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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

plzz update your next story also plzz

it'll take some time darloo
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Monucute

it'll take some time darloo

okay dear take our sweet time
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

okay dear take our sweet time

thankew darloo
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Posted: 8 years ago

...Chapter - 19...

He cupped her
face... The gap
between them
decreased...
"jalal.," a soft sweet voice broke his revrie... And here his dream broke... Arth was now also sitting there with jodha and he was standing at the door with the broken vase at his feet... He was really shocked with himself how can he dream something like this... That to in with open eyes? You hate her right? Yes err...may be not... A world war 3 is taking between his mind and heart... "umm... Jalal are you okay?" again same voice interrupted... Jalal again looked at the source of voice "umm... Yeah jodha m fine" he replied fumbling... Silence prevailed... "umm jo u took medicines?" arth questioned... "which medicines??" jodha asked confusingly... "arre you after you passed out... I took you to hospital..." and he narrated whole incident...

"Ok jo now i may take your leave..." arth stood to go... Till the time arth explained, feeded her the perfect cutted slices of fruits which he had brought, and lastly when he gave medicines... Jalal noticed the change in her expression from calm to tensed again to relief and lastly funny wierd faces while taking medicines... "ahh... Sho cute..." arth pulled her cheeks... Jalal had really annoyed by now... "artharav..." he shouted... Arth looked at him "yep jalal" "umm don't you want go home?" he gritted his teeth... "oh shit i forgot..." arth slapped his forehead... "ok bye jo.," and arth kissed her forehead stunning jodha to core... Jalal fists got balled to control immense fury and rage... As soon as arth exited the house, the devil evoked in jalal... He came dangerously close to jodha... "its time for answers jaan..."

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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg!! It was a dreaamm!!! 😆 Jealous jalal!! oye!! update next part sooon yrr!! Can't wait to kno what il happen next!! 🤗 Wr r the pending updates!! 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome !awesome! Awesome!chapter muaa 
jalal dreaming with open eyes hehehe waiting for next one
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Posted: 8 years ago
Neetu😡😡
Again a small chapter😡
U didn't update yesterday so we want one more chappy today😒
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Neetu😡😡

Again a small chapter😡
U didn't update yesterday so we want one more chappy today😒

she is updating another chapter don't take tension😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

she is updating another chapter don't take tension😉

Ohh.. Then it's fine😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
hehehe
ja started dreming..
hate this arth ...
everything was going well bet ja & jo
...
pata ni kaha se aa gaya..
update sooon