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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

Where is the update neetu

updating in 2 min
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Posted: 8 years ago

...Chapter - 20...

He
came dangerously close to jodha... "its
time for answers
jaan..."
jodha got really scared after seeing the devil smirk and darkness in his blood shot angry eyes... She was really shocked and confused as well by his mood swings... He tightly hold her from waist and made her sit in his lap... His grip on her waist is so tight , she moaned in pain... She looked at him with wet eyes... He smirked and again anger took over his sharp features... "so how do you know arth..?" he hissed in anger... Jodha doesn't give any answer, she just kept sobbing... Already irritated jalal got more annoyed seeing her in tears... "answer me damnit" he shouted... jodha somehow composed herself and answered " voh...voh we...we met " and she narrated the auto incident and skip their shopping part with little soft hippcups... Jalal was just listening quietly and as soon as she finished , he shot another question "do you love him?" in a plain cold voice...she nodded in a no, "say it aloud" his pitch got higher... She gripped his shirt and shut her eyes tighter "n...no" her voice low but audible enough to reach his ears... "do you have any kind of relation with him?" he wishpered dangerously close near her face... Jodha's breath hitched seeing him close... His hot breath tickling her senses, her breathing getting heavier with each passing second... "ju...just fr...friend...friendship" She shuddered as he inched closer... He slowly gripped her waist more tighter and roughly kissed her... His lips were moving a way too fast for her, she tried to push him but only resulting him to tighten his grip... Jodha closed her eyes as now she needed to breath... As something hit his mind, he pushed her...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Another awesome update monu ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
jalal made jo sit on her lap and then started with questioning round.
jalal ko thoda control karna padega apne gusse par.
jo ko dara raha hai wo
jo bach gayi aaj ,
otherwise pata nahi what he would have done with jo.
always forcing jo for kiss๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
what will happen next
update soon plsEdited by avika444 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hehehehe...nyc update dear...bt wt hits in mind sudnly...? Anywaz luv ur updats dear...sry cnt cmnt on ur ech update due to my exms...bt u r suprb..keep going dear... :*
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Posted: 8 years ago
yesss me first
Edited by avika444 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update. Your writting skills are different from other writters, i loved it.have you wrote any ff,ss or os on akdha.please tell the name if you wrote
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update dear muaa
jalal thoda tho sabar karo let Jodha love you first 
then do ahem ahem๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update dear muaa๐Ÿ‘
jalal thoda tho sabar karo let Jodha love you first 
then do ahem ahem๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: avika444

Another awesome update monu ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
thankew avi di๐Ÿค—

jalal made jo sit on her lap and then started with questioning round.
jalal ko thoda control karna padega apne gusse par.
jo ko dara raha hai wo
jo bach gayi aaj ,
otherwise pata nahi what he would have done with jo.
always forcing jo for kiss๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
what will happen next
i don't know๐Ÿ˜›
update soon pls sure didu

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update.. Neetu.