Review about story......read and reply

Hi Friends

Again I come back with more points. In the last article I had written the story writers should improvise their story. But I don't think so there was a slight change in the story line. ...agar seedhi bhasha mein kahun toh pehle anu-rajat ko mohra the aur neel aur devyani unke nishane par.

Pehle rajat ko bechara bana diya tha aur ab neel ko negative...

I mean mujhe sach mein samaj nahin aa raha ki neel is hadh tak negative kaise ja sakta hai...sirf badla lene ke liye voh kisi ki zindagi barbad ho jaye

Agar story ke bare mein baat karu toh neel galat ho sakta hai...aur jab jab usne galti ki hai tab tab usne sorry kahan hai...I really don't understand ki writers aakhir kya dikhana chahte hai

Aur ek maa kaise apne bte ko galat raaste par jane de sakti hai...

Starting of the serial mein lagta tha ki hum serial ko real life se jod sakte hai...par ab isse dekh kar yeh bilkul nahin kahan ja sakta...its full filmy and dramatic

Kyunki real life mein koi bahu itni achi nahin hoti ki saas itna kuch kar de aur who mahan ban jaaye...

Itna koi mahan nahin hota

Aur na ek ladki ke peeche koi is hadh tak negative ho jaata hai...aaj ke zamane mein ek ne reject kar diya toh dusri doodh lete hai...ussi ke peeche nahin baagte...

Aaj ka newly married couple iss tarah kabhi behave nahi karta...jai anu-rajat ko portray kiya hai...unko dekh ke lagta unki shaadi ko mahine nahin 20 saal ho gaye hai...

Kyunki anu mata ko jasoosi karne, maa-bete ko milane, ghar ke kaam, apni beheno ki problem se fursat mile toh voh rajat ke bare mein sochengi...

Ek baat aur share karna chahti hu...jab rajat ko coordinator se yeh dulhe ko badalne ki baat pata chali samaj mein aata hai...par usse veer aura nu ke bare uski maa ne kya kiya kaise pata chali...mujhe toh samaj mein nahin aaya...

Jo suit Kajal ne pasand kiya aur jo voh parti mein pehen ke gayi who kisi angle se costly nahin lagta...usse dekh kar toh aisa lagta hai ki who suit 200 rs se jyada ka nahin hoga...directory please think about it.

Earlier I watch this regularly but now I only read stories and if there is something interesting ihappen in any episode then I watch only that part on youtube or dailymotion...

This is totally my POV. Think about it and reply

Thanks

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Originally posted by: neha_9_lakhotia

Hi Friends hi neha😊 im shri ⭐️

Again I come back with more points. In the last article I had written the story writers should improvise their story. But I don't think so there was a slight change in the story line. ...agar seedhi bhasha mein kahun toh pehle anu-rajat ko mohra the aur neel aur devyani unke nishane par. yes the cvs r playing with the characters like katputliyaan

Pehle rajat ko bechara bana diya tha aur ab neel ko negative... neil ko negative the worst idea ever😡

I mean mujhe sach mein samaj nahin aa raha ki neel is hadh tak negative kaise ja sakta hai...sirf badla lene ke liye voh kisi ki zindagi barbad ho jaye jo ho raha hai so hone do think what r cvs gonna show to change him into a +ve character. I think it will b the worst track. pehle kisi ka character bigaado phir sudharo

Agar story ke bare mein baat karu toh neel galat ho sakta hai...aur jab jab usne galti ki hai tab tab usne sorry kahan hai...I really don't understand ki writers aakhir kya dikhana chahte hai neither am i able to undertsand😕

Aur ek maa kaise apne bte ko galat raaste par jane de sakti hai... yes! a child always spends major of his life with his mom rather than his dad! now how can a mom b so negative! cvs r trying to show a negative saasu maa but they r ignoring the fact that she has become a negative mother

Starting of the serial mein lagta tha ki hum serial ko real life se jod sakte hai...par ab isse dekh kar yeh bilkul nahin kahan ja sakta...its full filmy and dramatic yes! 100% agree they r changing the plot of the serial every month theres no root or foundation / story line😡

Kyunki real life mein koi bahu itni achi nahin hoti ki saas itna kuch kar de aur who mahan ban jaaye...yes! a person cannot always be ryt thats reality what the cvs show is stupidity🤔

Itna koi mahan nahin hota 100% agree😊

Aur na ek ladki ke peeche koi is hadh tak negative ho jaata hai...aaj ke zamane mein ek ne reject kar diya toh dusri doodh lete hai...ussi ke peeche nahin baagte... yeh bhi sahi hai! 😃

Aaj ka newly married couple iss tarah kabhi behave nahi karta...jai anu-rajat ko portray kiya hai...unko dekh ke lagta unki shaadi ko mahine nahin 20 saal ho gaye hai... yeh toh 1000 times sahi hai! even if the actors dont mind acting intimately i think the director is bothered in making it look oldish😵

Kyunki anu mata ko jasoosi karne, maa-bete ko milane, ghar ke kaam, apni beheno ki problem se fursat mile toh voh rajat ke bare mein sochengi... i feel like hitting her head with a hammar and tell her that she is wrong 😡

Ek baat aur share karna chahti hu...jab rajat ko coordinator se yeh dulhe ko badalne ki baat pata chali samaj mein aata hai...par usse veer aura nu ke bare uski maa ne kya kiya kaise pata chali...mujhe toh samaj mein nahin aaya... i again tell it was his guess that she has instigated him to go against anu and when he asked anu she nodded in a yes so theres the justification

Jo suit Kajal ne pasand kiya aur jo voh parti mein pehen ke gayi who kisi angle se costly nahin lagta...usse dekh kar toh aisa lagta hai ki who suit 200 rs se jyada ka nahin hoga...directory please think about it. i had the same feeling when i saw it!🤢 absolutely no taste in choosing clothes! and labelling them to be costly is super silly 🤪

Earlier I watch this regularly but now I only read stories and if there is something interesting ihappen in any episode then I watch only that part on youtube or dailymotion... i still watch it regularly so that the channel doesnt pull off the show and v may not get anuraj😳 sometimes i feel like breaking my self so i agree with what u are doing👍🏼

This is totally my POV. Think about it and reply i have thought and given my reply 😊

Thanks and i say thank u for this wonderful post 😃

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Originally posted by: appuaks

The only good thing is that Peeya is shown on screen a little more and actually gets a word or two of

dialogue...before Minty-Anu-kajal hijack the rest of the episode. Sigh...

Actually ...CVs ne neel ke character ko puri tarah spoil kar diya hai...kyunki unhe Shastri Sisters ki achai or mahanta jo dikhani aur unki bonding dikhani jiske liye woh kisi bhi character tko kisi had tak bhi le ja sakte hai...I really hate the serial in the way they are manipulating or demoslishing the characters...its really.ridiculous...Now he is planning with Bobby to scratch his face just to take his revenge...how directors are showing such insensible thing...Earlier I was thinking that there must be some story behind sudden change in Neel's Character. which will come up later...but by this henious act I am sure they are ruining the character of Neel Sareen...Now i come to know that why trp of the serial is decreasing while other serials trp is increasing...sometimes trp increases just because of anu-rajat romance...Trp is decreaing because they are showing ridiculous this... i am totally dissappointed...may be my comments reach to the director.