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appy111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Yes loved ur concept... Very new and loved it... It was like d viewers view of deir romance but loved it.. Do make it a ss rather then an os.. Wud loved to read it do continue

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sugarOOhoney

@sugarOOhoney

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

that was really great. I wish you would expand it into a multi shot story with important.scenes from oglers pov:D

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

"...6 feet, razor sharp jawed, intense eyes, lean muscular body and an attitude to rival Lucifer himself..." 🤣 SO TRUE...

"...his eyes focused intensely...like Ajay Devgan intense..." Ajay Devgan intense...🤣

"...ohh this guy didn't like his angel being touched by any measly mortal..."

If it was on him he won't even let her shadow being touched by any measly mortal...

"...Such blatant display of possessiveness, I was undone... I wanted Drama I am getting a full on movie here... worth it!"

Awww...🤣

I want more...This was so funny...Don't stop...😳

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filter.coffee

@filter.coffee

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

this is interesting.its funny and spot on.really loved reading it.tbh i didn't expect it to be this good.

a fic from space students' pov.nice!

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