Meteor monologues.

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

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Posted: 10 years ago

The saddest monologue was Sanam's.

Because she mentioned Shauhar and then Shaad.😭

Ahil:

Upset that she mentioned Shaad...that she could not cherish this as he would😭...but consoles himself that she actually got what she wanted. And runs off to find Shaad before she faints again.😆

Shaad: Guy can never make up his mind. 'To tell or not to tell the truth'. But I liked his monologue. Also the rare instances when VT's acting doesn't distract me from the script. They wrote him well in this scene.👏 Jealous at first..and then he addresses his insecurities. Then comes the solution..He has to set it right with her...and that means he knows HOW WRONG HE IS...He is not whitewashing himself here.

Only... Is he brave enough? 😳...Or does he need to grow more after a heart break?

I felt they didn't do the Sanam ki Ammi Abbu star well. Jannat should have just listened with misty eyes...No dialogue was needed from her side.

Otherwise...

Oh Also! Shaad came off as very loud in the kid scene...

Yeah..Otherwise..

Sahil in Junoon under the tooththa taara.😳Loved the way he greeted her...tum door chali gayi thi Sanam..and her LONGGG PAUSE👏...before she corrected him.😳

Then the way he described the stars to her...and how she connected...(Again- Can't Jannat stay quiet at least at times like this!🥱)

And then the meteor shower...How he grabbed her hand in excitement...

And how each one asked for the other's wish to come true..and how they wished themselves up on each other...

Actually wrote something on Sahil and lost it. Now too tired to even remember what I wrote. Just wondered if anyone connected with Shaad's dilemma...Not sympathising with him ...just feeling sorry for the choices he made.

Edited to Add:

I liked the way Shaad's face fell when she mentioned Shauhar😆 and lit up when she mentioned his name.😉 His conscience pricking him...and his hope that she'd still be able to accept him. That was the moment. The writing looked good there.

Edited by chicksoup - 10 years ago

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JShukla

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Posted: 10 years ago

You write well

:-)

I disagree too much to write anything else, except dream at your choice of words.

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Anisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey Soup..

I liked that he wants to finally confess his lie to her.

I dunno of he's expecting a positive outcome, because I can't imagine it!!

Or the writers decide to make her faint and be unconscious due to the trauma. . Egads. Least exciting path.

I wrote an OS. Haven't finished.

Shaad confessing his lie and our Sanam going all "Asad" fiery on him. ..

well have to see what we get!

Nice post Soup!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 10 years ago

Great post Soup ⭐️ Loved the SaHil Junoon and the shooting star moment 😳 Tho I wish we would get more Sanam than Jannat 😆 But thats ok, all in good time! Hmm Shaad, idk if I feel sorry, find him off the wall or just dont care 😆 I guess I dont care enuf to be disgusted nor look too much into his actions but yes glad that he realizes that their relationship is a jhooth 😆 Hopefully that gives him a forewarning about his heartbreak 😆 But probably not lol Drama! Drama! Drama! 😆 Thats all the cvs want and thats what they shall serve 😉 Actually I dont feel sorry for him... He is deewana for someone else as well! I just hope SK doesnt chirak namak on his ghauv 😆 But interesting post as usual! 😳

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chicksoup

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: JShukla
You write well

:-)

I disagree too much to write anything else, except dream at your choice of words.

😆

No probs.

Thanx.😳

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sageflower7
Hey Soup..
I liked that he wants to finally confess his lie to her.
I dunno of he's expecting a positive outcome, because I can't imagine it!!

Or the writers decide to make her faint and be unconscious due to the trauma. . Egads. Least exciting path.

I wrote an OS. Haven't finished.
Shaad confessing his lie and our Sanam going all "Asad" fiery on him. ..

well have to see what we get!

Nice post Soup!

I doubt he will confess. It is not going to happen. This is about proposing to her, actually.😉 And he is just not sure at all.😆

I have a feeling he will confess it much later...when he sees how his lies have torn Jannat.😉

Bring on the OS! Yaay! 🥳

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chicksoup

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Raingoddess
Great post Soup ⭐️ Loved the SaHil Junoon and the shooting star moment 😳 Tho I wish we would get more Sanam than Jannat 😆 But thats ok, all in good time! Hmm Shaad, idk if I feel sorry, find him off the wall or just dont care 😆 I guess I dont care enuf to be disgusted nor look too much into his actions but yes glad that he realizes that their relationship is a jhooth 😆 Hopefully that gives him a forewarning about his heartbreak 😆 But probably not lol Drama! Drama! Drama! 😆 Thats all the cvs want and thats what they shall serve 😉 Actually I dont feel sorry for him... He is deewana for someone else as well! I just hope SK doesnt chirak namak on his ghauv 😆 But interesting post as usual! 😳

Thanx, Esha.😆

There are very few moments in the entire Shaad chapter that have interested me. Yesterday was one of those...when I felt he deserved writing about...Rather THE WRITING DESERVED writing about. Most of the times I just get reminded of Raahat and yawn.🤔

Sahil...Aren't they cute?

Love story has to start from the scratch...and it is the same story.😆

Ahil has feelings and now he has to get Jannat to accept hers..dejavu..