: Operation Clean Sweep's sole survivor, he spends the mediate years in the Golden Triangle as a drug lord. Full of anger, he wants to kill all of the people who ordered his team dead. He pretends to be a Indian-American investor and uses Reyansh as his agent of vengeance.

Dev Singh: A problem gambler but a very good cook whom Reyansh saves from thugs in Thailand and later becomes his close friend. Over the course of the series, Dev and Reyansh become partners under Raj's scheme - and also racks up huge debts buying stuff from the home-shopping network.
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Raj Malik and Aditya Kashyap worked as bodyguards at the Indian Prime Minister's home, the Parliament House. While the prime minister and other high ranking public officials were visiting somewhere an explosion occurs there which was set off by Pakistani agents. The explosion did not harm the Indian Prime Minister, but other Indian officials were killed. To retaliate for the killing, five high ranking Indian officials plan a covert operation to go into Pakistan and kill Pakistani agents. Without the prime minister's knowledge, bodyguards Raj and Aditya gather men who will take part in the dangerous mission. The men will be dropped near the Indian coastline(made up; could be wrong, didn't check the map)and then enter Pakistan to carryout their assassinations.

For their return, incumbent prime minister promises to have a submarine waiting for them to carry them back to India.
Meanwhile, the five high ranking Indian public officers, who initiated the covert operation, changes their minds while the operation is taking place. The officials decide to give up on the 21 special force members taking part in the covert operation.

The special forces members complete their tasks and swim into the ocean looking for the submarine to take them back to India. They spot the submarine waiting for them and attempt to board the submarine. Except a sniper on the submarine kills all of the special forces members except Raj -who survives and swims back to India.

Raj, carrying out a promise to his fallen comrade and good friend Aditya , goes to Aditi Kasyap(Aditya's wife) home and snatches away Aditya's baby, while Aditya's wife hangs clothes outside. Raj then moves to Thailand with the baby. Raj sets up a camp in the jungles of Thailand, while growing and trafficking illegal narcotics. Raj also raises the baby Reyansh and eventually trains him into an elite soldier.

Reyansh, now a young adult, enters a village in Thailand and spots an Indian man, Dev Singh being shaken down by Thai gang members. On a whim, Reyansh comes to his aide and helps Dev escape. Reyansh takes the Indian man back to the camp. It turns out Dev is quite a cook and he prepares dishes for Reyansh and Raj. Reyansh also spots a photo of a young woman named Taani Gupta that Dev carries with him. Reyansh takes the photo and places it next to his bed. He becomes emotionally attached to the woman in the photo even though he has never met her.

A few days later, Raj loses a foot while saving Reyansh from a landmine. While Raj is recovering, he finally tells Reyansh about his birth father and how he was killed by his own government. Reyansh then vows to exact revenge upon the five government officials responsible for his father's death.

Seven years later, Reyansh finally arrives in India. Prior to arriving in India, Reyansh studied at M.I.T. in the United States. He was also warned by Raj, prior to entering India, to avoid falling in love because blood will be shed all around him ...


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Episode 1 is just setting the scene so please bear with me. From the next episode, the real story will start with Reyansh's first meet with Taani.
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Yellow People! I'm back with Episode Two. Before you read this, two things I want you to know: (1) Reyansh's Thai name is Poochai; (2) though this story takes place in India, I have never been there so I have no idea about India. This story is fiction based on a kdrama. I will using that kdrama to write this so if I take a name of a place its purely fictional. I will be making up names as I change the setting from Seoul, South Korea to Mumbai, India.





Thailand...

Poochai stand by the broken window staring particularly nowhere. His reflection can be seen on the left over glass of the window. He is wearing black half sleeve t-shirt and army cargo pants. His long bangs, dirty from all the dust, are covering his forehead. He has a lot of dust on his face also because of the all the ruckus. He is only 17 but suddenly he is not fun-loving and happy-go-jolly kid anymore. The events of last 12 hours have changed everything. He remembers the chain of events from past 12 hours. How his Dad, Raj Malik, lost his leg because of HIM. Him finding out that Raj MAlik is not his actual Dad. How that lady, who he treated like Mom, got shot protecting HIM. Raj Malik's confession about his actual father's murder.

Raj Malik's Confession...

"This is about your real father. He took the bullet meant for me. The reason I am still living is to get revenge for your father." Raj Malik said as he lie on his bed after getting his tooth blown away. "To get revenge?" asked a scared 17-year-old Poochai. But before Raj could answer, he fainted.

Raj Malik's Confession Ends..

Poochai takes a deep breath still looking out the window. It's all dark. It's late at night. Finally, he says grievously "I am going to change." After a long pause, "That's my destiny," he concluded.

Next he starts his extensive training for being an elite. All those times when Raj made him train previously, Poochai would grudging do it but now with all his might and even more he trained. As a good luck charm or more like a reminder of what he has to do, he put the bullet that came of Raj in a string and tied it around his neck. When Raj and Aditya(Reyansh's Dad) and all those other soldiers were coming back and got shot, Raj also got shot but it wasn't that bad and they left the bullet in him but as he had to get a surgery on his leg; the doctor also got the bullet out. With his extensive combat training, Poochai also took lessons on studies.

One day, Poochai was standing out on his balcony looking outside. The drug trafficking business of Raj was going really well. They have their own house and everybody look up to Raj for his power. They even have their own security guards to protect themselves and the money. Just then Reyansh heard footsteps and a cane hitting the floor repeatedly, he turns around to see and its Raj. "As expected, you have succeeded," Raj told Poochai as he handed him a file. "You have been accepted to MIT," Raj said smilingly. Reyansh happily took the file out of his hand to check it out. "You now have a permanent residence visa and from now on you will live as Reyansh Singhania who is a resident of Texas. And your American name is Rey Singhania. Here are your passport and ID card." Raj said as he handed him the rest of the documents.

Now Reyansh, he took the documents from his hand and eagerly check them out,"This is creating a whole new identity," Reyansh said excitedly. "This is not only creating a new identity, its creating a new person." Raj replied seriously. Reyansh's face also lost it's smile as he look up to Raj. Raj with all seriousness says, "Just remember 3 things. You have to hide your real identity and live as a different person. Don't trust anyone. Don't fall in love." Reyansh quietly listened. "If your true identity is revealed, you and everyone around you will die in blood baths." Raj said grievously.

7 years later, Mumbai, India...

Reyansh walks by the fountains as he check out the ancient statue in between. He has a small smile playing on his lips. He closes his eyes as he recall Raj's words, "Don't trust anyone. Don't fall in love.If your true identity is revealed, you and everyone around you will die in blood baths." His light brown bangs on his forehead are flying with the wind. He is wearing light pink tight jeans and black t-shirt with a long black jacket. Just then there is this beautiful girl with long brown hair. Her hair is blowing also. She is smiling and talking to people and handing out pamphlet. She is a wearing a cute short yellow dress with yellow gloves. She is standing right behind Reyansh as he stands their with his eyes close. For a while, they just stand there just like that. Then Reyansh opens his eyes and walks away while that girl gets a call. The caller ID says "hospital".

Room, Hospital...

As the girl walks in all worried, she sees that the patient on bed is having a hard time breathing. The nurse and doctor are working around him checking him. "His condition keeps getting worse and now he has pneumonia." The doctor told the girl. "It will be difficult to treat him any further. The hospital fees you owe are adding up." The doctor continued. "The money... I'll figure out something. I will," the girl said more confidently then she felt with tears in her eyes. "So.. just keep him alive," she added. "I can't just let my father go like this," she said almost crying. "10 years. It's been ten years since he's been in a vegetative state." The doctor reminded her. "Just give it up," he said softly. "My father, who is lying there, because of me." her voice breaking, "I just can't give up on him. I can't." she said passionately as a tear fell down her eye. In desperation, she holds his head, "Doctor, please save him." she begged, "Save him, please save him, I beg you," she said literally in tears. "Please save my Dad." She continued to cry.

Restaurant...

"Hello, we're now running a promotional campaign for a new hangover drink Rum Rum, you can try free samples," the girl said cheerfully selling her product. "Please come to our homepage and leave a simple review.." She was interrupted by the lady sitting on the table. "Those things seem ineffective. Isn't this a con?" she asked scornfully. "What're you talking about? We've heard that after you drink our product, you don't have to suffer a headache the next day!" She said not losing hope. "It's ok. We don't need it," the lady said rudely shooing her away. "Don't be like this.." the girl tried again with a fake smile. The man sitting beside the lady interjected, "Let's try it. She's getting annoying." "Thank you, here you go," said the girl cheerfully as she offered them the drinks. She turns around. She is wearing a sparkly pink short dress.

Just then her phone ring. Checking the caller ID, she immediately picked the call. "Hello, it's Taani Shekawat," she said as she answered her phone. After listening on the other side, "Right now?" she said as she glanced on her watch. It said 10 o'clock. "Immediately?" she asked with big eyes.

In the Night Club...

It is all dark with green, blue, red and purple lights blinking. The music is really loud. People are dancing and doing what not. A man's voice can be heard, "I don't like doing these things, but because of you I found out about it. She has various jobs." The owner of the voice seems to be Reyansh. "They say she usually works as replacement drive at night!" Reyansh said on the phone to somebody as sat upstairs and look down at people having fun. "Drive? You know driver... screw driver... something like that... Geez! You can connect to the internet. Ask there!" Reyansh said frustrated.

Just then a girl comes out of no where and sits right next to him hugging him. Looking him intensely, she asked, "What are you doing? Aren't you going to drink some more?" He smiles looking at her. He puts his arm around as he holds his phone and says huskily, "Besides Alcohol... we have something else very urgent that we need to do." The girls laughs and slightly blushes.

Outside the Night Club...

Taani was waiting outside the club by the owner's car. Just then her phone rang. "He still has fever?" she asked on the phone. As she talked on the phone, she took off her shrug. "If his condition changes, then anytime is fine, so please contact me... Yes. Work well," she said as she hanged out. Behind her Reyansh walks out of the club with that girl holding his hand, he stops when notices her. Abruptly he looks sideways not exactly looking at the girl, he tells her to get in the car. She nods and walk away. He looks back at Taani. Her back was facing him.

He slightly incline his neck as he slowly walks towards her. He looks at her and away. Slightly clearly his throat, he spoke, "You're the bullet fast driver?" Taani turns towards him immediately. "Yes," she says with a nod. She looks at him from him but immediately looks away. He had only sightly curly bangs across his forehead. He was wearing tight black jeans with a black t-shirt and a gold and black leather jacket on top. Seeing his gaze at her, she pulls her dress down. She was wearing a sparkly dark pink dress which has only sleeve which was full and skin color. "Because you hurried me..." she answered his unasked question.

He looks away instantly. Mentally shaking his head, he quickly said,"Take us to Ecstasy Hotel by Doosan Intersection." as he throws the cars at her. She swiftly caught them. With that he walks around and get in the car. Just then a man comes running outside the Night Club, he is glances at both sides as if searching for something. Then his eyes caught the sight of BMW 4 Series Convertible. He calls out, "Wait a Second!" as he quick walks to the car. "Miss Sonia Ghai" He calls the girl sitting beside Reyansh on the backseat. "Let's talk for a minute," he says. "Do you know him?" Reyansh asks Sonia. "No. It's my first time seeing him. How does he know my name?" she asks confused at the man.

"Im from Mumbai District Prosecutor's Office," said the man as he looked inside his jacket for his badge. He checked his pocket also but couldn't find anything. "I didn't bring it," said the man with shrug. "Anyways, I have something to say to this woman," he said he grab Sonia's hand. "What are you doing this?" Sonia shriek. Reyansh made a grab of her other hand as he asks him, "What are you." "I have some business with her," the man explained. "What business? I don't even work at all!" Sonia said freaking out. "It'll just be a moment," said the man as he tried pull her out of the car. The girl was shrieking. Reyansh was about to get up when Taani cried, "Mister!" and got out of the car.

"What is it? Are you trying to accomplish something against her will by force?" she asks him. "You..." the man started looking at her. "Do you know me? I don't know people like you." she says making faces. As he looked at her, his face turned soft as looking at someone familiar. He was also not that old probably in early 30's. He was quiet handsome actually. He had jet black hair with bangs across his forehead. He was black tight jeans with black t-shirt and black leather jacket. He even had a silver chain around his neck. He looks down at his looks and shakes his head. "No. I'm not the kind of person you think I am, so stay out of this." Then turning his attention towards Sonia, he added, "Miss Sonia Ghai, please get out." He said as he grabbed her hand again.

Sonia shriek again. Reyansh had had it enough. He stood but just then Taani took hold of that man's hand and flipped him over her shoulder. He landed on the ground on his butt.To say the least, Reyansh was stun. His mouth was even half open. His eyes were on her. Not leaving her. The man on the ground whines holding his elbow. "She even has a guy next to her. Don't you get the picture? You're such a joke," Taani said scoffingly. She turns and sees Reyansh is staring at her. "What are you doing? Not getting in?" she asks him. He looks at her once last and sat down. She gets on the driver seat and drives away. At the same time a man runs out of the club, he sees the car driving and then the man on the ground.

He quickly runs to him, "Prosecutor! Are you okay? Prosecutor!" He crouch on the ground beside him and help him sit up. Prosecutor looks pissed off. Pointing toward his clothes, he says annoyed, "What's with this clothing? They thought I was a pervert or something." The other man replies, "You told me to get you something would make not look like a prosecutor." "You're sure that she's Abhimanyu Rathore's mistress, right?" the Prosecutor asked out of breath. "Yes," the man answers. "I almost got them..." he says with a sigh.

On the other hand, Taani is driving the car while on the backseat a full make-out session is going on. Well, its mostly the girl clinging on to Reyansh. She looks back from the rear mirror with a scared expression while Reyansh stare back from the back. He seems least interest in this whole make-out. "They're sure in a rush," Taani muttered. "Don't they know the difference between the hotel and the car?" Taani mumbled. Just then Sonia said, "What? Why did you stop? It's no fun." Taani looks around uncomfortable. "Okay," Reyansh says smiling and put a hand around her shoulder. "Im going to get out." she threatens.

She again starts to snuggle around his neck. Reyansh look ahead not doing anything. He just had his hand on her shoulder, just their not even holding her. Taani humphs. "What? Are you trying turn me on?" Reyansh asked Sonia in her ear but Taani heard. She saw through the rear mirror that Sonia's hand was inside Reyansh's t-shirt. Next, she saw Sonia bending over. Taani's was giving horrifying expression. Not being able to take this any longer, she pulled the car over on the side. Because of sudden stop, Reyansh and Sonia both slid ahead and hit their head on the passenger seat. After recovering, Reyansh asks looking ahead, "What is it? A car crash?" Taani turns around and looks at him, "Resist your urges for 2 minutes. In 2 minutes, we'll arrive at the hotel." Taani told him sarcastically.

Sonia asks Taani rudely, "Hey! What are you?... I can't resist. What are you going to do?" Taani questions incredulous, "Hey!" She looks ahead full of anger. "No matter how important every penny is to me, I can't drive for you lowlifes anymore," Taani stated giving them both mean eye look. Reyansh looks away biting his lips. "I can't drive. No. I won't!" Taani said as she picked her bag from the passenger seat and got out while accidentally leaving her I-phone on passenger seat. Reyansh jumps out of the backseat and walks around towards Taani. "Hey! Drive." Reyansh says more like orders. Taani stays rooted to her place and says, "I can't. I'm not going." Taani said stubbornly. "This girl..." Reyansh started in irritation. Taani just looks away. "It's supposed to be $20 to the destination, but you can give me $10," Taani says. "What?" Reyansh asked not-believing. "I did put in work, so I should be compensated. Here, give me $10." Taani said with her hand out.

Reyansh concealing his laugh at the situation, asks out loud, "How can there be woman like this?" Then he looks at her, "I won't," he said with no humor. "You won't?", Taani questioned with narrow eyes. Next she put her hand around him and pulled his wallet out of his pocket. "Hey. Hey. What are you doing?' he asked as he made a grab for his wallet but she pulled her hand away. As she opens his wallets, she exclaimed, "Wow, you are really loaded. No thank you for the tip," Taani said making a face. Reyansh looks up at the sky at this situation. "Here. I'm taking exactly $10." Taani said showing it to him. Then she hold his left hand put the wallet in it and starts to walk away. She took three ahead and then she turns around and look at him. He gives her "What now?" expression. She looks at him and then at his car.

She walks towards his car and kicked his wheel hard but it only made her whine in pain. She walks away with gritted teeth. Reyansh quietly watched her antics. He close his eyes and takes a deep breath.

Taani walks toward a nearby bus stop and sat there on the bench. She puts on her jacket and decides to change her clothes on a nearby subway station just then she checks her pocket for her phone. She checks her bag. "My hand phone!" she cried. As she rack her hair with her fingers, she says "Ah I need to receive calls!" she moaned.

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Taani goes back to get her I-Phone

Somebody pays her father's hospital bill

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Hotel Room...

Reyansh is standing by the big window looking outside to the night sky of Mumbai as well as the traffic down below. He is wearing a white bathrobe with his grim expressions. His bangs are straight on his forehead. Suddenly Sonia comes also wearing a bathrobe and hugs him from the back. Reyansh doesn't seem much surprise but he doesn't make a move to touch her. His demeanor is still grim. Sonia pressing her cheeks on his back asks him shyly with a smile, "You are jealous aren't you?" Moving her head to look at him, she continues, "You keep on asking me about my sponsor." She laughs. Reyansh blinks to break his chain of thoughts and turns around to face her with his charming smile.

"I have a lot of money, if it is about that... You don't have to work for him..." he pulls her close to him as he proceeds to the couch beside them and makes her sit on his lap. "It is just that he has connections." Sonia reasons as Reyansh listens to her seriously. She continues voicing her suspicion, "The police station let me out immediately... and... he gives out huge amounts of easy money." She seems to be a little drunk as her words start to slur. "Easy money?" Reyansh questions probing to get more info. "The construction company is my money too. I can control the mayor and the employees at the mayor's office however I want to." She confesses to him.

It is an expensive hotel room. There is a queen size bed in the middle all made. There is a couch to sit. There is also a side table exactly opposite from from Reyansh and Sonia are sitting. When looking under the table, there is a recorder with a camera that is recording all their conversation. After her drunken confession to Reyansh, Sonia laughs as she claps her hand. Reyansh also smiles playing with his ear. Then he asked watching her expression and intently listening to her, "You saw it?" "Did you actually see them taking the money?" Reyansh ask as he notices her eyes closing. As Sonia tries to come up with an answer in her drunken state, the hotel phone rang.

Sonia looks irritated at the interruption while Reyansh doesn't look happy either. He closes his eyes for a second to calm himself and then turns towards her but as the phone kept ringing he suddenly stretch his hand to the ring to pick the receiver. "Yes?" He questions. The receptionist answers where Taani is intently leaning on the reception desk. "A woman wants you to come down to the parking lot. She says that she left her cell phone in your car," the receptionist told him. "Ah, she's driving me crazy." Reyansh mumbled to him. "I don't know anyone like her," he replied on the phone. Taani who was listening to this whole conversation reach out to grab the phone. "I'm the "ten dollar". My cell phone is in your car." She informed him. "It will only take a minute. You can then go back to finishing your business," she requested politely with a smile. "What is she saying?" by saying that Reyansh hanged up. While Sonia's head fell on Reyansh's shoulder.

"Ah crap, I shouldn't have called. He might file a claim. Go on now, go," the receptionist told Taani as he took the phone back in irritation. "But I saw my cell phone in the seat of that car parked over there." Taani told him pointing towards the parking lot. "I saw it," she insisted but he payed no heed to her. "Ah crap, that despicable jerk," Taani cried in anger. She walks out of the hotel to the parking lot where the car was parked.

Parking Lot...

Taani comes to Reyansh's car. She looks inside the window from the passenger seat. "Oh. My cell phone.." Taani whined as she look inside to see her phone as she stand while putting her hand on the window. Her phone starts ringing. "Oh, my driving job! Oh, my money, my money..." Taani whined as slap her hand on the window glass again and again. She stands up straight and look at the tall hotel building. She is looks furious. She hears her phone ring again. She looks inside and the caller ID says "Hospital".

Reyansh's Hotel Room...

Reyansh and Sonia both are sitting on the corner of the wed drinking red wine. Sonia gulped it all down with glee as wipes her lips with her finger tips looking drunk. "Did you see it in person?" Reyansh questioned again. Sonia puts her head on his shoulder with sigh as she closes her eyes, "They don't do such things in front of me. I head about it," she told him her words slurring. Her glass fell from her left hand on the carpet as she fell on the bed drunk. Reyansh moves away a little to face her and asks intrigued with a smile, "How much did he give?" "Millions..." Sonia replies with her eyes closed lying on the bed. "Millions? How many millions?" Reyansh continues to interrogate. "He wrote it down. In the notebook." Sonia mumbled, "He always writes it down. Since he's finicky. Ack, so finicky," she finishes. "Notebook?" Reyansh questions more to himself than her.

Suddenly he hears a car security alarm going off. He gets from the bed and goes to the big window to have a look. He looks down from the window, "What is this?" he wonders. With close look, he notices Taani kicked his car that set off the alarm. It is his car that is going off. "What is she?" he asked incredulous. After kicking his one last time, she goes off. In the mean time, Reyansh comes running out of the hotel. He hurry towards his car. He beeps his car and the security alarm stops. He looks around but there was no sign of Taani. Then he heard a phone ring. He goes around and open the passenger door. There is her I-phone sitting on the passenger seat. He brings it out and reads the caller ID "Hospital". A dark expression covers his face as he looks at the phone screen.

Hospital...

"Please perform the procedure on him, Doctor," Taani begged as they walk out of the room. "I've given all the money I earned today to the hospital." Taani said in tears."Please understand our position," the doctor said gravely. "The Administrators are asking why we're performing such expensive insertion surgery on a vegetative patient." The doctor explained. "We've reached the limit," he said softly."Just give up," he told her. "The vegetative patients are humans too!" she counter back. "There have been cases where people wake up after 17 years! And what if my dad wakes up?" she questions in tears grip voice. "So you're going to let my dad go because of money?" she questions again. Taking a deep breath and controlling herself, she continues, "I told you I would arrange the money." "Please put in the stents(medical instruments for arteries)," she begged, "Please save my dad!"

"Let's do that procedure." said a man's voice from ahead of Taani. Taani can't believe it that same jerk. "I already paid so let's do the surgery." Reyansh continues. He looks at Taani who eyes are filled with tears. She looks at the doctor with questioning eyes. Reyansh puts his hand down his pocket and pulls out her cell phone, "Here's your cellphone." he said as he puts it down on the chair by the wall. He turns around and walks away. Taani looks at the doctor and then runs behind him.

Reyansh walks out the Hospital to his car. Taani calls out behind his as he reaches his car, "Excuse me. Wait a minute." Without paying any heed to her, Reyansh opens his door and gets in his car. Taani holds the door before he can close it. Reyansh looks up at her. "Excuse me..." Taani said gently."Why did you help me?" she questions him unsure. Reyansh answers looking away, "I didn't help you. I didn't want to hear that someone died because of me." he replied brushing it away. "I'm really thankful." Taani answered with gratitude,"I will repay you one day. Give me your account number." she said out of the blue. Reyansh instantly looks at her. "Don't repay me," he says shaking his head.

"That money is nothing to me, and I'll just think of it as making an early donation to the needy." he replied looking away again. He tries to drive away but she again caught the door. "I'm struggling because I don't have that money which is nothing to you." Taani says with pride. "But I'm not a needy neighbor," she continued with anger. "I'm a person who knows how to be thankful. So thank you." she says calming her self down. She let go off his door and he drives away.

Taani stays back looking at him drive away. He drives away with a glace at her in the rear view mirror, while she says to herself, "I will repay you." While her father gets the operation, Taani receives a phone call, accepting her into the Parliament House of India as a secret service agent-in-training. She jumps for joy.

Next Day...

Taani reports to her first day of training, nervous and happy. She is wearing a white shirt and black dress pants with black jacket. She has her hair tied back in a ponytail. But the most important element, she has a big smile on her face. Also, She has a bag on her shoulder.

Parliament House of India...

It is a big room which has glass walls on all sides. There is a big Indian flag in the middle. The guards are getting their orientation right now. Taani's lined up for her first roll call like the rest of the people. "First, we sincerely welcome you into Parliament House of India. But don't relax just because you got accepted into the Parliament House. I hope that you keep your heads straight and do you best..." The lead agent continues the orientation just then Reyansh walks in.

He looks amazing in his black suit and white shirt inside. His whole look is completed with his tie. He left his jacket button open which shows his perfect physic. His hair is straight while his bangs are across his forehead. With his laptop bag in his right hand and his left in his pocket, he suavely walks in as he owns the place. The lead agent yells at him for being tardy on his first day, and dressed inappropriately at that. Everyone turns around to see who he's talking to. Reyansh even turned around to look exactly that guy was talking to. When he turned back around, Taani gasps to see none other than playboy-turned-daddy-savior standing right there.

Taani instantly turns around when recognize him not quick enough as Reyansh caught a glimpse of her. "I'm not a bodyguard," Reyansh replies with a head shake. "Then what are you?" The lead agent asks. "They told me to come here," Reyansh says points behind him. Taani turns around once again and he caught a full slight of her. Just then a man comes from behind him, "Doctor!" the man called. Reyansh turns around to look at him. This man is tall with short hair and wears big glasses. He is also wearing a suit but not classy as Reyansh.

"You were here." the man said while Taani mumbles to herself, "Doctor? That player?" her expression of shock. "The National Securities and Communications team is in the next building, and not here," the man informed Reyansh. "Oh, the professor from MIT?" the lead agent haughtily questions. Now Reyansh has complete attention of Taani as she completely turns around to look at him, "MIT?!" Reyansh as about to turn around and leave but then stop in midstep and turns around again to look at her. At that instant, Taani turns around closing her hoping against hope that he didn't see her. Reyansh stares at her back with squint eyes.

"You.. the $10?" Reyansh says pointing a finger at her. Taani turns halfway not completely with a "Oh no God" expressions. "I'm right, am I not?" Reyansh asks to confirms as he walks towards her with a big smile. "You are a body guard here?" he asks as he stops few steps behind her facing her back. "That makes sense.. you were really fast," Reyansh says with a smile remembering his previous encounter. The lead agent asks, "Do you know him?" At the same time, while Reyansh said, "Yes." with a smile; Taani exclaimed a "No!". Everybody in the turns to look between them while Taani closes her eyes in embarrassment. The lead agent looks at her questioningly. Reyansh still smiles looking at her while she looks like she can die right then there.

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The National Securities and Communications Department...

"It's not that you can't go there because it's far away from here. It is that you couldn't even get into even if you wanted to..." the Boss continues. They are in a big room high tech room. There are two large flat screen TVs on the walls and dozens of computers on the desks. As Reyansh stands behind the Boss, everybody listens to them.

Reyansh is introduced to the communications department as the MIT-golden-boy, and despite Nakul's(Reyansh's colleague and the same guy who came to take him) efforts to turn him into the traditional workplace newbie, as Reyansh is the youngest at 28. However Reyansh makes it clear that he's not going to be anyone's lackey. His arrogant attitude is condoned by the boss as Reyansh informs them that he doesn't work overtime and puts his feet on the table.

Inside Lead Agent's Office...

"What do you mean, don't go the camp?" Taani asked all confused. After the roll call, Taani and her colleague, Roshini, were called in his office. "Are you cancelling our acceptance?" Roshini asked shocked.The lead Agent answered calmly as he sat behind his desk, "Don't be so hasty. The Prime Minister's youngest daughter Ms. Dia Chopra is studying to retake the college exam next year. Her personality... is a bit different from others." The Lead Agent informed them choosing his words wisely. The girls patiently listened.

"Yesterday, two women employees resigned." He told them quietly, letting his words sink in. "I came to serve the President, not the youngest daughter," Roshini complained when she understand the hidden meaning behind his words. "Hey, newcomer. Are you the manager? Are you in a position to do anything you wish?" he ask getting angry. Roshini tried to explain, "That's not what I'm saying, you dream..."

The Manager, interrupted briskly, "Stop talking about your dream! Protecting the president's family is as important as doing so for the president." Getting from his chair, he told them his final decision,"You can go through the internal training next year with next year's newbies." "I'll compress the 6-month-training for you first," he informed them.

Back to The National Securities and Communications Department...

Reyansh is working on his computer. He has his face in his left hand's palm as he does his work. He looks adorable all focused. Just then Nakul passes behind him giving him a scorn but Reyansh doesn't notice. Suddenly somebody called out quietly, "Mr. Reyansh!" It took 2 tries for Reyansh to notice. He look sideways. It is Taani.

She is calling him from the frosted glass door. The symbol of the department is curved on the glass. That part is only glass. Reyansh can see Taani through it.She motioned him to come out. First he stare at her with a bored expression and then turned back to the computer. She knocks again and motioned again to come out. Reyansh sighs closing his eyes and comes out.

In the hallway...

Reyansh suavely walks out with his hands in his pocket. His expression of sheer boredom. Taani quickly hides on the side as the frosted glass door slides open. He looks around sighing.

"I texted you many times for your account number but you never replied," Taani says almost accusingly. "I said it's okay. That amount is like the price of gum to me," Reyansh said brushing it away. Reyansh says turning around, "We're done now right?" Taani reach out and grasped his elbow to stop him.

"Wait. I don't know if you'll be able to chew the $5000 worth of gum, but please let me repay you," she said almost requesting. "Although I can't pay you back at once, I'll regularly pay off the debt, if you just give me your account number," she tells him with a bright smile.

"You won't be able to afford it," he tells her straightforwardly. "I'll pay off as I earn..." Taani tried to explain but Reyansh interrupted, "So you'll have a part time job?" he questions her. Glancing at the door behind him, he tells her, "It's forbidden to hold two jobs." In a low, she tells him with a shy smile, "That... just keep it a secret till I've paid you back."

Reyansh looks at her and then smirks, "It seems like you are trying to DO something with me using this..." and then added in the end cheekily, "You're not my type, okay? Do I have to buy you a mirror too?" Turning around, he mumbles, "You're really reckless." He walks away, leaving her slack-jawed. "Wow, he really pisses me off!" she mumbles as she goes back to work.

A few hours later...

All the guards and the people from the National Security and Communications Department people are gathered in that big room where earlier the guards were getting role call. Everybody is wearing Karate clothes: a white jacket and white pants with a white belt tied above the jacket.

It appears that the communications team and the secret service agents have a little in-house rivalry going on, which they put to a judo-wrestling contest. Reyansh gets paired up with Taani, and he basically lets her body slam the hell out of him, to keep up geeky appearances. She flips him over her shoulder.

As he lies on the mat, he whines holding his right arm. "Give me your account number, so I can pay you back!" Taani insists panting as she moves above him. "I said it's okay," Reyansh tells her as he sits up. "No, I'm going to pay you back," Taani insists as Reyansh stands up again.

"Why are you being so stubborn?" he questions her. Taani doesn't reply rather flips him over her shoulder. While holding his hand behind him, she answers as she holds him down with her body, "Because it was money to save my father's life. He's the most important person to me. He's precious to me, so I don't want a freebie." Reyansh was facing sideways first as he whines and turn towards her. Their faces were inches away from each other but Taani seems clueless of their proximity.

"The more precious it is, the more I must endure and protect it, no matter how hard it is," Taani tells him. Reyansh just looks at her with his intense eyes. His hair slightly messed because of flipping but it gave him a perfect look. "Hurry up and give me your account number, so I can pay you back." Taani insists getting edgy.

Reyansh wets his lips and huskily whispers, "You really are stubborn." Taani, not about to lose, grabs his legs and tangles it with hers twisting it. He cries in pain. Taani doesn't budge. "Okay, I'll give it to you. I'll give it to you," Reyansh finally said giving up. Then only Taani moves away. Reyansh takes a breath of relief. "You have to keep your promise," Taani warns him and walks away.

Later in the shower...

Shower broody time! Reyansh is taking a shower. His back is facing us. Reyansh's back is covered with scars, not surprising given to his militant upbringing, and that he still wears the bullet that pierced his father's heart around his neck. He recalls how he found Taani begging the Doctor to save her Dad. Then he remembers Taani's pictures from years back. With a conclusion that satisfies him, he walks out with a smile.

Later by the pond behind the Parliament House...

All showered and dressed, Reyansh meets Taani. He came with a plan for Taani to repay him. "A contract?" Taani asks looking down on the papers that Reyansh holds out for her. "Oh, well. You say you really want to pay me back. And I'm sure you're going to keep doing night-driver service. So just be my driver," Reyansh told her explaining everything.

Taani takes the papers and look over them. "I haven't been in India long, so do some little things here and there and every time you drive or do work for me I will give you $25. That's around $5000, so 200 times you should do it," Reyansh continues to explain as Taani listens quietly. "200 times?" she exclaimed as he finished.

"Don't you want to?" he ask. "Well, I told you not to do it," he reminds her as he grabs her file and pulls it. Taani instantly pulls it back mumbling, "You're so rash." "where do I have to sign?" she ask him haughtily. "It won't be easy," he tells her bending a little to be in her eye level.

He looks so hot in his check dark brown suit, white shirt and black tie. To add to his hotness, his hair were slightly curly and his bangs were across his forehead slightly covering his eyes giving him a perfect dark aura. "Even if it's not easy, I'm going to try," she tells him confidently. Reyansh points to the place and Taani signs. Just then they both get phone calls telling to come and meet the Prime Minister.

In the Prime Minister's living room...

They both get called in to meet the Prime Minister, and this is the first time that Reyansh comes face to face with him. The sitting Prime Minister is none other than Rajeev Chopra, the man who betrayed his father most directly but Reyansh doesn't know that, yet.

"He's from MIT, Professor Reyansh Singhania. He's the dark horse in Information and Communications," the Manager informed the Prime Minister. "I heard you were heavily scouted in the States. What brings you to Korea?" the Prime Minister ask. He was sitting with his wife and his daughter while Reyansh, his manager, Taani, Roshini and their Manager stand in front of them.

"I have money I will inherit from my rich father, so money is not an object, so I wondered why I should live doing good for another country," Reyansh replied with a smile. Taani glanced at him. Maybe, impressed? The Prime Minister laughs a little,"Ah, you are a patriot." Reyansh replied with a smile, "I'm nothing compared to the President." He stands up as he nods.

"Please take good care of the communication of my country," the Prime Minister tells him with a smile as he comes towards him. He seems like a nice man. He is probably in his late 50's. He has gray hair but he still seems fit. He is wearing a dark gray suit with a white shirt and sky blue tie. He gives Reyansh his hand for handshake and Reyansh obliged with a smile, "I'll do my best."

"These are the new body guards, Taani Shekawat and Roshini Khandelwal," The Manager introduced them while Reyansh kept his gaze downwards. He looks up casually when he saw Dia.

The Prime Minister's youngest daughter is Dia, who basically looks at Reyansh and down like the tall drink of water that he is, and throws him her best come-hither wink. Reyansh nearly busts a gut with his very audible "Pffft!" right back at her.

She tries to engage him in conversation, but he ignores her completely and gets the hell out of dodge. Taani and her partner, Roshni, get introduced to their charge, the bratty Dia, who is post-high-schol, pre-college (as in, couldn't get in so she's going to an academy to reapply). She seems like a hellbeast trapped in the body of a girl.

In the end of the introductions, a man walks in and announces to the Prime Minister, "Mr. Prime Minister, Assemblyman Preet Singh is on hold." This didn't go unnoticed by Reyansh as notes it with interest. The Prime Minister finish off his conversation with the guards and quickly leaves. With that note, everybody else also leaves.

Later in the day...

Google Hangout in the car...

Reyansh takes a moment to give a progress report to Dad. He reports on Senator Preet Singh, he is of the clean image and dirty money. Dad tells him that the senator must be dealt with. Reyansh asks something that he's been curious about: why has he only given him the identity of one of the five men he's to take out?

Dad tells him that of the Big Five, he knows only one person's identity for sure: Preet Singh. Dad tells him to start with Preet Singh, and make him reveal the identity of the others. Reyansh asks what Dad's purpose was in sending him to the Parliament. He brushes his question away saying he will get opportunity to get all the information

Reyansh tells him that he wants to find a way to destroy Preet Singh that he can live with, like getting him caught for doing something that people will never forgive him for. Dad seems pleased with his initiative, so he plans to stand by and let Reyansh call the shots. Or is he?😉


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Reyansh suave break-in skills😎

First Kiss☺️

Reyansh carries Taani in his arms

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Flashback...

7 years back...

Thailand...

As a rash teenager, Reyansh slipped away from the compound upsetting his father, who worries about land mines to cruise the village with his buddies. It's here that he overhears a voice speaking hindi, and looks on curiously at the scene unfolding in a nearby gambling den, where a local gang boss is threatening to kill the Indian gambler.

He sizes up what's about to happen and interrupts the impending amputation (the Indian man's hand) by hurling his apple through the window with sniper precision, knocking down one of the minions. The men look out the window to see Reyansh boldly smiling up at them, who then hurls another apple, this time into the boss's face.

He grabs the man and runs through the village streets, managing to escape capture by hijacking a boat. He takes the man, called Dev Singh, home with him, which earns him a slap from Dad, who'd warned him never to bring outsiders in. Reyansh protests that the guy was about to be killed, and Raj relents a little, asking if there's anything Dev's good at. Thankfully, the man can sputter a response: "Cooking!"

Proving his facility with Indian cooking Dev earns the right to stay, which comes with Raj's warning that "If you try to run away, you die." Reyansh looks curiously at the photo of a pretty girl Dev carries with him, Taani Shekawat, who he initially presumes is the man's daughter. But they share different surnames, meaning that for now, her relation to him remains unclear.

Reyansh acts as guide to Dev: he acquaints him with things like Raj's fearsome sleeping habits (always sitting up, with a gun at the ready) and shows him his now-improved skills at target practice. That's interrupted by the arrival of his father's men, who drag along that village woman with them. The woman who's become like Reyansh's surrogate mother and tie her to the target for her execution. Her crime: Her husband ran off with some drugs.

Worse yet, Raj orders Reyansh to be the one to shoot her, insisting that his rules be followed to the letter. When Reyansh balks, Raj takes out his gun, ready to do it himself. Reyansh knows he'll have to bargain his way through this, so he hurriedly proposes a deal "that he'll do the shooting. But if he manages to accurately shoot all the targets, Dad will relent and try exercising forgiveness, just this once." Dad agrees, and Reyansh prepares himself mentally, then fires. He shoots a few hanging fruit and the wooden target, then throws the gun away angrily, having proven his point.

Lying in his bed, he looks over at the photo of Taani, which he's apparently taken to talking to. He asks incredulously how he could be expected to shoot somebody he cares about, and muses, "You're probably off in that place called Mumbai, living happily, aren't you?"

At the same time, a team of gangsters infiltrates the compound, taking out a few guards and making their way to the inner rooms, where the leader spies Reyansh lying in bed. This is the gangster he'd saved Dev from, and they're here for some payback. Thanks to Reyansh's finely honed battle skills, however, he hears the telltale click of a gun and rolls out of bed smoothly, ducking in time to get Dev under cover before the attackers open fire.

Raj hears the commotion from a distance as he and his armed men are outside and races for the house, where the gangsters find Reyansh crumpled on the floor, playing dead. Reyansh waits for his moment, then leaps up and fights back, nimbly evading their attacks and finding safety behind a pillar.

But it's that woman, his surrogate mother, who fears for his safety and runs toward him to shout a warning. That gets her shot, and his shock is so tremendous that Reyansh doesn't even care about being exposed as he rushes to her crumpled body, sobbing at her to wake up. He's about to get shot through the back, not that he cares, when his father arrives and shoots his would-be attackers. Reyansh's grief quickly turns to fury, and he grabs a gun and leaps outside to get his revenge, vowing to kill them all.

He chases the three remaining gangsters through the fields, trying to fire and run at the same time. But when a telltale click goes off under his foot, he immediately stills, recognizing the ominous sound of a land mine being activated by his weight. Reyansh freezes, all the while keeping his targets in his sights, ready to shoot... if only he weren't out of ammo. His attackers realize their good fortune and raise their guns to shoot him only to be picked off by Raj, who's arrived to save his son.

Raj quickly gets to work on the land mine under Reyansh's foot, not betraying any fear while Reyansh sweats bullets. Dad gives him a reassuring look right before he launches himself at him and knocks him out of the way as the land mine explodes.

The blast takes off one of Raj's legs, and Reyansh carries him home on his back, crying frantically all the while, begging the doctor to help him. Raj bears the pain stoically and tells Reyansh to listen up: If he's about to die, he has something more important to address, and starts to explain the story of Reyansh's true father. Reyansh listens in shock as Raj tells him of the man who'd saved his life with his own, who'd been betrayed by his country, whom he'd vowed to avenge, who'd been Reyansh's father. He says in a half-request, half-command: "Put a bullet through the heart of your father's and my enemy."

He fades into unconsciousness but survives, and throughout his pain-fueled recovery, Raj is assailed with flashbacks of his life, begging his friend not to die while also apologizing to his wife. Reyansh finally understands why Raj had raised him the way he had, and why he'd trained him so fiercely. He contemplates the old photo of his mother that he'd taped back up at some point, now understanding that the other man is his father.

And then he goes to Raj for more information before committing to this plan of vengeance, and is told that there are five men who must be killed."And if I kill those five men, will you and I be able to live well again, in a place where nobody knows us?" Reyansh asks him. Raj nods. Reyansh hesitantly ask, "I'll ask one last thing. Is my mother... s-still alive?" "She's alive," Raj tells him quietly.That seals the deal. Grimly, he comes out of that meeting and tells Dev: "I'm going to change now. That's my fate."


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PRECAP

Reyansh suave break-in skills😎

First Kiss☺️

Reyansh carries Taani in his arms

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Hi once again! Want a awesome visual teaser of what is going to happen next?😃😉 Here you go this is a mv of this show which is a vm of indian shows. I request people to not look up this kdrama or its story. Plz check this out. Im bet your curiosity will touch the nth level after this.😆 I know I'm mean right? Aren't I? 😆 Anyways check this out and don't forget to tell me what you think is going to happen in the future.


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wvrP2mPTjIA[/YOUTUBE]

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