~Revenge~ Thread-2 (THREAD CLOSED)

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...
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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Hehehe jealous jallu
game begins now
haina monu
sorry for late comment
waiting for next part
jaldi update do

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swetiii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

ab updating ko updated kar de update karke

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: geeta.M
Neetu Waiting for the update

updating geet

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: avika444
Hehehe jealous jallu
game begins now
haina monu
sorry for late comment
waiting for next part
jaldi update do

thankew avi di
updating

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

...Chapter - 18...

After a
good time she opened her eyes to
part away... But
was shocked to see
to jalal with
bloodshot red
eyes...
His jaw clenched and fists tightened into ball... Jodha got terrified seeing him so she abruptly parted away... Arth frowned but shrugged his thoughts away... And picked the bundle of roses "hey, get well soon" he cupped her cheek to get her attention because she was constantly looking back... She smiled and very hesitantly took the roses... She knows it is just a friendly gesture by arth but would jalal approve him and his angry look scared the hell out of her... But she somehow composed herself and was successful in hiding her nervousness behind a smiling facade... Jalal was already irritated with extra cheesy behaviour of arth and now jodha too was responding made him hell angry... "umm... Arth how you are here?" she was confused... Amused by the query arth replied "woah... You don't know what had happened??" she slightly nodded in no... "leave it... And first answer me where were you running?? Is it a new way of jogg or what??" he really doesn't know so to lighten her mood he asked his query in a funny way... Jodha and jalal both looked at each other... Jodha started to shiver , arth became worried and held her hand, squeezed it lightly understanding the gravity of situation... "hey jo its ok..." jodha got a little assured by this act of his... Jalal now had enough so he took the vase from the nearby table and unintensionally or maybe intensionally broke it... Both pair of eyes got shifted towards him... Jodha got scared, she doesn't know how to tackle him... "hey jalal, bro are you spying us??" arth asked annoyingly... Jalal gave a deadly glare to him which was enough for him to shut his mouth... Jalal came forward with full rage and a punch landed on arth's face due to which he fell down... And jalal can't control his urge to kiss her... He cupped her face... The gap between them decreased...

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Geetbaala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

jallu .. Jallu.. Jallu..🤣

Jallu😆 is overreacting to friendly gesture of Arth and Jo..

Poor Arth got tight punch

Awsm update dear..🤗

Ha gonna kiss her😳

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

wow...some one is burning... nice update... poor arth... jodha stucked in between jalal possesiveness nd revenge... update soon

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Nice update monu
im loving this jelous side of jalal
he punched arth
i badly wanted this
hamesha tapak padta hai
and kiss ahem ahem
kahin arth k saamne hi toh nahi kar raha na
jalal ko thoda control kar monu
update next part soon