ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED #7 THREAD 8 ADDED PT 36 Updated on 1-7-2015/ P133 - Page 49

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Posted: 10 years ago
I've been reading this update again and again di... sooo sweet to see maan and parth. So lovely. And even maaneet are wonderful in this. They all made a wonderful family. Slowly slowly maan is mellowing down. He will be a great dad in future. Lovely di. And the photo I fell In love with it. Lovely.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
parth is so cute and smart
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey
I am ur new reader
And ES is Awsm story
Geet realising maan
How important relations
are in a person's life
Just loved it ...
Waiting to read more ...
Update soon ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 10 years ago
hope geet and parth help maan in imbibing some beautiful emotions in him
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the updates
So beautiful..count me in
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb Most Touchy Update I loved it so much...

aww God's little Angeles did a wonder on Maan they string the cord of maan's heart , kids are indeed a Massinger
of god n geet definitely god's favorite child. that's why parth,aaliya n her own baby happened in her life to gets
love of her life... It's good to see Maan changing...

from starting part
maaneet moment are so lovey dovey they are to lost in their passionate moments but parth brought them back
from their lala land though maan was annoyd but cant dont anything coz of geet and parth is such a smart baby awww he didnt want too hurt chotu baby even maan was amused...
geet trying to connect maan wid his family n geet askd maan to drop her and parth but maan was not happy with the idea but geet's word hit him n made him agree to drop them school...

Parth kissed Maan .aww that so sweet n indeed a devine moment maan feels first time the actual innocent pure love with a simple kiss by his nephew n a different feelings are developing inside him It is the starting somthing in maan but he still didn't fathom what is actually happening to him ,n gave him much needed reality check ...
hoping for the best
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Posted: 10 years ago



PART - 33



MAAN a man made of steel, never to much in relations and emotions. Most practical in handling every situation. He works on logic not on the excuses and today he was making baseless excuses in front of his mere employee who very soon going to give birth to his offspring. In past 6 months changes he had faced but with Parth, he was on a rollar coaster ride of emotions. He wasn't weak, an emtional fool and nothing can change him. Till date he wasn't allowed any woman to come closer to him. He used them only for his physical pleasure and they to also came behind him for his money only. So it maintain a balance life. No commitment and no expectations from each other. But Geet is different. She care everything expect his money.



These thoughts troubling him several times, specially when Geet or Dev start eating his brain. He had no answer of her questions so he sealed his mouth and leave the topic unfinished.


Maan changed and reached to his office. His mind occupied by her thoughts only. He was worried about her health so after doing his important work, he called to Geet. So he can know about her health. Geet and his call.


"How are you feeling now?" Maan asked softly while reading his files.


"Absolutely fine." She replied shortly.


"Kya kar rahi ho?" He asked to carry on the call, rather then hunging up.


"Preparing Lunch." Geet was busy in cooking so she only give brief relies.


He scanned his wrist watch. "Itni jaldi. Your appetite increases day by day. "


"Ummm. Not for me. Its for Parth. He is going to arrive any time. To usko aate hi khilana hai. He must be hungry na."she cleared.



"Yeah, why not. These days your every work start with him and end to him." A kind of complaint and frustration was there in his words.



Mean time before Geet replied to his complaint, Parth's chimming voice grab her all attention. "Chachi..." he was repeating continuously. Geet's attention automatically shifted to him and she ran outside. Parth was there, jumping in rejoy on the couch. Geet panicked for his safty. She quickly moved to stop him.



"Stop sweetheart or you will hurt." Geet hold his both arms to stop him.




Parth was giggling. "Chachi apko pata hai I know all the answers." Parth waa so excited on his achievement. So he was sharing it with Geet like he do with Meera.



Geet to hear him carefully. On the other side Maan was calling her on the phone. "Hello Geet, you there?" He asked to grab her attention.



"Suniye ek min rukiye." Geet put him on hold to hear Parth first.



The moment she replied to Maan, Parth got a chance and he again start jumping on couch. Geet again moved to other side and hold him firmly. She sat and pulled him on her lap. "Baby nahi. Ok now tell me how's your day go?" Geet get him involved in talking.


Parth told her everything in detail and there Maan's frustration roses. He again yelled on phone. Hearing his lousy noise Geet again ans but her all focis was laid on Parth only.



"Geet can you just hear me for a change?" He was fuming.


"Chachi bhook lagi hai." Before Geet gave reply Parth cupped her face to grab her attention and demand for food.


"Suniye I will talk to you later. He is hungry. Bye." She cut the call without waiting for his reply. She quickly changed his clothes and feeds.



Maan was about to threw his phone in anger running in his veins the very moment but stopped as one client called him the same time.


Whole day anger over took him. When he arrived home, just passed out without seeing both. Geet went behind him With his coffee. He threw his tie on bed followed by his waist coat, when she entered.


"Your coffee." She tried to talk to him. She already gussed with his body language that he was in anger.



Maan swirled and glared her. "Nahi chahiye. Waise b you have so many important work rather then roaming around me. So just go and do that." Maan poured out his frustrations.



"Why are you angry now? Now what i did?" Geet asked innocently.


"No you had done nothing. I am a fool who cares for you. But you never appreciate my efforts. Tume lagta hai sara kaam sirf tumi karti ho. To jao. Khadi kyu ho. Go and see may be Parth need something." He yelling on her.



"Sir I always appreciate your efforts. I know how difficult this all for you. I am just an employee of your still you doing so much for me which actually not needed. I will nevet ever able to pay back your favours. But still i am not getting the reason of your anger. If you think I am avoiding your work because of Parth to aisa nahi hai. Just tell me maine apka konsa kaam tala hai Parth k karan? Sir If you are angry because of morning then I am sorry for that. But Meera leave him to me. So till she came back Parth is my responsibility. He is only 5. What if he hurt himself? What I told to his mother? Ki main ek dinn b uske son ko sambhal nahi saki. Then how would I take care of our baby?" Geet question him and he only giving glares to her.



"Then why are you here? Go and see what he is doing?" Maan snap back.



"Its ok sir. If he troubles you this much then I send him from here. I call to his mom and tell that I will not able to take care of her son. Don't worry abse apko koi pareshani nahi hogi." Geet dialled the no of Meera but Maan snatch the phone and cut the call before she answer.




"No need of that. Jab tak wo log wapis nahi aa jate ye yahi rahega." Maan glared and stressed his every word. He walked out of the room left her in tears.



Parth hear their noise and go behind Maan. He stood in front of Maan on opposite chair, resting his small fists on his tiny waist. He to glaring him like he do.


"Now what you want? Just go and ask your chachi." Maan showing him the door but Parth stood as it is.


"Apne chachi ko kyu daanta?" He asked strongly without any fear.


"Just go from there." Maan glared him back.


"No I won't. First you apologie for your mistake." Parth demands.



"So you telling me k mujhe kya karna hai. I said leave or else I hit you." In fit of anger he don't even bother that he was talking to a small kid.


Parth jumps and went near her. "Ok maar lo par chachi ko mat daanto. Aap chachi ko daantoge to baby ko b daant lagegi." He try to pacify him. He stood resting his both hands on his thighs. "Chachu don't you want a cute baby like Alya?" He asked in his sweet voice and made Maan mute. Alya' name reminds him about their first encounter in Mall. Her angelic face just appeared in front of his eyes. Suddenly he replied normally. Some how his anger subsided now. "Then don't make her cry." Parth instructs him.



Maan staring him in amusement. He took him and made him sat on the table. "And who told you all this? Your father I am sure." Maan asking the name of teacher who taught all this to him. He thought Dev left but leave his replica to teach him.


"No badi dadima. Once papa is querrling with mumma so badi dadi came and pulled ear of Papa." Parth giggled while telling him the story. "Badi dadi scold papa for querrling with mumma. She told him if he troubled mumma then baby will suffer. Baby can hear everything. Now you hurt not only chachi but my baby bro to. Apko cute baby nahi chachiye?" He asked again to confirm and Maan nodded. "Then go and apologize. She is crying." Very bravely and in a simple way Parth made him realize his mistake.


Now he is calmed then before so he obeyed his advice and straight went to their room. Geet was busy in making their bed. Maan went near her but she avoids. "Geet...", he called her but she not want to talk.


"Bas ye kaam ho jaye then I will serve dinner." She replied without glancing at him.


Maan grasped her arm and pulled her to him. He tilted her chin up to get the view of her wet eyes. Her eyes are still wet. Maan framed her face and wiped off her tears by sucking them. He leaned over her face and suck her tears. His lips kissed her eyes, soothing her all pain. Then he slip down, resting her forhead on hers. Both breathe in each other's fragrance. "I am sorry Geet. Please forgive me." He indeed apologize in a very polite manner.


Geet was sobbing silently not able to said anything. Maan bend on his knees and placed his palm on her baby bump. "I am sorry baby. Forgive me for scolding your mom. I know you can hear me so accept my apologies and request your mom to forgive me. I know she will listen to you plea. So be papa's good baby and convince your mom." Maan's each word just touch her heart and she melts instantly. Smile crept on her plum lips. Geet to place her hand on bump.


"Baby papa se kaho hum unse gussa nahi hai." Geet instantly forgive him for his rude words.

Maan tilted his head and glance up. "Really?" He asked and she nodded with a smile.


He stood up on his feet and kissed on her face all around and took her lips. He gently peck on her lips first. Geet too kissed him back. He took her lower lip and suck gently. Geet wrapped her arms around him, stroking his back gradually. His teasing tongue invaded her mouth pleasuring every inch of her mouth. Very slowly his tongue played with hers. He pulled her more to him. Their hands moved inside their clothes felt each other's warm skin underneath their palms. He sucked and bite her lips. She felt so good when he is so close to her. Both kissed till they lost their breath. Maan wants to proceed but he stopped as he wasn't sure when Parth invaded inside.


Geet to want to leave now. So he both left the room and went to dinner table. Parth was waiting for both. He was happy to see Geet' s smile again. He stood and rush towards her. Geet caressed his hairs. "Bhook lagi hai na?" She asked and he nodded frequently. "Then come." She hold his hand and took him along with them. Parth's one hand was in Geet's hand and with his free hand he hold Maan's hand himself. Maan glance down and Parth gave thanks with a smile.

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Posted: 10 years ago
aaj luck bahut achha hai,me getting first place in most updates😆
waise here i need tocatch last couple of parts before i can read this...uff!



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Edited by Pooooooooooooja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow parth did what everyone thought was not possible...
Mending msk..
Not Bad..
Nice update

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