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anika mehjaben nahin

@mehjaben_nahin

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

hatu meri jaan meri sari gussa dur ho gayi love u my lil sis its too awesome they r crime specialist s oh god its gonna be so much fun n 1st day pe hi bods ko arrest karwa ne le aayi 🤣 n the title is just awesome loved it cont soon n pm ke liye no thnx ye to tera farz hai r8 😉

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Aliavardan

@Aliavardan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Wow... Lk dis once happend with me.. Its so embarrasing.. Poor nandu..
write d 2nd shot asap... Luv u my frnd... Keep smiling... Sry for late comment... 😆

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yuvasri

@lovelyyuvi10

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

🤣

ssly dis is wat i can do...

manik nd commander lyk ssly...

CBI nd all... manik is boss...

oh gawd.. whr do get these ideas...

its damn hilarious haru...😆

cant wait to c wat hapns next...

cont soon

keep writing nd smiling... 😉

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Manya

@manya_189

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Haha! The title is so apt! Awesome start!!

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sahana8

@sahana8

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

This is just awesome.
Am so excited for the next part. Just loved the chapter!!!
Keep it up!!! 😊

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drnidsur

@drnidsur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

oh god ! harika

i told u naa i need some training regarding mushy scenes

now i need to add another course " how to get ideas?"

srsly , where doo u get theses ideas from

i have such a hell time , getting even one for my stories

*in nandu's tone * how ..tell me how do u do it all the time 😆

i loved this

cbi ...wow !

anyway , i liked it ..cont soon 🤗

Edited by drnidsur - 10 years ago

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drnidsur

@drnidsur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

p.s.: i really feel u shud get an index for urself ..

u have written such amazing stories

although i m new , n hav absolutely no idea how and where u make an index...but i have seen some n u def need one , esp for the soo many brilliant os and ff's u have and are writing ...😳

Edited by drnidsur - 10 years ago

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harshitha2398

@harshitha2398

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

OMG!!!!!

That was so much fun!!

Great Job

Looking forward for more fun

PM me

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Rasna

@princi_tia

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Ohh harika
Sometimes u urself become CID bt now u made manan CBI members.
bt apart these u r alwz awesome n this story is quite interesting n unique. continue soon