SS : I should feel that you love me :) Chapter 4 PG5 updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I have been a silent reader in this forum from a long time.All the stories are very good.

This is slightly different from that of YHM but the characters are the same .

Raman Kumar Bhalla : A silent punjabi guy from a rich family who loves his family so much and a caring brother and a very studious person now trying to become a collecter.

ishita : A very studious girl in college from a middle class family ,very friendly and lively unaware of the fact that raman is a silent lover of her and goes behind her from college and now a software engineer in a reputed company.


Mihir :Ramans best friend and helps raman in getting ishita s love and a lovely guy and has the nature as ishita.

Mihika : ishitas loving sister and a loves her sister so much that she can do anything for her.

Rinki: Ramans sister a very sweet girl and a very fast girl with modern culture.


Mr and Mrs bhalla and mr and mrs iyer are the same.


I would like start with ishra married now and would bring later how raman managed to marry her.It would be with lot of romance,raman trying to woo ishita and sentiment..

Tell me should i continue or not... if I get more comments first chapter will be today 😛



Part 1: pg1
Part 2 :pg 3
part 3:pg4
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Guysss...without encouragement I cant give the update :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept do plz continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Raman and ishita got married with all the rituals in punjabi style and its the first day after their marriage.

All the raman family members liked ishita so much despite the fact she is not a punjabi and all said Mrs bhalla that she got a beautiful bahu.

Ishita has mixed emotions and she still didnt know how her family agreed to this marriage and only thing she knows is that raman loves her even that it is not to her directly :)


All the rituals and pooja are finally over and ishita is finally sitting in his oops rather may be her room now..

Ishita was just busy staring at the new room and all the family photos that were hung to the wall and suddenly one photo caught her attention.

She was shocked seeing her photo and later she realised that the pic is not her recent one but one from her college ..
because she looked like that only during her college days...

Just then raman entered and saw her staring at the photo...

Ishita : Raman how did you get this pic..it doent seem even lyk my Fb pic

Raman: he thinks for a moment and says he has taken it from one of her albums in house..
Ishita thinks a lot that this pic is what shes seeing for the first time..this is not her click...


Just then mihir ,mihika and rinki enters bringing ishita out of her thoughts..

Mihir: Bhai aap aajse mujhe and aur sabko bool jayegi na (with a wink)

Mihika and rinki shout together that they want money from raman or else they will stay there whole night...

Raman as usual with a serious look gives them what they ask and send them...


Finally Raman and ishita are together finally alonee...


ishitha came and sat on the bed and den raman came to sit beside her he sensed her inconvinience and asked her to go change and come..

After some time ishita is back and was relieved that hes is not in the room...
she is really not ready for the next step..that she cant tell him directly...

without even knwing she dozed off to sleep suddenly and when she woke up listening to sound of raman entering...

she woke suddenly and sat on the bed...
Raman entered and started
ishita i want to tell yoo something ...



guys should i continue or nott. m not very gd at writing pls do tell me... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
do cont. soon
it's lookin interesting story and i liked da concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Nice story
It seems interesting
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Chapter 2:

ishita: raman i m not ready for all these..istill need to fell comfortable around with you...i dont about you much so as you

Raman (inner thoughts) : i knwo you more than what u know about you ..may be i should give you time to understand my love...


Raman :i know ishita ...can i ask you ask for something...

Ishita: Yes raman do tell me

R: Actually i want to call u as chinnu this was my dream that i would call the girl in my life lyk that when i saw all my friends calling their girlfrnds with nick names...

I: She laughed and chuckled at what he asked and said a yes but asked him time to get used to it...


then ishita being very takative was taking about her childhood and her frnds..


as raman was busy staring at her seeing her beatiful smile ,her animated expressions..
he has the sudden urge of kissing her and controlled himself telling that she is not ready for all these yett...
Then ishita suddenly got up as if child got her favourite candy and asked him if he loved soem one before...

Intially he was silent and after sometime told him to not to force her now because he cant lie to her...

Then ishita silently dozed off to sleepp and slowly landed slowly on his shoulder..Raman didnt want to disturb her and was staring at her where he got the flashback of he going behind ishita in college withour her notice and observing her and noticing her every moments... <3


It was morning ishita sudennly woke up with a jerk which made raman to wake up to...


Raman was trying to explain about their posture and before he could say something ishita said she understood and gave him a bright smile and left to get ready for the day...

She prepared break fast for everyone and all gave her compliments and then the family was sitting together and watching TV and then the surprise came in...


Simmi and Param (they are ramans brother and bhabhi living in US a very loving couple missed wedding due to some work ).


So they booked tickets for ishra to stay with them for 20 days...

And then all the packing was done and ishra left for US with mixed thoughts...

Ishita was sitting beside raman and she was observing everything around her except raman..
Raman is silently staring at ishita..
After lot of watching ishita slowly slept on ramans arm and then later the air hostress came and covered both of them with duvet...


No one watching from outside cant tell that they are not a couple in love watching the smile and feel of content they faces were adorned with...

Soon before raman wakes up ishita is up and allowed him to sleep ..when raman woke up he immediately mouthed sorry

I :Raman let me tell you one thing though we are strangers..we are husband and wife and we cant be comfortable from the first day atleast we can try na...when you keep telling sorry all the time ..i dont think we can bridge that gap for ever..if you are lets try being friends firstt...

R :yeah chinnu we will defintely try being frnds..intially ishita was surprised and then both laughed together...

And the plain landed in one place (imagine goa) please dnt ask me goa comes in their i just want a beach road ;)


As their was time for next flight raman thought he can surprise ishita and took her to the beach..

She loved it so much and started running here and there and fully drenched in water...

There were some arrogant boys around and started commenting ishita
in bad words which made raman really angry and gave them left and right...

Ishita felt very happy thinking she has her special someone by her side all the time and her dreams of loving husband coming true...

Then she ran to panipoori and started eating more and without any hestation she was feeding them to him..he was very happy but silent alwaysss...

Ishita was thinking raman is ver good but he is not like me ...always serious but a very gd man..
after that they came back and boarded the flight soon they reached params house...param was out for 2 days for some business meeting and simmi welcomed the new couplw very happilyyy...


Precap : Simmi telling ishita about first night and ishitas anger on raman shouting at him
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely start
waiting to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Very beautiful story...
Read both the parts..
Awesome..
Please pm me the second apart..😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
hey that was cute...
Continue soon dear...

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