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Posted: 10 years ago
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She was sleeping on his chest,his right hand was on her head,it was an early morning,she heard chripping of birds,she slowly opened her eyes,it was cold morning,d snow flakes wr falling softly n wr making a silent atmosphere,her eyes wr fixed on window,she was staring at d snow flakes,she shifted her gaze towards him,she giggld n start licking his face

he opened his eyes n as always he saw d most beautiful view "her soul on her chest,licking his face n gigglng"

hey beautiful,good morning "manik muttered softly"

aaa..aaa..aaa ,"she replied back"

y r u licking my face? My little angel"manik asked her"

aaa..ammm.aaa"she again replied back"

manik:woahh itna gussa? U r angry with ur dad?but why

she start throwing her little cute arms over warm blanket

manik:Ainah,my child,aisai arms bahir nhi nikalte,its too cold outside,look snow is falling

she giggled n licked his face again

manik:hmm i guess u r hungry

manik: ramesh,ramesh

ramesh:yes sir

manik:ainah k liye garam milk lao,make a feeder for her asap

after sometime Ramesh came back with a feeder n handed it to manik
manik pickd up her in his arms ,covered her with blanket n start feeding her,she was drinkng milk through feeder,her one little cute hand was holding feeder n another hand was pulling out manik's hair

his phone start buzzing n d name flashed on his screen was cabir

manik:hello

cabir:hey kaisa hai tu?

Manik:theek,wat abt u?

Cabir:hows Ainah?

Manik:she z good

cabir:kitni badi hogayi hai?

Manik:14 months

cabir:hows ur nandini?

Manik didnt answered n disconnected call

cabir again calld him back

cabir:tune call disconnect kyu kiya?waisa mein kal aa raha hoon

manik:hmm u r most welcome

cabir:c ya then,bye

manik: bye

Next day,evening scene

cabir came after years,he asked a servant abt manik,servant told him that manik is in his room

cabir entered in his room,he saw manik was playing with Ainah,and ainah was pulling his hair out

cabir:wow,she z soo beautiful

manik: manik hugd cabir ,a lone pair of tear escaped from his eyes,i missed u so much cabir,i really missed u

cabir patted his back n was confused,"d manik malhotra is crying,wat hapn? Everything alright?"

manik:yeh alright,its jus...

Cabir pickd ainah in his arms n start tickling her,she was laughing like anything,she licked cabir's cheek by her lil tongue n wet lips

cabir:awww she z so cute n beautiful

manik:afterall she z my daughter

cabir: oh hello,nandini k gud looks hai usme,tu ziyada kush na ho
waise nandini hai kaha?

Manik:woh yahan nhi hai

cabir: phir hai kaha

manik pulled him towards balcony

cabir :kya kar raha hai,its too cold here n snowing also,ainah bemaar hojayege

manik:dont worry,she is covered in blanket
look at this star,she z my nandini

cabir was shocked,he slaped manik
cabir:r u mad? Pagal hogaya hai?

Manik:haan pagal ho gaya hoon uske jane k baad,look at my star cabir,she z shining most among all of these stars,she z my shining star

cabir was in shock,tears wr rolling down his cheeks
cabir:ye..ye sab kaisai hua,in broken voice

manik:andar chalo,batata hoon

cabir:ainah is fast asleep i think

manik:yeh,manik tugged her in bed n placed a warm blanket over her n kissed her on her forehead

u knw cabir,one day i was in my office,it was lunch time,i was talking to nandini on phone n suddendly i felt dizzyness n fainted,next moment i saw myself in hospital bed n nandini was infront of me crying

doc informed us that i m suffereing from kidney failure,both kidney's wr not working,but doc also gave us a hope that i can survive on one kidney also,if anyone can donate his or her one kidney

days passed n nandini came in our room,she told me that she had decided to donate her one kidney
i was hell angry,i shouted on her n she left d room with teary eyes,

next day doc called us n informed that they hav gt a donner for me

after one week,its was a sucessful surgery,i opened my eyes n was searching for nandini,but she was not thr,i thought that she might b outside operation theatre n suddenly i gt d shock of my life wen sister shifted curtains,i saw nandini was on another bed,she had donated her kidney to me,i was hell angry n was feeling disgusted over myself,she was still unconsioux,i asked to doc abt her n doc told me that she had donated her kidney to me,but we both r fine n can survive normaly,i felt little relived but i was super angry coz i cant see a single scar on her n donating an organ is a big deal,i told doc to shift me in another room,they shifted me n i start crying loudly,i was feeling helpless,i was feeling disgusted that my wife donated her organ to me,i was scared wat if she fall ill? Wat if she had to face any prob?i cried a lot,

after some time,doc shifted her in my room,her eyes wr still closed,i was scared,i asked doc that y she z not opening her eyes n doc was abt to answer,wen i heard my name from her mouth "MANIK"

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urvisaini thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
nice start
cute father-daughter scenes

and is nandini dead?

pls add me to the pm list

continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its wonderful...
manik- ainah scenes were so cute...
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimarious

its wonderful...
manik- ainah scenes were so cute...
plz continue soon...

hehehe ainah z my name
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing..
Plz don't make nandini die..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanya0612

Amazing..

Plz don't make nandini die..
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey its superb... very emotional... but nandini is dead... how???...
Waiting to know..
Love father daughter relation...
Loved it..
Add me to your pm list...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭 ainah..baby tmne firse manan ko sep kar diya ab samjhi royals ptkk inme undono ka itna pyaar tmse handle nahi hua isliye tmne ye ts likhkar balance kar diya 😭 kya yaar tumne bataya v nahi ki nayi story likh rahi ho 😭 ab yahi dosti reh gayi humari 😭
i love ainah year shez too cute 😉 amazing update as usual btw ye two shot hai ye three shot???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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New story.. AAA..nice one..
Nandini dead..no please don't kill her .please pm me when ever u update all your stories.. Royals, ptkk also
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aminahin

😭 ainah..baby tmne firse manan ko sep kar diya ab samjhi royals ptkk inme undono ka itna pyaar tmse handle nahi hua isliye tmne ye ts likhkar balance kar diya 😭 kya yaar tumne bataya v nahi ki nayi story likh rahi ho 😭 ab yahi dosti reh gayi humari 😭
i love ainah year shez too cute 😉 amazing update as usual btw ye two shot hai ye three shot???

hahaha yeh ziyada pyaar tolerate nhi hua 🤣 isliye ye likha
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