Ishra Lives - TS 02/06/2015 completed

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Hi Guys,

This story is dedicated to Kaarthikk(Kaa1202), as he is the one who wanted me to write a story on this track.

This story is based on the current track on what is happening in the suite, earthquake, fire and the aftermath. Hopefully this has met your expectation Kaarthikk.

The starting of the story is pretty much like the show with a bit added to it.

Thanks for all the likes, comments and PM on my previous stories.

This one is not proofread.

IshRa Lives - TS

Ishita is pleasantly surprised after reaching the maharaja suite to see Raman has done this much planning for them. She is thinking that even though she is ready to take the next step in the relationship she is afraid to cross the bridge. She is thinking may be Raman won't notice it in his enthusiasm but again thinks he will notice it.

Raman enters the suit behind her, keeps his hands on her shoulder and says to her are you thinking to stand here the whole night. Ishita replies yes if he is standing with her. Raman says this won't do side hugging her. Do you know why I did all this planning? Ishita is thinking she will say something about her inner struggle. Ishita says Raman for me Raman says chup today we will not talk only our breaths will talk with each other.

Ishita asks what about the kids. He complains to her you are the one who knows to destroy the mood. I have already informed papaji that I wanted to spend some family time so they are taking care of the kids. Today you are neither Ishima nor I am papa. We are just Ishita and Raman. Ishita is glad hearing the words but her nervousness has still not gone. He notices that she is not very comfortable and says to her I have a suprise for you think what it could be and leaves from there.

Ishita is moving around the room and finds the champagne bottle and picks it up thinking whether he is going to make her drink to lose her nervousness. Raman comes hurrying towards her saying pagal aurat keep the bottle down you are always intent on spoiling the mood and drink this water first. Ishita says to him I don't drink and I don't want water now. He asks do you sweat this much every day. She says I am not sweating touching her forehead. Raman lightly caress her forehead on both sides saying see there is sweat here drink the water first. I look like a kadoos person but actually I am not says it with a wink to lighten the mood to make it easy for her.

Ishita drinks the water thinking how well he knows me without me saying anything he understood that I still have hesitation on my part. Raman takes her to the bed, makes her sit down and to ease the tension which surrounds her starts to recite poetry for her.

He knowingly made mistakes so that she forgets what they are here for. Ishita laughs at his stumble and pulls his leg taking Ruhi name that his handwriting is so bad forgetting they are here for different reasons and laughs openly at him seeing the face he makes which is exactly what he wanted from her.

Raman seeing her laughing face acts as if he is angry and says to her don't laugh madrasan I will recite my own for you other don't do me good. Then he starts reciting these verses

"Why should I find you in the stars?

As you already live in my heart

I know there are many stars in the sky

But tell the sky don't be jealous as

My star is the most beautiful one in the world"

(I have translated the poem according to my knowledge. If there is any mistake please let me know)

Ishita is touched by the poetry and Raman eyes filled with love for her. Ishita says wow. Ishita is extremely happy with the love she is getting from her hubby but at the same time her worry starts will I be able to match Raman expectation as he has been with a beautiful women such as Shagun so to buy her more time she says the poetry reminded her of the Tara who is Ruhi school friend and she needs to call home to start the process of buying gifts for Ruhi's friends birthday party.

Raman gets frustrated at the same time understand her insecurity as well he says to her madrasan you have two minutes to finish your call. He is thinking somehow I have to put a stop once and for all for her shyness and insecurity today.

Ishita calls home to talk with kids. Raman side hugs her and puts the phone on the speaker saying that he also wants to talk with the kids. Toshji takes the call and says to them why are you asking for the kids they are with you. Raman says mom don't joke already she is worried, now you are making me worried too please stop your jokes and call the kids. Toshjii says but puttar you wanted to spend some family time so we thought the kids were with you. He says no mama I wanted to spend time with Ishita but leave that find out where are my kids are.

Mr. Bhalla asks everyone did anyone bring the kids home in the car when everyone replies negative. IshRa panic and they say to them to find their kids.

Ishita is worried sick about the kids and gone to the days back where she is taunted by everyone calling her banch as she cannot conceive even though she knows Raman loves her a lot a small corner of heart feels that she got all this happiness because of Ruhi and if Ruhi is not there Raman will also leave here. Her heart knows it is absurd and not true but her mind is playing tricks with her stating that Raman first fell in love with Ishima then only he fell in love with you.

Ishita is in a panic state and not even sure what she is talking. She turns to Raman and lashes out on him knowing full well that he will understand why she is behaving like an obsessed fool.

Ishita says to Raman, you said the kids have gone with papaji but my kids are missing what I am going to do? Where am I going to find them? Raman understands her perfectly and knows fully well that she is first and foremost Ishima before becoming his wife which is one of the qualities he adores in his wife but he also sense that she has gone from normal worry to a panic mode worry so he shouts her saying that they are also his kids that is the only way he knew to bring her out of the panic state she was in. Ishita hearing Raman shout comes back to earth and says to him please find the kids. He says we will find them. I will go look in the hall. You wait here so saying he leaves a worried Ishita back in the suit and goes in search of their kids.

Adi comes to meet Shagun outside the party hall. Shagun acts like she is missing the kids and cries in front of him. Adi could not bear to see his mom cry so he promises to her that he will bring Ruhi too. Once Shagun bought the kids home Adi is in two minds he wanted to spend time with his mom at the same time he did not want to worry his papa, Ishita aunty and his family so he tells him mom that he needs to call dadu to let them know that they are here with her. Shagun makes excuses to him telling that she already informed his dadu that they will stay with her tonight and she will drop them off in the morning. Adi is satisfied with her explanation and goes to change with Ruhi.

Once the kids are settled Shagun leaves from the room to call Ashok to inquire about the flight details and what he is doing about the Bahalla family while talking she turns on the stove to make a cup of coffee for her to relieve stress just then Ashok informs her to come and get the new tickets from him outside her apartment. Shagun in anxiety to leave the city forgets about the turned stove and goes to meet Ashok.

IshRa reach home after not finding the kids at the hotel. They are deciding what to do when they get a call from the person arranged by Ashok as a kidnapper and asking him to come alone and deliver 1 Crore rupees to him in an remote village.

They arrange the money and Raman is going to go to the village when Ishita says to him she will come with him she is again at the starting stage of panic mode. Raman asks her to calm down but she keeps repeating my kids need me and Raman does the only thing he knows how to make her come out of the panic mode he shouts at her saying they are my kids too. Hearing Raman shouts she gets out of the panic mode and looks into his eyes which show all the pain in her for him to see.

Raman not minding that the whole family is around tightly hugs her giving her strength and taking strength from her as well as and says to her don't worry as long as I am alive nothing will happen to our kids. Ishita says to him please bring them back and you reach back safely too.

Raman tells to Mihika not to call Abhisheck but at the same time he comes in and says to him that he has come as friend and not as a police officer. Finally Raman agrees for Abisheck to accompany him.

Ishita and Mihir go to his apartment to look for Shagun thinking whether she will be able to give her any clue to as who the kidnappers are but when they reached the apartment they could not find her and Ishita found from the security guard Shagun went to a different apartment. She takes the address and goes to look for Shagun.

Ruhi wakes up crying for her Ishima Adi calms her down and takes her outside to the hall. He searches for his mom and unable to find her tries to calm her down.

Raman while driving looking at the landscape realizes he is sent on a wild goose chase. He realizes that Shaguna and Ashok have planned to take his kid out of the country. He calls Shagun and Adi picks up her phone. Raman is relieved to hear his son voice over the phone. He smiles through his panic and asks him where are you guys? Ruhi snatches the phone from Adi and cries in the phone. Raman heartbreaks hearing his angle cry but he calms her down and getting a promise from her that she would not trouble her bhai. He then talks to Adi with underlying panic masking his worry asking him to lock the door and not to open it for anyone even for his Shagun mama when Adi is confused is by this request Raman tells him to trust him and he will be there and not open the door before that Adi promises him and locks the door.

Ruhi tells Adi that Shagun mama lied to us that she informed everybody but she did not do anything like that Adi is wondering why his Shagun mama lied to him and why there was panic in his papa voice but controls his emotions to cheer up his little sister and puts on act of being brave for his sister. He says to her don't cry I will make hot chocolate for you by the time you finish papa also will be here. When he lights a match to turn on the gas it burst due to the fumes and he is lying unconscious in the kitchen.( I know in real life there would be serious injury to him as he was close to the gas but I cannot see kids suffering so he is going to get only minor burn injuries)

Ishita sees Shagun outside the building and asks her about kids and telling her she did not mind that she came to see the kids without supervision but whether she saw something because the kids have been kidnapped. Shagun is thinking what explanation she can give when Ruhi calls Ishita through Shagun phone that is when Ishita realizes that the kids are with Shagun. When she is about to confront her Shagun says they are my kids and I am going to take them away. Ishita is about to say something when they see the blast occurring in an apartment.

Shagun says out loud that is her apartment Ishita forgets everything about her leaves the walking stick and rushes inside to save the kids. Shagun also follows behind with the help of people they break the door and go inside.

Ishita sees Ruhi first and hugs her tightly and searches for Adi when Ruhi says he is inside the kitchen Ishita panics and shouts Adi. She is asking Shagun to take Ruhi outside so that she can bring Adi out but Ruhi is not leaving her and asking Shagun to go in and save Adi but Shagun turns and goes away from the door due to smoke fumes. Ruhi is shattered seeing her mother leave her beloved brother to fire.

Ishita pushes Ruhi to the person standing by and jumps into the fire to save Adi. Ishita is trying to wake Adi up but he is still unconscious so he is not stirring up and the fire is spreading quickly so she picks him up putting weight on the injured leg as well and brings him out of the kitchen.


Adi regains consciousness when they are coming out of the kitchen. He calls her mom are you okay and then changes to Ishita aunty are you okay. Ishita says I am fine and starts to go out of the apartment keeping the kids close to her and dragging her feet as it stared paining due to the loss of walking stick and the pressure she put on it carrying Adi weight but she doesn't show anything to the kids.

When they were in the hallway they feel the earth move and realize that the earthquake is occurring so in spite of her hurt leg she rushes the kids outside when she thinks they have reached safely outside she stumbles due to her pain in the leg the kids ask her to get up when a pillar falls on her. The kids cry but she asks the person who was standing there to take the kids to safety first so two people drag the kids from there because they were unwilling to leave their mom. Ishita is still looking at the kids when they reach to a safe level she releases her breath and smiles at them. People were trying to take out the pillar above her when they realize the building is going to collapse some move away from there and the others Ishita asks them to move for their safety. She looks at the kids for one last time and thinks about Raman how sorry she is that she was not able to show her love for Raman in the most primitive way. Her last thoughts were of Raman and how he is going to take care of the kids before she fell unconscious.

Raman is coming back in the car when they felt the tremors when he reached the apartment building he was shocked to see that the building collapsed. He was frantically searching for his kids not realizing that his madrasan was also there.

The Iyers and the Bhalla family came outside due to the tremors they felt. Toshjii wanted to call Raman and Ishita to see whether they were okay but Madhavi said to them that the lines did not go through.

Mihir reached the Bhalla apartment and sees everyone are fine. He goes straight to Rinki and hugs her. Everyone is trying to reach Raman, Ishita and Abhischek.

Mihir calls Raman as Raman is frantically searching for his kids sees Mihir phone and picks up Mihir asks is he is okay after hearing the panic in his voice and tells him that everyone are fine here. Raman says he found that Shagun has the kids and came to get them but the whole building has collapsed and he is unable to find them. Mihir tells him what about bhabhi. He asks why are you asking about Ishita Mihir tells him that she was unable to reach you as you were talking with your parents she found out that Shagun was living in that address and went to see whether she knew anything about the kids.

Raman is relived a little bit after hearing that his madrasan was here and he knew she would never let anything happen to the kids as long as she was there.

Once Raman keeps the phone he starts searching for Ishita and the kids helping people along the way and asking them whether they have seen his kids and wife. He sees Shagun sitting under a tree with light wounds. He goes near her and picks her up and asks where are my kids in anger? Shagun snaps out of her state when she was about to answer.

Raman turns from her hearing Ruhi's voice. He leaves Shagun and rushes to the kids and hugs them relieved that they are safe. Ruhi breaks from the hug and tells him that he needs to save her Ishima as she is struck under the rubble.

Raman relief on seeing his kids to safety disappears as he realizes his madrasan is struck under the rubble. He asks the person to watch over his kids for some more time and frantically moves the boulders to find his madrasan.

Abhischek comes near him and says to him what are you doing Raman this is a job for the rescue team who are on the way. Raman tells to him that he cannot wait for the team as it is his wife who is under there and keeps moving the boulders praying frantically that nothing should have happened to his Ishita.

Ishita is still lying under the pillar unconscious the building fell before her and not on top of her but it did block the view for others that there is person trapped behind the debris just under a pillar.

Raman is frantically searching for Ishita calling her name and cursing her at the same time that she cannot leave him alone in this world as he won't be able to survive without her. Ishita stirs hearing Raman calls she calls back to Raman but he could not hear her.

Shagun meanwhile gathers herself seeing Adi safe she goes and places her hand on Adi head. Ruhi takes her hand from his head and asks how you can touch my Adi bhai. Adi says to her Ruhi you can't talk to our mother like that. Ruhi says to him she is not our mother she left you inside the fire when she should have gone and rescued you only Ishima went through the fire to save you. Adi is devastated by this and slowly asks her is this true.

Shagun stumbles to answer that is when Adi realizes that she never loved him and used him always as pawn and thinks about the time when he heard panic in papa voice for their safety and how Ishita aunty pushed them to safety when she was stuck under the pillar for the first time he feels he is part of their family.

He looks at Shagun and says to hear I always loved you looked after you and fulfilled all your wishes even though I am child I took care of you but know I realized papa and Ishita aunty love me as a child and you always use me a pawn in your game. I truly believed you wanted to spend time with me and Ruhi but again you were playing some games with papa and Ishita aunty. I love you so much that I could not even hate you for the things you did to me but here afterwards I don't want to see you or hear from you remember one thing I always will love my mom whom I remember from young age but you hold no value to me so I won't even bother hating you. I just wish my aunty is safe so that we can go to our home so saying he takes Ruhi in a hug trying to get comfort from her and turns his back to her. Ruhi hugs him tightly sensing her brother needs comfort now.

Shagun is devastated on the turns of events and realizes she even lost the last hold she had on Raman and thinks who is there in her life now. She is thinking she left her husband and daughter to live with her boyfriend who left her also. Her brother is not going to accept her after her latest fiasco and her son who she thought would never desert her also doesn't want anything to do with her for the first time Shagun cries for herself pitying the state she bought her life to on her own foolish fantasy that money would buy everything.

Raman is frantically searching for Ishita when Abhischek gets a call from Mihika he says to her that the kids are safe but they are looking for Ishita. Mihika conveys the same thing to the family everyone prays for her to be found. Romi and Mihir leave to phoenix apartment to find Ishita. They reach the complex to find Raman who is by now devastated that he could not find his madrasan is randomly lifting boulders even though he is tried he doesn't want to stop until he finds his love. They go near him and Mihir places a hand on him. Raman lifts his face which is streaked with tears he asks Romi to take the kids back home and asks him to call a doctor to check on them. Romi picks up the kids but they don't won't to leave until they find there Ishima Raman takes them in a hug and says to them he will bring their mom home but he cannot search properly as he is always worried what is going to happen to them he says if you guys go home I don't have to worry about you. The kids are satisfied with his explanation and gets a promise from him that he would call the minuter he finds there Ishima and bring her home. He hugs them and makes the promise. Romi takes the kids home. The doctor checks on them and says that there is nothing to worry just minor bruises and minor burn injuries for Adi they have inhaled some smoke during fire but since they were outside for most of the time after the inhalation of smoke they should be fine. Everyone is glad to hear the news. He prescribes smoke ointment to apply to the burns and injuries. Romi goes back to the apartment and tells his bhai that the kids are fine which takes one stress out of him they continue searching for Ishita.

The rescue team is also there helping people one of the rescuers found a person behind the debris he shouts to his collages to help him come and lift the pillar. Raman, romi and Mihir was close by so they go to help him when they are nearing him Raman heart gets excited and pumps faster when they were nearing Raman could see a yellow dress he hurries forward thinking it might be his madrasan when he reaches he is devastated to see his madrasan lying around without much energy as she lost most of it by calling him. He fondly caresses her head first with teary eyes while Romi, Mihir and the rescue worker were taking the pillar from her. As the pillar is heavy Raman also joins them in moving it from his Ishita. Once the pillar is moved Raman tries to pull her into a hug but the worker stops him saying that they should not move her as she may have fractured some parts. Raman is gently caressing her thanking all the gods in the world that he found his Ishita. Ishita opens her eyes and sees Raman first. She thanks the gods that she saw the kids before she closed her eyes and saw Raman first before her when she opened them she smiles weakly at him and the first question she asks is are my kids safe.

Raman smiles at her still with tears in his eyes saying your kids are safe now worry about you bechara husband who had to lift heavy boulders to find you. She smiles weakly at him as she knew he is more scared than he is letting it out.

Ishita is taken into the hospital and is diagnosed that she suffered minor injuries and burns but the worst part is the leg which was healing is fractured again so she has to stay in a cast and this time around she needs to be really careful for it to heal properly. They said they are keeping her in observation for a day.

The whole family reached there. Everyone was sad hearing that she is back in the cast but was happy that she was alive. The nurse told them only one person can stay in the night amma volunteered to stay the night but Raman said he will take care of her nobody argued with him as everyone realized he needs some time with Ishita.

Ruhi and Adi reach Ishita room Ruhi hugs her tightly and cries. Ishita pacifies her and says to her that she should be a good girl and should not trouble dadi tonight as she will come home tomorrow and she doesn't want to hear any complaints from dadi. Ruhi promises she will be a good girl and leaves the room happily. Adi is looking sad and doesn't look into her eyes. Ishita calls him to come near her and sit. He moves towards her and sits on the bed. Ishita asks what is the matter with you why are you sad. Adi stumbles aunty woh tho she asks what. Aunty you would not be in this condition if I had not taken Ruhi with me to meet Shagun mama. Ishita asks what is your fault in this. You thought your mama has informed us and went with her the rest all was an accident it could have happened any time anywhere so there is nothing to feel bad about. Adi is relieved to hear her speak about it not blaming him that is when he realizes the magnitude of a mother heart and hugs her saying thank you Ishima at the same time realizing what he said he pulls back but Ishita hugs him tightly saying you could not have given me a bigger gift than this and places a kiss on his forehead. Raman witnesses this exchange between mother and son standing outside the room door his eyes are moist and his heart is contented with the realization at last his family is complete.




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Maya

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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all a big thank you for accepting my request nd writing an OS..
Regarding the OS it is always tough 2 match the OS with already aired episodes, but there lies the significance of ur writing...Not all can emulate certain feelings through writing rather than few..U r definitely one of them..I am proud 2 say I m one of the fans of ur writing..Once again thanks for d OS..Wish u write more OSes..
With Regards-Kaarthikk
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsm part.
Beautiful story.
Update sn.
Tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow maya,once again you proove your readers ,u r such a awesome writer dear.
Each and every pain of this story visible in your writing.

A big thanks to present pics with story.
I once again reminse the yesterday episode.
Thanks for pm dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Is it a two short?????? That means ek aur part hai...??????????

Anyway story is nice... U should add more drama on shagun part... U know??????????


She should panishment more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice... very well written. ... when adi hugged ishita that part was really good...
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wow wow
i can only say PERFECT

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beautifully written
awesome update.
Thanks For pm
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Wonderful os...
On the current track and a happy ending... Adi calling Ishima was so heart touching... Pls continue soon...
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Maya,
Awesome yaar...👏👏👏
I had tears while reading...
Keep rocking...

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