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Posted: 10 years ago
This FF reached has 100 pages..Am really thankful to you people,my wonderful readers.Due to your support and wonderful comments we reached here.SO am thanking each and every person who took time and commented it.Thank you so much.I guess this update is longest till date.SO I hope you like it.Happy reading.Ignore the mistakes.Once again Thank you so much..

MaNan FF : "Love Keeps US Together"


~CHAPTER 15~
A friend only knows all your stories but a best
friend has lived them with you

Nandini shouts arghh Manik !!! Manik runs towards her and gets shocked to see the sight infront of him.Nandini hugs him and sobs hard.Aadya is DEAD.She is brutually murdered.Manik !! Till then everyone reaches there as they heard the shout and everyone is shocked to see the sight infront of them.She is lying in a blood pool.Nandini passes out.Nandini !!! Nandini !!!! Cabir helps him.They make her lie down on a bench and Manik sprinkles some water and Nandini wakes up and hugs him immediatly.Manik !!! Aadya ..Aadya is dead !! Manik rubs her back and says calm down..calm down.Shhh !! Nandini calms down and cops reach there.

They are investigating the case.They ask who saw the body first . Someone says Nandini shouted so we came running.Cops asks who is Nandini .They come to her and ask when did you see her ? Nandini is not in a state of answering.She is trembling with fear.Manik says maybe before an hour .I was with her.She came to me and when she was returning back she saw her .She passed out after seeeing her body.She is not in the state of answering.If she says anything I will definitely inform you.Cops says Thank you and call us if you get any information.

Cops asks do you know anything about her ? I mean how she is with everyone.Manik says sorry am not her friend.I don't know anything nor she knows.Dhruv is her date for today maybe he can help you with it.Dhruv says she is quite good.She talks very well.It is really unbelievable that someone can kill such a beautiful,good girl.Am still in a shock.Mukti also says yeah !! She is quite jovial.You can ask her friends.We really have no idea about her but we can say thay she is a good girl with no bad intentions.Cops says well we will see that whether she has bad intentions or not.Let us know if you know anything about her.Manik says sure.We will help you how much we can.He is still hugging Nandini.

He says Nandini..come let's go home.Nandini nods .She is in quite a shock.She would be.Seeing a dead body like that anyone would be in a shock.She walked lifelessly.Everyone dispersed.Cabir and Navya joined MaNan.Manik and Nandini sat in the back seat.Nandini is resting her head on Manik's shoulder.Nandini suddenly lifts her head and says Manik !! Aadya wanted to talk to me before the party but it couldn't happen.She wanted to tell me something Manik !!! I wish I talked to her.Manik says shhh it's ok Nandini.Navya says it's kinda weird na.I mean I didn't see Aadya before in our college anytime,anywhere.Suddenly she came and became the date of Dhruv.

Cabir says I was also thinking the same.I also didn't see her anytime before in our college.Something is missing Manik !! We are missing a part Manik !! Somewhere somthing happened which we aren't aware of. Nandini says we need to find out who is Aadya. Maybe then we can get our answers.Why she wanted to talk to me ? About what she wanted to talk to me ? Manik says we need to wait till tomorrow to find out because it's already midnight.Now if we search for her we can;t get anything.Tomorrow cops will disclose somthing about her so let's wait.He says to Cabir and Navya why don't you stay at my place today ? Cabir says yeah !!! am ok with it.Navya says well...Cabir says it's already late Navya.Navya says fine am ok too.

Nandini is looking out of the window and she is silently crying for the poor girl.Manik pulled her closer and says shh !!! She hugs him and sobs !! She falls asleep while crying and they reach Manik's house.Manik lifts her in his arms and they all go inside.Manik says in that Nandini's clothes are there you can go and change Navya.Navya thanks him.Manik takes Nandini to his room.He keeps her on the bed.Cabir goes to Manik's room and takes his clothes out.Manik says come soon and I also need to change .Till you come I will be here.Cabir says yeah !! Cbir comes after changing and Manik goes.

Suddenly Nandini is moving,she is shaking no.no...don't come near me..Pleae. Cabir is shocked.He don't know what to do.He keeps his palm on her forehead and says calm down Nandini !!! Nandini is crying in her sleep.She is going out of control.Cabir runs to Manik and says Manik !!! Nandini is crying in her sleep.Manik opens the door and runs to her.Nandini !!! Nandini !! Open your eyes.Nandini am here.He hugs her and Nandini opens her eyes.She hugs him back.Manik !! Why can't I let go of it. Why It's haunting me like this.Navya also reaches there and sees her like this and is confused and Cabir indicates her to be silent.Manik says shh Nandini !!! It is just a bad nightmare.You will forget it soon.Shh...He kisses her on forehead.

Manik is feeling helpless.He is completely broken seeing her like this.The smile which she used to have is gone after meeting him.Maybe it is all because of him.His eyes are brimming with tears but he can;t cry,atleast not infront of her.He can't go weak infront of her.Cabir sees Manik and he understand what he must be feeling.He places his hand on his shoulder indicating that am with you.Manik smiles slightly.He is thankful to Cabir who is with him in all his hardhsips and happiness.A true friend indeed.Nandini breaks the hug and says I need to change.Manik nods quietly and she gets down from the bed and goes to her room and Manik indicates Navya to be with her.Navya says ok and runs to her .

Manik is completely frustrated .He puts his hands in his air and Cabir sits beside him and says you are not responsible for it.Manik says I am Cabir.She met me and this all happened.Before meeting me she was all happy but after meeting me I only saw tears in her eyes Cabir.Cabir shouts will you stop blaming yourself.Nothing is in our hands Manik.Remember that !!! If it is in our hands then it would be different.She needs you now more than anyone.I guess it's time we should say to Navya about everything.Manik nods.Cabir says you need to be strong for you,for her,for us.Manik hugs him and says thank you.Cabir says I will kick you if you say Thanks.Am your friend yar.Manik hugs him more tightly.He really needed this talk.

Cabir breaks the hug and says I guess I talked too much serious.Go to her and I will talk with Navya and you smile Monster.Manik playfully hits him and he goes to Nandini's room and Navya comes out saying she is ok.Manik says Thank you.Manik is in a dilemma whether he should go or not and Navya asks what happened? Cabir says Madhubala !!! COme here I will say.Cabir am not Madhubhala for god sake.Yeah yeah !!! I know that.Leave them alone and come here.Navya goes to Cabir and Manik finally goes inside.He sees Nandini is looking outside.He comes and stands beside her.Nandini says does everything happen for a reason Manik !!

Manik says may be Nandini !! i don't know.Nandini sees him and goes to sleep.Manik follows her and sits beside her and caress her hair and slowly she falls asleep.Manik sees her.Navya comes and says she will be ok Manik.When she have such an amazing friend she will be ok.Manik nods and goes outside.Manik goes to a room and switches on the light.It is his parents room with full of their pictures.He sees their parents smiling .He breaks down finally !! He falls on his knees and cries and Cabir stands near the door watching him and letting him cry.Unknowingly he too cries.He believes one day evrything will be fine.Manik says she came after me being stubborn and see now how she is ? I can't see her in this vulnerable state .I can't .I feel like am dying seeing her like this.Show me way to solve all this.Show me way to swipe all this ,to finish all this.I want you guys to show me a way.

I can't loose her like I lost you.Please show me a way.Cabir came and just hugged him.Shh Manik !!! He is also crying along with him.Manik !! Everything will be ok.Manik hugged him and cried.The tears which he had been controlling from a long time are finally out.The emotions which he had been controlling are finally out.Cabir took him to his room and Manik slept due to crying for a long time.The sun rose.After a dark night a bright day awaits.Manik woke up and went check on Nandini.She is not there in her room.

He went down and saw her in the kitchen.She is making breakfast and he comes and sees her.Nandini sees him and asks what are you doing here ? Go and get ready .We need to go to college.Manik is completely shocked by her behaviour.She literally surprises him by her behaviour.Manik goes and Nandini calls him from behind Manik !!! Manik turns and she asks you were crying or what ? Your eyes are blood red.Manik remembers last night and says nothing.I just didn't sleep properly.he goes away.Navaya comes down and helps her and Cabir and Manik comes down after getting ready and they all have their breakfast and leave to college together.

Abhi,Mukti and Dhruv are waiting for them.They all come to canteen.They have no classes as the investigation is going on.Mukti says Aadya is not from our college only guys.Manik says what ? Abhi says yeah !! She is not from our college.Her name is Aadya Singh.I guess matter is becoming serious.Dhruv says they are still finding about her .Like where she lives and all.Navya says yeah !!! Nandini is quite.She is listening but she is not responding.Manik thinks something and calls his personal secretary and tells him to find out about Aadya singh ASAP and he sends her photo which they took at yesterday's party.He tells Cabir about it.Cabir says lets wait.After few minutes Manik gets call and he tells him some deatils and Manik tells him to message him.

He says Cabir let's go.Nandini come.I guess you are not feeling well let's go home.Mukti says yeah !!! Nandini go home.Navya says Manik !! Can you drop me .Actually I need to do some work and it's in your way.Manik says yeah !! They all four leave.They all reach Aadya's address as per as given details.Cabir exclaims it is near to Aliya's house.You can see Aliya's house from here very well.Manik says yeah !!! Am also thinking the same.Lets go fast before cops reach here.They see the door is locked .Manik and Cabir searches for some other door and Navys says guys window !!! They all go inside through window.Manik says search whatever you can.But be careful.He handsover some gloves which he brought with him.They ll start searching.For some clue.

Manik searches her room.Nandini is searching living room.Navya is searching some shelfs.Cabir is searching in other room.Manik gets a diary under the pillow.He says guys I got a diary.Everyone rushed to him.Guys I guess we need to leave.Police will be here at any moment.Everyone agrees and all leave the house and goes to Manik's home.Police reach her house after they went.They all sit on the couch and Manik opens the diary.Nandini snatches and says it's a girl diary .So let me read it.Manik says fine.Nandini opens the first page and its written Aadya ..Aadya Singh.Hey ! New year that means new friends and res**tions.Nandini says let's read from last.Maybe we can get some clue as it is recent.She opens the last page and she reads ALIYA IS...

~ THE GAME HAS JUST STARTED ~
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SO ? How is it ? I hope you liked it.Do share your views and comment and like if you like it.Thank you so much for the wonderful comments for the previous chapter and likes too.DON'T FORGET TO HIT LIKE

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Love,
Harika..keep smiling..It looks good on you...
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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UNRES

SUN TU CID JOIN KARLE PLZ...

tere itte se dimag me yeh sab kahan se aati hai???

like seriouslly??? its so mysterious...

Adhya is dead... 🤢

i mean... 🤢 😕 CONFUSED

thank god now the four will investigate by themselves...

i am afraid that who s next to die??? Navya???????😲

and best part was manik's care concern for nandini and cabir's the same for manik...

my MaNanBir... together forever...

and the last part... the diary...

ALIYA IS ... DEAD... for sure... or nt😕

tera koi bharosa nehi yeh v dream sequence de de😆 😉

next update pls Harry Porter starter...
Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update hari🤗
aadya is dead, Poor Nandini but as long as Manik is there nothing will happen.!😳
Navya also know the truth hmm 😆
she is not from their clg?😲😲
and Alya is her?? 😕

So much to be revealed😆
update soon 🤗
Edited by Paro_rudra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Harika! Quite a shock actually! I must say that you got some really amazing writing skills!

Loved the bit of Manik comforting Nandini! How sweet! Hmmm.. Aadya did want to talk to Nandu about some, I am dying to know what!

The last line... OMG! You are just too good at building suspense! Better update soon otherwise mere pate mein dard hone lagega!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Can't wait for next part
Continue soon
awesome part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lots of secrets to be revealed.i appreciate u n u r writing very well n making it interesting continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Terrific update... looks like Aadya can reveal about Aaliya, can't wait to see what..loved MANAN bonding..poor Manik Nandhu makes him see its not his fault.. looking forward tp next update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Alya is...!!! Whattt??? Ohhh m dieing Hari plzzz update soon...m too much excited
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update loved it and thanks for d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update i cant wait to read next chapter please continue soon and thanks for the pm

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