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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bkamber

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I Love Thee...


Arnav's first reaction, but before that...

I am so glad he did not read her letters when she first sent them. He was not in the right frame of mind to fathom her words. He would have hit the delete button at My Dearest whereas now he is afraid to proceed.


Kerrie, Loved your comments.

And the above line, so true, I am happy too that Arnav did not read those emails earlier.

His judgement, outlook and sensibilities were fogged due to anger and frustration. Now as he is reading the emails with a calm mind, he is able to understand the whole situation better and he is able to understand the depth of Khushi's pain and guilt.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Jenny oh Jenny🤗

I wanted free time to read this and finally got it.

spell bounded and heartfelt...totally gripping and enthralling...👏

I read three times as the essence and the beauty of this chapter took me somewhere.can't explain how I feel but will try to do Justice as much as I can.

Certain things really I knew and felt a long time and def you did understand as I was explaining before...in an adult relationship...maturity of emotions and feelings play a major role and that was my thing...She is mature enough and she can take a leap from where she is standing...her roots are way rooted deep to grounds , no question but, her mind and heart has been planted and growing at a different ground level...she can't uproot her values and all , but she won't bother keeping both at her terms and I love her more than ever now...

Arnav, a wounded and impatience soul has realized now how to keep his chin down when it comes to her and her love for him...his submission to her mother is cute for me.Men and their ego is really huge...I am among them all the time...can't deny that.

His remorse, his tears, his trembling and shaky visage under each word itsef declaring how deep he is in love with her no matter how much he denied and now his whole life mission is , just to find her...yes to bring her back at any cost...a modern Knight...indeed he is..and was always

The way she described her love ...seeing him first time and feeling a strong urge to make him at ease without knowing who he is...that is a true emotion of a pure heart...eyes delivered at that moment and she was his for eternity...how beautifully she said that just tell me I don't love u and I will move one...I can feel her pain and hurt...it must took her hours to deliver this one line...and he felt that too...
one thing which I felt and to the core of my heart is Khushi's words and description...poor girl and her upbringing really made her to have a cloak on her all the time...she really is right she is just like him in explaining and expressing her love but at the same time in her words where she is saying why she was asking him about his love to La...she seems defending but her intentions are so open book ...she is going too far with words where she has no clue her two words are more than enough..."My Dearest"...u have portrayed that side of her very well...

Jenny , I can see it must have taken a toll on you delivering this chapter...u must have written things and deleted many many times ...as I do all the time to get the perfection...my dear this is par excellence...⭐️👏


My regards to you...❤️

"My Dearest"...you had me here and I couldn't even move forward❤️


Love🤗

Faiqa

P.S. Hope u r enjoying your break ...
Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful!
hats off to you!👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jen, I want to apologize for sounding negative again as I'm failing to understand Khushi; And I do know she is a flawed human being and she made mistakes and to err is human; she is learning along the way through this journey as you have said; and by criticizing her there is no way that I'm being a perfect human being, may be I would have done the same mistakes if I were in her place..
First of all, the emails were a gateway to what she couldn't verbalise in that fateful meeting of theirs and were beautiful but she still sounded defensive; And I still don't get the mode of communication, the phone calls, texts, emails..when barging into his apartment, holding his collar and punishing him with a scorching kiss would have ebbed his anger away!!😉 Oh yes, she lost the card reader but if I were her, I would just wait in front of his apartment just like she did one time before..

And I don't get why Arnav wouldn't accept her apology via the electronic communication methods and hellbent on her coming to his apartment. Okay fine then why didn't he tell her that? And now how is he having a change of heart all of a sudden?

Two things I did not agree - Khushi moving out and accepting an assignment in a war torn country given how fragile her dad's health is.. Yes Sujata was being a pain in the rear but what about her dad? Wouldn't it pain him immensely when she made a decision to move out and if he knew she was going to a war torn country going to which is like a suicide mission? No father will agree to this and if something happened to her that would be a death sentence for Navin.. Did she think of her father & sister if not her mother before making that decision? (Please don't take me wrong, I love what Doctors without borders do and I have immense respect for the people who serve poor people but at least there has to be some respect for human life in those places or some semblance of law & order)..

I think she was dejected from all people around her and made that decision on a whim, so then what did Khushi achieve by distancing Arnav in the first place? Or what was she hoping to achieve in the interim? If she hadn't done that, let Arnav and Astha into her family, chances were her parents would have been more accepting of Arnav as he would have taken care of her father as a son would do, given her moral strength and be an anchor to her & her family..

Anyways, she did what she did and to err is human again..

And Sujata would rather have Khushi live separately by herself but won't have a divorcee as a son in law; if she suspected Khushi moved in with Arnav then where was a mother's worry when the said person came looking for her daughter? Did she not worry about Khushi's safety?

Anita is understandably mad at Arnav for his behavior towards her sister but did she know the full story? And it was reckless of her to send him to Boguila if she did it purposefully that is.. But I think the murders may have happened after she told him and he was already on his way?

I read in another story that true love is painful, so I guess this is what both have been doing to each other, pushing it too far until the other is broken.. They both are equally responsible to where they are right now; I think there needs to be forgiveness on both sides and mends..And they need to start with a soul searing kiss 😉 Madison can be explained later 😆

My humble and honest opinion, no way meant to offend and I only want the best for Khushi & Arnav 😳😃

🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

I feel it is all Arnav's fault, may be no ones fault. He just did not love Khushi enough to protect her against her family or society as he protected Lavanya by not telling anyone initially ( at least) about her cheating and infidelity, it would have created a soft corner for Khushi ( Infaact he prevented Khushi to reveal it to her family) and a way to justify herself, there by shedding his ego rather misplaced ( not reveling to the world of being cheated). He effectively protected himself and Lavanya by throwing Khushi under the bus. Now too... he hurt Khushi by showing off his philandering ways and also thinks can get her back in his life after all this. Male Chauvinism to the hilt.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update! Argh if only Arnav read her emails!!! Khushi really opened up to him
I hope Arnav understands what khushi went through when he decided to break up. On too of all the heart ache khushi had to deal with her dads health and her mums stubbornness regarding her relationship with Arnav. Yet she didn't falter. She believed in her relationship. Even though he didn't.

So happy Anita made him crawl.

Can't wait for them to meet up now!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dearest Jenny 🤗

Life hasn't been kind this past week, and has kept me away, hence the delay... but I have finally made it here.

How sweet of you to dedicate this chapter to us, I am truly touched. But I would say it's honor to read such brilliant writing by you. And the way this story has brought out a myriad of emotions with us readers has been one hell of a journey. That requires skill which you my dear have... take a bow! 👏


Aren't we humans something else with our emotions? When anger is in front of us, there is no reasoning to what the other is saying. When you are emotionally drained, you throw your hands up and walk away. But when you are calm, everything comes together and you are able to react reasonably.


The way I see this, Arnav and Khushi are on the same playing field now. Both have hurt the other in some shape or form. Both have reacted not knowing the "full" details. Now it's time to come clean and talk, really talk. Clear the misunderstandings, and move on to figuring out what's next.

The question is will Khushi listen... it seems Arnav is ready traveling around the world to find her... let's see what happens.

I am so ready for the next chapter to see the meeting of these two!


Bring it on my dear!
Edited by Chokri_ASR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
...additional thoughts...

"He was traveling in a week and suddenly, the thought of his journey and the destination that awaited him with sunlit eyes filled his heart with hope and elation."


Arnav reminiscing...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ha2tu4WOun0[/YOUTUBE]

It's a female voice, but think of it as Arnav remembering his happy moments with Khushi.

So looking forward to their meeting.




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Posted: 10 years ago
I am in the mood for romance this evening...

Replace Dad with Cousin Akash...ignore the Paris reference and other places mentioned...imagine them to be where Khushi and Arnav have been...imagine this being a private moment way after the initial surprise meeting and they are on their way to mend the hurt.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dao24p90XaU[/YOUTUBE]




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kclovearshi

Jen, I want to apologize for sounding negative again as I'm failing to understand Khushi; And I do know she is a flawed human being and she made mistakes and to err is human; she is learning along the way through this journey as you have said; and by criticizing her there is no way that I'm being a perfect human being, may be I would have done the same mistakes if I were in her place..

First of all, the emails were a gateway to what she couldn't verbalise in that fateful meeting of theirs and were beautiful but she still sounded defensive; And I still don't get the mode of communication, the phone calls, texts, emails..when barging into his apartment, holding his collar and punishing him with a scorching kiss would have ebbed his anger away!!😉 Oh yes, she lost the card reader but if I were her, I would just wait in front of his apartment just like she did one time before..

And I don't get why Arnav wouldn't accept her apology via the electronic communication methods and hellbent on her coming to his apartment. Okay fine then why didn't he tell her that? And now how is he having a change of heart all of a sudden?

Two things I did not agree - Khushi moving out and accepting an assignment in a war torn country given how fragile her dad's health is.. Yes Sujata was being a pain in the rear but what about her dad? Wouldn't it pain him immensely when she made a decision to move out and if he knew she was going to a war torn country going to which is like a suicide mission? No father will agree to this and if something happened to her that would be a death sentence for Navin.. Did she think of her father & sister if not her mother before making that decision? (Please don't take me wrong, I love what Doctors without borders do and I have immense respect for the people who serve poor people but at least there has to be some respect for human life in those places or some semblance of law & order)..

I think she was dejected from all people around her and made that decision on a whim, so then what did Khushi achieve by distancing Arnav in the first place? Or what was she hoping to achieve in the interim? If she hadn't done that, let Arnav and Astha into her family, chances were her parents would have been more accepting of Arnav as he would have taken care of her father as a son would do, given her moral strength and be an anchor to her & her family..

Anyways, she did what she did and to err is human again..

And Sujata would rather have Khushi live separately by herself but won't have a divorcee as a son in law; if she suspected Khushi moved in with Arnav then where was a mother's worry when the said person came looking for her daughter? Did she not worry about Khushi's safety?

Anita is understandably mad at Arnav for his behavior towards her sister but did she know the full story? And it was reckless of her to send him to Boguila if she did it purposefully that is.. But I think the murders may have happened after she told him and he was already on his way?

I read in another story that true love is painful, so I guess this is what both have been doing to each other, pushing it too far until the other is broken.. They both are equally responsible to where they are right now; I think there needs to be forgiveness on both sides and mends..And they need to start with a soul searing kiss😉Madison can be explained later😆

My humble and honest opinion, no way meant to offend and I only want the best for Khushi & Arnav😳😃

🤗

There is no need to apologize, I've always maintained that everyone is entitled to their own opinions and I, as a creator of this thread, respect everyone's opinions even though I might not agree with them :)

A lot of the points you raised (the key card, the curious case of not barging in the apt., the mystery of electronic communication only, father-daughter-mother equation, The all important timing of Arnav coming to his senses~ pre or post emails) are loose threads that will serve as material for future updates...and the rest...the estranged lovers will discuss and sort out among themselves...!

I try my best to not disappoint and to make all my readers get all the characters, but I've also realized that for a humble wannabe writer like me that is a formidable task...an impossible to reach goal :(

I just hope that when this story ends you and other readers are able to remember something worthy of your precious time in it. That's all :)


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