NiBir SS: Tere Bin....Last chapter updated pg 37 - Page 29

Originally posted by: ammu4u

wow yaar itz amazing👏...loved evry bit of it...i liked the way u included vsaundara ji

superb ending

well written yaar...kabiras proposal👍🏼

do write more

Thank you so much for reading and loving it 😳
Will try to write more 😊

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Thanks! 😊
OMG... You were seriously awake the whole night to read the SS!!!!! 😲
Thank you so much dear 😳
Sure will PM you 😊

nai ... mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi!! isliye IF pe timepass kar rahi thi!! & saw this story!! padhne ke lkye specially nahi jagi :p
mom will kill me... agar unko pata chala!!!
mein apne cousins ke yahan gayi thi ... and neend hi ni ayi to i read all chapter in one go 😆

but i really loved it!!! amazing one 👏


thanx for the PM
i'll read it in night ..
then giv feedback... ok :)

waaawwwiiieee wonderful update..
maine agra ka taj mahal suna tha ye jaipur ka raj nahal aj pata chala :p
but hats off to u ..
tumne fiction story ke liye real place search ki??
professional writer u r!!!!
wat an ending ... i loved it!!!

waise jahan sab log story ki tareef karne me lage honge i was wondering pehle raj mahal dekhne ke charges phir garden bhi book kiya & LCD screen fod video chat??? mazak mazak me bahut kharcha ni ho gaya???? 🤣

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

waaawwwiiieee wonderful update..
maine agra ka taj mahal suna tha ye jaipur ka raj nahal aj pata chala :p
but hats off to u ..
tumne fiction story ke liye real place search ki??
professional writer u r!!!!
wat an ending ... i loved it!!!

waise jahan sab log story ki tareef karne me lage honge i was wondering pehle raj mahal dekhne ke charges phir garden bhi book kiya & LCD screen fod video chat??? mazak mazak me bahut kharcha ni ho gaya???? 🤣

Thanks dear 😊
Yeah well... Taj mahal is so common place for romance na 😆 So I thought why not Jal Mahal
Vaise bhi I wanted something related to water for their date, beach or resort, but I got Jal Mahal in Jaipur toh kahi aur kyun jana 😉

Yeah initially even I had thought of expenses... Par u know maine socha, shaadi toh vaise bhi ho hi chuki hai, aur wo bhi do do baar, toh kyu na proposal pe kharcha ho jaye 🤣
Aur vaise bhi Kabira kamata bohot hai yaar... His per month stipend is 800 pounds thats almost 80000 in Indian rupees... Aur factory ki salary alag se...😃 Ab itna to apni wifey pe kharch kar hi sakta hai 😆

Thank you so much for the comment dear 😊

awww why did u end it u should write more yaar..

Originally posted by: P_shah

awww why did u end it u should write more yaar..

Thank you so much dear😳... I would love to but get very limited time yaar

It was sooo beautifull...ur writng s verry good. Loved evry part of it. Koi b muje boring nai laga. Msmerizng