MaNan TS : ..Fire met Fire..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello people..Yeah !! Am back..Well with a TS this time.As usual it is different from story plot.You'll understand as the story goes.Happy reading.Ignore mistakes.



MaNan TS : ..Fire met Fire..

First Shot

"Nandini !! Nandini !! Get up beta.You are getting late for your work." Her mom said.

"Maa..Let me sleep na."Nandini said.

"Nandini !! Today is your first day at your work.Get up."Her mom said while pulling the bedsheet.Nandini woke up with a jerk as she realised what is today !!

"Mom !! Why the hell didn't you wake me up before.See now am getting late."She said and ran to washroom.

"I was waking up my bhooth for the last 15 minutes.Unbelievable."Her mom utterred to herself and went to make breakfast for her.Nandini came from shower and got ready.She is running from this corner to that corner.She made her room like a fish market.She finlly got ready and cheked herslef and went down.She saw her Papa reading newspaper.She went and kissed him on his cheek and wished Good Morning !!.Her mom came with breakfast .But Nandini being already late said will have it in the office.Bye maa and papa.Love you.

Her father is proud of her and and her mom smiled . Nandini has her own scooty . Nandini is smiling all the way to her office and is proud of herself.She is so near in fulfilling her dream.She stopped at red signal and is constantly checking her watch.She still has 15 minutes and she smiled that she won't be late on her first day.She listened that her boss is very strict and never smiled till date.

When she listened about him she gulped in fear.She didn't see him yet.If she is late on her first day then she can't imagine what he will do with her.He hates late comers.It is green signal and she is driving really fastly to reach there on time.She saw some boys are harassing some girls.She couldn't see their faces.She stopped her scooty and she saw only one person.Everyone ran from there listening police siren but one boy is still there.She is amazed at his audacity.

She came and grabbed his collar and said what the hell do you think of your self huh ? Harassing girls is a great thing ? She signalled girls to leave.They left.This boy is in complete shock . Anger raised in him .But he is surprised at her audacity.

"Come with me.You should be in police station not here."Nandini said.Though she is being late she didn't care for that.She took him to CBI office as she have some work .She grabbed him inside.She was scolding him in the whole way to CBI office.

She is dragging him inside and everyone stood in shock.She asked the receptionist where can I meet officers here ? Receptionist is just shocked.The boy signalled her to keep quiet.He is quiet enjoything this.She nodded and said go to that room.She grabbed him with her.He told everyone to go to their works with his eyes.

She entered the room where some officers are there.They just stood shockingly.

"This boy is harassing girls.So I brought him with me.Actually today is my joining day.I don't want to get late .I will take him to the police station later.But can you tell me where can I get the commander? SO that I can give my joing later.I forgot to tell that am Nandini..Nandini Murthy.Forensic department and reserach specialist.Reporting from today.SO can you tell me where can I get the commander."Nandini said in one go.The people in the room looked at her in shock.

They signalled her to look back.She looked back and found no one.They thought she is dead today.The boy freed himself from her grip .

"Am Commander Malhotra.Commander Manik Malhotra".He said with a smirk .Nandini is shocked.She is feeling like ZOR KA JHATKA LAGA and someone gave her shock of 1000 watts.

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SO ? How is first shot ?I know it's complete different.I like to think something new.So thought of making them CBI officers and Manik the commander.😆 SO do let me know how is it and do share your viiews through comment.Don't forget to hit like.DO let me know whether I should continue or not😆

FOR PM'S BUDDY ME.

Love,
Harika..Keep smiling..It looks good on you.


IF ANYONE WILL COPY MY WORK WITHOUT MY PERMISSION AND CREDIT THIS THING AS YOURS .I WILL IRRITATE YOU IN THE WAY YOU CAN'T EVEN IMAGINE.

Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 10 years ago


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RaindropsNRoses thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
yipieee I'm first
Congo for the new story...
hum to tumhe cid officer mazak m bolte the ...
but tune to inhe sach me bana diya 🤣
awesome start...
manik commander ...
nandu forensic expert...
it will be fun to read ...
the title is seriously justify their character...fire met fire...
do continue soon...I guess isme koi mystery nhi h 😛
Edited by nimarious - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its too good..
cant wait fr next one!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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haha
Poor nandu
And U R back
And its two shot or three shot
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story
You don't mess with your boss and Nandini toh wanted to get her boss arrested
🤣

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haha that was quite an interesting introduction!! Pls continue. Could you PM me please?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yay.. new story!!!!!!!!!🥳
I love that she is a forensics expert. i wish i could have become one.. i am very fascinated by this stream.

nyways congrats on ur new story.. please update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Oh my god! This is too much yaar.
its shock for me too.
result ka ye asar hua tumhare mind par.

love this by the way
❤️

vaccations over hone ke baad bhi aisi stories post karte rehna ok
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haha ...nm rocks!
This is really amazing
Continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb start harika
Loving it
Very interesting
Continue soon

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